新高中考试英语 12 友谊故事-专项突破“读后续写”

专题12高考英语专项突破“读后续写”—友谊故事友谊，在困难时尤显珍贵……01阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Asasixthgrader,Ibegannoticinghowotherkidswereseparatingintodifferentgroupsintheclass.Therewerethegeeks,thejocks(小丑),andthepopularcoolkids.Iwasn’tsurewhereIbelonged.AndIthinkthatwasaproblem.Ourteacherhadassigned“secretfriends”forthecomingweek.Thepurposeofthisassignmentwastodonicethingsforyourfriendwithoutlettingthemknowwhowasdoingit.Wecouldleaveencouragingnotesontheirdeskormysteriouslyleaveacardintheirbackpackorbook.Ourteacherwroteeachkid’snameonapieceofpaperandthrewthemintoabucket,thenweeachclosedoureyesanddrewthenameoftheclassmatewhoweweretosecretlybefriendandsupportoverthenextfiveschooldays.Everyonewasexcitedtogetinvolved,includingRochelle.Bythemiddleoftheweek,wehadturnedthisassignmentintoacontesttoseewhosesecretfriendcouldleavethebestgift.Insteadofencouragingnotes,weleftstationarysetsonourfriend’sdesk.Insteadofgivingcompliments,weweregivingbubblegum,lollipopsandevenmoney.Itseemedthateveryonewasgettingcoolpresentsfromtheirfriends.Everyoneexceptme,thatis.Mysecretfriendfollowedourteacher’sdirectionswithoutafault.Ireceivedhandmadecards,noteswithnicethoughtsandcountlesssmileyfacepicturessayingthatIwasoneofthenicestgirlsintheclass.Thisfriendseemedtothinkhighlyofmefromthenotesthatwereleft,butthelackofgiftskeptmewonderingwhatwasupwithwhoeverhadpulledmyname.Onthelastmorningofourassignment,Iwalkedintomyclassroomandnoticedapackageonmydesk.Atlast,mysecretfriendhadgraspedtheideathatagiftwaswhatIreallyneeded.Iquicklyrippedopenthegiftpaper,onlytofindasmalldollinside.Thepinkwool-knitdollseemednotnewbutdelicate.Butthegirlssittingnearmegiggledandgossipedaboutthe“littlegirl”giftIhadreceived.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Hearingthis,Ifeltmyfaceturnred.____________________________________________________________________________________________ItturnedoutthatmysecretfriendwasRochelle,comingfromapoorfamily.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hearingthis,Ifeltmyfaceturnred.Embarrassedandashamed,Isecretlycomplainedthatthegirlgavemesostupidagifttoarouseothers’derision.Ievenjoinedothergirlsingossipingaboutmysecretfriendandthepoordoll.WhenIcontinuedwithmeanremarks,agirlsittingatthelastrowaroseandcameup,castingmeanangryanddisappointedlook.Withtearsstreamingdownherface,sheadmitted,“I’myoursecretfriendandI’msorryaboutthegift.”Thensheranoutoftheclassroom.Frozenwithshock,Icouldn’tutterasingleword.ItturnedoutthatmysecretfriendwasRochelle,comingfromapoorfamily.Shehadsavedeverypennyinherpocketmoneyinordertogivemeacoolgift.Withthelimitedmoney,shevisitedalotofstoresandfinallyselectedthelovelydollfromasecond-handstore.Actually,shegavemeamostvaluablegiftwithhersincereheart.However,Ididn’ttreasureandhurtherbadlyinsuchacruelway.SoashamedwasIthatittookmeafewdaystopluckupmycouragetofaceuptoRochelleandapologize.Muchtomydelight,sheforgavemeandlaterwebecamebestfriends.Mostimportantly,wefoundwherewebelonged.【解析】本文以找“秘密朋友”活动为线索展开，讲述了老师为了让同学们找到好朋友，举行了找“秘密朋友”的活动。