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Inthespringsun,myauntandIheadedforherflowershop.NormallyIwouldbedelightedtohelpinhershop,butnotrecentlybecauseofRosa.Rosawasmysister,justonemonthold,whowassettledinmyoldbedroom.Fortenyears,thesmallroomwasfullofmytoysandbooks.Butnowitwastransformedintoherbabyroom,decoratedlikeagardenwithpinksandyellows.Myspace,myoldlife,wasgone.“Hereweare!”

Wearrivedattheshop,awaveofcolourandsweetsmellwashingoverme.MyauntsaidIcouldpicksomeflowersforMumandDad.Iusedtolovethis,buttodayIwassoovercomewithtirednessandenvy.WhybothertobringthemflowerswhentheywereenjoyingRosaathomewithoutme?

SilentlyIhelpedmyauntarrangeflowers.

“Yourmumtoldmetherehasn’tbeenmuchshuteyerecentlyforanyofyou.”“Notmuch,sinceRosathealarmclockwas

installed(安装),”I

complainedwithahugeyawn(哈欠).“Irememberhaving

to

creep(蹑手蹑脚地走)

aroundlikeaworn-outmousewhenyourmumwasababy.Ispentthefirstmonthshatinghersomuch.”“ButyouandMumseemsoclose,”

Isaid,guiltilyhidingawaymyenvyofRosa.“Nowweare.Butittookmeyearstogrowintotheroleofbigsister.Fewflowersblossom(绽放)overnight,youknow.”

Shepulledmeinforasidehug,glancingupattheclock,andsuggestedItakeawalkoutside.

Behindhershopwasafielddottedwithspringflowers.Steppingintothefield,Ibegantopicklittleflowers.Itwaslikegatheringmychildhoodmemories.IrememberedhowI’dsitwithDad,makingflowerchains,crowning(授予)

eachotherwiththesilliesttitles:QueenofJunkFoodandKingofMess.Mysmilegrewwider.TheshiningyellowflowersremindedmeofthecolorinRosa’sbabyroom.Wassheawake?Iwondered.注意:1.

续写词数应为150左右;2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para1:SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.Para2:Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.试题分析:本文是一篇记叙文,主题是人与自我,话题为家庭温情类。过去“我”有-一个幸福的童年,但是现在,家里添了--个小妹妹,的卧室被改成我”妹妹的婴儿房我”自认为受到冷落,失去了生活空间和父母的爱。-一个春日,我”在姨妈家的花田里采花时的阿姨提到了她自己作为姐姐的经我历,并解释了亲密关系的建立需要时间。该故事告诉我们:家庭幸福离不开个人角色的承担。续写文章体现了要承担责任和关爱家人的道德观与价值观,适合高中生写作续写情节发展:-爸爸妈妈来到我身边,还有Rosa.回想阿姨的话,我想我需要时间来接纳我的小妹妹,成为一名合格的姐姐。我小心翼翼地插花,为爸爸妈妈还有我那可爱的妹妹。-妹妹醒了。她那可爱的神态将我的心融化了。我温柔地将她抱起,感受她地温暖和香气,当我看向她的眼睛,我感觉她比这世上的一切都珍贵。官方范文,

SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.

“Lookwho'shere!”mydadexclaimedwithasmile,holdingRosawithababybasket.TheyellowflowersinmyhandseemedtoglowevenbrighterasIgazedatthebeautifullittlegirl,Icouldn'thelprecallingwhatmyaunttoldme.Iknewthatitwouldtaketimeformetoadjusttosharingmyparents’attentionandmyoldroom,butIwasdeterminedtobethebestbigsisterIcouldbe.ThenIcarefullyarrangedtheyellowflowersintoasmallbouquetandhandedittomymomwithasmile.“TheseareforyouandDad,andalsoforRosa,"Isaid,feelingawarmthinmychestthathadbeenmissingearlier.

Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.

Herbigblueeyeswereopen,takingintheworldaroundher.AsIwatchedmylittlesister,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelasenseofwonderandamazementathowperfectshewas.Igentlypickedherupandheldherclose,feelingherwarmthandbreathinginthesweetscentofherhair.Iknewthatfromnowon,mylifewouldneverbethesame.Iwouldnolongerbethecenterofattention,andIwouldhavetosharemyparentswiththisbeautifullittlecreature.ButasIlookedintoRosa'seyes,Iknewthatitwasallworthit.Shewasmyfamily,andIlovedhermorethananythingintheworld.参考范文一,

SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.

ItturnedouttobeMomandDad,withabigbasketandotherbulkybagshangingontheirarms.“Theydidn’tevenaskmetobehere,”Ithoughtbitterly,feelinglikeanabandonedchild.Outofangerandfrustration,Ihidbehindabigtree,determinedtoseehowcoldtheywouldbe.Momanddadsoonstoppedatagrassyfield,putdowntheirbaggages,tookoutablanket,andproducedmorefruitsandsnacksonebyone.Theytalkedandlaughed,whichmadememorejealous.Suddenly,aloudcrycamefromthebasket.

Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.

Momhurriedlystoppedwhatshewasdoing,huggedhergentlyandhummedasongtocomforther,whiledadmadefaces,tryingtomakehersmileagain.ButRosakeptcryingsointenselythatIbegantoworryabouther.BeforeIknewit,Icamefrombehindthetreeandcomforted,“Rosa,I’mhere.”Asifinmagic,Rosastoppedcryingandgiggledatme,whichmadeallofussignwithrelief.ItwasatthatmomentthatIfeltthebondbetweensheandmeandthelovebegantotakerootinme.Itmighttakemealongtime

toacceptherandsharemylifewithherbutIknewIwasontheway.

参考范文二,

SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.

Itwasmomanddad,onepushingthestrollerandtheothercarryingalotofpicnicstuff.Onseeingme,theywavedatmehappilyandshoutedwarmly,“Whatasurprise!”Surprisingly,myangerandenvywereimmediatelyputout.IjoggedforwardandpresentedthemproudlytheflowersIhadjustpickedup.“Howbeautifultheyare!Thankyou!”Momsniffedandstrokedmyhairgently.ThenwefoundaplacetosetthepicnicblanketandIwaseagertocheckRosa.

Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.

MumhandedmeRosa,andIcouldn’thelpbutmarvelathertinyfingersandcuriouseyes.Thenmomsharedstoriesofmyearlydays,highlightingthechallengestheyfacedandthejoystheyexperienced.Dadadded,withlaughtersburstingfromtimetotime.Immersedinthestories,Ifelthappinessands

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