高考英语一轮复习基础过关练习专题28书面表达之读后续写必备句型与写作思路（二） (含解析)

专题28书面表达之读后续写必备句型与写作思路（二）知文体特点一、评分原则1.本题总分为25分，按七个档次进行评分。2.评分时，主要从内容、语言表达和篇章结构三个方面考查，具体为：（1）续写内容的质量、续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。（2）所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3.评分时，应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4.评分时还应注意:（1）词数少于120的，酌情扣分；（2）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受；（3）书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。二、各档次给分范围和要求第七档（22-25分） —创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高: —使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解: —自然有效地使用了段落间、句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。第六档（18-21分） —创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽度较高: —使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比较流畅，有个别错误，但不影响理解: —比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。第五档（15-17分） —创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关: —使用了比较恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达方式不够多样性，表达有些许错误，但基本不影响理解: —使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。第四档（11-14分） —创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原文情境基本相关: —使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有部分语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部分影响理解: —尚有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。第三档（6-10分） —内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节: —所用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多且比较低级，影响理解: —未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。第二档（1-5分） —内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节: —所使用的词汇非常有限，语法结构单调，错误极多，严重影响理解: —几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。第一档0分 —未作答:所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判:所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。三、高考评分解读 总体来看，读后续写以读为辅，以写为主，其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力。评分标准是评分的依据和绝对标准。 依据评分标准，读后续写主要考查内容创作和语言运用两个方面。评卷时，评卷老师先根据考生所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 阅卷老师在阅卷时，主要考虑以下内容： 1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度； 2.内容的丰富性； 3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性； 4.上下文的连贯性。应对技巧（1）精读文章，确定文章线索。 每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，例如什么人（who）什么时间(when)在什么地方(where)因为什么(why)做了什么事儿(what)，最后有了什么发展(how)。这样分析有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜”。（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求。 一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此短文续写的具体要求，如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示，这样考生能做到“心中有数”。（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路。 根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路，结合段首的提示语，最终确定续写段落的思路，同时结合文章划线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句。 在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中划线的关键词语拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性、语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。（5）标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语。 这一点可以帮助考生检查关键词语的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后在誊写文字时，务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。