2021年新高考英语4月模拟题分项汇编 12 作文（二） 解析版

专题12作文（二）

一、（福建省福州市2021届高三一模）假定你是李华，上周你校举办了主题为“最受尊敬的劳动者'’的

艺术作品展。请你为校英文电台写一篇报道，词数80左右，内容包括：

1.参加人员；

2.展览内容（摄影，绘画，手工作品等）；

3.展览反响。

参考词汇：最受尊敬的劳动者：MostHonoredWorker

［答案］Ourschoolheldanartshowentitled"MostHonoredWorker*'lastweek,towhichourstudentsand

teachersgaveanactiveresponse.

Theworkssubmittedcameindifferentformsofphotos,paintingsandhandcrafts.Allofthemtoldvividstories

ofthebeautyofdiligenceandpersistenceindifferentwalksoflife.Thosepresentaltheshowallgaveabig

applausetotheworksondisplay,sayingthattheylearntalotfromtheseordinarybuthonorableworkers.

【分析】

本篇睡眠表达为应用文。要求考生给学校英文电台写一篇报道，报道上周学校主题为“最受尊敬的劳动

者''的艺术作品展览。

【解析】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时，少量一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.参加人员；

2.展览内容（摄影，绘画，手工作品等）；

3.展览反响。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

giveanactiveresponse;informsof;tellvividstories;walksoflife;ondisplay

第三步：连词成句

1.Ourschoolheldanartshowentitled“MostHonoredWorkerMlastweek,towhichourstudentsandteachers

gaveanactiveresponse.

2.Theworkssubmittedcameindifferentformsofphotos,paintingsandhandcrafts.

3.Allofthemtoldvividstoriesofthebeautyofdiligenceandpersistenceindifferentwalksoflife.

4.Thosepresentattheshowallgaveabigapplausetotheworksondisplay,sayingthattheylearntalotfrom

theseordinarybuthonorableworkers..

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）

L表文章结构顺序:Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second...Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast

2•表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly...but

（also）,including,

3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause（从句）,Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheone

hand...,Ontheotherhand...Some...,whileothers...,asfor,so...that...

4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】

［高分句型1］Ourschoolheldanartshowentitled4fcMostHonoredWorkef5lastweek,towhichourstudents

andteachersgaveanactiveresponse.这句话运用了非限制性定语从句。

［高分句型2JTheworkssubmittedcameindifferentformsofphotos,paintingsandhandcrafts.这句话运用

了过去分词作定语。

［高分句型3］Thosepresentattheshowallgaveabigapplausetotheworksondisplay,sayingthattheylearnt

alotfromtheseordinarybuthonorableworkers.这句话运用了现在分词作状语。

二、（福建省福州市2021届高三一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之

构成一篇完整的短文。

ShantiwantedthewoodendollinRamu'stoyshopandtoldherbestfriend,Jodiaboutit.Jodiwonderedifshe

couldaffordit.

Shantismiled.askedmymomifIcouldmakejasminegarlands（花环）andsellthematmyaunt'sstandin

themarket."Jodithoughtitwasagoodidea.

Earlythenextmorming,thegirlsmetatthejasminebushesoutsideShanti'shouse.Delicatewhiteflowers

surroundedthemwithfreshscent.Theypickedblossomswiththeirfingersandthensatunderamangotree,tying

uptheflowersintogarlands.Shanticouldalreadyseeherselfhuggingthatbeautifuldoll.

“Ifwesellenoughgarlands,wecaneachgetadoll.^^saidShanti.

Jodishookherhead.Herfamilywaslowonmoneythatweek.ShehadtousehermoneytopayforKiran's

medicine.KiranwasJodi'slittlebrother.ThenJodipickeduphergarlands/'Mymotherisexpectingme.Tilmeet

youatthemarket.^^

Shantispenttheafternoonsellinggarlandsalone.Byearlyevening,Shantihadsoldallherflowers.

Onthewayhome,ShantisawJodiheadingtothemarketwithhergarlands.Shewaslatebecauseshehadto

watchKiranwhilehermotherwasaway.

“Whydidn'tyoutakehimwithyou?”Shantisaid.

Jodishookherhead."He'stoosicktogoout.Hecoughsandcoughs.^^

ShantiknewJodiwouldn'tmakeenoughmoneyforthemedicinenow.Themarketwouldbeclosingsoon.