大家都为自己的秘密朋友留下最好的礼物，例如泡泡糖、棒棒糖甚至是钱。而作者收到的确实是手工制作的卡片、便条和笑脸照片，还有一个看起来很不起眼的洋娃娃。作者感到很失望，甚至和其他同学一起取笑这个洋娃娃。这时候，罗谢尔站出来说礼物是她送的，她来自一个贫困家庭，为了送给作者一个礼物，她攒了平时的零花钱。作者顿时感到很羞愧而向罗谢尔道歉，最终罗谢尔原谅了作者，她们成为了最好的朋友。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“听到这些，我觉得我的脸变红了。”可知，第一段可描写作者为收到这样的礼物而感到尴尬，因此，和周围同学一起嘲笑这个“洋娃娃”。这时候，送礼物的罗谢尔难过的跑出去，作者才知道，自己的秘密朋友是她。②由第二段首句内容“原来我的秘密朋友是罗谢尔，来自一个贫穷的家庭。”可知，第二段可描写罗谢尔虽然很贫困，但是她依然攒钱给自己的秘密朋友买最好的礼物。2.续写线索：嘲笑礼物——发现秘密朋友罗谢尔——羞愧——道歉——成为好朋友3.词汇激活行为类①.开始：begin/start②.分开：separateinto/splitinto③.参与：getinvolved/joinin/attend情绪类①.兴奋的，积极的：excited/active②.羞愧：ashamed/compunctious【点睛】[高分句型1].WhenIcontinuedwithmeanremarks,agirlsittingatthelastrowaroseandcameup,castingmeanangryanddisappointedlook.(由连接词when引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2].SoashamedwasIthatittookmeafewdaystopluckupmycouragetofaceuptoRochelleandapologize.(副词so后接形容词ashamed位于句首,其后用部分倒装)02“Don’tlethimgetaway,”shoutedHassantoMoizastheywerechasingtheirneighborUsman.MoizandHassanwerethehatefulbullies(欺凌者)intheirneighborhood.Usmanwasasweetguywholovedreading.Hedidn’thavemanyfriends,buthehadhisbookswithhimallthetime.Thatdayhewascomingbackfromthebookshoparoundthecomerwithafewnewinterestingbooksandanoldnotebookinhand.Thetwobullieswereimpatientlywaitingtoteasesomeoneinthestreet.AsUsmancrossedthemwithoutpayingmuchattention,theymadehimtheirtarget.Theystartedtochasehim,pullinghisshirtandcallinghimnames.Usmankeptwalkingwithoutlookingbackatthem.Hejustwantedtogethome.WhileUsmanwasfocusedonjustgettinghome,hedidn’trealizehowclosetheyhadcometohim.Inhishurry,hedroppedhisnotebook.Hassanleanedtopickupthenotebookforthesakeofteasinghim.Usmancouldn’tlethisnotebookbeinsomeoneelse’spossession.So,hepushedHassanback,pickedupthenotebookandranasfastashecould,butHassanwasnotgoingtoletthisgo.HeranafterhimandMoizfollowedhim.Theycaughthimnearhishouse.Hassangrabbedthenotebookfromhim.Whenheopenedthenotebook,hesawthatUsmanhadwrittensomethinginit.ThinkingthatitwasUsman’sdiaryandhewouldlearnafewsecrets,Hassanstartedreadingwithinterest.Afterafewminutes,Hassanhadtearsinhiseyes.HefeltterriblysorryandhuggedUsmanapologetically,andthenhewalkedawaywithMoiz.“Hassan,whatdidyoudo?Wechasedhimfornothing.”Moizwasangry.Hassan’ssoftnessconfusedhim.“Saysomething,whatwasinthatnotebook?”“WhatIreadjustnowisbeyondyourunderstanding.”Hassansighedwithaheavyheart.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Infact,therewasastoryaboutabullyinUsman’snotebook.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterthatday,theoncetroublesomeandupsettingHassanandMoizdisappeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Infact,therewasastoryaboutabullyinUsman’snotebook.Themaincharactersofthestorywereaboutthetwohatefulguys,wholearnedfromotherstobullyagirlforthefirsttime.Astheunluckygirlwithadarkandcurlyhairswasstopped,theynoticedapackageunderherarms.Itwasbeautifullydecoratedandwrappedwithasilkribbon.Hearingthatitwasapizzaforahomelessgrannywholongedfor

onetomakeherstomachfullonherbirthday,thetwoguysweretouchedandcarriedthepackagetothehomelessgrannywiththekindgirl.

