读后续写：合理地谋篇布局-2025届高考英语复习作文专项复习

ContinuationWriting——howtodevelopthestoryreasonably(合理地谋篇布局)Whyshouldwehavethislesson?Sometypicalproblemsinyourwriting：1.文章走向有时跑偏2.走向正确时情节离奇3.情节基本到位时两段之间衔接生硬Takeastoryasanexampletosolvethisproblem.ILeadinThisisawallet.Whatdopeopleusuallykeepintheirwallets?Haveyoueverlostyourwallet?Howdidyoufeel?Whatdidyoudo?IIReadformainideaWhenandwhere,whodidwhatandhowdidhefeel?mainidea：OnacoldJanuarynightinSanFrancisco,theauthorwalkeddownanemptystreetandlosthiswallet.Andhefeltveryanxious.Tipsforwriting#1Findoutkeyelementsofastory:WhenWhereWhoWhatHow/WhyIIIReadforplotandemotionBeginning(开端)Risingaction(发展)Climax(高潮)Fallingaction(情节缓延)Ending(结局)I

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mywalletwaslost.reachedrealizePara4：SoItookactionimmediately.Para5：Avoicefromtheinsideofthegarbagetruckcaughtmyattention.sick,tired,abandonedsmallnervous,anxiousTipsforwriting#2Drawtheplotandemotionlinethroughverbsandadjectives.Tipsforwriting:#3Bearthemainideaandwritingpurposeinmindwhensettingthetoneofyourstory.Wouldtheauthorgetthewalletbackandbepositive?Wouldtheauthorlosehiswalletandbenegative?IVReadtosetthetoneWhydoestheauthorwritethisstory?Toinspirereadersandhimselftoadoptapositiveattitudetowardslife.writingpurpose：orTheauthormaybeinspiredbysomethingpositiveintheprocessoflookingforwallet.setthetoneVReadtoplantheplot④SoItookactionimmediately.⑤Avoicefromthegarbagetruckcaughtmyattention.Tipsforwriting:#4Designyourplotbasedonkeywords(verbsandnouns)oftwogivensentences.WhatactiondidItake?WhatdidIthinkaboutwhenlookingformywallet?HowdidIfeelduringtheprocess?I

whereIheardthenoise,

thestreetcarefully.Theideaoflosingmywallet

inmymind.Iamstuckin

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.rushedbacktosearchingbouncedarounddepressionanxietyVReadtoplantheplot⑤Avoicefromthegarbagetruckcaughtmyattention.Whydiditcomefromthegarbagetruck?Whatwouldtheauthordoafterwards?Whatkindofvoicewasit?Amanwitha

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tohim.explainednoticeddoingcleaningjumpedsinceregratitudefetchVReadtoplantheplotIfinthefirstactyouhavehungagun

onthewall,theninthefollowingactitshouldbefired.Otherwisedon’tputitthere.契诃夫之枪：叙事中提及的每一个元素都应该在后文出场，不然就没有必要提及。Tipsforwriting:#5Findoutthegunsandfirethem!(Respondtothedetailsmentionedinthegivenmaterial.)VReadtoplantheplot④SoItookactionimmediately.WhatactiondidItake?Tolinkwithnextparagraph,inthelastsentenceofthisparagraph,youshouldmentiontheappearanceofthegarbagetruck!⑤Avoicefromthegarbagetruckcaughtmyattention.WhatwasIthinkingaboutwhenlookingformywallet?HowdidIfeelduringtheprocess?IrushedbacktowhereIheardthenoise,searchingthestreetcarefully.Theideaoflosingmywalletbouncedaroundinmymind.Iamstuckindepressionandanxiety.VIDesignyourendingTipsforwriting:#6Makesuretheendingiscoherent(连贯的)withplots.对话式结尾：Isaidtotheman,“it’syourgeneroushelpthatoffermehope.”感悟式结尾：Irealizedthatthecitycouldn’tbeabadplaceaslongaspeoplewerewillingtohelpeachother.环境衬托式结尾：Withthedimlightshiningonthestreet,awarmcurrentwelledupinmyheart.自然结尾：Immersedinthedelightofdiscoveringmeaningoflife,Iinspiredmyselftoadoptapositiveattitudetowardeverything.VIIWriteyourstorySoItookactionimmediately.

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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Payattentiontodescriptionofactionandemotiontomakeyourplotsmorevivid.注意动作描写和情绪描写WhatactiondidItake?Inthelastsentenceofthisparagraph,youshouldmentiontheappearanceofthegarbagetruck!Whydiditcomefromthegarbagetruck?Whatwouldtheauthordoafterwards?Whatkindofvoicewasit?WhatwasIthinkingaboutwhenlookingformywallet?HowdidIfeelduringtheprocess?Thereisalwayslightattheendofthetunnel.Homework:PolishyourlanguagePolishyourlanguageandpayattentiontothetransition(过渡)tomakeyourstorydevelopsmoothly(流畅地)andreasonably(合理地).Thanksforyourlistening.VIIIAppreciateapossibleversionSoItookactionimmediately.Withbutterfliesinmystomach,IranoutofthedoorandbacktowhereI’dheardthenoise.Ibentdown,searchingthestreetcarefullybythelightofshiningstreetlight.AlthoughIsearchedthesidewalkwithgreatanxiety,mywalletwasnowheretobefound.Theideaoflosingmywalletbouncedaroundinmymind,makingmestuckindepression.IwasthinkingofgivingupthesearchwhenIheardthegarbagetruckpulluptothesidewalknexttome.Avoicefromtheinsideofthegarbagetruckcaughtmyattention.Thenamanwithanamusedlookinhiseyescameoutfromthetruck.“Isthiswhatyou’relookingfor?”heasked.Witnessingthisscene,Ialmos