学必备句型和模板新高考英语读后续写21个场景描写万能句式汇总场景1表示“感到……情绪与情感”1.aflushof（表情绪的名词）=awaveof=afeeling/senseof一阵……2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame3.（表情绪的名词）floodedoversb.=sweptoversb.仿写：1)当他看着自己孩子的时候,一种强烈的自豪感涌上心头（十分自豪）。Aflushofpridesweptoverhimashewatchedhischildren./Hefeltaflushofprideashewatchedhischildren.2)我感到高兴极了。Awaveofhappinessfloodedoverme.3)他感到非常恐慌。Aflushofpanicspreadacrosshisface/cheeks./Aflushoffearflooded/sweptoverhim.场景2表示“（因为紧张、害怕）心跳”1.sb.couldfeelone’sheartpoundingwildlyinone’schest.(pounding/beating/racing)(wildly/loudly/hard)感到心在胸中砰砰直跳仿写：1)上台领奖时我感到心砰砰直跳。IcouldfeelmyheartpoundingasIwentonstagetocollecttheprize.2)我的心开始咚咚跳，嘴里发干。Myheartstartedtobeat,andmymouthwasdry.3)他打开信，心在咚咚跳着。Heunfoldedtheletter,hisheartracing场景3表示“流泪”1.Tearsblurredone’seyes./One’seyesgotmisty./One’seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.泪眼模糊2....beclosetotears几乎要哭了3.tears(rolldownone’seyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下仿写：1)当得知我被重点大学录取时，我妈差点儿就哭了。MymotherwasclosetotearswhensheheardIwasadmittedtoakeyuniversity.2)他站在一个角落里，泪流满面。Hestoodinacornerwithtearsrollingdownhisface.场景4表示“因……颤抖”tremble/shiver/shake(withfear,panicexcitement,rage...)仿写：1)她双唇颤抖着，泪珠顺着面颊滚落下来。Herlipsshiveredandbigtearsrolleddownhercheeks.2)他握紧拳头，气得发抖。Heclenchedhisfists,tremblingwithrage.3)他躺在那里很长时间，害怕得发抖。Helaythereforalongtime,shiveringwithfear.场景5表示“好像……”1.Itwaslikedoingsth.好像……2.Itseemedasif/that...好像……仿写：1)我似乎觉得所有的希望都破灭了。Itseemedtomethatallhopefaded/died.2)我们聊呀聊呀，就像遇到了久别的朋友一样。Wetalkedandtalked,anditwaslikemeetingalong-lostfriend.3)好像进入了另一个世界。Itwaslikeenteringanotherworld.4)我丢了工作，感觉我的世界崩溃了。Ilostmyjobanditwaslikemyworldcollapsed./Ilostmyjobanditseemedasiftheworldwasatanend.场景6表示“不知道做……”1.sb.didsth.,wonderingwhattodonext.2.sb.didsth.,notknowingwhattodonext.3.sb.didsth.,unsureofwhattodonext.4.sb.wasatalosswhattodo.手足无措5.sb.wasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.感到难以决定……仿写：1)他吃惊地站在那里，不知道接下来做什么。Hestoodthereinshock,unsurewhattodonext.2)老师突然出现，他不知所措。Theteachersuddenlyappeared,andhewasatalosswhattodo.场景7表示“某人想到/明白……；有了主意”1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtosb.that从句=Ithitsb.that从句=Itstrucksb.that从句=Itdawnedonsb.that从句2.(idea,thought...)occurred/cametosb.=...came/flashedintoone’smind=...crowdedinone’smind3.one’smindbegantorace头脑开始快速转动仿写：1)我突然意识到我并不需要这些东西来让自己快乐。ItsuddenlydawnedonmethatIdidn’treallyneedthesethingstobehappy.2)突然他想到一个好主意。Suddenlyabrilliantideaflashedintohismind.3)他的头脑开始快速转动，试图想出办法。Hismindbegantorace,tryingtothinkofawayout.4)我突然想到我没有锁门。ItstruckmethatIhadleftthedoorunlocked.场景8表示“直到……才意识到……”1.倒装句：Notuntil时间状语didsb.realize/noticethat从句2.强调句：Itwasonly时间状语thatsb.realizedthat从句仿写：1)直到那时他才意识到有什么不对劲。Notuntilthendidherealizethatsomethingwaswrong.Itwasonlythenthatherealizedthatsomethingwaswrong.2)他这才恍然大悟，他哥哥想为他买圣诞礼物。Notuntilthendidherealizethathiselderbrotherwantedtobuyapresentforhim.Itwasonlythenthatherealizedthathiselderbrotherwantedtobuyapresentforhim.3)直到那一刻，他才注意到包里什么也没留下。Notuntilatthatmomentdidhenoticethattherewasnothingleftinhisbag.4)直到那时她才感觉到她的肚子在咕咕叫。