Shantilookedatthepursetightlyheldinherhand.Itwassupposedtobeforthebeautifuldollshe'dbeen

dreamingofforlong.Thenshelookedatherfiiend'stiredface.t4Here.Keepthisforthemedicine.^^

ThatnightShanticried,thinkingaboutthedoll.Whatifsomeoneboughtitbeforeshe'dsavedupenough

again?

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thenextweek,whileShantiandJodigatheredblossoms,Kirancame,too.

MomcomfortedShantiwithhugs,andthenhandedherafilledpackagewrappedinpaper.

【答案】Thenextweek,whileShantiandJodigatheredblossoms,Kirancame,too.Themedicinehadcured

hiscough,andhehelpedthemselloutallthegarlands.Whenparting,Jodisaid,"Shanti,wehaveprepared

somethingforyou."ButShantiwassoanxiousthatshedidn'tseemtohavetimetohearthemout.Shequicklyran

toRamu'sshop,onlytofindthedollhadbeensold.Broken-hearted,sheranbackhomeandtoldMomeverything,

tearsflowingdowninflood.

MomcomfortedShantiwithhugs,andthenhandedherafilledpackagewrappedinpaper.uJodidroppedthis

offforyou,dear.^^Shantiwassurprisedandunwrappedit.Itwasthedoll!Also,shefoundanoteonthebackofthe

doll:Forourdearestfriend,Shanti.Nothingcanexpressourdeepestgratitudeforyourpurestheart.Yoursincere

friendshipwillbethemostinvaluabletreasureforourfamily.-FromJodiandKiran.Shantismiled.Huggingthe

doll,shefeltsoblessedabouteverythingthathappened.

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Shanti很喜欢Ramu商店的一个玩具娃娃，决定和朋友Jodi一起编茉

莉花环赚钱，Jodi家庭经济拮据，她要把赚的钱给生病的弟弟Kiran买药。但是Jodi因为在家照顾生病的弟

弟错过了时间，无法卖掉她的花环，Shandi便把自己赚的钱给了Jodi。

【解析】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“第二个星期，当Shanti和Jodi在采花时，Kiran也来了。”可知，第一段可描写

Kiran病好了来帮助她们卖掉花环，Jodi打算送东西给Shandi,但是Shandi急着赶往商店买玩具娃娃，结果

却发现娃娃被卖掉了，Shandi很伤心。

②由第二段首句内容“妈妈给了Shanti一个拥抱来安慰她，然后递给她一个用纸包着的包裹。”可知，

第二段可描写Shandi收到了Jodi的礼物，打开后看到竟然是玩具娃娃，Shandi感到很幸福。

2.续写线索：

Jodi准备东西给Shandi------Shandi很焦虑，没有听完Jodi说的话----Shandi匆忙赶往商店----玩具娃

娃被卖掉了——Shandi感到很伤心——Shandi打开包裹——感到惊讶——Jodi表达感激

3.词汇激活

行为类

准备：prepare/makepreparationsfor

听完：hearsb.out/listentotheend

匆忙赶往：quicklyrunto/hurryto

卖掉：sellout/selloff

表达感激：expressone'sgratitude/showappreciation

打开：unwrap/openup

情绪类

焦虑的：anxious/restless

伤心的：broken-hearted/sad

惊讶的：surprised/amazed

【点睛】

[高分句型1]

ShequicklyrantoRamu'sshop,onlytofindthedollhadbeensold.（动词不定式tofind作结果状语）

[高分句型2]

sheranbackhomeandtoldMomeverything,tearsflowingdowninflood.（tearsflowingdowninflood.为独

立主格结构作状语）

三、（福建省福州一中2021届高三模拟）假设你是校英语报编辑，请你为这个月底将举办的“我最喜

欢的中国节日”英语演讲比赛写一个通知，内容包括：

1.比赛时间及地点

2.每班推荐1人参赛

3.裁判组成及奖励

注意：词数80左右；

Notice

【答案】Notice

TherewillbeanEnglishSpeechContesttobeheldintheschoolmeetingroomat3pm.on22th,March,

whichisnamed"MyFavoriteChineseFestival”.Everyoneiswelcometotakepartinit.