Afterthatday,theoncetroublesomeandupsettingHassanandMoizdisappeared.Instead,theyearnedthemselvesatitleof“GoodGuy”fromthepublic.Theydevotedthemselvestogivingothersahelpinghandandvolunteeredtoofferservicewhenevertheywereavailable.Notonlytheteachersbutalsothestudents,whooncewerebulliedbythetwoguys,praisedandthoughthighlyoftheirbehaviors.Theycompletelyturnedandwereproudofbeingthecharacterslikedbythepublic.【解析】文章以事件发展为线索，讲述了发生在两个欺凌者——莫伊兹和哈桑，与邻居小孩乌斯曼——一个爱读书的小孩，之间的故事。故事发生时，两个恶霸少年正在街道上戏弄某个人，当乌斯曼经过他们时，他们就把乌斯曼当成了目标。他们便从后面追赶乌斯曼。而一心只想回家的乌斯曼，并没注意到两个恶霸正在接近他。匆忙之间，乌斯曼的随身携带的笔记本掉落在地上。哈桑俯身捡起了笔记本，为了拿回笔记本，乌斯曼把哈桑推回去，拿起笔记本后便拼命跑。但两个恶霸少年不罢休，赶上乌斯曼后，从他手里抢走笔记本。在哈桑读了笔记本中的内容后，他热泪盈眶并对他的行为感到非常抱歉，拥抱乌斯曼，和莫伊兹离开了。他告诉莫伊慈笔记本中写着一些内容。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“事实上，在乌斯曼的笔记本里，有一个关于欺凌的故事。”可知，第一段可描写这个欺凌的故事是关于这两个少年的，两个少年让人讨厌的外表下也有一颗善良的心。②由第二段首句内容“那天之后，曾经麻烦不断的哈桑和莫伊兹消失了。”可知，第二段可描写两人成为了公众眼里的好人，他们帮助人并志愿提供服务，对自己的改变感到骄傲。2.续写线索：一个欺凌的故事——两个少年截停了一个头发卷曲的女孩——女孩带着给无家可归奶奶的披萨——三人一起送披萨——两个小伙的改变——他们主动帮忙并提供服务，成为朋友——赢得公众的赞誉——两人感到骄傲3.词汇激活行为类①注意：payattentionto/catchsightof/observe②致力于：concentrateon/buryoneselfinsth.③义务做：offersth.withoutexpectingreward/onone'sowninitiative情绪类①感动：moved/bringsb.totears②渴望：beeagerfor/aspire/thirstyfor【点睛】[高分句型1].Themaincharactersofthestorywereaboutthetwohatefulguys,wholearnedfromotherstobullyagirlforthefirsttime.（由who引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2].Hearingthatitwasahamburgerforahomelessgrannywholongedtohaveonetomakeherstomachfullonherbirthday,thetwoguysweretouchedandcarriedthepackagetothehomelessgrannywiththekindgirl.（运用了现在分词作状语和关系代词who引导的定语从句。）03Allisonstoodinlinewiththerestofherclass,waitingfortheschooldoorstoopen.ThiswasthelastdaybeforeschoolclosedforChristmasbreak.Shecouldn’twaitforsecretgiftswap(交换)happeninginclasstoday.Alisontunedtosaysomethingtoherbestfriend,Wendy,thenfroze.ShewassurprisedtoseeWendylookingdownatthegroundwithherbookspressedtightlytoherchest.“What’swrong,Wendy?”Allisonaskedquietly.Wendyshookherhead,hereyesconnectingwithAllison’s.AllisoncouldseethatWendy’sfacewasasdarkasacloud,withnosmileinsight.“Myparentsdidn’tgivemeanythingtobringtothegiftswap,”shewhispered.“Theysaidtheydidn’thaveextramoneyforstufflikethat.”AllisonlookedatWendy,confused.“But,weweren’tsupposedtobringanythingexpensive.Justsomethingsmallthatdidn’tcostalotofmoney.”Allisonthoughtbacktothelasttimeshe’dbeenatWendy’shouse.She’dopenedtherefrigeratorlookingforsomethingtodrink,onlytofindthatitwasmostlyempty.ThefurnitureinWendy’shouselookedoldandbeatenup.“Itwillbeokay,Wendy,”Allisonsaid.“WegettohaveallthattimeoffforChristmas.Comeon,cheerup!”Wendygaveherasmallsmile,thenlookedaway.Atthatmoment,awhistleblew,andthekidsstartedwalkingintotheschoolbuilding.TheChristmaspartywasabouttostart.Onebyone,thekidsdroppedtheirgiftsintothebagtheteacherwasholding.AllisonlookedoveratWendy.Mostofthekidsweresmilingaroundthebag,eagertogetstarted,butWendystoodofftotheside,lookingdownatherfeet.Allisonhatedseeingherfriendsoupset.Shewishedthereweresomethingshecoulddoaboutit.“Comeonup,Allison.It’syourturn,”theteachersaid.Sooneveryonehadpulledoutagiftandunwrappedit.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Allisonlookeddownathergift:alittleglasscat.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:“Wendy,Iwantyoutohavethis,”shesaid.