Itwasonlythenthatshefeltthatherstomachwasgrowling.场景9表示“迫不及待做……；毫不犹豫”1.sb.couldhardlywaittodosth.2.withoutasecondthought不假思索；毫不犹豫地3.withouteventhinking4.withoutdelay立即；毫不迟延地5.withouthesitation毫不犹豫仿写：1)他迫不及待地要赶回家将一切告诉他的父母。Hecouldhardlywaittogetbackhomeandtellhisparentseverything.2)水冰冷冰冷，可那个年轻人想也没想就跳了进去。Thewaterwasfreezingcold,butwithoutasecondthoughttheyoungmanjumpedin.3)她迫不及待地想见Colin，把早上的一切都告诉她。Shecouldn’twaittoseeColinandtoldeverythingabouthermorning.4)他毫不迟疑地迅速爬上树去摘树叶。Withoutdelay,heclimbedupthetreequicklytoreachfortheleaf.场景10表示“一……，就……”1.Upon(doing)sth.,…2.Themoment/instant从句,…3.Hardlyhadsb.done…,when…did…仿写：1)听了这个滑稽的故事，大家都哈哈大笑。Uponhearingthefunnystory,everybodyburstintolaughter.2)我一看见他,就知道他就是那个曾经帮我搬过箱子的警察。TheinstantIsawhim,Iknewhewasthepolicemanwhohadhelpedmecarrythebox.3)我刚走进房间就听见了巨大的声音。HardlyhadIenteredtheroomwhenIheardloudnoise.4)一听到“救命”的喊声，他冲出了房子。Uponhearingshoutsof“help”,hedashedoutofthehouse.场景11表示“发出……（声音）”1.Therewereloudshoutsandcheers(from…)when…从……传来喊叫与欢呼声。2.letoutacry/scream(ofhorror/fear/terror/shock/surprise/pain…)3.letoutahowl/growl/yell/sigh/yelp发出……的声音仿写：1)当他登上讲台时,现场传来了雷鸣般的掌声。Therewasastormofapplausewhenhewentontheplatform.Astormyapplausebrokeoutinthehallwhenhewentontheplatform.2)她看见他时吓得大叫一声。Whenshesawhim,sheletoutacryofhorror.场景12表示“转折”1.Butbadluckforsb.,…但是某人真不走运2.Toone’ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat从句3.…,butinvain4.…,butwithoutsuccess5.…,butnouse6.Butonsecondthoughts,…但是转而一想，……7.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.接下来发生的非常奇妙仿写：1)使我们高兴的是，结果所有的人都收到了礼物。Toourdelight,itturnedoutthateveryoneofusreceivedagift.2)Jack真不走运，他绊了一脚，摔在地上。ButbadluckforJack,hetrippedandfelltotheground3)她朋友想劝她和他一起回家可只是白费唇舌。Herfriendtriedtopersuadehertogobackhomewithhim,butinvain.场景13表示“心里想”1.Aninnervoicetoldsb.that从句内心的声音告诉某人……2.…thought/saidtooneself仿写：1)心里的声音告诉他，他所做的是错的。Aninnervoicetoldhimthatwhathehaddonewaswrong.2)当他回家时，他心里想道，“这会是谁呢？”“Whocoulditpossiblybe?”hethoughttohimselfashewalkedhome.场景14表示“时间”1.notlongafterthat,…=shortlyafterwards,…=beforelong,…=Itdidn’ttakelongbefore从句=Ittooksometimebefore从句不久,……2.foraninstant/moment一瞬间仿写：1)不久以后，我们到达一条流动的小溪边。Notlongafterthis,wereachedarunningstream.2)一时间，他站在那里一动不动，几乎不相信发生的事。Foraninstant,hestoodstill,hardlybelievingwhathadhappened.场景15表示“跑；冲；奔”1.dart/dash/rush/hurry2.runlikethewind飞奔仿写：他突然放开我以惊人的速度冲出了门。Hesuddenlyletgoofmeanddartedoutofthedoorwithsurprisingspeed.场景16表示“鼓起勇气”pluckup/take/gather/one’scourage(todo…)仿写：1)我终于鼓起勇气登上了舞台。Finally,Ipluckedenoughcouragetogoonstage.2)我鼓起勇气，径直向那个人走去。Gathering(up)mycourage,Iwalkedstraighttowardstheman.场景17表示“希望”1.hopingthat从句抱着一丝希望2.see/feelaglimmerofhope看到一丝希望3.tryinghardtodosth.仿写：1)她环视了一下大厅，希望Richard会在那里等她。Sheglancedaboutthehall,hopingthatRichardwouldbewaitingforher.2)我注视她，感到了一线希望。Ilookedatherandfeltaglimmerofhope.3)他转过身来，想忍住眼泪。Heturnedaround,tryingtofightbackhistears.场景18表示“感到欣慰，放下心来”1.…breathedasighofrelief/…sighedwithrelief松了一口气2.(Awaveof)relieffloodedthrough/washedoversb.4.toone’srelief,…使人欣慰的/放心的是仿写：1)飞机安全着陆，我顿时放下心来。