First,eachclasscanrecommendoneparticipate,sopleasemakeyourchoicecarefullyandwisely.Second,

participatesaresupposedtogiveashortdescriptionabouthis/herfavoriteChinesefestivalinabout10minutes.

Lastbutnotleastjudgesarevolunteeringteachersfromourschool.Accordingtothescoresgivenbythejudges,

eachofthetop10willberewardedwithaspecialgift—anewestOxfordEnglishDictionary.

Dearfriends,don'tmissthisopportunitytoshareyourfavoriteChinesefestivalwithus.

EditorialDepartmentofEnglishNewspaper

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一个通知，邀请同学们参加主题为“我最喜欢的中国节日”的英语演讲

比赛。

【解析】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

要求：

1.比赛时间及地点

2.每班推荐1人参赛

3.裁判组成及奖励

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

EnglishSpeechContest,takepartin,aresupposedto,Accordingto

第三步：连词成句

1.Everyoneiswelcometotakepartinit.

2.Second,participatesaresupposedtogiveashortdescriptionabouthis/herfavoriteChinesefestivalinabout

10minutes.

3.Accordingtothescoresgivenbythejudges,eachofthetop10willberewardedwithaspecialgift—a

newestOxfordEnglishDictionary.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First,Second

2.表并列补充关系：Lastbutnotleast

3.表因果关系：So

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】

。［高分句型IjTherewillbeanEnglishSpeechContesttobeheldintheschoolmeetingroomat3pm.on22th,

March,whichisnamed"MyFavoriteChineseFestival”.（therebe句型）

[高分句型2]First,eachclasscanrecommendoneparticipate,sopleasemakeyourchoicecarefullyand

wisely.（并列句）

[高分句型3]Accordingtothescoresgivenbythejudges,eachofthetop10willberewardedwithaspecial

gift一anewestOxfordEnglishDictionary.（被动语态的运用）

四、（福建省福州一中2021届高三模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使

之构成一篇完整的短文。

"It'snotlookingtoogood,darling.Ithinkyou'dbettergotoyourmother'splace.Andyou'dbettertakeRosie

withyou.”

Puttingdownthephone,Sarasighed.TomorrowwasherhusbandTony'sbirthday.Shehadplannedtocook

himanicemealandthensurprisehimwiththenewmountainbikeshe'dboughtfbrhim.Ifshewenttoher

mother'shouse,Tonywouldn'tgethispresentfordays.

However,hermother'shousewasthebestplacetoberightnow.Beingonhigherland,itwouldbesafefrom

thefloods.IthadbeenrainingheavilyfbralmosttwoweeksandtherivernearSaraandTony'shousewasrising

higherandhigherallthetime.Tonyandothersfromthevillagehadspentthelasttwodaysputtingsandbagsalong

thesideoftherivertostopitoverflowing.Nowtheyfearedthattheirhardworkhadbeenuselessandsoonthe

wholevalleywouldbeflooded.

Saraputtheleadonthedog,Rosie.Justasshewasreachingforthecarkeys,Saraheardasoundfromthe

backdoor-Waterwasflowinginunderneath!Turningaroundshesawdirtybrownwaterfountainingoutofthe

drainandfillingthesink.QuicklycallingtoRosie,sherantothefrontofthehouseandoutintothefrontgarden.

Thewaterwasalreadyuptoherknees.Rosiewasswimmingbesideher.Knowingthewaterwouldsoonbe

muchdeeper,Sararantothecarandopenedthedoor.ShepushedRosieup,andusingthecarseatasastepshe

climbedfirstontothefrontofthecarandthenontotheroof.Sarastareddownatthewaterwhichwasrushingpast

thecar.Itwasalreadyhalfwayupthedoors,andstillrising.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

Withthewaterstillpouring,Sarabegantofeelcold.

Paragraph2:

Suddenly,Rosiebegantobark,andsomenoisecamefromfaraway.

【答案］Withthewaterstillpouring,Sarabegantofeelcold.Sarahwasshivering,bewildered,andextremely

afraid.It'srainingsohardthatitseemsimpossibletodrivetomymother'shouse.Atthesametime,shewas

worriedaboutTony'ssafetyandthefloodoftheriver.Shewatchedhelplesslyasthewatercontinuedtoriseand

coverthedoor.

Suddenly,Rosiebegantobark,andsomenoisecamefromfaraway.Sarahdidn'tknowwhatwashappening.

