2024版高考英语一轮总复习写作专题专题6社会与文化课件新人教版

写作专题专题六社会与文化Ⅰ．应用文写作申请信(2019·全国Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1．写信目的；

2．个人优势；3．能做的事情。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．结束语已为你写好。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply．Sincerely，LiHuaDearSirorMadam，I'mwritingtoapplytobeavolunteerfortheChinesePaintingExhibitionwhichwillbeheldinyourartgallery．①IthinkIamqualifiedforthisjob,becauseIhavelearnedChinesepaintingsincechildhood．②Besides,IamfluentinbothChineseandEnglish,whichisbeneficialforintroducingChinesepaintings．③IfIamluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,IcanshowvisitorsaroundthegalleryandgetthemtoknowmoreaboutChinesepainting．Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity．Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply．Sincerely，LiHua1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如apply,bequalifiedfor,besides,bebeneficialfor,bechosenas,showsb．around等。2．句式美：①句becauseIhavelearnedChinesepaintingsincechildhood为原因状语从句。②句whichisbeneficialforintroducingChinesepaintings为非限制性定语从句。③句IfIamluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer为条件状语从句。(2022·福州模拟)假定你是李华，正在新西兰读书，得知学校计划创办一份中文报纸并招聘编辑。请你给相关负责人写一封邮件，申请担任编辑。内容包括：1．写邮件的目的；2．申请缘由；3．你的优势。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearSir/Madam，I'mLiHua．LearningthattheschoolisplanningtostartaChinesenewspaperandisrecruitingeditors,I'mwritingtoapplyforit．I'mconfidentthatI'mqualified．Firstly,IamsokeenontheeventsofourschoolthatIamcapableofeditingthestorieshappeningintheschool．Besides,IhavesuchagoodcommandofChinesethatIhavenodifficultyineditingarticlesinChinese．Lastbutnotleast,Iamgoodatartandphotography,soIcanmakeabeautifulpageforthenewspaperandmakeitmoreattractive．Ifchosen,I'llbedevotedtothejob．Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply．Yours,LiHua(2021·浙江卷1月改编)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Pumpkin(南瓜)carvingisafavoritefalltradition．WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober．Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin．Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage—Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear．Ⅱ．读后续写Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner．Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint．[悬念1]Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent．I'munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime．Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening．AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry．FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(软木塞)forcedintoabottle．Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders．Myexcitementwasshort-lived．[悬念2]Thepumpkinwasheavy．“I'mgoingtosetitdown,now，”Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight，Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest．ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin．WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway．IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse．“Ican'tgetitout！”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace．[悬念3]注意：续写词数应为150左右。It

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online．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、理清文章大意关键：Who:theauthorandherfamilyWhere:athomeWhen:inOctoberWhat:Whosepumpkinwasthebiggest?How:Theauthorgotstuckinthepumpkinandcouldn'tgetfree．大意：本文讲述了作者将头伸进了南瓜里，被卡住了，无论如何也无法挣脱出来。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1思考：作者一家忘记在取出南瓜心之前称重，作者又会用什么办法证明自己的南瓜最大呢？悬念2思考：作者的兴奋劲儿为什么马上消失了？悬念3思考：作者最后是怎样将南瓜取下来的？三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考：①爸爸被叫来了，他会想出什么办法解救作者呢？②妈妈在做什么呢，妈妈是什么时候开始拍摄的？③父母又是怎样帮助作者的？段首句2思考：①妈妈拍的视频受欢迎吗？②作者又因为这个视频受到了怎样的影响？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：Paragraph1：爸爸被叫来→妈妈将这件事拍摄下来→爸爸妈妈帮忙→作者得救Paragraph2：视频被上传→视频走红→视频对作者和家人的影响It

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online．Bytheendofthatday,ithadover1，000views．Bythethirddayweweregetting5：00a．m．callsfromTVbreakfastshowsandthentheinternationalmedia—thevideostartedrackinguphundredsofthousandsofviews．WhenIwentonayouthcamp,IwasrecognizedbychildrenI'dnevermet．Thepumpkinalsobecameaminorcelebrity．Passers-byandtrick-or-treaterswouldknockandask,“WhichistheHOTpumpkin？”beforetakingselfieswithit．1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①第一段中形容词squash-conditioned,sore的运用形象刻画出了作者狼狈的样子。②第二段中时间状语Bytheendofthatday的运用，强调出了时间之短暂。2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①使用很多高级词汇，如propose,emergewith,rackup等，措辞风格与原文保持了一致。②itwasonlythenthatIrealizedshe'dbeenfilmingthewholetime是一个强调句型，这是一个增分点。③非谓语动词pluggedwithpulp,takingselfieswithit等的运用使得句式变得简洁、流畅。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Balthazarismypride．ItisaFrenchbrasserieinNewYorkCity．Ihaverunitfortwentyyears．Thoughitisintendedtoattractpeoplefromallwalksoflife,mostofitsregularcustomersarethosewhoworkinthecompaniesalongsideWallStreet．OnenightatBalthazar,fourWallStreetbusinessmenorderedtherestaurant'smostexpensiveredwine:a$2，000bottleofChateauMoutonRothschild,themostfamousbrandofBordeaux．OneofthetwowaiterstransferredtheBordeauxintoafancyglasscontaineratthewaiter'scounter．Meanwhile,ayoungcoupleorderedtherestaurant'scheapestredwine,an$18pinotnoir．Usually,peoplewhoorderedpinotnoirpouredthewinedirectlyintotheirglasses,butthiscoupleinsistedthewinebepouredintoafancyglasscontainerbeforetheydrank．Thesetwoverydifferentwineswerenowinthesamecontainers．Mistakingthe$18wineforthe$2，000Rothschild,thefirstwaiterpouredthecheapwineforthebusinessmen．Thebusinessmanhostingtheotherthreeconsideredhimselfawineexpert．Hetookatasteofthecheapwineinthefirstplace,andshowingoff,heburstintodelightaboutitspurity．“Fantastic！”heclaimed．Theyoungcouple,whoorderedthe$18pinotnoir,werethenunintentionallyservedthe$2，000Rothschildbythesecondwaiter．Ontakingtheirfirstdrinkofwhattheybelievedwascheapwine,theyjokinglypretendedtobedrinkinganexpensivewineandcopiedallthebehavioursofawineexpert,shakingthewineglasses,observingtheliquidinsideandtastingitslowly,totallyfascinated．Fiveminuteslater,thetwowaitersdiscoveredtheirerror,andhorrified,phonedmeathome．注意：续写词数应为150左右。I

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