2023届高考英语电子邮件新闻报道读后续写写作讲义

大家好，今天给大家分享2023年高考英语阅读综合带练以及逐个题分析，其中包括模板，每个段写法指导（电子邮件、新闻报道、读后续写）1.高考英语电子邮件写作指导一般来说，撰写邮件可以分为5个步骤。明确你的主题（Chooseaclearsubjectline）邮件中的主题行是电子邮件内容的简要摘要。主题行让收件人知道他们即将获取的信息。主题行必须清晰、专业，以确保收件人知道电子邮件的目的并打开这封电子邮件进行阅读。因为如果对方邮件太多，很有可能先忽略那些“不太重要”的邮件。以问候开始（Beginwithagreeting）每封商务邮件都应该以专业的问候语开头，你的问候语应该简明扼要。如果你不知道收件人的姓名，你可以使用他们的专业头衔。高中英语电子邮件中常用的问候语包括："Dear","Goodmorning/afternoon/evening","Hello"and"Greetings"等。说明你的目的（Stateyourpurpose）不要东拉西扯，每一封商务邮件都应该有一个目的，且最好只有一个目的。尽量确保你的电子邮件传达了与特定主题、任务或请求相关的明确信息。用一句明确说明目的的话来开始电子邮件，可以帮助收件人理解你为什么要写这封邮件。图片例如："Iamwritingtoenquireabout…""Iamwritinginregarding…""I'llliketocheckwithyouon…""I'llwanttorequest…""Thepurposeoftheemailisto…"举个简单的例子。"Iamwritingthisemailtoinformyouthatchangeshavebeenmadetoourprivacypolicy.Pleasereviewthefollowingchangesandletmeknowifyouhaveanyquestions."以专业签名结束（Closewithaprofessionalsignature）熟悉电子邮件的人都会注意对方在每封邮件最后的签名，许多企业都为员工预先设置了签名格式。专业签名通常包括正式的结束称呼、姓名、职称、公司名称和联系信息，专业签名还可能包括公司的徽标。校对（Proofread）写完电子邮件后，你应该检查电子邮件中的拼写和语法错误。你还应该确保你的电子邮件信息清晰，发送人和抄送人正确无误。以及，我们也要查看结束语是否妥当。邮件也需要有结束语和结束问候语。结束语：“Thankyouforyourtimeinreadingthis.”Thanksinadvance.”“Thankyouforyourconsideration.”“Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasefeelfreetodropmeanemailmessage.”“Ifyouhaveanyotherquestions,youcancallmeby[PhoneNumber].”结束问候语：“BestRegards”“Sincerely”“Thankyou”“Kindregards”“Withgratitude”⭐我们一起来看看2023年北京高考英语真题：假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：(1)活动形式；(2)活动内容。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【答案】DearJimHearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.Youcanshowcasegarbageclassificationonsite,planttreesandpublicizesharingeconomy,whichwillallfitintothethemeof“GreenBeijing”.Hopefully,youwillgetsomeinspirationfrommysuggestions.Wishyousuccess.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion→tip提供：offer→provide开展：carryout→conduct主题：theme→topic2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmydhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.拓展句：Sinceyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.【点睛】[高分句型1]Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)电子邮件写作模板Dear,Iamextremelypleasedtohearfromyou.AndIwouldliketowritealettertotellyouthat.(寒暄句加主题句)(扩展句一)(扩展句二)(扩展句三)Iwillgreatlyappreciatearesponsefromyourearliestconvenience./Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.(结束主体段落)Bestregards.(结束语)Sincerelyyours,________2.高考英语新闻报道类写作：新闻报道开头部分开门见山，一句话简要概括新闻包括：when，where，who，whatLastFridayafternoon,afriendlyfoodballmatchwasheldbetweenourschoolandtheGermansisterschoolontheplayground.LastFridayafternoon,therewasafriendlyfootballmatchbetweentheGermansisterschoolandourschoolontheplayground.OurschoolteamandtheGermansisterschoolhadafriendlyfootballmatchontheplaygroundlastFridayafternoon.OurschoolteamhadafriendlyfootballmatchagainsttheGermansisterschoolontheplaygroundlastFridayafternoon.新闻报道中间部分陈述活动内容Alltheplayersdidtheirbestonthefieldandpresentedawonderfulandbreathtakingperformance.Itwassuchaclosematchthatnobodywouldknowtheresultuntilthelastminute.Thematchwasintense/fierceandhard-foughtuntiltheend.Thegameendedinadraw/tie.平局Theschoolteamscoredthefirstgoalinthelastminuteandwonthegamenarrowly.