英语写作指导-如何用英语写游记

英语写作指导-如何用英语写游记【写作任务】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友John得知你上周乘坐京沪高铁去上海旅游，发来邮件问你旅游情况。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，介绍你一路上的所见所闻及你的感受。注意：词数120左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。参考词汇：京沪高铁

Beijing-Shanghaihigh-speedtrainDearJohn,I'mgladtohearfromyouandI'dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyvisittoShanghai._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,LiHua【写作指导】一、审题定调本写作任务要求以电子邮件的形式写一篇游记。游记是日记的一种，是描写游览中的所见所闻和表达自己思想感情的一种文体，属于记叙文。写游记时，一般要交代清楚游览的时间、地点、所乘交通工具、在每个景点的活动等，并且要适度地抒发自己的情感或发表自己的看法。游记类文章的时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。二、谋篇布局本写作任务可分为三部分：第一部分：简述旅行概况；第二部分：描述旅行中的所见所闻；第三部分：表达对此次旅行的感受。三、组织语言第一部分：简述旅行概况。普通表达 高级表达IvisitedShanghaiwith...byBeijing-Shanghaihigh-speedtrainlastweek. I,togetherwith...,paidavisitto

ShanghaibyBeijing-Shanghaihigh-speedtrainlastweek.第二部分：描述旅行中的所见所闻。普通表达 高级表达Wegotonthetrainin...andpassedthrough...alongtheway.Assoonasthetrainleft...,wesaw...,whichwerecoveredwith...Thentherewere...coveredwith...asfarastheeyecouldsee.AfterwereachedthebigmoderncityofShanghai,weweredeeplyattractedby...Therewere...everywhereandallkindsofcarspassingby.Wevisited...,suchas...,...and...andthenwewenthome. From...,wecaughtthetrainboundforShanghaianditpassedthrough...alongtheway.Nosoonerhadweleft...thanweweregreetedby...coveredwith...Afterthat,asfarastheeyecouldsee,...coveredwith...cameintoview.Onourarrivalinthedestination,Shanghai,its...almosttookourbreathawaywereeverywhereandavarietyofluxurycarspassedbyus.Aftervisiting...,suchas...,...and...,wereturnedhome.第三部分：表达对此次旅行的感受。普通表达 高级表达Whatawonderfuljourneyitwas!AlthoughIwastired,IfeltveryhappyandIwillneverforgetthisexperience. ExhaustedasIwasfromthejourney,Idefinitelyhadfun.Thejourneynotonly...,butalso...【范文展示】[普通范文]DearJohn,I'mgladtohearfromyouandI'dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyvisittoShanghai.

IvisitedShanghaiwithmyparentsbyBeijing-Shanghaihigh-speedtrainlastweek.WegotonthetraininJinanandpassedthroughmuchdifferentsceneryalongtheway.AssoonasthetrainleftJinan,wesawaseriesofmountains,whichwerecoveredwiththickforests.Thentherewerewideplainscoveredwithcropsasfarastheeyecouldsee.AfterwereachedthebigmoderncityofShanghai,weweredeeplyattractedbyitsappearance.Therewerehigh-risebuildingseverywhereandallkindsofcarspassingby.Wevisitedmanyinterestingplaces,suchastheOrientalPearlTower,theBundandDisneylandandthenwewenthome.Whatawonderfuljourneyitwas!AlthoughIwastired,IfeltveryhappyandIwillneverforgetthisexperience.

Yours,LiHua[高级范文]DearJohn,I'mgladtohearfromyouandI'dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyvisittoShanghai.

I,togetherwithmyparents,paidavisittoShanghaibyBeijing-Shanghaihigh-speedtrainlastweek.FromJinan,wecaughtthetrainboundforShanghaianditpassedthroughmanydifferentlandscapesalongtheway.NosoonerhadweleftJinanthanweweregreetedbymountainrangescoveredwiththickforests.Afterthat,asfarastheeyecouldsee,vastplainscoveredwithallkindsofcropscameintoview.Onourarrivalinthedestination,Shanghai,itsprosperityalmosttookourbreathaway.Skyscraperswereeverywhereandavarietyofluxurycarspassedbyus.Aftervisitingsomeinterestingplaces,suchastheOrientalPe