Shestoodonthetopofthecarandlookedintothedistance,butshecouldseenothingbuthearthenoisecoming

closerandcloser.Shewonderediftheriverwasoverflowing,inwhichcaseTonyandhishardworkwouldbein

vain,andsoonthewholevalleywouldbeunderwater.Shestoodthere,prayingthattheriverwouldnotriseagain.

ShealsohopedthatTonywouldreturnsafelyandtakeherandRosieaway.

【分析】

本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述的是天不停地下雨，为了安全萨拉带着宠物狗罗西正要开车去妈妈家，

这时候水继续上涨，萨拉站在车顶，听到远处的噪音，担心河水泛滥，更期待托尼安全回来，把她救走。

【解析】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“雨还在倾泻，萨拉开始觉得冷了。”可知，第一段可描写萨拉看着水不断地上涨，

内心里的复杂心情。

②由第二段首句内容“突然，罗西开始吠叫，远处传来一些声音。”可知，第二段可描写萨拉观察噪音传

来的方向，期待托尼安全回来。

2.续写线索：下雨——冷——水上涨——爬到车顶——噪音——期待

3.词汇激活(一个词汇要写出相近的表达)

行为类

(1)下大雨：rainhard/rainheavily

(2)安全回来：returnsafely/comebackwithoutdanger

【点睛】

［高分句型1］.It'srainingsohardthatitseemsimpossibletodrivetomymother'shouse.(由so...that引导的

结果状语从句)

［高分句型2］,Shewonderediftheriverwasoverflowing,inwhichcaseTonyandhishardworkwouldbein

vain,andsoonthewholevalleywouldbeunderwater.（句中if宾语从句；inwhich引导非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型3].Shestoodthere,prayingthattheriverwouldnotriseagain.（现在分词作伴随状语）

五、（福建省龙岩市2021届高三质检）假定你是李华，明天英语课前将做主题为“MyFavoriteChina

Symbol，，的简短演讲，请从以下图片中选择一个主题写一份演讲稿，内容包括.你的选择及理由;2.该Symbol

的相关内容；3.你的愿望。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置上作答。

MyFavoriteChinaSymbol

Dearclassmates,

Thankyou!

【答案】Dearclassmates,

Manyfigures,customsandbuildingsareconsideredasChinasymbols.MyfavoriteisChineseCalligraphy,a

writtenformofChinesecharacters,mainlybecauseitcanhelpmebeautifymywrittenworkandinspiremy

confidenceinwriting.ChineseCalligraphyisamostabstractartform.Itisnotonlyjustameansofcommunication

butalsoameansofdisplayingthedynamicforcesofthepaper,andtheflexibilityofthebrush.Artistsarefreeto

producevariousstylesandforms,showingtheabstractbeautyofline.

“Thewaycharactersarewrittenisaportraitofthepersonwhowritesthem^^isquiteimpressive.Ihopeallof

youwillcometoloveit.

Thankyou!

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生从所给图片中选择一个主题写一份演讲稿，主题为“MyFavorite

ChinaSymbol”。

【解析】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.你的选择及理由；

2.该Symbol的相关内容；

3.你的愿望。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

beconsideredas;ChineseCalligraphy;abstract;Chinesecharacters;beautify;inspire;confidence;

communication;notonly...butalso...;dynamic;flexibility;produce;portrait;impressive;allof

第三步：连词成句

1.Manyfigures,customsandbuildingsareconsideredasChinasymbols.

2.ChineseCalligraphyisamostabstractartform.

3.MyfavoriteisChineseCalligraphy,awrittenformofChinesecharacters,mainlybecauseitcanhelpme

beautifymywrittenworkandinspiremyconfidenceinwriting.

4.1tisnotonlyjustameansofcommunicationbutalsoameansofdisplayingthedynamicforcesofthepaper,

andtheflexibilityofthebrush.

5.Artistsarefreetoproducevariousstylesandforms,showingtheabstractbeautyofline.

6.“Thewaycharactersarewrittenisaportraitofthepersonwhowritesthem^^isquiteimpressive.

7.1hopeallofyouwillcometoloveit.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

L表文章结构顺序:Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second,Andthen（供参考）

2.表并列补充关系：notonly...butalso...