Ibreathedasighofreliefastheplanelandedsafely.Awaveofrelieffloodedthroughmeastheplanelandedsafely.Tomyrelief,theplanelandedsafely.2)没有人受伤，我们都松了一口气。Noonewasinjured,andweallbreathedasighofrelief.场景19表示“还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中”1.One’swords(echoed/rangout)inone’sears.2.One’swords(voice/song)lingered/whisperedinone’smind/head.3.One’sheadwasstillfullof…仿写：1)老师鼓励的话还在她的耳边回响。Herteacher’sencouragingwordsstillechoedinherears.Herteacher’sencouragingvoicestilllingeredinherhead.2)我的脑子里仍然充满奇怪的想法与忧虑。Myheadwasstillfullofstrangethoughtsandworries.Strangethoughtsandworriescrowdedintomymind.场景20表示“经历与教训”1.Whata/an…lessonsb.taughtme(sb.learnedfromsb.)!(valuable/useful/great/painful)2.Whata/an…experiencesb.had!(enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuable)3.Downdeepinone’sheart,…在某人的内心深处，……仿写：1)格林先生教给我们多么宝贵的一课啊！我们会永远记得他的恩情。WhatavaluablelessonMr.Greentaughtus!Andwewillalwaysrememberhiskindnesstous.2)在他的内心深处，他知道他会永远记住格林先生给他上的多么宝贵的一课。Downdeepinhisheart,heknewhewouldrememberwhatavaluablelessonMr.Greentaughthim.ThevaluablelessonMr.Greentaughthimwillberootedinhismemoryforever.场景21对话模式1.“,”hesaid,doing…--say后接分词作状语1)“Ididn’tknowwhatIwasdoing,”shesaid,laughingatthememory.2)“I’llgetussomecoffee,”shesaid,headingforthekitchen.3)“That’snice,”Alexsaidquietly,focusingonhisplate.4)“Veryclever,”saidtheteacher,noddinghisheadasifpleased.5)“Uncle,forgiveme,Ididthatunintentionally,”hesaid,pointingtothebrokenglass.6)“Wedon’tdoanyharm,”saidtheboy,evidentlyfrightenedbymywords.2.“...,”hesaid,as/when/before/asif…--say后接时间状语从句1)“Watchout!”sheshouted,asthecarstartedtomove.2)“Whatabeauty!”saidthenurseasshecametothedoor.3.“,”hesaid,and(thenhe)did…--say后接and，先后动作或构成并列句1)“Goodmorning,children!”saidtheminister,andhekindlyshookhandswithboth.2)“Yes,Ithinkso,”hesaidreluctantly（无奈地）,andleftthestudy.3)“Comehere,”saidthelittleman,andtookhertooneofthecornersofthebuilding.4.“,”hesaid,“…”--say后接要说的另一句话1)“TherewasaletterfromPrinceAndrewtoday,”hesaidtoPrincessMary,“haven’tyoureadit?”2)“Well,well!”saidtheman,“aretherereallypeopleinthisroom?”3)“Sinceyoulovehimsowell,”saidtheking,“Iwilltellyousomething.”4)“Sheisaveryadmirableandexcellentyoungwoman,”saidshe,“andyoumustgoandcallonher.”5.…did…,did,andsaid,“…”--say前有并列关系的先后动作Hepaused,lookedstraightintohereyes,andsaidinaquietvoice,“that’strue.”6.“…,”saidtheman,who…--用定语从句补充说明说话的人1)“Idon’tknow,”saidZeb,whowasstillconfused.2)“Toyourhealth!”saidMr.White,whoalsoemptiedhisglass,andwipedhismouthwithhishandkerchief.7.“…,”hesaid+方式副词(-ly)或短语,--作状语修饰say1）“Ofcourse,”Nancyrepliedwithasmile.2）“I’msorry,”shesaidwithasigh.3）“Buttheydon’tunderstandourtalkatall,”saidthedancerwithapuzzledsmile.4）“Natasha,youloveme?”hesaidinasofttrustfulwhisper.5）“CometoyourPapaatonce,please!”saidshewithastrange,excitedlook.6）“IfonlyIhadknown…”shesaidthroughhertears.读后续写万能模板句型人物心理描写情绪类（一）表人物喜乐短语读后续写万能模板句型整理几乎无法掩饰他的兴奋的心情：canhardlyconcealhisexcitement感觉既兴奋又开心：feelamixtureofexcitementandhappiness被强烈地吸引：bepowerfullyattractedto心情愉快：incheerfulspirits满意的表情/一个令人鼓舞的表情出现在她的脸庞上:asatisfiedlook/anencouragingexpressionappearedonherface.对...感到满意：becontentwith对...