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Paragraph1:Allisonlookeddownathergift:alittleglasscat.Itwascarefullyselectedbyherandhermotherinthestoreyesterday.Itisalovelylittleglasscat,whoseeyeslookedlikeacrescentmoon.Whenyoulookedatit,itwaslikesmilingatyou,whichcanmakeyouforgetthetroublesinlife.ShethoughtthegiftwasreallyperfectforWendy.Justthen,theteachershoutedagain“comeonup,Allison!”AllisonshookherheadslightlytowardstheteacherandthencameuptoWendy.Paragraph2:“Wendy,Iwantyoutohavethis,”shesaid.Wendywasamazedbutshookherheadsaying,“No,Ican’tacceptyourgift.Ihavenogifttoexchangewithyou.”Hearingthesewords,Alisonsmiledandreplied,“Wendy,youaremybestfriend.Ihopeyoucanbehappy.OpenitandI’msureyou’lllikeit.”SheinsistedonputtingthegiftintoWendy’shand.Wendyslowlyopenedthepresent.Whenshesawthelittleglasscatinside,shesmiledandsaid,“It’ssocute.Thankyou,mybestfriend!”Alisonsaid,“Lookatit,itwillmakeyouforgetthetroublesinlife.Smilemore.”【解析】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了在圣诞节交换礼物时，艾莉森的好朋友温迪，因为父母没有能力为她准备用来交换的礼物，而感到难过。艾莉森决定为好友做些什么，并最终把自己的礼物送给了温迪的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“艾莉森低头看着她的礼物：一只小玻璃猫。”可知，第一段可描写这个精心挑选的礼物以及艾莉森的决定。②由第二段首句内容“温迪，我想要你拿着这个”可知，第二段可描写艾莉森把礼物送给了温迪，两个人一起享受快乐的圣诞节。2.续写线索：精心挑选的礼物——礼物的特别——决定送给温迪——温迪拒绝——劝说——接受3.词汇激活行为类1.挑选：select/choose2.回答：reply/answer3.打开：open/unwrap情绪类1开心的：happy/delighted2.吃惊的：amazed/surprised【点睛】[高分句型1].Itisalovelylittleglasscat,whoseeyeslookedlikeacrescentmoon.（运用了whose引导的定语从句）[高分句型2]Whenshesawthelittleglasscatinside,shesmiledandsaid,“it’ssocute.Thankyou,mybestfriend!”（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）04Onedayinsummervacation,Iwasinthechemist’sshopwithmysonwhoisfifteenyearsold.Mysonistalkativeandhisdreamisbecomingafamousspeaker.Sohelovesengagingwithstrangersinpubliciftheyarefriendlyandsafe.Thatdayhesaid“Hi”toakidandbeganapleasantconversation.ThekidcalledJackwaswearingtheuniformoftheseniorhighschoolmysonwouldattendnextmonthsoIpointedthatouttomyson.Whenwewereleaving.Jacksaid,“Seeyouatschool.”Onthefirstdayofschool,Jack,whowasinSeniorTwo,greetedmysonattheschoolgate.Theysoonbecamegoodfriends.WhenIwenttopickupmysonafterschool,theywalkedoutsidebyside.Jack’smotherstoppedhercar,too.However,asIwaspackingmycarwithgroceries,Ifoundmyson’snewuniformsweremissingandwefeltextremelyanxious.Seeingthescenelikethis,Jack’smotherconstantlycomfortedus.Shedroveupbehindmeandpromisedtooffermeabagofuniformsthatnolongerfittedherson.Shegavemethoseclothesfornothing!IwasoverjoyedandIwentandpickedthemupfromherthenextafternoon.Thismayseemlikeasmallkindnesstosomepeoplebutformeitishuge!Ihavebeenstressingquitealotaboutthecostofuniformsforschool.Weareattemptingtostartabusinesswithnocapitalandhavefinancialdifficultiesatthemoment.Ialsosufferfromseveredepressionandanxietyandhavehadthereallyworstyearinmylife.IcannotevenbegintoexplainhowmuchIappreciatethissmallgesturefromacompletestranger.Ithasrelievedabitofaburdenfrommyshoulders.Youneverknowwhenthesmallkindnesses,evensimplyasmileonthestreet,canbeincrediblyupliftingtoacompletestrangerIaskedJack’smotherforhercontactinformation,andinthefollowingdayswekeptintouch,andgraduallywebecamegoodfriends,too.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。IdecidedtoinviteJackandhismothertodinnerathome,____________________________________________________________________________________________Yearslater,asJackwasgraduating,hismotherinvitedustoherhomeinreturn.