浙江高级英语3 28讲稿writing

WritingGooddictionBalancedstructurecreativeideaDiction

Howtopickupproperandaccuratewords?1.connotation:

走We____aroundtheparkhandinhandforanhouralso.Angrily,Sheturnedand_____off.Despitethewindandtherain,they_____onuntiltheyreachedthecottage.批评Peoplearealways_____theircircumstancesforwhattheyare.Thecriticroundly____thenovel.杀Twopeoplewere_____inacaraccident.MartinLutherKingwas_____byawhitepeople.MaJiajueislikelytobe____asamurdererthisyear.Theycruelly_____allthepeopleinthevillage.Accordingtothepolicehe___hisrivalincoldblood.ConnotationDenotationChinaismy____.Chinese/Chinaisapeace-loving____.InChina,therailwaysareownedbythe_____.2.Collocation____aquestion______oneresignation_____aproof____asuggestion______anapplication_____awarning渡过难关______one'sdifficulties一张500美元的支票国内市场内政交通拥挤天气很冷/天气很热大HeavyrainAlargeamountof…Alargenumberof…greatcourage/confidence/ability/wisdomBigproblem/house3.context

生意兴隆通四海，财源茂盛达三江Farandwidetradebooms；hereandtheremoneycomes

Homeandabroadbusinessthrives；hitherandthitherprofitarrives

4.culture

Aspooras____AsstupidasAspureasAsbusyas害群之马Howtomakeyoursentencesmoreeffective?1.Donotusetoomuch“be”or“therebe”Thetreesarebare.Thegrassisbrown.Thelandscapeseemsdrab.Theteammembersaregoodplayers.Thereare4peopleinthedorm.2.UsemoreconcretewordsLaugh:SmileGrinBeamGiggleTittersniggerChuckleChortleguffawWalkRunStrollTreadpaceStrideMarchParadeWander/roamSheisacarefulshopper.Shecomparespricesandquality.Sheisbeautiful.3.UsepairedwordsWeshouldservethepeopleheartandsoul.Themissingchildcamebacksafeandsound.Afterthefight,hewasblackandblueallover.twistandturn迂回曲折mightandmain尽全力partandparcel重要部分

timeandtide岁月，时光lawandorder秩序

gotorackandruin陷于毁灭slowandsure慢而稳，稳妥haleandhearty老当益壮

chopandchange变幻莫测（尤指观点,计划等）fairandfoul在任何情况下wealandwoe福祸

forgiveandforget不念旧恶waxandwane（月的）盈亏圆缺；盛衰moveheavenandearth不遗余力pompandceremony盛典

rainorshine不论如何(fight)toothandnail全力以赴treatortrick不给甜头就有好看的factsandfigures

确凿的事实hugsandkisses热情欢迎insandouts来龙去脉oddsandends零零星星

UsecomplexsentenceItisagoodwayforthosewhoarebusywithworkalldaytorelaxandenjoythepleasurelifeoffersthem.Menarebig,strongandaggressive,whilewomenarephysicallyinferior,andmentallyintimate.

John’sloveforJellyhasdeepermeanings.Heescharmedbyescapinghisownpast.John’sobsessionwithJellyhasdeeperimplications.Heesobsessedwithescapinghisownpast.John’sobsessionwithJellyeventuallytranslatesintoayearningtoescapehisownpast.MyfavoriteauthorisLuXun.Heisafamousauthor.Hewasborninarichfamily.Hisgrandfatherwasagovernmentofficialandhisfatherwasafull-knowledgeman.Hismotherwasakindwoman.Sheinfluencedhimverymuch.UserhetoricinyourwritingcontrastManypeoplewillsoonfindthemselvesrichingoods,butraggedinspirit.Theadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages.Itwillhavebothnegativeandpositiveeffectsbysodoing.Wehavefriendssimilartousandfriendsdifferentfromus.ParallelconstructionReadingmakesuswisewhileexercisesmakeusstrong.We’llpayanyprice,bearanyburdenandendureanyhardshiptohelpyou.RepetitionWelongforsuccessandweareworkinghardforsuccess.InvertedsentenceNowoncomingtousistheneweraofreformfullofventuresandchances.similemetaphorMylifeisonelongcurve,fullofturningpoints.Hopeisthepoorman'sbread.MetonymyHaveyoueverreadShakespearSwordandcrossinhand,theEuropeanconquerorsfellupontheAmericas.Whenthewarwasover,helaiddowntheswordandtookupthepen.SynecdocheThefarmswereshortofhandsduringtheharvestseason.Greatmindsthinkalike.personificationAgreatmisfortunecreptoverthewholecity.hyperbole/overstatementHerbeautymakesthebrightworddim.AlliterationProudasapeacockBlindasabatDiewithdignityWorldwildwatchSuccessandsurvivaloflibertyLeadthelandweloveThenextday,IwenttotheYigaoDigitalPlaza.TthoughtIshouldfindajobinacomputerstore.Iwentintoastore.AfterItoldthebosswhyIcameto,hesmiledtomeandsaidhewouldarrangeajobforme.Thejobissoldthecomputers.So,Iwasfree.Onsomedays,Istayedintheoffice.Icurledupinanarmchairreadingalotofbooksormagazinesabouttravelling.Fromthis,Iknowmanyplacesofinterests.CommonerrorsincetImproperpassivevoiceAftershewasgraduatedfromhighschool,sheenteredTsinghuaUniversity.Shewasdiedin1991.Thesunwasdisappearedbehindacloud.MisuseofPartsofSpeechHedoesnotlikeanyotherauthorsinthesameperiod,LunXuncanprobeintothedarknessofthesocietysharply.Weneedtowidetheroad.Theoveruseof“I,you,he…”Ifyouhaven’treadhernovelsthatmeansyouhaven’treadanovel.DanglingModifiersAttheageoften,Jelly’sgrandfatherdied.Onseeingtheoldphoto,mychildhoodcamebacktomymemory.Todowellatcollege,goodgradesareessential.SomeexceptionsTobefrank,Generallyspeaking,Judgingby,Speakingof,SentenceFragmentsTherearemanywaystoknowtheworld.ForexamplebyTV,radio,andsoon.WhycouldshegetahighmarkinCET-4?Becausesheworksveryhard.