很高兴：bedelightedat因...而高兴：bejoyfulover/about高兴地跳起来：dance/jumpforjoy流下幸福的泪水：tearsofhappinessflowingdown使某人心情愉快：brightensb’sheart使某人安心：setone’sheartatrest句子Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。Herfacelitupwithpleasure.（容光焕发）Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑声在房间里萦绕。Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我高兴得难以形容Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢着幸福。Iwasfloatingonair.我高兴得飘飘然。(二)表人物悲忧消沉强烈的失落感：astrongsenseofloss陷入绝望：fallintodespair哭泣释放苦闷情绪：cryinggivessomeemotionalrelease减轻某人的痛苦/烦恼：easesbofhispain/trouble因某人的死亡而痛心：breakone’sheartoverone’death悲痛欲绝：cryone’sheartout怀着沉重的/沮丧的/忧郁的心情：withaheavy/sinking/sorrowfulheart情绪低落：bedowninspirits垂头丧气：loseone’sspirit意志消沉：abrokenspirit句子Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.她掩面哭泣。Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼泪。/我的眼里充满了泪水。Afrown（皱眉）nowstoodonhisface.他皱起了眉头。Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.这些日子他情绪低落。（三）表人物怨怒引起某人的不快：arouseone’sdispleasure对某人的行为感到不满：bedispleasedatone’sconduct气得满脸通红：flamewithanger愁眉苦脸：haveaworriedlook对...表示不满：express/voiceacomplaintabout怒气冲冲地跑出房间：runoutoftheroominaburstofanger感到尴尬的：feelembarrassed感到困惑的：feelpuzzled/confused感到沮丧：feelfrustrated/depressed感到恼怒的：feelannoyed感到泄气的：feeldiscouraged句子Iwasseizedbyanger.我充满了愤怒。Hisangerboiledover.他的愤怒爆发了。Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他几乎控制不住怒火。Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。Hegavemealookofburninganger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他气得脸色阴沉。Hesighedwithdisappointment.他失望地叹了口气。（四）表人物害怕恐惧Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。/恐惧淹没了他。Sheshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。（五）表人物感动感激让我感动的是：Iwastouchedtofindthat…深受感动：Ithastouchedmedeeplyto…潸然泪下：bemovedtotears令人非常感动的是:Itisverymovingto…感动得热泪盈眶：feelmovedwithtearsinone'seyesToucheddeeply/immensely,we…被深深感动，我们……Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。Withtearsstreamingdownherface,she...泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，……2个万能情感句第一个情感万能句：Toone's+情绪名词，主句。Tomysurprise,TomwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContest.令我惊讶的是Tom居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。【正态度】amazement惊奇,delight高兴,joy高兴,satisfaction满足，excitement兴奋,【负态度】annoyance烦恼,disappointment失望,horror恐怖,shame,羞耻sorrow悲伤,【中性态度】puzzlement迷惑,regret后悔,relief欣慰,surprise/amazement惊讶第二个情感万能句：sb.feltagreatsenseof+情绪名词+wellingupinsb’sheartandsurgingthroughsb.表示“某人感到一股强烈的在内心升腾、奔涌。”举例：Sunny感到一股强烈的荣誉感，在她心中升腾，奔涌。Sunnyfeltagreatsenseofhonourwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.万能升华主旨句-成长型第一类：学习知识促“改变”It'snevertoolatetolearn.Eachindividualhastherighttoacceptmorechallengesandmakemoreattempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。【分析】individual这里表示“个人，个体”。makemoreattempts做更多尝试。第二类：发挥天赋促“改变Actually,everyindividualpossessestalent.Bebravewhenyoufinditandalsomakeefforts.Youcancreatemiraclesintheend.事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。【分析】possess拥有。createmiracles表示创造奇迹。