【课件】Unit+1+Reading+for+Writing+课件人教版（2019）选择性必修第一册

ReadingforWritingWriteaLetterofAdvicePeriod6Analysetheproblemsteenagersmayfaceinthelifeandstudyandgiveadviceproperly.Bytheendofthisperiod,youwillbeabletoUnderstandthebasicformat,structureandlanguagefeaturesoftheletterofadvice.

Completealetterofadvicetocopewithteenager'sproblems.Setupagoodattitudetothedifficultiesandsetbacksinstudyandlife.Objectives:12345Step1.Lead-inFreetalk:1.Asateenager,whatproblemsdoyouhaveinyourdailylife?problemshighexpectationsfromparentsandteachersfeelinglonelyandisolatedbeingaddictedtomobilegamesgenerationgapwithparentsgreatpressurefromheavyschoolworkpuppyloveconflictsbetweenfriends/classmatesStep1.Lead-in2.Facingtheseproblems,howdoyouusuallydealwiththem?solutionsturntotrustworthyfriendsforhelpcommunicatesincerelywiththepersonconcernedaskforhelponsocialmediaringhelphotlineswritealettertoaprofessionaladviserStep2.Pre-writingSkimthetext1.WhatisWorriedFriend'sproblem?DiscussionReading2.Whatsuggestions

doesSusanLuogivetoWorriedFriend?3.Besidessuggestions,whatelse

doesSusanLuosayinherletter?SheunderstandsWorriedFriend'sfeelingandtalksaboutthenegativeeffectsofcomputeraddiction.Thinking1.DoyouthinkSusanLuo'sadviceisuseful?Whyorwhynot?Perhapstheadviceisuseful,becauseitisalwaysgoodtotalktoafriendabouthisorherproblemsandofferadvice.2.Whatotherkindsofadvice

wouldyougive?IwouldtellChenLeithatheshouldspendhistimemoreproductivelywithaneyeonhisfuture.Forexample,insteadofplayingcomputergames,hecouldlearncomputerprogramming.Whoknows?Hemightbecomeagreatfigureinthatfieldwhenhe'solder.Organization1.Findouttheorganizationoftheletter.DateGreetingBodyCloseSignatureBritishEnglish:day,month,yearAmericanEnglish:month,day,year2.Findandmarkthepartsoftheletterthatmatchthefollowingpoints.A.Iknowwhattheproblemis.B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.Thisismyadviceandreason.D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.GoodluckBestwishesforyouLookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyLanguagefeatures1.WhatexpressionsdoesSusanLuousedtomakesuggestions?Circlethemintheletter.2.Canyouthinkofmoreexpressionsofmakingsuggestions?a.Whydon'tyou...b.Itcouldbebetterifyoucould...c.Ithinkitcouldbebeneficialifyou...d.I'dliketoproposethatyoushould...e.It'srecommended/advisabletodo...f.Youmayconsiderdoing...g.Frommypointofview,itwouldbewise/reasonable/agoodideatodo...h.Youmay/mightaswelldo...Step3.While-writingGroupdiscussionChooseoneofthethreesituationsanddiscusshis/herproblem.Listpossiblesuggestionsandreasons.___________

Dear_______,Youwrotethat___________.Iunderstandthat_________.Ithink___________________because__________________.I'msurethat______________.Bestwishes,__________DraftyourletterWritethedateandgreetthereader1.Showthereaderthatyouknowwhattheproblemis.2.Tellthereaderthatyouunderstandhowhe/shefeels.3.Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkhe/sheshoulddo.4.Explainyourreason(s).5.Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkwillhappen.Closeandsigntheletter建议信写作标准信：具体内容信息点无一遗漏，写信的目的，理解安

慰并提出建议达：语气真诚友善，给出的建议充分合理雅：高大上的词汇的使用，复句的设计，语篇

的衔接和连贯(注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。)Atthebeginning,youcanwrite...EXPRESSIONe7d195523061f1c03a90ee8e42cb24248e56383cd534985688F9F494128731F165EE95AB4B0C0A38076AAEA07667B1565C446FC45FF01DFB0E885BCDBDF3A284F3DB14DA61DD97F0BAB2E6C668FB4931DED5FAA0CB712CCE3A8845E13BB5882E1352BF22D26D5F889C90B42F014C0DB8B9700B82FD7A626842B96845E6A0164C1A1A1CC5D02DFC6CIamgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...I’msorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroublein...