Run-onSentencesTherearemanywayswehaveneveremployedthembefore.WordysentencesInspiteofthefactthatheislazy,Ilikehim.Forthepeoplewhoarediligentandkind,moneyisjustthethingtobeusedtobuythethingtheyneed.IncoherenceAmanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobyhisdeeds.Wehavegreatfaithandhighhopesforher.Freshwateristhemostimportantthingsoftheearth.

Heisn’tthoseauthorswhoonlywritetheirfeelings.IbegantoreadtheworksofMaodunfrom14yearsold.Itisknowntous,practicemakesperfect.Therewere4personsintheirfamily.Hiswifewasadeanofuniversity,hissonwasaph.D,andhisdaughterwasacollegestudent.ReferringtoLuxun,Ithinknoonecan’tknowhim.Hewasnotonlyafamouswriter,butalsoanoutstandingrevolutor.增加写作的闪光点1.适当用被动代替主动Weshouldpayattentionto…2.善于使用插入语however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve…然而，其他人却认为……

3.选用形象、生动、具体的词汇Very:Extremely,exceedingly,intensely,…moreandmorepopular:

Increasingpopularitymoreandmorepeople

GrowingindividualsNow:Currently,presentlysb.beinterestedinsth:Appealto…sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsbsendDeliverGive:offerItplaysagoodrolein…positivefavorable,promising，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstandingbadchance/effect/…Unfavorabledreadful,poor,adversethingaffair,business,mattercommonSharedcausegiveriseto,leadto,resultin,triggerwantDesirerememberbearinmindthathaveenjoy,possessTherefore,itishightimethatwecarriedoutsomeproperwaystoraiseourcompetitiveness.Inthenewcentury,moreandmorecomputersareused.Moreandmorepeopleareinterestedincomputers.Forastart,wecan,freely,searchwantedinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,we’llhavemoreandmoreknowledge,andwiderandwiderhorizons.Besides,wecangethugepleasuresonlinebychatting,playinggames,orsendingemail.4.否定意义介词against,beyond,but,except,without,...形容词absent,different,free,thelast,reluctant,lack,...动词deny,differ,fail,ignore,miss,refuse,usedto,want,...短语keep...from,protect...from,prevent...from,letalone,ataloss,invain,insteadof,outofthequestion,ratherthan,too...to,bynomeans,anythingbut,...在一些国家里妇女没有得到平等的权利。Womenfailtogettheequalrightsinsomecountries.这不是解决能源危机的最好的办法。Thisisbynomeansthebestwaytosolvetheproblemofenergycrisis.我们应保护树木，不让它们受破坏。Weshouldprotecttreesfrombeingdestroyed.在旧中国，我们连一个钉子都造不了，更不用说制造机器了。InoldChinawecouldnotmakeanail,letalone(make)machines解决问题的办法是和谈,而不是武力.5.contrastManypeoplewillsoonfindthemselvesrichingoods,butraggedinspirit.Theadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages.Itwillhavebothnegativeandpositiveeffectsbysodoing.ParallelconstructionWe’llpayanyprice,bearanyburdenandendureanyhardshiptohelpyou.2.比较结构1．同级比较我们过去三年取得的成就相当于以前十年所取得的成就.Wehaveplishedasmuchinthepastthreeyearsaswouldhavetakentenyearsinthepast.2．比较级改革开放的政策让我们更好的了解外面的世界.3．最高级4．themore…themore…结构

Themoreamanknows,themorehediscovershisignorance.5．选择比较Somepatternsforwriting

图表式作文Pattern1Itisobviousinthegraphic/tablethattherate/number/amountof…hasundergone

dramaticchanges.Ithasgoneup/grown/fallen/droppedconsiderablyinrecentyears,(as…varies).Atthepointof…,…reachesitspeakvalueof…(多少).Whatisthereasonforthischange?Mainlythereare…(多少)reasonsbehindthesituationreflectedinthegraphic/table.Pattern2Asshown/revealed/indicatedinthegraphic/table,…haschangedalot,with…decreasingsteeplyfrom…to…/by…,while…increasingsharplyfrom…to…/by….Amongthepossiblereasons/factorsforthischange,thefollowingsaretypical.Pattern1Nowadays,therearemoreandmor