第三类：追逐梦想促“改变”It'snevertoolatetogoforyourdream.Aslongasyougraspeveryopportunityandtakefulladvantageofit,youwillstandachancetorealizeyourdreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。Aslongaswedaretodreamanddon'tletdifficultiesgetinourway,anythingispossible.只要我们敢于梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能。【分析】takefulladvantageof充分利用，realizeyourdreams表示“实现梦想”第四类：克服困难促“改变”Thejourneytosuccessisnotsmooth.Itisfullofchallengesanddifficulties.Weshouldbebravetofacethem.Aslongaswedon’tgiveuphopeandmakeeveryefforttoovercomeallthedifficulties,wewillsurelyachieveourgoal(success)finally.通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标（成功）。【分析】smooth表示“平坦的”overcomeallthedifficulties表示“克服困难”；makeeveryeffort表示“做出努力”；aslongas，表示“只要”，引导条件状语从句。第五类：战胜恐惧促“改变”Determinationandoptimismarewhatittakestoconqueryourfearandaccomplishyourgoal.战胜恐惧和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。【分析】Determination表示“决心”；optimism表示“乐观”。conqueryourfear表示“克服你的恐惧”；accomplishyourgoal表示“完成目标”第六类：战胜自卑促“改变”IsmiledasIeventuallyrealizedtherealsourceofconfidence.Now,IamproudofwhatIlooklikeandmuchhappier,becauseIhaverealizeditisyourpersonalitythatdecideswhoyoutrulyare.我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲，而且更快乐，因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性。【分析】eventually表示“最后，终于”；personality表示“个性”。第七类：战胜消极促“改变”Attitudeismoreimportantthanfactsforus.Wecannotchangeourpast;wecannotchangethefact.However,theonlythingwecandoisholdapositiveattitude.态度对我们来说比事实更重要。我们不能改变我们的过去；我们不能改变事实。然而，我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。【分析】Attitude表示“态度”；positiveattitude.就是“积极的态度”。万能升华主旨句-助人型一、助人为乐1.Sometimes，asmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifference.有时候一个小小的善行可能足以带来巨大的变化。2.Sometimessmallgestureofcarewillpossiblymeltpeople’sloneliness.有时候一个表达关爱的小小举动也可能融化人们内心的孤单。3.Smilesspreadontheirfaceswhilethepeoplepresentburstoutthunderousapplause.微笑在他们的脸上绽开，在场的人发出雷鸣般的掌声。4.Helpingotherstorealizetheirdreamsgavememorepleasure.帮助别人实现他们的梦想让我感觉更快乐。5.ThenhedrovethecarawaywithoutevensharinghisnameandIhavenotseenhimagain.然后他把车开走了，甚至没有说出他的名字，我再也没有见过他。6.Thiskindacthasalastinginfluenceonme.Ialwaysgiveothersahelpinghandifpossibleevensomanyyearslater.这种善意的行为对我产生了持久的影响。即使多年以后，我总是尽可能地帮助别人。二、亲情、友情、师生情1.Shefeltwarmthinthecoldday，andbelievedtherewaskindnessineverycorner.她在寒冷的天气里感到了温暖，相信每个角落都有善意。2.Withoutfriends，theworldwouldbecomewilder.没有朋友，世界变成一片荒芜。3.Healthismorethanjustyourphysicalwell-being.Youneedtohaveemotionalneedsmetandthatmeansmaintainingfamilyandfriendrelationships.健康不仅仅是身体健康。你需要满足情感需求，这意味着维系亲情和友情。4.He’slookingforloveandhe’slookingforfamily:he’slookingtobeacceptedandhe’slookingforwardtobeingembracedbyhisfather.他一直在寻找爱，寻找家庭；他渴望被接受，他期待能得到父亲的拥抱。5.Ifyoutakeyourfriendsforgranted，youmaynothavefriendsforverylong.如果你把朋友视为理所当然，那你也许不会有长久的友情。6.Iwasfortunateinhavingagoodteacher.我很幸运，有位好老师。7.Honestly，Ihavefallendeeplyinlovewithteachingandgettingalongwithteenagers.说实话，我已经深深地爱上了教书以及和青少年相处。8.Afterthat，ourrelationshipbecamecloserandIwasmorelikeafriendthanateachertothem.从那以后，我们的关系变得更亲密，我对他们更像是朋友而不是老师。三、励志1.Theworldmakeswayforthedreamer.世界总会给有梦想的人开路。