险胜新闻报道结尾部分简要评价此次活动意义Thisactivityisofgreatsignificance.Notonlydoesthematchpromotethefriendshipbetweenusbutalsoitarousesthestudents’interestinsports.Thoughtheschoolteamlostthegame,thevalue/essenceofthecompetitionliesnotinvictorybutthefriendshipdevelopedbetweentheschools.Itissuchameaningfulandunforgettablematch,asbothteamshavenotonlyrealizedtheirstrengthsandweaknessesbutalsodeveloped/strengthened/built/establishedaclosefriendship.【新闻报道模板运用】Inorderto____活动目的____,a____活动名称___washeldbyourschool,which____活动结果____./_____节日名称_____washeldonFridayinourcommunity.（首段介绍活动时间和地点）..........................................................................................（中间段说明活动内容）Thisfestival/activityattractedmuchinterestfromstudentsandeveryoneislookingforwardtonextyear’s×××Festival./Theactivityissomeaningfulthatweallfeelrewarded./Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydidit____活动意义1______,italso__活动意义2______./Thisactivityisofgreatsignificance.Notonlydoesit____活动意义1_____butalsoit___活动意义2_____.Weallhopemoreactivitieswillbeheldinthefuture./Theactivitywasgreatlypraisedandwealsolearnedhowto____活动反响____.Itwasarewardingday.（尾段表达活动的反响和意义）66.上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1.活动的过程；2.收获与感想。注意：写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。【答案】GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUsLastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyourStudents’Union.Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.Wethenwentonanaturalwalktoobserveandcollectsamplesofdifferentplants.Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldandlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterforanimals.Ialsogainedagreaterappreciationfortherolethatplantsplayinmaintainingthebalanceofourecosystem.Overall,itwasavaluableandenrichingexperience.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。【详解】1.词汇积累参与：participatein→attend开始：begin→start观察，调查：observe→survey震惊：strike→astonish/surprise2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyourStudents’Union.拓展句：Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyourStudents’Union,whichbenefitedmealot.【点睛】【高分句型1】Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldandlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterforanimals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）高考英语读后续写指导1.审题四步走①审体裁：明确原文本的体裁，确定续写段落的体裁和语言风格；②审时态：确定原文本的时态，避免续写内容出现时态错误；③审原文本大意：找出原文本中的六要素(who,when,where,what,how,why)，了解大意，确保续写内容与原文本的连贯性；④审所给提示语：仔细研读所给提示语，注意续写内容与原文本的融洽度以及续写两段之间的衔接。2.高分三要素①立意"高大上"，情节丰富、合理；②注重细节描写，衔接自然流畅，语言生动、具体；③书写规范工整，卷面开启"美颜"特效。3.解题三步法第一步：理已知信息精读文章，关注细节和脉络。阅读是读后续写的起点，起点的质量直接影响续写的高度，因此，考生首先要通过阅读梳理文中主要人物之间的关系、主要人物的性格特点、故事发生的背景和线索等，以便把握故事走向，构建情境。理清人物关系、分析人物性格特点可帮助考生理解故事情节，推断故事发展方向，同时对续写时的人物描写有指导作用。考生可通过外貌、动作、心理等的描写把握人物特点。第二步：判未知走向确定故事主线，定续写段落的基调：在读完文章后，根据各段落的主旨，明确文章的整体构架和中心思想。此外，考生需要通过文中的细节描述来确定续写内容的基调，如分析描写人物的形容词、人物发出的动作、文中的对话等，进而寻找续写切入点，构思合理的情节。把握段落开头语，定文章走向：所给段落开头语对故事发展有提示、引导和限制作用。续写时，考生要站在作者的角度，遵循原文的写作思路。注意续写内容应积极向上，设计的结局应是正向的。此外，续写第二段的提示语往往暗示着第一段的故事走向。第三步：斟词酌句，连句成文在读后续写中，细读是起点，构建是关键，而写作则是重点。考生可将梳理出的信息和拓展的细节结合以形成故事发展的要点，进而构建简单的故事框架。写作时，考生应注意：①续写内容与所给段落提示语衔接自然；②充分利用储备的语言知识，根据内容需要慎重选择词汇、语块和句式,尽量使用高级句式，使表达富有感染力；③续写第二段应该对故事所蕴含的主题进行提炼和升华，以达到画龙点睛之效。要想读后续写得高分，除了要认真审题，设计合理的情节，还要注意语言表达，如句式结构的丰富性。下面列出了读后续写中常用的句式结构，倘若灵活、恰当地加以运用，文章一定会锦上添花。句式1：句式分词短语作状语Havingsleptsopoorly,Lucywasnotreadyforthedayatall.