Thanksfortrustingme.It’smypleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions/advice.I

feelsorryaboutyoursufferingatthemoment./CreateDesignSystems\Bodye7d195523061f1c03a90ee8e42cb24248e56383cd534985688F9F494128731F165EE95AB4B0C0A38076AAEA07667B1565C446FC45FF01DFB0E885BCDBDF3A284F3DB14DA61DD97F0BAB2E6C668FB4931DED5FAA0CB712CCE3A8845E13BB5882E1352BF22D26D5F889C90B42F014C0DB8B9700B82FD7A626842B96845E6A0164C1A1A1CC5D02DFC6Csuggestionsandreasons♠Thefollowingaremysuggestions./Mysuggestionsareasfollows.♠Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...♠Iwouldliketosuggestthat...♠IfIwereyou,Iwould...话题句式1.Firstly,Besides,inaddition.2.Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly/Finally.3.First,Then,Finally.4.Firstofall,What’more,lastbutnotleast.Intheend,youcanwrite...-Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.-Ihopeyouwouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration.-I'mconvincedthatyouwillmakeit!-Ihopemyadvicecanmakeabigdifference.AndI'mlookingforwardtohearingyourgoodnews.e7d195523061f1c03a90ee8e42cb24248e56383cd534985688F9F494128731F165EE95AB4B0C0A38076AAEA07667B1565C446FC45FF01DFB0E885BCDBDF3A284F3DB14DA61DD97F0BAB2E6C668FB4931DED5FAA0CB712CCE3A8845E13BB5882E1352BF22D26D5F889C90B42F014C0DB8B9700B82FD7A626842B96845E6A0164C1A1A1CC5D02DFC6CNameSuggestionReasonEric

•Trylisteningtoyourparents.•Invitethemoutforsomethingtoeat.•Thattheyaren’tlisteningtoyouisperhapsbecauseyoudon’tlistentothem.•Thiswillgiveyouachancetospeaktothemwithoutdistractions（不分心地；专心致志地）NameSuggestionReasonXuTing

•Joinavolunteergroup.•Connectwithyourparentsonline.•Thiswillgiveyouachancetobearoundotherpeople，andhelpyourealisethatotherpeoplehaveproblems，too.•Justbecausetheyarefaraway，itdoesn’tmeanthatyoucan’ttalktothem.

NameSuggestionReasonMinHo

•Askamutualfriend（一个共同的朋友）tointroduceyoutoher.•Findchancestogettogetheringroupswheresheisagroupmember.•Yourfriendwillbeabletohelpyoubreaktheice（破冰，打破沉默，打破僵局）withherandprovideencouragementtoyou.•Ifyouareinagroup，ittakesallthepressureoff（消除所有压力），andyoucaninteractwithherinarelaxingsetting.

Step4.Post-writingExchangedraftsUsethechecklisttogivefeedbackonyour

partner'sdraft.Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganisedingoodorder?Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?Doesthewriterusecommasandstopscorrectly?Isthehandwritingeasytoread?Reviseandsharethedraft15April2021DearEric,Youwrotethatyourparentswon’tlistenwhenyoutellthemthings.Iquitewellunderstandyoufeelupsetandfrustrated.Actually,youarenotalone,sincegenerationgapissomethingthatmustbeexperiencedasateenager.Irecommendthatyoushouldtalktoyourparentsaboutyourfeelingsfacetoface.Maybeyourparentshaveneverrealizedthattheirbehaviourmisledyoutofeelignored.Inaddition,itwillbeofgreathelptoshareyourthoughtswithyourbestfriends,whoareofyourageandsuretogiveyouvaluablesuggestions.Finally,dorememberthatwhatevertheydoisforthebenefitofyou.Wheneveramisunderstandingoccurs,pleasedowhateveryoucantogetitsolvedinnotime.Iamsurethatyourparentswilllistentoyouandyoucanfindwaystogapthegeneration.Bestwishes.possibleversionDearXuTing,Youwrotethatyoualwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecauseyourparentsworkinanothercity.Iunderstandquitewellwhatyouaregoingthrough.However,thereasonwhyyouparentsdon’tstaywithyouathomeisthattheywanttoprovideyouwithabetterfuture.Irecommendthatyoushouldgiveyourparentsacallonaregularbasis.Notonlycanyoukeeptheminformedofyourupdates,butgetaknowledgeofhoweverythingisgoingwiththem.Inaddition,trytoadaptyourselftothenewschoolbymakingfriendswithyourclassmates.Youcanshareyoursorrowandhappinesswiththemandtakepartinasmanyactivitiesaspossibletogether.Lastbutnotleast,haveyourfullattentionfocusedonstudy.Onlyinthiswaycanyouliveuptoyourparents’devotionandexpectations.Aslongasmysuggestionscanbetaken,itwon’tbealongtimebeforeyougetyourtroublesettled.Allthebest,possibleversionDearMinHo,Youwroteyoulikeagirlinyourclassbutyouaretooshytotalktoher.Iundersta