2.Eachmanisthearchitectofhisownfate每个人都是自己命运的建筑师。3.Lifeisfullofsmilesandtears.生命是充满欢笑和泪水的。4.Heknewnosuchwordasfailure.他不知道有失败这样的字眼。5.Heknewifhehadhadlittlemorepatiencehewouldhavesucceededearlier.他知道如果他再耐心一点，他早就成功了。6.Hewasdelightedthatithelpedhimrealizeonerequiresmorepatienceinanytaskbeingaccomplished.他很高兴，这帮助他认识到一个人在完成任何任务时都需要更多的耐心。7.Aslongasyouhaveadream，justgoforitandnevergiveitupeasily.Yourdreammightnotcometrueinoneortwodaysbutitwillsomeday.只要你有梦想，就去追求，不要轻易放弃。你的梦想可能不会在一两天内实现，但总有一天会实现的。四、人生哲理1.Itisnevertoolatetolearn.活到老，学到老。2.Constantdroppingwearsthestone.滴水穿石。3.Fromsmallbeginningscomegreatthings.伟大始于渺小。4.Neverjudgepeoplebytheirappearance.永远不要以貌取人。5.Greatthingsaredonebyseriesofsmallthingsbroughttogether.每件大事都是由一系列小事组成的。6.Weshouldenjoyeverymomentandneverescapechallenges.我们应该享受每一刻，永远不要逃避挑战。7.Youreluckyenoughtobedifferent，neverchange.你很幸运能和别人不一样，不要改变。8.Eachindividualhastherighttoacceptmorechallengesandmakemoreattempts.每个人都有权利接受更多的挑战，做出更多的尝试。9.DeterminationandoptimismarewhatittakestoconqueryourfearandaccomplishYourgoal.决心和乐观是征服你的恐惧和实现你的目标所需要的。10.Don’ttakepeople’sconcernforgranted.Nomatterhowmuchtheyloveyou,peoplegettiredeventually.不要把别人的关心当成理所当然。不管他们有多爱你，最终也会有疲惫的一天。考点练透【模拟过关】Passage1（2022·辽宁·建平县实验中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Here’sthestoryofmygrowthoverthepastyear.It’sastoryofhowIfoundthestrengthtochangemyselfforbetterandthenhowIgetridofmyfearstobeevenbetter.Ifanyoneisinspiredbythis,that’swonderful.I’dbeenstuckasthisincrediblyinsecure,under-confidentandjustscaredindividualforyearsandyears.SincechildhoodI’dbeenstucklikethis.KidsImetforthefirsttimelookedatmerudelyandunkindly.Evenmyfriends—actually,IhadveryfewfriendsbecauseIjustfelttooashamedandfrightenedtomakesome,thoughIwaseagertoandfeltextremelylonelyinthedepthofmyheart—laughedatmeandgavemebadnicknames.Ifeltterrible,butI’djustresignedtoalifewhereI’dbeafraidofeverythingandbethis“introvert”(内向的人)orwhatever.IthoughtIwouldneverbeabletochange,never,formywholelife.Butthenitallstartedchanging.Somethingclicked.Isuddenlydeterminedtogoonadiet,andlostsomeweight.Itwastough.Ifelthungryallthetime.Iwasalwaystemptedbythesmellofbreadandhamburger,evenwhenIdidn’tseethem.ButthetoughestthingwasthatevenifIhadjusthadmymeals,Ifelthungermentally.However,Iheldon.Inoveraperiodof6monthsIfinallymanagedtosticktooneofmydiets.Ididn’tknowhow.ButIdidmakeit.Thelossof90lbsbroughtmefromoverweightstraightdowntounderweight.Thisisn’tthebestpart.Moreimportantlyandinspiringly,Isuddenlyfoundstrengthinme.IrealizedIcouldbetotallydifferent.Andmaybe,IcouldevenbewhateverIwantedtobe.ThistaughtmethatIcouldchangemyself.ThenIwondered,perhaps,Icouldalsogetridofthoseofmyfears,justlikeIsucceededinlosingmyextrapounds.Itmightnotbeeasy,butitmightnotbethatdifficult.