读后续写人际关系类+a+lead+rope+讲义 高三英语复习写作专项

读后续写人际关系类---aleadropeDadandMadisonwerewalkingtroughthepartystore,gatheringdecorationsforMadison'supcomingbirthdayparty.“ButIdon'twanttoinviteLucyGilbert!Idon'tlikeher!"“Madison,youarebeingunreasonable.Ifeverygirlinyourclassisinvitedtopartybutyou,you'llfeelleftout.ItwouldbeabigmistaketonotinviteLucy1otheparty.""“Shenevereventalkstome!"Dudsighedandmoveddowntheaisle."Lucyisanewgirlinclass.Shejustmovedherealittleoveramonthago.Thinkabouthowthatmustfeel.Shedoesn'tknowonesinglepersonintheschool.Sheleftallofheroldfriendsbehindandnowshehastotrytomakenewfriends.Yourpartywillbeagreatchanceforhertogettoknoweveryone,"“No,itwon'tShewillprobablysitinthecornerandnottalktoanyone.Everydayatlunchshesitsallbyherself.Shewantstoeatalone!"Madisonshruggedandrolledhereyes.“Madison,I'mdonediscussingthis.Youwillinviteeverygirlinyourclass.IncludingLucyGilbert!”OnSaturdaymorning,thefamilyblewupballoonsanddecoratedthehousecheerfully.Madisonwasdressedbeautifullyfortheday,wearinghernewbluedress.Itwasnottypicalofhertodressherselflikethis.SheusuallyworesportsclothesbecauseshelovedtobeoutsideridingherhorseStarwithaleadrope(缰绳).Madisongreetedherfriendsatthedoorstep,picturingvariouspresentsherfriendswouldbringher.Inthemeanwhile,shewaswonderingwhetherLucywouldruinthepartyifshecame.Anyhow,allthegirlssheinvitedcamefinally,includingLucy.ThegirlshadafantastictimebysinginganddancingwhileLucysatinthecornersilentlyalone.Later,allthegirlsgatheredaroundthetableasMadisonopenedherpresents.Openingthemonebyone,Madisonthankedherfriends,withabrightsmileonherface.Paragraph1:Lucy’spresentwastheverylasttobeopened.______________________________Paragraph2:Deeplymovedbywhatshesaid,Madisonheldtheleadropetightlyinherhands.________文本分析:MainideaofthestoryMadisondidnotwanttoinviteLucyGilbert,a/an________girlinherclass,toher__________.Butherfather________hertodothatbecauseherpartywillbea________forLucytogettoknoweveryone,soshehadtoinviteher.Onthatday,thegirlshadfun_______Lucysatinthecorner________.sheopenedthe________herfriendsgaveher,includingLucy’s.Themeofthestory有关朋友之间的真心,友谊,接纳等思路分析:第一段:Lucy的礼物是最后一个要被打开的.Madison打开Lucy的礼物时的心理活动和动作----Lucy的礼物是什么样子的----Madison(可以包括女孩们)看到礼物后的反应----Lucy说的话(可能是解释为什么选择这件礼物)第二段:被她的话深深地打动了,Madison把那根缰绳紧紧地拿在手里.Madison此时的感受(内疚,惭愧,后悔,感动等),动作神态和语言----Lucy的回应----Lucy成为Madison的新朋友,进而融入女孩们的群体OnepossibleversionLucy’spresentwastheverylasttobeopened.Madisonpickedupthepresentreluctantly,wonderinghowembarrassingitwouldbeifitwasnotingoodtaste(得体,适度).Sheslowlyrippedopen(撕开)thegift-wrappaper,onlytofindthatinsidewasabeautifulhand-madeleadrope.Shocked,MadisonlookedupatLucy,whoclearedherthroatandspokeinalowvoice.“It’saleadropeforyourhorseStar.Imadeitmyself.”Madisonpulleditoutoftheboxandplaceditonherlap(大腿),amazedatitsbeauty.Lucyadded,“Iheardyoutalkingaboutyourhorseatschool.That’swhenIgottheideatomakeyoualeadrope.” Deeplymovedbywhatshesaid,Madisonheldtheleadropetightlyinherhands.Itwas,byfar,herveryfavoritebirthdaypresentoftheday.ShesuddenlyfeltsobadbecauseshehadbeensomeantoLucy.Withmixedfeelingsofregretandgratitude,sheblinkedhardtofightthetearsinhereyes.“Thankssomuch.Iloveit!Wouldyouliketojoinusandbeourfriends?”ThemomentLucynoddedcheerfully,Madisonputherarmsaroundhershoulders.Withapplauseandlaughterechoingthroughthehouse,Lucyjoinedtheothergirlstoenjoytheparty,notjustonthatday.下水文1:Lucy'spresentwastheverylasttobeopened.

Frowningherforeheadintoaknot,MadisonwonderedwhatLucyhadinstoreforher.Assheremovedthelidfromthegiftbox,adelicatelydecoratedleadropegreetedhereyes,attheendofwhichacolorfultassel(流苏,缨,穗)wasattached.Thisamazinglyshininggiftinvited(引发,招致)aroundof“wows”and“ohs”fromMadison'sfriends,whoseeyesallfelluponLucy.“IoverheardyourodeyourhorseStar,soIbetthishand-maderopemightbeofuse.Ifthereisanythingyoudon'tlike,Icanmodify(修改)basedonyourpersonalpreference.”Deeplymovedbywhatshesaid,Madisonheldtheleadropetightlyinherhands.

“Thankyou,Lucy!ThisisthebestgiftI'veeverreceived.”Madisonchokedout.Meanwhile,guilt,shameandself-blamerosewithinherheartforherpreviouscoldattitudetowardssuchanangelic(善良的,天使般的)soulasLucy.Throwingherarmsaroundthenewcomer,Madisongentlyinvited,“Willyouplaywithusandnolongersitaloneinaquietcorner?”Noddingherheadfirmly,Lucysteppedforwardandjoinedthegirlsinsinginganddancing.Sometimes,thefloweroffriendshipcanbud(发芽),matureandblossomaslongaswegiveeachotherachance.下水文2:Lucy’spresentwastheverylasttobeopened.

Madison

hadneverexpected

Lucy

wouldcometothebirthday

party,letalonebringthe

present.However,curiositydroveMadisontoopenit,which,beyondanyone’sthoughts,wasneitheraflowernorafashionableaccessory(配饰).Insidetheboxwasanelegant

leadrope.“That’sspeciallymadeforyou,who

haveinvited

metoattendyourbirthdayparty,Madison.”Lucysaid,“Hearingyouo