专题06上海高考图表类作文（解析版）

►专题06上海高考图表类作文_________________________________________________________________________________________考点精考点精讲【考情链接】图表类书面表达常以数据表格形式、曲线图形式、流程图形式、柱形图形式、饼式图形式及平面图形式出现。这类题型具有文字少、信息简洁、要点分散等特征。图表类书面表达在近年的高考中时有出现，这类统计图在日常生活中应用得非常广泛，因此，读懂它并能用英语清晰地表述出来具有很强的现实意义。图表作文主要是介绍或说明某方面的情况，文体上属于说明文。应按照说明文的形式和特点来进行写作。由于这类试题文字少、信息简洁，如果只是把图表中的内容一点一点地记叙出来，进行清单式的罗列，就会索然乏味，并且达不到字数要求。【要点梳理】要点一：细读图表，抓住特征图表中的数据信息往往较多，首先要读懂其中的符号和数字所代表的意思。然后，从图表的整体着手，认真分析各项数据，抓住其主要特征，弄懂它们所揭示的规律。经常使用的词汇有：table，chart，figure，graph，describe，tell，show，represent等。要点二：认真审读，确定主题认真审读试题所提供的数据信息，结合文字提示，确定短文的主题。短文的主题往往隐含在图表中，需要考生从图表数据中概括出事情或事件的规律和特征，然后归纳出主题。有时，试题给出了短文的题目，也就等于为考生点明了主题。要点三：巧用数据，突出主题引用数据说明基本趋势，比较数据揭示基本特征。由于图表中的数据信息较多，写作时要巧妙地引用一些数据来说明主题，不要作任何发挥。表达时，既要包含所有要点，但又不能面面俱到。经常使用的词汇有：rise，drop，reduce，increase，decrease，fall，while，but，onthecontrary，however，pare...to/with...，incontrastto，as...as，thesameas，similarto，differentfrom，differencebetween，among，morethan，lessthan等。要点四：词句多变，表达灵活由于图表数据比较单调，很容易使人选用相同的词语和句式进行表达，结果文章显得很乏味。因此，写作时要尽量避免重复使用同一词语或句型，选择一些异曲同工的词语和句式来表达。要点五：适当发挥，表明观点图表类书面表达有时要求考生在对数据进行分析、对比后，简单地谈谈自己的看法或提出建议，这属于让考生自主发挥的部分，更是短文最精彩的部分。考生要在该部分陈述自己的看法，表明自己的观点，提出解决问题的方法或建议。表述观点时，可以引用人们普遍的观点，也可说出自己独到的见解。借题发挥时，不可偏离主题，只要把观点表述清楚即可，不必作更多的解释或说明。经常使用的词有：inaword，inshort,generallyspeaking,It’sclearfromthechartthat...,wecandrawtheconclusionthat...,wecanlearn/know...等。【真题回顾】Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.启明学生会对该校高三年级学生作了一项“生追求名牌现象”的问卷调查,部分调查结果如下,如果你是宣传部（PropagandaDepartment）负责人李群,请写一份调查报告,内容包括：1.简述调查结果2.谈谈你的看法购物档次选择买名牌父母不同意,你采取何种态度？中高档mid-highgrade低档lowgrade无所谓愤怒自己积蓄就这样算了61%21%18%46%24%30%_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Towhomitmayconcern,AsheadofthePropagandaDepartment,Iamwritingthisreporttopresentsomefindingsofthesurveyconductedrecentlyintostudents’pursuitforfamousbrands,andsharemyperspectiveonthecrazeforbrands.Asfarasthepurchase-levelisconcerned,respondentskeenonrenownedbrandsaccountfor61,whichfaroutpercentagethoseeitherinterestedinlow-endproducts(21%)orindifferenttotheprestigewithwhichtheseproductsaretagged(18%).Intermsofthewaystudentsreacttoparents’disapproval,46%ofthosesurveyedarewildwithanger,nearlyaquarter(24%)attempttosaveupfortheirdesiredgoods,andtheonesdoingnothingconstitutestheremaining30%.Inmyopinion,thetendencyforstudentstopursuefamousbrandsesasaninevitableresultofourrapidlyevolvinginformationsocietywhereweareexposedtolargevolumeofadsandproductpublicity.Thistendencyisthenfurtherfueledbywhatisfoundwidelypersistentinschools:theincreasinglyintensepeerpressure.Fearfulofbeingleftbehind,adolescentbuyersbeeobsessedwithnamebrands.Andtosatisfychildren'surgetobetrendy,somefamiliesarereportedlystrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Infact,notonlydoesbrand-pursuingposeadrainonsomehouseholds'finance,butalsoithasdamagingeffectsonteenagers’emotionalwell-being.Itishightimethatparentsandschoolsmadebinedeffortstokeepthephenomenonincheck.Yours,LiQun【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生作为宣传部（PropagandaDepartment）负责人李群，写一份启明高三年级学生作一项“生追求名牌现象”的问卷调查报告。【详解】1.词汇积累对……感兴趣：bekeenon→beinterestedin对……而言：Intermsof→Asfor在我看来：Inmyopinion→asfarasIcansee冲动：urge→impulse2.句式拓展句式转换原句：Fearfulofbeingleftbehind,adolescentbuyersbeeobsessedwithnamebrands.拓展句：Itisduetothefearofbeingleftbehindthatadolescentbuyersbeeobsessedwithnamebrands.【点睛】[高分句型1]Asfarasthepurchase-levelisconcerned,respondentskeenonrenownedbrandsaccountfor61,whichfaroutpercentagethoseeitherinterestedinlow-endproducts(21%)orindifferenttotheprestigewithwhichtheseproductsaretagged(18%).（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。）[高分句型2]Thistendencyisthenfurtherfueledbywhatisfoundwidelypersistentinschools:theincreasinglyintensepeerpressure.（运用了what引导的宾语从句。）_____优选操练优选操练（2021·上海浦东新·二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositioninabout120~150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.某校针对高一新生进行了“拓展课”（extensivecourses）的问卷调查。下面是拓展课选课原因的比例分布图。请简要描述图表，并结合自己选课经历（1-2门拓展课），说明选择的原因。