3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause（从句）（供参考）

4.表因果关系：Because

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】

[高分句型1]MyfavoriteisChineseCalligraphy,awrittenformofChinesecharacters,mainlybecauseitcan

helpmebeautifymywrittenworkandinspiremyconfidenceinwriting.（运用了because弓|导原因状语从句）

[高分句型2]Artistsarefreetoproducevariousstylesandforms,showingtheabstractbeautyofline.（运用了

现在分词作状语）

六、（福建省龙岩市2021届高三质检）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之

构成一篇完整的短文。

Manyofushaveformedonunrealisticpictureoflifeinasmallvillage.WesometimesimagineasmallMilage

lobeasortofparadisewherethesunalwaysshines.Lifethereissimpleandgood.Ripefruitfallsfromthetrees

andyouneverhavetohurryyourselfYouaregreetedwithbeamingneighborsandchantingbirdsearlyinthe

morning.Thenlatemdusk,youcomebackhomehappyandgaytoseeyourfamilysaleandsoundathomeand

everythinginplace.Theothersideofthepictureisquiteopposite.Therearcmanyquarrelsandtheftsduetothe

rootedpoverty.

MaryandherhusbandDimitrilivedinthetinyvillageofPerachorainsouthernGreece.Theyfirstmetina

localdancingcompetitionwherethebestgirldancerturnedouttobeMaryTheyfellinloveandgotmaiTiedsoon.

Theywerefriendlytotheneighborsandofferedhelptothoseinneed.DimitriworkedinthefieldswhileMarydid

allthelaundryinthedaytime.Theirlifewassimplebuthappy.OneofMary'svaluablepossesseswasalittlewhite

lambwhichherhusbandhadgivenher.Shekeptittiedtoatreeinafieldduringthedayandwenttofetchitevery

evening,Oneevening,however,thelambwasmissing.Theropehadbeencut,soitwasobviousthattheIambhad

beenstolen.

WhenDimitricameinfromthefields,hiswifetoldhimwhathadhappened.Shenarrateditwithtearsrolling

downhercheeks.Dimitricomfortedher,promisinghertotakethelambback.Hesetouttofindthethiefdespite

thesignofaheavyrain.Heknewitwouldnotprovedifficultinsuchasmallvillage.Aftertellingseveralofhis

friendsaboutthetheft,Dimitrifoundoutthathisneighbor,Aleko,hadsuddenlyacquiredanewlambinhis

backyard.44itmustbeAlekowhohasstolenthelamb”,hesaidtohimself.

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DimitriimmediatelyrantoAleko'shouse.

Dimitrireallyfeltashamedofhavingactedsoblindly.

【答案】DimitriimmediatelyrantoAleko'shouse.Heenteredthehouse,callingoutangrily,"Aleko,Whydid

youstealmywife'slamb?”HekeptaccusingAlekoofstealingthelambandthreatenedtocallthepoliceifhe

refusedtoreturnit.Alekowascalmanddeniedtakingit.HestoppedDimitriandledhimintohisbackyard.Itwas

truethathehadjustboughtalamb,buthislambwasblack.Yes,itwasablacklambratherthanawhiteone.

Dimitrirealizedhehadmadeamistake.

Dimitrireallyfeltashamedofhavingactedsoblindly.HeapproachedAlekoandbeggedhimtoforgivehis

rudebehavior.Theyweretalkingwhenitbegantorain.AlekoaskedDimitritostayuntiltherainstopped.They

continuedtotalkasifnothinghadhappened.Whenhewentoutsidehalfanhourlater,Dimitriopenedhiseyeswide

inastonishment.Thelittleblacklambwasalmostwhite.Itswoolwhichhadbeendyedblackhadbeenwashed

cleanbytherain.ThingscametolightatGod'swillpower,afterall.

