2016年10月高考新题型解析-读后续写样卷专项练

第二页，共12页。第三页，共12页。写作步骤①审题：速读阅读材料和写作要求，明确写作任务。②读文：细读阅读材料，确定文章体裁和题材(话题)。注意文中的关键词，也就是故事中的时间、地点、人物和事件，特别要标记能描述事件发展过程的词和短语。③谋段：先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段段首文字，再构思这两段要写的段落大意。根据确定好的段落大意，选出每一段可能要用到的原文中带下划线的关键词。结合这些关键词，确定每一段的写作要点。这两段加起来要能写出10到15个句子，以满足续写词数要求。④初写：按照第三步谋段时确定好的写作要点进行初写。写作时要注意所用的人称和时态要与原材料一致.另外，还要注意尽可能地减少表达上的语法错误。如果遇到语言上的表述困难(kùnnɑn)，可多参考原阅读材料中的有关语句。⑤定稿：写好初稿后，考生要结合原材料中故事线索读一读自己续写的内容。既要确保不出现与原材料相矛盾的地方，又要做到内容上前后连贯，语句通顺。最后规范誊写并标出使用过的原材料中下划线的关键词语。第四页，共12页。One

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Lynn,I’m

Li

Hua,

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exchange

student

from

China.

I’m

happyto

know

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I’ll

bestaying

with

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studying

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local

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having

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arrive

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August

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get

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place

late

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wonder

if

you

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give

me

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I

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better

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my

stay

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forwardtoseeing

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wishes,Li

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