(注意：不要出现名字)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Recently,asurveyonextensivecourseshasbeenmadetofindthereasonswhystudentschoosecertaincourses.Andbelowaretheresults.Asthechartshows,about50percentstudentssurveyedchooseacertaincourseinordertodeveloptheirowninterestwhile40percentaretoenlargetheirknowledge.Lessthan10percentchooseacoursewiththeaimofconsolidatingtheirsubjectknowledgeandpreparingforexams.Frommypersonalexperience,Icanseewhy.IoncechoseRobotProgrammingasmyextensivecourse.ThatisbecauseIhaveshowedinterestinputerandrobotssinceinelementaryschool.Iholdthefirmbeliefthatinterestisthebestteacher,andmyfuturecareerissuretobebinedwithprogramming.Therefore,RobotProgrammingbecamemyextensivecourse.【思路点拨】本文属于图表作文，要求对拓展课选课原因的调查结果进行描述，并且结合自身的经历说明其原因。【精准解析】1.词汇积累旨在：inorderto→withtheaimof对……感兴趣：beinterestedin→showinterestin：primaryschool→elementaryschool认为：believe→holdthebelief2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：IoncechoseRobotProgrammingasmyextensivecourse.ThatisbecauseIhaveshowedinterestinputerandrobotssinceinelementaryschool.拓展句：ThereasonwhyIoncechoseRobotProgrammingasmyextensivecourseisthatIhaveshowedinterestinputerandrobotssinceinelementaryschool.【名师指导】[高分句型1]Recently,asurveyonextensivecourseshasbeenmadetofindthereasonswhystudentschoosecertaincourses.(运用了why引导的定语从句)[高分句型2]Iholdthefirmbeliefthatinterestisthebestteacher,andmyfuturecareerissuretobebinedwithprogramming.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)2．（2021·上海市进才高三月考）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.近来，一系列“拍照搜题”的APP软件大受学生的欢迎，这些只要拍照就能搜到解题思路和答案的“神器”却让许多家长和老师犯了愁。某对于学生使用这些学习软件开展了一次调查，上图是调查结果，文章必须包括以下内容：1.描述图表；2.试分析该现象的原因；3.简要谈谈你的看法。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________学习App使用比例____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Withtheriseofavarietyofmagicphotographapplicationwhichcanhelpstudentsquicklyfindanswerstotheirquestions,teachersandparentsarebeingmoreandmoreanxiousaboutthat.Asisshowninthechartaboutthesurveyresults,40percentofseniorhighschoolstudentsingradeoneusetheseapplications,with60percentofstudentsingradetwoand80percentingradethreerespectively.Thepercentagerisesasstudentsgrowup,whichmayalsoindicatethatstudentsinseniorschoolhavemoreandmorehomeworktodo.AsfarasI’mconcerned,theseapplicationsthemselvesarenotbadandevenareofgreathelptostudentsinleaningaslongastheyareproperlyused.Butiftheyareabused,theywilldomuchharmtothosedependentontheseapplicationstoomuch.Asaresult,studentsarenotwillingtousetheirmindsandarelazyinthinking.What’sworse,theircreativityisaccordinglygettingweaker.Instead,weoughttouseourheadfirstandthenpareourapproacheswiththoseforreferenceprovidedbytheapplicationstofindabettersolutionandexpandourhorizon,orturntotheseapplicationsforhelpatourwit’send.【思路点拨】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生描述图表、分析该现象的原因以及简要谈谈你的看法。【精准解析】1.词汇积累上升：goup→rise忧虑的：worried→anxious表明：show→indicate在我看来：inmyopinion=asfarasI’mconcerned2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Asaresult,studentsarenotwillingtousetheirheadandarelazyinthinking.What’sworse,theircreativityisaccordinglygettingweaker.拓展句：Asaresult,notonlystudentsarenotwillingtousetheirheadandarelazyinthinking,butalsotheircreativityisaccordinglygettingweaker.【名师指导】[高分句型1]Thepercentagerisesasstudentsgrowup,whichmayalsoindicatethatstudentsinseniorschoolhavemoreandmorehomeworktodo.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Butiftheyareabused,theywilldomuchharmtothosedependentontheseapplicationstoomuch.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)3．（2021·上海杨浦·高三期中）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设最近你所在颁布了一项新举措，即“教师不得在上布置作业或要求学生利用完成作业”。与此同时，在700名师生中展开了广泛调查，结果如下。请就校方这一新措举发表你的看法，并说明理由。态度赞许不赞许无所谓比例85%9%5%_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Recently,ourschoolhasenactedanewinitiativethatteachersarenotallowedtoassignhomeworkoncellphonesorrequirestudentstopletehomeworkusingcellphones.Thechartbelowclearlydemonstratestheporpotionintermsofthestudents'attitude.Wecanseethatthepercentageofapprovalisthehighest.Thefigureisfollowedbythedisapproval,reaching9%.Bycontrast,thelowestpercentageistheattitudewhichmeansitdoesn'tmatter,withonly5%invloved.