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IdecidedtoinviteJackandhismothertodinnerathome,hopingtothankherforhertimelyhelp.Beforedinner,Jackandhismothercamewithapotofflowers.Duringthemeal,wetalkedaboutourfamiliesandwork.Wewereveryhappy.Ialsoexpressedmygratitudeforherhelp.Thetwochildrentalkedhappilyabouttheirstudiesandhobbies,andgiggledfromtimetotime.Happytimealwayspassesquickly.Whentheywentback,mysonandIwerereluctanttopart.Yearslater,asJackwasgraduating,hismotherinvitedustoherhomeinreturn.Itookmysonandapotofflowers,asshedidyearsago.Afterdinner,wetalkedasusual.However,throughthischat,IlearnedthatJack’smotherhaddepressionandanxietybefore.Shewasverygratefulformycompanyduringtheseyears,whichhadgreatlyimprovedhersituation.Infact,whatshedidn’tknowwasthatitwaswithhercompanythatIcameoutofadifficultyear.Ireachedoutandhuggedher.Webothsaid“thankyou”toeachother.【解析】这是一篇读后续写。文章以人物为线索，讲述了作者因为儿子的缘故，在自己人生最艰难的那一年认识了高中生杰克的母亲，从此两人成为了好朋友。【详解】1.段落续写①由第一段首句内容“我决定邀请杰克和他的母亲来家里吃晚餐”可知，接下来可以描写就餐过程中的温馨场景。②由第二段首句内容“几年后，杰克即将毕业，作为回报，他的母亲邀请我们去她家”可知，接下来可以描写杰克妈妈对作者的感激，以及事情的真相。2.续写线索邀请吃完饭——共度愉快时光——离开时依依不舍——杰克妈妈邀请——感谢作者——道出事实3.词类激活动作类①表达：express/show②聊天：talk/chat③笑：giggle/burstintolaughter/burstoutlaughing④了解：learn/get/beawareof情感类①感激：gratitude/appreciation②高兴的：happy/delighted/pleased【点睛】[高分句型1]Whentheywentback,mysonandIwerereluctanttopart.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）[高分句型2]However,throughthischat,IlearnedthatJack’smotherhaddepressionandanxietybefore.（运用了that引导宾语从句）[高分句型3]Shewasverygratefulformycompanyduringtheseyears,whichhadgreatlyimprovedhersituation.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）05ItwasaJanuaryafternoon.Mywife,SavitriandIsatontheSahyadriExpress.Asthetrainpulledoutofthestation,wecouldbarelyhideourexcitement.WewerefinallyonthewaytoahoneymoontoMatheran!Thiswasthefirsttimewehadenoughsavingstogoonatriptogether.ThetrainstoppedatNeral,wherewewereforcedoutofourreverie(白日梦).Aswesteppedoutandstartedmakinginquiries,werealizeditwasunlikelythatwewouldfindatraintotakeustothemistyhillstationwehadbeendreamingofformonths.Theafternoongraduallysettledintoapinkduskaswesatinacorneratthestation,waitingfornewsofthetrainservicesasthecoldwinterbreezerattled(使紧张)ourbones.Weunwrappedsomebiscuitswhenalittlegirl,nomorethanfiveorsix,wentpastus,screaming,“ButIwantfood!Iamhungry!”Savitri'seyesturnedtothegirl’sfamily.Smiling,shecalledout-hernamewasMehrunisa，weoverheard-andaskedhertoseekherparent’spermissiontoacceptbiscuitsfromus.Leftwithnooption,herfamilyaccepted,Andwebeganchatting.Afterseveralhours,thetrainfinallyarrived.Weenteredalongside.Astheshortuphilljourneyprogressed,SavitriandIsoftlydiscussedourtrouble.ItseemedunlikelythatourreservationatRagdiHotelwouldstillbeheld.Asthetrainarrivedandwerosetobidthefamilygoodbye,Mehrunisa’sfather,Viraaz,suggestedthathewouldaccompanyustomakesurethatwehadaplacetospendthenight.Hehadoverheardouranxiousexchange.HisfamilyheadedtotheirguesthouseandViraazcamewithustolookforahotel.Tonoone’ssurprise,RagdiHotelwaspackedwithpeople.Themanagerofferedassistancebyplacingafewbedsinthecoalstorageroombutthecoldmadeituninhabitable.Agradualdread(恐惧)startedtoappearinmymind.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Sensingourhelplessness,Viraazofferedtoputusupintheiraccommodationforthenight._______