写作图表类作文写作方法

图表类作文写作方法基础写作之二Basicwriting现在越来越多的人们开始意识到受到好的教育是很重要的.Nowmoreandmorepeople(anincreasingnumberofpeople)arebeginningtorealizethatit’simportanttobewelleducated.Withtherapidgrowthofscienceandtechnology,computerhasbecomeincreasinglyimportantinourdailylife.Oneofthehottesttopicsmanypeopletalkaboutnowisthe2008OlympicGamestobeheldinBeijing.2)随着科学技术的快速发展,电脑在我们日常生活中已经变得越来越重要了.3)现在人们热烈讨论的话题之一是将在北京举行的2008年奥运.4)至于说到我，我赞成前一种观点。所以，我的结论是，只要我们坚持正确的东西，改正错误的东西，我们就一定能成功。

AsfarasI’mconcerned,I’minfavouroftheformerview.Therefore,myconclusionisthatwearecertaintosucceedaslongaswesticktowhatisrightandcorrectwhatiswrong.5)毫无疑问我们应当马上关注人口的快速增长问题.

Thereisnodoubtthatimmediateattentionmustbepaidtotheproblemoftherapidincreaseinthepopulation4)AsfarasI’mconcerned,….Therefore,myconclusionisthat…5)Thereisnodoubtthatimmediateattentionmustbepaidtotheproblemof…第一、开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题(1句)第二、分析描写数据间的主要差异及趋势(3句)第三、归纳总结或发表评论(1句)图表作文的一般结构：前提:结合写作内容.第一段：总体描述图表，指明时间段，指出突出变化或不同常用句型或短语：Asisclearlyshowninthechar/table/graph,___________Accordingtothefiguresgiveninthetable/chart/graph,____________Itcanbeseenfromthetable/chart/graph,_____________________.Thefiguresinthetable/chartreflectthat________________.especially,________________（指出突出变化）第二段：（分析原因）Thereareseveralfactorsleadingtothischange/difference……..Thereareseveralreasonsfor_____________.(引出原因)Tobeginwith,_______(原因一)Inaddition,______________（原因二)Forexample,_________（举例说明）Lastbutnottheleast,__________（原因三）Tosumup——————————————（简要总结）第三段：自己的观点Asforme,____________Ontheonehand,________ontheother,____Inbrief，_____________________.2007年广东高考基础写作真题回放偶像(idol)女生男生伟人18%18%父母25%11%影视明星50%14%体育明星6%48%没有偶像1%9%

上周,我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题,在2600名学生的中进行了一次调查(survey).以下是调查数据:审题列要点依要点,拟草纲,组织成句.构篇章,扩句成文.检查润色书写基础写作解题步骤：确定类型2.确定体裁

3.确定主体时态

4.确定主体人称一、审题:(四确定)第三人称一般现在时说明文图表型我的偶像是…,因为….(选择其中的一种的代表)二列要点调查时间,调查问题以及调查对象2.男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异;3.“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异;4.男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同;5.你的偶像及理由上周,“谁是你的偶像”,2600名学生48%男生以体育明星为偶像,50%女生以影视明星为偶像“父母”在男生中排第4,在女生中排第2.18%男生以伟人为偶像,18%女生以伟人为偶像.三依要点,拟草纲,组织成句.1.上周,我们在2600名学生中做了个关于“谁是你的偶像”的调查.2.50%女生以影视明星为偶像,而48%男生以体育明星为偶像.3.“父母”在女生偶像中排列第二,而在男生偶像中却排列倒数第二.4.男生在选择以伟人为偶像的百分比跟女生选择的百分比一样.5.我的偶像是…,因为….1.上周,我们在2600名学生中做了个关于“谁是你的偶像”的调查.2.50%女生以影视明星为偶像,而48%男生以体育明星为偶像.3.“父母”在女生偶像列表中排列第二,而在男生偶像列表中却排列倒数第二.4.男生在选择以伟人为偶像的百分比跟女生选择的百分比的一样.5.我的偶像是…,因为…..Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentson“Whoisyouridol”.50%ofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols,but48%oftheboyschoosesportsstars.“Parents”isthesecondinthegirl’slist,butthesecondfromthebottomintheboys’list.Thepercentageoftheboyswhochoose“greatfigures”isthesameasthepercentageofthegirls.Myidolis…,because….四构篇章,扩句成文.

Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentson“Whoisyouridol”.50%ofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols,but48%oftheboyschoosesportsstars.“Parents”isthesecondinthegirl’slist,butthesecondfromthebottomintheboys’list.Thepercentageoftheboyswhochoose“greatfigures”isthesameasthepercentageofthegirls.Myidolis…,because….注意:文章的结构,句子的连贯性.

Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentson“Whoisyouridol”.50%ofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols,but48%oftheboyschoosesportsstars.“Parents”isthesecondinthegirl’slist,butthesecondfromthebottomintheboys’list.

Thepercentageoftheboyswhochoose“greatfigures”isthesameasthepercentageofthegirls.

Myidolis…,because….