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Chancepresenteditselfsoon._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ItwasfromthatpointonthatIstartedchangingrapidly._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Chancepresenteditselfsoon.Onesingletime,Iheardaboutapublicspeakingthinggoingonatmyuniversity,andforthefirsttime,Iactuallymanagedtobuildupthecouragetogothere.Itwasliberating.ForthefirsttimeIwasabletosharemystory,andabletodoitinfrontofdozensofpeoplepotentiallyjudgingme,andsuddenlyalltherandomfearsaboutspeakingpubliclystarteddisappearing.ThistaughtmeIcouldgetridofmyfears.ItwasfromthatpointonthatIstartedchangingrapidly.UsingthefactthatIcouldchange,andthatIcouldgetridofmyfears,Istartedworkingonthemonebyone.Myfearofgreetingstrangers,myfearoftalkingtostrangers,myfearofaskingsimplequestionsIshould‘alreadyknow’,myfearofhangingoutwithpeople,myfearofnotknowingthings,myfearofmakingnewfriends,classmatesandteachers,myfearofbeingmyself,allofwhichhelpmakemeabetterone.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在成长的过程中如何找到力量去改变自己——减轻体重和克服恐惧使自己变得更好的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“机会很快就出现了。”可知，第一段可描写作者利用公开演讲如何摆脱内心恐惧的经过。②由第二段首句内容“从那时起，我就开始迅速地改变了。”可知，第二段可描写作者在成功减重和摆脱恐惧之后，很快地进行了其他方面的自身改变。2.续写线索：公开演讲——摆脱恐惧——其他改变——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①消失：disappear/vanish②摆脱：getridof/extricateoneselffrom③开始：start/begin情绪类害怕：fear/dread【点睛】[高分句型1].UsingthefactthatIcouldchange,andthatIcouldgetridofmyfears,Istartedworkingonthemonebyone.(由第一个that引导的定语从句和第二个that引导的同位语从句，现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]Myfearofgreetingstrangers,myfearoftalkingtostrangers,myfearofaskingsimplequestionsIshould‘alreadyknow’,myfearofhangingoutwithpeople,myfearofnotknowingthings,myfearofmakingnewfriends,classmatesandteachers,myfearofbeingmyself,allofwhichhelpmakemeabetterone.(“代词+of+which”结构的非限制性定语从句)Passage2（2022·辽宁·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Oneofmymostmemorabletripstookplaceduringthesummervacationaboutthreeyearsago,whenmysister,myauntandItookatriptoSpainbecauseweweremoving.Onthedayofthetrip,IlayinbedthinkingaboutmyfriendswhomIwasgoingtoleavebehindandthoughtswerefloodingin.Whenwearrivedatthehirestation,weseemedtohavesomeproblemswithourluggagebecauseitwastoomuchforataxi,sowehadtobookavan(厢式送货车)totakeourluggagetotheairport.Wewaitedforalongperiodtofindaperfectvanthatwouldfitourluggage.Beforeleaving,IfeltverybadbecauseIwasgoingtoadifferentcountryandwasgoingtomissallmyfriendsandfamily.Iwasnotcomfortableandcried.Thejourneywasalmostperfectatthebeginning,butsoonitbegantorain.Becauseoftherain,thedriverscouldnotseefaraway,whichcausedahugetrafficjam.IwassittingbythewindowwithacanofCokethatIhadboughtinthestoreearlier.Myauntandsisterfellasleep,andduringthistime.Ifeltboredandthoughtaboutotherthingsthatbotheredme.Myeyesturnedtothemountaininfrontofus.Abussuddenlyappearedinthepicture.Itwasveryclosetous.Carsspedpastuswithoutanyspeedlimit.Besidemewasaverydeeplake:Iwonderedtomyselfwhatifsomethingorsomeonefellinsideit.Suddenly,abusinfrontofourvanstopped,andbecauseitwasrainingheavilyandthevanwasgoingfast,noonecouldseewhatwasgoingtohappen.Then,bang,webumpedintoeachother.Ourvanoverturned,butluckily,itdidn’tfallintothelake.Peoplecametohelpusgetoutofthevanbecausewewereblockedandthedriverwashalf-dead.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Westruggledtogetoutofthevanandeverythingwe