Frommypersonalperspective,theinitiativeisgreatforthestudents.Itisnotdifficulttoeupwithsomepossiblefactorstoaccountforthis.First,ourfinishinghomeworkoncellphonesisbadforoureyesight.Besides,toomuchscreentimewillprobablydecreasesoursleepquality.Ontopofthat,itistendedtogetdistractedfromtheonlinecontentwhichisnothelpfultoourstudy.

Allinall,theinitiativeisboundtofavormostofus.Theimplementationeffortsoftheinitiativewillbethekeytowitnessingtheachievementofhomeworkreform.

【思路点拨】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。要求考生就颁布的新举措“教师不得在上布置作业或要求学生利用完成作业”发表自己看法并给出理由。【精准解析】1.词汇积累允许：allow→permit要求：require→mand表明：demonstrate→indicate原因：factor→reason2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Wecanseethatthepercentageofapprovalisthehighest.Thefigureisfollowedbythedisapproval,reaching9%.拓展句：Wecanseethatthepercentageofapprovalisthehighest,followedbythedisapproval,whichreaches9%.【名师指导】【高分句型1】Recently,ourschoolhasenactedanewinitiativethatteachersarenotallowedtoassignhomeworkoncellphonesorrequirestudentstopletehomeworkusingcellphones.（运用了that引导同位语从句）【高分句型2】Ontopofthat,Itistendedtogetdistractedfromtheonlinecontentwhichisnothelpfultoourstudy.（运用了which引导的定语从句）4．（2021·上海奉贤区致远高级高三期中）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.下面的饼状图显示了某校对学生学业成绩评价的新体制，图表所示的五个方面构成了一个学生的学业成绩。假如你是该校学生，请你以“TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool”为题用英语写一篇短文，内容包括：1.简要描述图中信息；2.谈谈你对这一新举措的看法并说明原因。图表说明：①testresults②notes③homework④classperformances⑤teamwork____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchoolInordertohelpstudentsdeveloptheirabilitiesinallfields,ourschoolnowhasaskedtheteacherstomakesomechangesinthegradingsystem.Thischartshowshowitworks.Students’testresults,whichusedtobetheonlywaytoevaluateastudentinschool,makeuponly30%ofhisfinalscore.Instead,howastudentperformsinclass,andhowhetakesnotesanddoeshishomeworkaretakenintoaccount,eachpartofwhichmakesup20%.Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant.Ifyouwantahigherscore,youshouldbegoodatworkingtogetherwithyourclassmates.I’mallforthenewgradingsystem,whichevaluatesstudentsinallfields.Onlybyputtingthesystemintopractice,canwefullydevelopourabilitiesaswellaspotentialonthewaytoadulthoodandtrulymakepreparationsforourfuturelife.【思路点拨】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，要求考生以“TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool”为题写一篇短文，内容包括：简要描述图表信息以及谈谈对这一新举措的看法并说明原因。【精准解析】1.词汇积累评估：evaluate→assess考虑：takeintoaccount→consider重要的：important→ofimportance擅长：begoodat→dowellin2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant.Ifyouwantahigherscore,youshouldbegoodatworkingtogetherwithyourclassmates.拓展句：Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant,whichmeansifyouwantahigherscore,youshouldbegoodatworkingtogetherwithyourclassmates.【名师指导】[高分句型1]Instead,howastudentperformsinclass,andhowhetakesnotesanddoeshishomeworkaretakenintoaccount,eachpartofwhichmakesup20%.(运用了how引导的主语从句和ofwhich引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Onlybyputtingthesystemintopractice,canwefullydevelopourabilitiesaswellaspotentialonthewaytoadulthoodandtrulymakepreparationsforourfuturelife.(运用了only+状语位于句首引起的部分倒装)_____好题必好题必测演练1Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.你是明启的李华，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，已在校园网发布方案，征求师生的修改意见。你需要写一封邮件，包含以下两点：1.