指文章语意的通顺和语言形式的紧密衔接并符合一定的逻辑关系。要使文章前后衔接紧密，可采用以下方法：

1.恰当使用关联词.2.巧妙使用意思有联系的词或语句

3.适当使用过渡性语句

文章的连贯性1.恰当使用关联词,

如:but,when，so，if，because，sothat等。1)Peoplehavefoundmobilephonesveryconvenientbecausetheycangetintouchwitheachotherwheneverandwherevertheylike.2)Thisvillageusedtobeverysmallandpoor

butithaschangedalotsince1978.3)I’dliketoknow__________weareallowedtocancelourticketsbooking___________wecannotmakethetourforourpersonalreason.if/whetherif2.巧妙使用意思有联系的词或语句如:First,Second,Third,Soon,mostexcitingly,What’smore,what’sworse,Asaresult等。Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.What’smore,theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thebirdsdodowerekilledforfoodonalargenumber.______________,theydiedoutatlast.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth.________________,itmaymakeusfat.AsaresultWhat’sworse3.适当使用过渡性语句

如:Thereasonsareasfollows.Everycoinhastwosides.AllroadsleadtoRome.Astheresult/surveyshows.Wecandrawanconclusion.等Nowinthecountryareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool.________________________.First，mostfamiliesaretoopoortosendtheirchildrentoschool.Second,someparentsthinkthereisnoneedfortheirdaughters

togotoschool.Third,…ThereasonsareasfollowsTelevisionisnotonlyaconvenientsourceofentertainment,butalsoacomparativelycheapone.But_______________________,televisionalsohasdisadvantages,suchasitseffectsonyoungpeople.everycoinhastwosides3.适当使用过渡性语句

如:Thereasonsareasfollows.Everycoinhastwosides.AllroadsleatoRome.Astheresult/surveyshows.Wecandrawanconclusion.等四构篇章,扩句成文.

Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentson“Whoisyouridol”.__________________50%ofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols,but48%oftheboyschoosesportsstars._____________“Parents”isthesecondinthegirl’slist,butthesecondfromthebottomintheboys’list._____________Thepercentageoftheboyswhochoose“greatfigures”isthesameasthepercentageofthegirls.________________Myidolis…,because….TheresultshowsthatFurthermore,However,Asformyself,五检查润色Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentson“Whoisyouridol”._________________________50%ofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols,but48%oftheboyschoosesportsstars._____________“parents”isthesecondinthegirl’slist,butthesecondfromthebottomintheboys’list._____________thepercentageoftheboyswhochoose“greatfigures”isthesameasthepercentageofthegirls.________________myidolis…,because….prefer/favor…TheresultshowsthatWhat’smore,whileHowever,Asformyself,that①②③④⑤Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentson“Whoisyouridol”.Theresultshowsthat50%ofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols,while48%oftheboysfavorsportsstars.What’smore,“parents”isthesecondinthegirl’slist,butthesecondfromthebottomintheboys’list.However,

thepercentageoftheboyswhochoose“greatfigures”isthesameasthatofthegirls.Asformyself,

myidolis…,because….六书写Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentson“Whoisyouridol”.Thesurveyshowsthat50%ofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols,while48%oftheboysfavorsportsstars.Asthedatashows,“parents”ranksthesecondforthegirls,butthefourthforthebys.However,

thepercentageoftheboyschoosing“greatfigures”isthesameasthatofthegirls.Asformyself,

MyidolisThomasEdison,becausehisinventionshasgreatlychangedourlife.Possibleversion:基础写作星期一,我们开了个班会讨论“上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗?”

以下图表是讨论结果.Percentage实战演练Isittheonlywayouttogotocollege?写作内容:

写作要求:评分标准:只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.句子结构准确;信息内容完整;篇章结构连贯.根据以上图表数据,写一篇短文,包括以下内容;1.增长知识,提高素养(quality),利于择业2.成功的路不只一条.3.学费(tuition)高,就业难.4.你的观点及原因.确定类型2.确定体裁

3.确定主体时态

4.确定主体人称一、审题:(四确定)第一人称/第三人称一般现在时说明文图表型二列要点讨论时间,讨论问题以及讨论地点.星期一,上大学是否是高中生唯一的出路,班会课上.2.增长知识,提高素养(qualities),利于择业

60%的同学认为要上大学,…3.成功的路不只一条.

30%的同学认为上不上大学无所谓,…4.学费(tuition)高,就业难.10%的同学不上大学,…5.你的观点及原因.

就我来说…,因为…三依要点,拟草纲,组织成句.四构篇章,扩句成文.五检查润色六书写星期一我们在班会课上就“上大学是不是高中生唯一的出路”展开了讨论.2.60%的同学认为高中生毕业后应上大学,因为上大学不仅可以增长我们的知识,提高我们的素养,还有利于我们选择职业.3.30%的同学认为,成功的路不只一条,我们不一定要上大学.4.10%的同学认为,大学学费高,毕业后就业难度大,不想要上大学.5.在我看来,…三依要点,拟草纲,组织成句.

Wehadadiscussionon“isittheonlywayoutforseniorstudentstogotocollege?”atourclassmeetingonMonday.

Thereare30%ofthestudentsthinkthat“AllroadsleadtoRome”,andthinkitisnotimportantwhethertheygotocollegeornot.

10%studentsthinkthattheydon’tgotocollegeforitshightuitionandthedifficultyoffindingjobsaftergraduated.

60%ofusconsideritverynecessarytogotocollegebecauseitcanhelpustoimproveourknowledgeaswellasourquality,whichwillbeanadvantagetofindagoodjob.

OnMonday,wehadadiscussionaboutwhetheritistheonlywayoutforseniorstudentstogotocollegeattheclassmeeting.60%ofusconsideritverynecessarytogotocollegebecauseitcanhelpustoimproveourknowledgeaswellasourquality,whichwillbeanadvantagetofindagoodjob.30%ofthestudentsholdtheviewof“allroadsleadtoRome”,thinkingitdoesn’tmakeanydifferencewhethertheywillgotocollegeornot.However,theothersconfirmtheydon’tgotocollegeforitshightuitionanditishardforcollegegraduatestofindjobs.Inmyopinion,wecanreceiveabettereducationatcollegesothatwecanmakegreatercontributionsinthefuture.

根据所给图表,用5句话写一篇题为“电影与电视”的短文。短文须包括以下要求:

A.电影观众人数呈逐年下降趋势;

B.电视观众人数越来越多(原因:方便