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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。“OnewindydayinMarch,KittyMillerwasonherwaytoschoolwhensheglancedintoastorewindowandsawagreatpileoflovelyredapples."Oh,”Sheexclaimed(惊呼).“Howlovely!IfonlyMammacouldhaveone!’Immediately,thestoreownerrecognizedthefamiliargirlandaskedhertopickone.KittyjustshookherheadandKitty'smotherwasextremelypoor.ShehadbeenadressmakereversinceKitty'sfatherdied,andhadtoworkhardtoearnalivingforherselfandKitty.Unfortunately,shehadrecentlybeeverysickandhadtolieinbedalldaylong.WhenKittywasawayatschool,thehousewasincrediblycoldandcheerless.ShemissedherlittleangelthatiswhatshecalledKitty.Kittytookgreatcareofhermother.Shecookedherfood,mostlysoup.Theycouldnotaffordfreshfruit.Kittywouldevensingtohermotheratnight.WhenKittyreachedtheschoolthatday,herthoughtswerefullofhersickmotherandthelovelyredapples.Shewasusuallyanexcellentstudent,butthatdayshemadesomanymistakesthattheteacherlookedatherinsurprise.Thelittlegirlcouldonlysitatherdesk,withherbookbeforeher,anddreamofthoseredapples.Whenschoolwasdismissed.Kittystartedslowlyhomeward.Shehadwalkedonlyashortdistancewhenshesawamaninfrontofherdrophiswallet.Runningquicklyforward,shepickeditup.ThewalletfeltquiteheavyinKitty'slittlehand.“Theremustbeagooddealofmoneyinit,”thoughtKitty."HowIwishIcouldkeepit,sothatIwouldthenbeabletopurchasearedappleforMamma,andsomanyotherthingssheneeds.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:“2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Paraone:Kittyknewthiswouldnotberight,soshehurriedaftertheman.Paratwo:Thestoreownersawthefamiliargirlrushingin,onedollarinhand.文本分析:故事大意小姑娘Kitty心疼妈妈,想给生病的妈妈买一个红苹果,可是却没有足够的钱。一天放学后,在回家的路上,她拾到一个钱包,里面时厚厚的一沓钱,她十分矛盾,她非常想用这比钱给妈妈买红苹果,但又深知这样做不对,她会怎么选择呢?矛盾:Kittydesiredtobuyanappleforhermotherbutherfamilywastoopoorandfatherless.Kittyandhermomledanextremelypoorlifeandmom’sillnessleftthesituationevenworse.母女关系:Aclosebond.Shewoulddoeverythingforhermom.进退两难(Kittywasinadilemma)Keepthewallet?Returnthewallet?Moredetailstoecho:Para1:Kitty内心的纠结男人要不要给钱多为报酬,多少酬谢?面对酬谢,Kitty作何反应Kitty会不会将酬谢直接拿回家给妈妈看呢?Para2:店主会不会收kitty的钱,直接白送呢?店主会不会一元卖一堆苹果?本文的主旨大意是什么?故事线发展:PoorandsickmotherandKittyhadahardlifesawprettyredapplesbutnotaffordablesawthemandroppedthewalletandreturnedGive100dollarsbuttookonlyonedollarRushedtowardsthefruitstoreGotthepreciousapplesandsharedwithmomMainidea:LittlegirlKittyfeltsorryforhermotherandwantedtobuyaredappleforhersickmother,butshedidn'thaveenoughmoney.Onedayafterschool,onherwayhome,shepickedupawalletwithathickpileofmoneyinside.Shewasveryconflictedandwantedtousethismoneytobuyhermotherredapples,butsheknewitwasnotright.Afterdeepreflection,shemadetherightchoice.Theme:Honestybearsthesweetestfruitforherandhermom.WritingpurposeTopraisehergoodvirtuehonestyatest多变句式表达然后,那个男人走的如此之快,以至于kitty花了很大努力才追赶上他。Then,themanwalkedsofastthatKittyputinalotofefforttocatchupwithhim.However,sofastdidthemanwalkthatittookKittygreatefforttocatchupwithhim.表示“大步流星”,“快走”的表达Walkatastride;walk/strodeasifonwings;setablisteringpaceNevertheless,suchablisteringpacedidthemansetthatittookKittygreatefforttocatchupwithhim.参考范文:Kittyknewthiswouldnotberight,soshehurriedaftertheman.“Withbeadsofsweatonforeheadandhearthammering,Kittysteppedforward,turningbackthewallettotheman.NosoonerhadKittygavethewallettothemanthanappreciationwaswrittenonhisfacewhilehismouthburstintoaradiantsmile.LookingintoKitty'scleareyes,themangrabbedherlittlehandsandspokehighlyofher,givingheronedollarinreturnforKitty'skindaction.Clenchingtheonedollarinhandstight,Kittywassunkintoawhirlpoolofsheerexhilarationwhilethelovelyredapplescamecrowdingintohermind.Hardlycouldshebelievehereyesthatsheeventuallygotenoughmoneytoaffordtheapplesforhersickmamma!Withouthesitation,Kittyrushedtothesort,windsdancingbesideher.Thestoreownersawthefamiliargirlrushingin,onedollarinhand.Eyesgluedtothelovelyredapples.Kittytookoneofthemcautiously,herlipscurvingintoadelightedsmile.Afterafewminutesrushingbackhomewithindescribableexcitement,Kittyopenedtheweatherbeatendoorviolently,steppingforwardtohermother'sbed.“Look,Mom!HereisthelovelyredappleIpurchasedforyou!HavingknownKitty'skindaction,Momhuggedherdaughterintoherwarmarms.tearsblurringhereves.Atthesightofthelovelyredapples.momstrokedKitty'shairgently,agushofprideaswellasextremehappinessarisingfromthebottomoftheheartofKittythatKindnesswouldtrulyreturn.语言积累:
Tornbetweentheguilt
ofpossessingsomeone’sspecialnecklace
andthedesire
ofowningthismostpreciousitemofthissummer,
Ipacedupanddowninroom
withdesperate/intensestruggle,
leavingallmythoughtinamuddle.沉思做出正确的选择
Onasecondthought,
insteadofallowingmyselftobetorturedbyrestlessnessanddisfort,
Iresolvedtofigureoutthetruth
attheexpenseoflosingmytreasure.
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