提出你觉得需要改进的地方；2.

需要改进的原因。主题发现上海时间5月1日（周日）下午3点路线从人民广场出发，途经南京东路，到达外滩(theBund)，全程徒步，之后再徒步原路返回人民广场。Towhomitmayconcern,I'mWangLeifromMingqiMiddleSchoolandI'mdelightedthattheStudents'unionitoorganizeahikewiththetheme"DiscoveryShanghai".Iwouldliketogivemyhumblesuggestionsconcerningtheplanannounced.andseveralothertouristattractionscanbeaddedtotheroute.Personally,IsuggestthatweshouldvisitYuGardenanShikumenonourwaybackratherthantheoriginalroute,thusenrichingourtrip.I'mconfidentthataslongasyoutakemyadvice,theactivitywillbemoreappealingandmeaningfulduetovariousreasons.Tobeginwith,shanghaiisaninternationalmetropolisfullofattractionsanditwillbeapityifwelackenoughtimetofullyexploreit,Anearlystartenablesustocovermoreplacesofinterestandgainmorepreciousexperience.Inaddition,shanghaihasitsownuniquehistoryandculture,sothehistoricsitesshouldn’tbeignored.HavinganoverallviewofYuGardenandShikumen,whicharedefinitelythesymbolsandgemsofthevaluablelocalculture,willundoubtedlybroadenourhorizonsanddeepenourunderstandingofthehistoryofShanghai.Therefore,wemay,tobeexaggerated,beeincreasinglyproudofourcitytoputinanutshell,itisessentialforustospendmoretimeexploringtheessenceofourbelovedcity.Iwouldbewildwithjoyandenterfortheactivitywithouthesitationifyoucouldadoptmysuggestionsafterthoroughconsideration.Yours,LiHua演练2WriteanEnglishpositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启学生王磊。新学年，你校拟增加一门选修课，备选科目及相关信息如下表所示：师资频率每次时长理财特聘大学教授每月一次3小时家政特聘学生家长每周一次1小时古代文学本校教师每两周一次2小时____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearSirorMadam,

IamWangLei,asenior1student.Knowingthatourschoolisgoingtoofferanoptionalcourse,I’mmorethandelighted.IthinkthecourseofHousekeepingcanbeoffered.

ThereasonswhyIchoosethiscourseareasfollows.Tobeginwith,Housekeepingisaskillwhicheveryteenagermustmaster.Asweallknow,manyparentsandgrandparentsalmostdoallthechoresathome.Theresultisthatsometeenagerscan’tdosimplethings,suchaswashingsocksandmakingbeds.Secondly,Housekeepingplaysanimportantroleinourfuturelife.Afterlearningthebasicskill,wecanlookafterourselvesandfamilymembers.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionintoconsideration.Yours,WangLei

【解析】【导语】这是一篇应用文。文章要求考生针对增加的选修课，通过邮件表达出自己的想法。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：delighted→happy/glad首先：tobeginwith→firstly/atfirst照顾：lookafter→takecareof建议：suggestion→advice2.句式拓展简单句变倒装句原句：Afterlearningthebasicskill,wecanlookafterourselvesandfamilymembers.拓展句：Onlyafterlearningthebasicskill,canwelookafterourselvesandfamilymembersbetter.【点睛】【高分句型1】ThereasonswhyIchoosethiscourseareasfollows.(运用了why引导的限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Theresultisthatsometeenagerscan’tdosimplethings,suchaswashingsocksandmakingbeds.(运用了that引导的表语从句)演练3为了使新增设的选修课能更符合学生的需求，教务处希望所有在校同学能通过邮件表达自己的看法。你决定写一封邮件给教务处，内容如下：1.你认为应该开设哪一门选修课；2.为什么你认为应该开设这一门课。10．Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明启的学生李明，学生会将要举办英语演讲比赛，正在征求学生意见。请你根据下表中的比赛方案，向学生会写封邮件，指明需要改善的地方并提出改进建议与理由。英语演讲比赛主题