Lucy没有睡好觉，根本没有准备好迎接这一天。句式2：形容词(短语)作状语Excitedandmoved,hefollowedthesoundandwentoutforhelp.他又激动又感动,顺着声音出去求助。句式3：with复合结构Thehousecaughtfirelastnight,withnothingleftinit.那座房子昨晚着火了，里面什么。句式4：独立主格结构Theboyrushedtotheoldman'shouse,hisfacecoveredwithsweat.男孩冲到那位老人的家，满脸是汗。句式5：强调句It

wasthewholesituationthatmadeherverydepressedandupset.正是整个情况让她感到非常沮丧和失望。句式6：倒装句Coldandtiredthoughwewere,thekids'smilingfacescheeredusup.虽然我们又冷又累，但孩子们的笑脸使我们振奋起来。句式7：虚拟语气Fivefeettotheright,hewouldhavefallendowntothebottomofthehole.往右五英尺，他就会掉到洞底。②高考英语读后续写万能句子一、开头常用句子1.Dependingonpersonalexperience,personaltypeandemotionconcern,wefindthatsomepeopleholdtheideaof...,whileothersprefer...基于个人经历、个性类型和情感关注的不同，我们发现有人持……的观点，而另外一些人则更喜欢……例句：Dependingonpersonalexperience,personaltypeandemotionconcern,wefindthatsomepeopleholdtheideaoflivinginthesmalltown,whileotherspreferthebigcity.基于个人经历、个性类型和情感关注的不同，我们发现有人喜欢生活在小城镇，而另外一些人则更喜欢大城市。2.Whenaskedabout...,thevast/overwhelmingmajorityof/most/many/quiteafewpeoplesay/think/believe/answerthat...But...当被问及……时，多数（大多数、许多）人认为（回答）……但是……例句：Whenaskedaboutchoosinglivingplace,thevastpeoplethinkthatlivinginthebigcityisperfect.ButIthinklivinginthesmalltownisthebetterchoice.当被问及在选择居住地方时，多数人认为居住在城市是很棒的。但是我觉得住在小城镇更好。3.Whenitcomesto...,somethink/hold/believe...当提及……时，有人认为……例句：Whenitcomestosports,somebelievebasketballisthemostpopularone.当提到运动时，有人认为篮球是最受欢迎的。4.Ithasbecomeapparenttousthat...对我们来说，……已经变得很明显了例句：Ithasbecomeapparenttousthatlivinginasmalltownismorecomfortable.对我们来说，住在小城镇更加舒服。5.Nowadays,itiscommonly/widely/generallybelieved/thought/heldthat...,butIwonder/doubtthat...如今，人们普遍认为……，但是我怀疑……例句：Nowadays,itisgenerallybelievedthatlivinginabigcityisconvenient,butIdoubtthatlivinginasmallcountryismorecomfortable.如今，人们普遍认为住在大城市更便利，但是我觉得住在小城镇更加舒服。6.Withtherapidgrowthof...,...have/hasbecomeincreasinglyimportantinourdailylife.随着……的快速增长，……日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。例如：Withtherapidgrowthofhi-techskills,cellphonehasbecomeincreasinglyimportantinourdailylife.随着高科技的快速增长，手机在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。7.Recentlytheissue/problemof...hasbeenbroughtintofocus/broughttopublicattention/inthelimelight/posedamongthepublic.近来，……的问题已经成为人们关注的焦点。例句：Recentlytheissueofstudyingabroadhasbeenbroughtintofocus.近来，出过留学的问题已经成为人们关注的焦点。二、中间常用句子1.Apartfromthis,otherways/aspects/functionsare...除此之外，另外一些方法（方面、作业）是……例句：Besides,otherwaysarealsounderconsidered.除此之外，其他方法也是在考虑中。2.Thelastbutnottheleastis...最后但并非不重要的是……例句：Thelastbutnottheleastisthatweshouldgetupearly.最后但并非不重要的是我们要早起。3.Ontheonehand,...,ontheotherhand,...一方面……，另一方面……例句：Ontheonehand,weneedtobehelpful,ontheotherhand,weshouldbeonthealerttoprotectourselves.