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Mary和丈夫Dimilri住在一个小村庄里，Mary最珍贵的财产之一就是

丈夫送给她的一只白色小羊羔。然而，有一天晚上，羔羊失踪了。绳子是被人割断的，很明显羊羔是被人

偷走了。Mary非常伤心，于是Dimitri决定去寻找，结果发现邻居的后院多了一只羊，于是怀疑是邻居偷走

了。一开始邻居说羊是黑色的，不是Dimitri的羊，Dimilri还为此道歉，结果突然下起了南，羊身上染的色

被雨水冲掉了。

【解析】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“Dimitri立刻跑到Aleko家。”可知，第一段可描写Dimitri是如何指责邻居偷了自

己的羊的，以及邻居对此的解释。

②由第二段首句内容“Dimitri真为自己的盲目行为感到羞愧。”可知，第二段可描写Dimitri最终是如何

发现这只羊就是邻居偷的。

2.续写线索：Dimitri跑到邻居家——邻居否认偷羊——羊是黑色的，不是白色的——Dimitri为自己的

行为道歉——Dimitri发现真相

3.词汇激活

行为类

进入：enter/stepinto

让某人做某事：asksb.todosth./letsb.dosth.

拒绝：refuse/decline

情绪类

粗鲁：rude/impolite

惊讶：inastonishment/withsurprise

【点睛】

[高分句型1]HekeptaccusingAlekoofstealingthelambandthreatenedtocallthepoliceifherefusedto

returnit.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）

[高分句型2]Itswoolwhichhadbeendyedblackhadbeenwashedcleanbytherain.（运用了which弓|导定语

从句）

七、（福建省厦门市2021届高三质检）假定你是李华，昨天下午你班举办了一场主题为“报纸是否会

消失”的英语辩论赛。请你为校英语广播站写一篇报道，内容包括：

1.参赛人员；

2.比赛情况；

3.活动反响。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

AnEnglishDebateContest

【答案］YesterdaytherewasanEnglishdebatecontestheldinourclasswiththethemeofuWillNewspaper

DisappearOneDayintheFuture".Dividedintotwogroups,wemadeaheateddiscussion.

GroupOnewasinfavoroftheviewthatnewspaperwoulddisappear.Theythoughtthatwiththedevelopmentof

computertechnology,ourlifewaschangingrapidly.TheInternetcouldspreadtheinformationmorequicklyand

moreeasily.GroupTwoheldtheoppositeview.Theyarguedthenewspaperseemedtobemuchmoreprecise.

Afterthatdebate,werealizedeverycionhadtwosides.Nomatterwhathappened,weshouldlearntothink

criticallyandtrytofindawaythatsuitsusbetter.

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇报道，介绍昨天下午班级举办的一场主题为“报纸是否会消

失''的英语辩论赛。

【解析】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.参赛人员；2.比赛情况；3.活动反响。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

withthethemeof;madeaheateddiscussion;infavorof;Withthedevelopmentofcomputertechnology;

thinkcritically

第三步：连词成句

1.YesterdaytherewasanEnglishdebatecontestheldinourclasswiththethemeof"WillNewspaper

DisappearOneDayintheFuture".

2.Dividedintotwogroups,wemadeaheateddiscussion.

3.GroupOnewasinfavoroftheviewthatnewspaperwoulddisappear.

4.Withthedevelopmentofcomputertechnology,ourlifewaschangingrapidly.

5.TheInternetcouldspreadtheinformationmorequicklyandmoreeasily.

6.Theyarguedthenewspaperseemedtobemuchmoreprecise.

7.Afterthatdebate,werealizedeverycionhadtwosides.

8.Nomatterwhathappened,weshouldlearntothinkcriticallyandtrytofindawaythatsuitsusbetter.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）

1.表文章结构顺序:Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second...Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast

2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore.Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly...but

（also）,including,

3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause（从句）,Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheone

hand...,Ontheotherhand...Some...,whileothers...,asfor,so...that...

4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

【点睛】

[高分句型l]Ilcankeepusupdated,whichisbetterthannewspaper,（which引导的非限定性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Nomatterwhathappened,weshouldlearntothinkcriticallyandtrytofindawaythatsuitsus

better.（Nomatterwhat引导的让步状语从句）

八、（福建省厦门市2021届高三质检）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之

构成一篇完整的短文。

Oneday,Ifoundawalletonthestreet.Thewalletcontainedonlythreedollarsandaveryoldletter.The

envelopewaswornandtheonlythingonitwasthereturnaddress.Istartedtoopentheletter,hopingtofindsome

information.ThenIsawthedate-1990,andthesignature-Beatrice.Theletterwaswrittenseveraldecadesago.

ThenImadeeveryeffortandfoundoutthatBeatricewasnowworkinginahospital.Ishowedhertheletter.

