读后续写个人成长类+A+lesson+from+my+sister+讲义 高三英语一轮复习

阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ALessonfromMySisterMyparentsworkedveryhardatensuringthateverythingseemedpleasantformeandImostlyignoredthefactthatmyeldersisterwasdifferent.Thechildpsychologisthadtermeditas"AspergerSyndrome"

(阿斯伯格综合症，一种自闭障碍).Thisdiagnosisturnedmyparentsworldupsidedown—buttheyneverletitaffectme.我的父母非常努力地确保一切对我来说都是愉快的，而我大多忽略了姐姐与众不同的事实。儿童心理学家称之为“阿斯伯格综合症”(阿斯伯格综合症，一种自闭障碍).这个诊断让我父母的世界天翻地覆——但他们从未让它影响到我。ItwasonlyattheageoftenthatIstartedtonoticethedifferences,andbecomeconsciousofmysociallifeandself-imagethatIhadcarefullycultivated.Mysisterwassociallyawkward.Shecouldnotlookatpeopleintheeye.Shewouldmumble(嘟哝)toherselfandrepeatthewordsshehadjustsaidunderherbreath.She,however,wasacademicallycapable,andhenceweattendedthesameprimaryschool.Despitethis,Inever,everacknowledgedinpublicthatshewasmysister.Therewasoneincident,however,justtwoyearsago,thatremainsimprintedinmyconsciousness.ItwastheincidentthatchangedhowIviewedmysister.Itwastheincidentthatchangedme.直到十岁时，我才开始注意到这些差异，并意识到我精心培养的社交生活和自我形象。我姐姐在社交上很尴尬。她不能直视别人的眼睛。她会喃喃自语(嘟哝)然后低声重复她刚才说的话。然而，她在学业上很有能力，因此我们上的是同一所小学。尽管如此，我从未在公开场合承认她是我的姐姐。然而，就在两年前，有一件事仍然留在我的意识中。这件事改变了我对妹妹的看法。这件事改变了我。Beinginprimarysix,abouttograduate,mysisterandherclassmateshadtoputupaperformance,whetherinagroup,orindividually.Duetoherinabilitytointegrate(融入),mysisterwastheonlyoneleftwithoutagroup.Theschoolhadmadeitaruleforeveryonetoputupanitem,somysisterhadtoperformindividually."I'llsing,"

mysistertoldmyparents,confidently.Hearingthat,Iwastakenabackandcompletelyshocked.Iknewshewouldembarrassme,onewayoranother."No!"

Iprotested.MyparentsshotmealookandthatwaswhenIknewmysisterwasgoingtoperform,nomatterwhat.Silently,IprayedthatsomethingwouldhappenandIwouldnothavetowatchmysistershameherself.在小学六年级即将毕业的时候，我姐姐和她的同学们不得不表演，无论是集体表演还是个人表演。由于她无法融入(融入),我姐姐是唯一一个没有团队的人。学校规定每个人都要挂一件物品，所以我姐姐必须单独表演。“我会唱歌的，”我姐姐自信地对父母说。听到这些，我大吃一惊。我知道她会以某种方式让我难堪。“不！”我抗议道。我父母看了我一眼，就在那时我知道我姐姐无论如何都要表演。我默默地祈祷着会有什么事情发生，我不必看着我姐姐自惭形秽。Thatdaycame.Isatinthehall,waitingfortheperformancestostart.Thelightsdimmed(变昏暗)aminuteortwolaterandthecurtainspartedtorevealtheonlysolo—mysister.Sheblinked(眨眼)acoupleoftimes,asifthelightsshiningonherwerehurtinghereyes.那一天来了。我坐在大厅里，等着演出开始。灯光变暗了(变昏暗)一两分钟后，窗帘拉开，露出唯一的独奏者——我姐姐。她眨眼(眨眼)有好几次，好像照在她身上的灯光在伤害她的眼睛。注意：1.续写词数应为150词左右;

2.段落开头已给出。Paragraph1:

Ittookaboutawholeminuteforhertostammer(口吃,结巴地说)hernameandclass.Paragraph2:

HowdidInotknowthatmysistercouldsingsosweetly?

二、下水思路1.确定主题：“我”一直以来在公开场合不承认有一个患自闭综合症的妹妹。两年前的一个小插曲改变了我对妹妹的看法，也改变了我自己。原文第二段(Therewasoneincident,however,justtwoyearsago,thatremainsimprintedinmyconsciousness.ItwastheincidentthatchangedhowIviewedmysister.Itwastheincidentthatchangedme.)点明了整个故事的主题,所以续写部分将重心放我对妹妹的情感变化上：anxiously--embarrassment--surprise--prideandregret--excited--proud2.时空变化：黄色标出部分为原文关键信息。续写两段时空变化不大，根据最后一段第一句(Thatdaycame.

I

satinthehall,waitingforthe

performancestostart.)可知，故事发生在校大厅，时间是妹妹独唱演出期间。根据续写第二段段首提示语(HowdidInotknowthatmysistercouldsingsosweetly?),在时间上可以理解为演出期间或者是演出以后的心理活动。3.续写难点：故事情节简单，须感同身受，注重细节描写与心理活动，否则很难写出有画面感的细节内容。因此，平时要多积累贴近学生生活，情景相类似的语料。三、下水续写1

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Ittookaboutawholeminuteforhertostammerhernameandclass.

Iwatchedanxiouslyasshestoodthere,hervoicequiveringwithnervousness.Herhandstrembledslightly,andherfaceflushedred.Seeingthis,Icouldfeelmycheeksburningwithembarrassment,andforaninstant,timeseemedtostandstill.HowIwishedthegroundwouldswallowmeup!Afterwhatseemedlikeages,mysisterstartedtosing,andasuddensilencefell.Tomygreatsurprise,hervoicefilledthehallwithasweetmelody,asifitcamefromthesingingofanangel.TearsburredmyeyesasIlistened,overwhelmedbyamixofprideandregret.Paragraph2:

HowdidInotknowthatmysistercouldsingsosweetly?

Ijustsatthereinshock,notbelievingmyearsandeyes.NeverinmywildestdreamcouldIhaveimaginedthatmysisterhadatalentformusic.Asagreatroarofapplausebrokeoutattheendofherperformance,everyonestoodup,clappingandcheering.Itwastheunexpectedapplauseandcheersthatwokemeupfrommythoughts.Theinstantmysisterleftthestage,Iranupandthrewmyarmsaroundher,tooexcitedtoutteraword.Itseemedthatalleyeswereonusinthehall.Incredibly,insteadoffeelingembarrassed,Iwasmorethanalittleproudtohavesuchasister.下水续写1Paragraph1:

Ittookaboutawholeminuteforhertostammerhernameandclass.Iwatchedanxiouslyasshestoodthere,hervoicetremblingwithnervousness.Herhandstrembledslightly,andherfaceturnedred.Seeingthis,Icouldfeelmycheeksburningwithembarrassment,andforaninstant,timeseemedtobeatastandstill.HowIwishthegroundcouldswallowmeup!Itseemsthatafteralongtime,mysisterstartedsingingandsuddenlytherewasasilence.Tomysurprise,hervoicefilledthehallwithsweetmelodies,asiffromthesingingofangels.AsIlistened,tearswelledup,filledwithprideandregret.Paragraph2:

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