一方面我们要乐于助人，另一方面我们要提高警惕保护自己。4.Nolessimportant/harmfulis...同样重要（有害）例句：Nolessimportantissavingwater.节约用水也是同样重要的。5.But,youmayask,whyis...important/indispensable/necessary?但你也许会问，为什么……很重要（必不可少、有必要）？例句：But,youmayask,whyiswaterimportant?但你也许会问，为什么水很重要？6.Nothing/Fewthingscanapproach/equal/match/parallel...没有什么能与……相比例句：Nothingcanapproachmypetdog.没有什么能与我的宠物狗相比。7.Despitethefactthatmostofthemlike...,Iwouldliketochoose...尽管大部分人喜欢……，我还是倾向于……例句：Despitethefactthatmostofthemlikeswimming,Iwouldliketochooserunning.尽管大部分人喜欢游泳，我还是倾向于跑步。8.Peoplediffergreatlyontheirattitudestowardsthisproblem.Somemaintainthat...Others,onthecontrary,holdtheopinionthat...Personally,Istandonthesideof...人们对于这个问题的态度差异很大。有人坚持认为……与此相反，有人认为……就我个人而言，我站在……这一边。例句：Peoplediffergreatlyontheirattitudestowardsthisproblem.Somemaintainthatlivinginthebigcityisbetter.Others,onthecontrary,holdtheopinionthatlivinginthesmallcountryisbetter.Personally,Istandonthesideofthelatter.人们对于这个问题的态度差异很大。有人坚持认为居住在大城市比较好。与此相反，有人认为小城镇比较好。就我个人而言，我站在后者这一边。9.Tounderstandthetruthof...,itisnecessarytoanalyze...为了了解……的真相，有必要分析……例句：Tounderstandthetruthofairpollution,itisnecessarytoanalyzeautomobileexhaust.为了了解大气污染的真相，有必要对汽车尾气进行分析。10.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions/views/ideasabout...Somepeopletakeitforgrantedthat...Onthecontrary,someotherpeoplethink...对于……的观点因人而异。有人想当然的认为……相反，有人则认为……例句：Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionaboutchoosinglivingplace.Somepeopletakeitforgrantedthatbigcityisbetter.Onthecontrary,someotherpeoplethinksmalltownistheperfectchoice.对于居住地的选择因人而异。有人想当然的认为大城市更好。相反，有人则认为小城镇是最好的选择。11.Wehavebeenbroughtupbelieve/myththat...Yet...我们从下到大都相信这种说法……然而……例句：Wehavebeenbroughtupbelievethatstudyisthemostimportantthing.Yetplayingisalsoveryimportant.我们从小到大都相信学习是最重要的这种说法。然而玩耍也是很重要的。12.Giventhefactthat...,itbynomeansindicatesthat...尽管……是事实，但是并不意味着……例句：Giventhefactthatbookisimportant,itbynomeansindicatesthatitiseverything.尽管书籍很重要是事实，但是并不意味着书就是一切。13.Somereasonscanexplainthistrend.Firstofall,...Secondly...,Furthermore,...一些原因可以解释这一趋势。首先，……；其次，……；另外，……例句：Somereasonscanexplainthistrend.Firstofall,airpollutionismoreandmorecommon.Secondly,waterisalsopolluted.Furthermore,animalsareindanger.一些原因可以解释这一趋势。首先，大气污染越来越严重；其次，水资源也被污染了；另外很多动物也濒临灭绝。14.Thanksto/Owingto/Dueto/Becauseof/Asaresultof因为……例句：Thankstomymom,Ibecomeanexcellentperson.因为我妈妈，我成为了一个优秀的人。15.Therearemanyreasonsexplainingthiscase.Asforme,Iconsiderthefollowingasthetypicalones.Tobeginwith,...Secondly,...Lastbutnotleast,...有很多原因可以解释该问题。就我而已，我认为以下原因比较典型。