必修第一册Unit3SportsandfitnessSectionⅤWriting教案

SectionⅤWriting有关健康生活习惯的说明文写作指导eq\a\vs4\al()文体感知写有关健康生活习惯的说明文时，一般要写明什么样的做法会对健康有利或有害，人们应该怎样做才能保持健康等。该类文章一般采用以下写作策略：1．开门见山提出主题，说明自己所发现的关于健康问题的现象。2．分析所给内容，然后进行详细说明。说明所给内容时可以先说明现象，也可以先说明结果，再说明引起这种结果的原因。3．最后归纳总结或发表意见。这一局部的内容主要是提出解决方法及给出自己的保持健康的建议。eq\a\vs4\al()增分佳句1．AsfarasIamconcerned,healthismoreimportantthanwealth．依我看，健康远比财富重要。2．Takingexerciseiscloselyrelatedtohealth．做运动和健康息息相关。3．Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesapersonhealthy,wealthyandwise．早睡早起会使人健康、富有和聪明。4．Itiswidelybelievedthatplentyoffreshaircontributestogoodhealth．人们普遍认为足够的新鲜空气有助于健康。5．Nowadayspeoplearebeginningtopaymoreattentiontotheirhealththaneverbefore．目前人们开始比以前更关注健康。6．Weshouldrejectjunkfood,suchasinstantnoodlesandhamburgers．我们应该拒绝垃圾食品，例如方便面和汉堡。7．Doctorsadviseusteenagerstosleepatleast8hourseachday．医生建议我们青少年每天至少要睡8个小时。8．Peoplecometorealizethatgoodhealthisthemostvaluablethingapersoncanhave．人们开始意识到健康是人所能拥有的最有价值的东西。典型例题eq\a\vs4\al()写作要求假设你是王林。过去，由于一些不健康的生活习惯，你的健康出现了问题。之后，你改变了生活方式，现在又恢复了健康。请你根据此经历写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1．之前不健康的生活习惯：不吃早饭，经常熬夜，很少锻炼；2．导致的问题：肥胖，易生病；3．解决的方法：保持均衡饮食，积极锻炼，早睡早起；4．给其他同学的建议：尽快改掉不健康的生活习惯，以保持身体健康。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。eq\a\vs4\al()审题谋篇eq\a\vs4\al()词汇推敲1．不健康的生活习惯unhealthy_living_habits/unhealthy_lifestyle2．不吃早餐skip_breakfast/no_breakfast3．垃圾食品junk_food/rubbish_food4．熬夜stay_up_late5．锻炼take_exercise/have_physical_training/do_physical_exercise6．结果；因此as_a_result/therefore/thus7．意识到be/become_aware_of8．保持健康keep_fit/healthy9．摆脱坏习惯break_oneself_of/get_out_of_bad_habits10．均衡饮食a_balanced_dieteq\a\vs4\al()遣词造句1．完成句子①过去，我养成了一些不健康的生活习惯。(主谓宾结构)In_the_past,_I_formed_some_unhealthy_living_habits．_②我经常熬夜，并且很少进行体育锻炼。(and连接两个并列谓语)I_often_stayed_up_late_and_took_little_physical_exercise．③结果，我肥胖，易生病。(and连接两个系表结构)As_a_result,_I_became_too_fat_and_often_fell_ill．④我意识到了不健康的生活习惯引起的危害。(which引导定语从句)I_became_aware_of_the_harm_which_was_caused_by_unhealthy_living_habits．⑤为了保持健康，我决心改掉这些坏习惯。(sothat引导目的状语从句；不定式短语作宾语)I_determined_to_break_myself_of_these_bad_habits_so_that_I_could_keep_fit．⑥我养成了早睡早起的习惯。(主谓宾结构)I_developed_the_habit_of_going_to_bed_early_and_getting_up_early．⑦两个月过去了，我恢复了健康。(as引导时间状语从句)As_two_months_passed,_I_recovered．⑧我建议其他同学尽快改掉他们不健康的生活习惯。因为健康比任何其他事情都重要。(suggest；because引导原因状语从句)I_suggest_other_students_get_out_of_their_unhealthy_living_habits_as_soon_as_possible,_because_health_is_more_valuable_than_anything_else．2．句式升级⑨用过去分词作定语改写句④I_became_aware_of_the_harm_caused_by_unhealthy_living_habits．⑩用不定式作目的状语改写句⑤To_keep_fit,_I_determined_to_break_myself_of_these_bad_habits．⑪用with复合结构改写句⑦With_two_months_passing,_I_recovered．eq\a\vs4\al()妙笔成篇________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Inthepast,Iformedsomeunhealthylivinghabits．Forexample,Ioftenskippedbreakfastandlikedeatingjunkfood．Besides,Ioftenstayeduplateandtooklittlephysicalexercise．Asaresult,Ibecametoofatandoftenfellill．Luckily,Ibecameawareoftheharmcausedbyunhealthylivinghabits．Tokeepfit,Ideterminedtobreakmyselfofthesebadhabits．Firstly,Ibegantohaveabalanceddiet．Secondly,Itookexerciseactivelyeveryday．Lastly,Idevelopedthehabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly．Withtwomonthspassing,Irecovered．Isuggestotherstudentsgetoutoftheirunhealthylivinghabitsassoonaspossible,becausehealthismorevaluablethananythingelse．训练假设你是李华，你的笔友Jane最近总是感觉身体不适，因此写信向你询问如何保持身体健康，请你根据以下要点提示用英文给她回信。1．合理饮食，防止吃脂肪高及含糖多的食物，多吃新鲜蔬菜和水果；2．锻炼身体，合理锻炼有助于身体健康；3．保证充足睡眠，不要熬夜；4．你的其他建议……注意：1．词数80左右；2．信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJane,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter．Butatthesametime,I’msorrytohearthatyouarenotverywellthesedays．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear_Jane，I’m_glad_to_receive_your_letter．_But_at_the_same_time,_I’m_sorry_to_hear_that_you_are_not_very_well_these_days．Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtostayhealthy．Hereismyadvice．Firstly,youshouldkeepabalanceddiet．Youshouldavoideatingfoodhighinfatandtoomuchsweetfood．You’dbettereatmorefreshvegetablesandfruit．Secondly,takingexerciseeverydayhelpsbuild(up)astrongbody．Whynottakemoreexerciseinyoursparetime?Asweallknow,regularexerciseisanimportantpartofkeepingushealthy．Finally,makesureyouha