Thesecondshesawtheletter,shetookadeepbreathandsaid,uYoungman,thisletterwasthelastcontactIever

hadwithHenry.Heismyonlybrother.Ilovedhimverymuch.Iwasonly16atthetimeandmybrotheristwo

yearsyoungerthanme.Ifyoucanfindhim,tellhimFmstilllookingforhim,,,shesaidandtearsbegantowellup

inhereyes."Motheriswaitingfbrhimtocomebackhome.”

WhenIwalkedoutofthebuildingwiththewalletinmyhand,theguardofthebuildingrecognizedthewallet,

andwithhishelp,Ifinallyfounditsowner,Henry.IhandedthewallettoHenryandhesaid,“Yes,that'smine!It

musthavedroppedoutofmypocketthisafternoon.”

“Ireadtheletterinthehopeoffindingoutwhoownedthewallet.^^Isaid.Thesmileonhisfacesuddenly

disappeared.Heasked,“Youreadthatletter?^^"NotonlydidIreadit,butalsoBeatriceread.^^Ireplied.He

suddenlybecameexcited.^Beatrice?Youknowwheresheis?Howisshe?Pleasetellme,^^hebegged."She'sfine.

Shehasbeenlookingfbryou."Isaidsoftly.

Hegrabbedmyhandandsaid,“Sir,youknowsheismyonlysisterinthisworld.I'vealwaysmissedher.”

HenryandItooktheelevator（电梯）downtoBeatrice'sroom.Iwalkedovertoher."Beatrice,“Isaidsoftly,

pointingtoHenry,whowaswaitingwithmeinthedoorway."Doyouknowtheman?”

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Beatriceadjustedherglasses,lookedforamoment,butdidn'tsaya

word.__________________________________________________________________________________________

AboutthreeweekslaterIgotacallatmyofficefrom

Beatrice.

【答案】Paragraph1：

Beatriceadjustedherglasses,lookedforamoment,butdidn'tsayaword.Henrysaidsoftly,almostina

whisper,"Beatrice,it'sHenry.Doyourememberme?”Shesaidexcitedly,t4Henry!1don'tbelieveit!Henry!It's

you!MyHenry!”Hewalkedslowlytowardsherandtheyhugged.ThenurseandIleftwithtearsfallingdownour

faces.

Paragraph2：

AboutthreeweekslaterIgotacallatmyofficefromBeatrice."CanyoubreakawayonSundaytoattenda

party?HenryandBeatricearegoingtohaveapartyinthehome!”Itwasabeautifulpartywithallthepeople

dresseduptojoininthecelebration.Ifyoueverwantedtoseeawomanandamanactingliketwoteenagers,you

hadtoseethiseldersisterandyoungerbrother.Itwasaperfectendingforafamilyaffectionthathadlastednearly

severaldecades.

【分析】

本文以信封为线索展开，讲述了作者在街上发现了一个钱包，在里面发现一封破旧的信，通过努力找

到信主人的姐姐，通过保安大叔找到了钱包主人，最后，姐弟重逢的故事。

【解析】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“比阿特丽斯扶了扶眼镜，看了一会儿，但没有说一句话。“可知，第一段可描写姐

弟两人重逢的温馨场景。

②由第二段首句内容“大约三周后，我在办公室接到比阿特丽斯的电话。”可知，第二段可描写作者对重

逢事件的感慨。

2.续写线索：发现信封——找到信封主人姐姐——找到主人——姐弟重逢——感谢——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

接电话：getacallat/putsbonto/pickupthetelephone/answerthephone

抽出时间：breakawayon/taketimeofl/spareone'stime

情绪类

兴奋：didexcitedly/thrilled

泪流满面：tearsbathe/streamdown/one'scheeks

【点睛】

［高分句型1］：ThenurseandIleftwithtearsfallingdownourfaces.这句话运用了wilh的复合结构。

［高分句型2］：Itwasaperfectendingforafamilyaffectionthathadlastednearlyseveraldecades这句话运用

了that引导的定语从句。

九、（广东省佛山市2021届高三质检）假定你是李华，上周六你的英国好友Eric教你如何创建个人网

站，你从中学到很多知识。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示感谢;

2.简述Eric给予你的帮助：

3.希望向Eric学习更多相关知识。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearEric,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearEric,

I'mwritingtoexpressmysincere