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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，续写原文MydadandIhadbeenlookingforwardtotheStatecross-countryraceofmysenioryearofhighschool,whichwouldbetheclimax(顶点)ofmyexistence.Iwasthefastestrunneronmyteam,andIwassupposedtomakeitintothetopfifteen.Wehadbeenworkingtowardsthisraceforthreeyears.Itwaseverythingtome,anditwaseverythingtomydad.Hewasarunnerandwaswildwithjoybymysuccessinrunning.Hemadeittoeveryrace,evenflyinghomeearlyfrombusinesstripstoseemerun.Ialwayslistenedforhisvoice,whichrangabovethecrowd–tellingmetorelaxmyarms,callingoutmytime.Hepushedme.Hecheeredforme.Hebelievedinme.WespentcountlesshoursonthesandycanalsofArizona.Breathinginthedustofthedesert,theblossomsoftheorangetrees,andtheterriblesmellofthedairyfarm,wemadeourwayacrossthecity.Wepoundedmilesandmilesintoourrunningshoes,markingwitheverystepthepathtogreatness.Itwasajourneythatwasjustours.Adreampassedonfromonegenerationtothenext.Thenthebigdaycame.Itwashotterthannormal-toohot.Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,crackedwiththesummerheat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire.Igazedoutatthecrowd;dozensoffamiliarfacesfromchurchandschoolflickeredacrossmyview.Theyhadcomeforme.Theywerecountingonme.Isawmydadsethiswatch,worryandexcitementetchedacrosshisface.Withthesoundofagunshot,theracebegan.Forthefirsttwoandhalfmiles,Ifeltgreat.Ihadneverbeforebeensoreadyforsomething.Theweeksleadinguptotheracewerefilledwithhardpracticesandastrictdiet.Thescorchingsunbeatuponmyback,blindingmewithitsbrilliance.Nothingwasgoingtostopme,though.Paragraph1:

However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.Paragraph2:

Iwhispered,“I’msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad.”官方范文，

Howeverwithoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.

Mylungsfoughttotakeinenoughair,andmyfeettransformedintocementbricks.Neckandneckwithoneofmygreatestrivals.Icouldseethefinishline.Ihadbegunthefinalsprintintoglorywhenmykneesbuckledandmylegsgaveway.NothingIcoulddowouldmakethemholdmyweight.Theywereasweakasjelly.EventhoughIknewmydreamsofvictoryhadbeendestroyed,Ihadtofinishtherace.Withallofthestrengthleftinme,Igotonmyhandsandkneesandcrawled,inchbyinch,acrossthefinishline.ShamepulsedthroughmyveinsasDadsquatteddownandpulledmeintohisarms.

Iwhispered,"I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad."

Hegavemeagentlesmileandsaid."Youcouldneverdisappointme.Sometimesthesethingsjusthappen.Allthatmattersisthatyoudidyourbest."Liftingmyface,Isawmydad'seyes,inwhichIsawthesweat,thetime.andtheworkwehadputintoourdream.Themileswehadruntogether,allforthisrace.flashedacrossmymind."Butweworkedsohard.Whataboutourdream?"Iasked.Inthatsecond,theworldstoodstill.Hereachedoverformyhand,holdingbackhisowntears,andsaid."Don'tyouknowthatyouaremydreamcometrue?"参考范文一，

However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.

Ifeltlikeaflatballoonandmymindwasgettingdizzy.AnunknownpanicseizedandItoldmyselftostraightenup.Butmylegsweregainingweightwitheverystepuntilablanknessoverwhelmedme.BeforeIcollapsedtothegroundandbecameunconscious,Iheardasharpscreaminthedistance,“son,holdon!”WhenIopenedmyeyes,awallofpeoplebentdownandcheckedme,theireyesfilledwithconcernandrelief.Itriedtostandupandwentbacktocompetition,butavolunteerpressedme,“don’tmove.Youjusthadaheatstrokeandnowyouneedsomerest.”MyheartsankandIlookedaroundandfoundmydad.

Iwhispered,"I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad.”

Wearingamixtureofworryandrelief,Dadstrokedmyhear,“Sillyboy,howcouldIblameyou!Whenyoufelldown,Ialmosthadaheartattack.Itishot,andIshouldhaveanticipatedit.IloveyouandIwantyoutobesafeandsound.It’sokwegiveup.Forgeaboutthecompetition.”Hearingthewords,Ifeltacurrentofwarmthandreliefsurgingoverme.Iclosedmyeyesandlaidthere,enjoyingtheleisureofrestandfailure.WithDad’sunderstandingandsupport,Iwouldtrymyupmosttorunnexttime.Runningwasadreamformeandasoliditybetweenustocarryiton.

参考范文二，

However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.

Theintenseheatwastakingatollonmybody,sappingeveryounceofenergyfrommybody.Eachstepbecameastruggle,mylegsturnedtojellyandmyvisionstartedtoblur.Mydad'svoice,usuallyasourceofencouragement,seemeddistantamidthedeafeningcheersofthecrowd.Despitemybestefforts,Icouldn’tgoon.Ihadaheatstrokeandcollapsedonthescorchingpavement,defeatedanddisappointed.TheraceIhadpreparedfor,thedreammydadandIhadshared,hadslippedthroughmyfingers.Asworkersrushedtogivefirstaid,Isawdadfollowingbehind,withanxietywrittenonface.

Iwhispered,"I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad.”

Hestretchedhishandsandpattedme,“Kid,don’tbesilly.You’vegivenityourall.Justrelaxandhaveagoodrest.Winningisgoodbutyoursafetymattersthemost.”Inthatmoment,Irealizedthathissupportwasunwavering.Itwasapainfullessonintheunpredictabilityoflifeandtheimportanceofknowingone’slimits.Ourjourneywasnotdefinedbythissingleracebutalifelongcommitmenttosupportingeachotherthroughhighsandlows.TheStatecross-countryracemightnothavebeenthetriumphwehopedfor,buttheloveandsupportofmydadremainedthetruepinnacleofmyexistence.

参考范文三However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.Shortofbreathandnolongerabletokeeptherhythminmypace,Istruggledtofindtheenergyinmymuscletokeepmoving.Thepassingcontestantsmadeitcleartome:myfirstStatecrosscountryracewasdoomedtofail.TryasImaytotellmylegstokeepmoving,theywouldn'tfollow.Aftergaspingupabigsteeprough-surfacedhill,Isimplycouldholdnolongeranddropped.Inthecrowd'sconfusedgaze,Iwashandedtotherestingplaceimmediately,dad,wearingaworriedexpression,dashedtomyside.(95w)Iwhispered,“I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad."Farfromutteringanywordsofdiscouragement,hehelpedmeliedowninacoolareaandappliedawettoweltomyforehead.“Son,Igotyou.Youarehavingaheatstroke.”Rememberingthatday,Iwasreassuredbymydad'swords,“youdidagreatjobprotectingyourselfAndwe'llgetthatmedalnexttime.”Thatexperienceholdsinmymemoryasasweetreminderofmyfather'sfullsupportforme-notonlywhenI'mwinningbutalsowhenI'mfailing.Thiscalmassurance,asitturnedout,sawmethroughmanyupsanddownsinmylife.(101)参考范文四However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.Mylungsfoughttotakeinenoughair,andmyfeetturnedtocement.Headtoheadwithoneofmybiggestcompetitors.Icouldseethefinishline.Ihadbegunthefinaldashintoglorywhenmykneescollapsed,andmylegsgaveway.TherewasnothingIcoulddotogetthemtosupportmyweight.Theywereasweakasajellybean.EventhoughIknewmydreamsofvictoryhadbeenshattere