一个是……；第二个是……；最后，……例句：Therearemanyreasonsexplainingthiscase.Asforme,Iconsiderthefollowingasthetypicalones.Tobeginwith,airpollution.Secondly,waterpollution.Lastbutnotleast,oceanpollution..有很多原因可以解释该问题。就我而已，我认为以下原因比较典型。一个是大气污染；第二个是水污染；最后是海洋污染。16.Noonecandenythefactthat...没有人可以否认……的事实。例句：Noonecandenythefactthatwearebrothers.没有人可以否认我们是兄弟的事实。17.Legend/Rumorhasitthat...据说……例句：Rumorhasitthattheyhavegotmarried.据说他们已经结婚了。18.Peoplearecomingtorealizetheimportanceof...Theyhavebeguntotrytheirbestto...Webelievethat...人们开始意识到……的重要性，正竭力……。我们相信……例句：Peoplearecomingtorealizetheimportanceofscience.Theyhavebeguntotrytheirbesttoworkonscience.Webelievethatsciencewillmakeourlifebetter.人们开始意识到科学的重要性，正竭力钻研科学。我们相信科学会使我们的生活更美好。19.Anyway...不管怎么样……例句：Anyway,wearebrothers.不管怎么样，我们都是兄弟。三、结尾常用句子1.Fromabove...综上所述……例句：Fromabove,Ithinklivinginabigcityisbetter.综上所述，我认为居住在大城市是更好的。2.Therefore,itisnotdifficulttodrawtheconclusionthat...因此，不难得出以下结论……例句：Therefore,itisnotdifficulttodrawtheconclusionthatlivinginabigcityisbetter.因此，不难得出居住在大城市更好的结论。http://3.Inaword,thewholesocietyshouldpayclosetotheproblemof...Onlyinthiswaycan...inthefuture.总之，全社会都应该密切关注……，只有这样将来才能……例句：Inaword,thewholesocietyshouldpaycloseattentiontotheproblemofprotectingtheenvironment.Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveagoodplacetoliveinthefuture.总之，全社会都应该密切关注环境保护问题，只有这样将来我们才能有一个生存的好地方。4.Tobesure,theremaybedifficultieswecannotovercome,butifwe...确实，有些困难我们无法克服，但如果我们能够……的话，……。例句：Tobesure,theremaybedifficultieswecannotovercome,butifweworkhard,wecanfigureoutanotherwaytosolvetheproblem.确实，有些困难我们无法克服，但如果我们能够努力的话，我们就可以找到解决问题的另一种方法。5.Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthat...考虑到所有因素，我们得出结论，……例句：Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthatstudyhardisgoodtous.考虑到所有因素，我们得出结论好好学习对我们是有好处的。http://6.Insummary/conclusion/aword,...总之……例句：Insummary,weshouldstudyhard.总之，我们要好好学习。7.Asmentionedabove,...综上所述……例句：Asmentionedabove,livinginthesmalltownismorecomfortable.综上所述，居住在小城镇更加的舒适。8.Therefore,wehavenoreasontomakeafussaboutAllinall,...所以我们没有理由为……大惊小怪。总之，……例句：Therefore,wehavenoreasontomakeafussaboutartificialintelligence.Allinall,artificialintelligencewillbemoreandmorecommoninthefuture.所以我们没有理由为人工智能大惊小怪。总之，未来人工智能会越来越普遍。我们一起来看看读后续写真题（2023年浙江省高考英语真题）67.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鸟),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛网)andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(悬停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.DuringthecookoutItoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygoodbye.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________wasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappear