读后续写哲理故事类为防强盗把钱埋在地下课件高考英语一轮复习

高考英语读后续写语篇练习哲理故事——为防强盗，把钱埋在地下1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文NoMore,NoLessManyyearsago,inthesmallPolishtownofPińczów,therelivedatradernamedLeib.Heworkedhard,buttimeswerebad.Hecouldn’taffordtobuyanypresentsforhisfamily.Sometimeshecouldn’tevenbuyfood.Oneday,LeibmadeanimportantdecisiontoleavehomeforthebigcityofKraków.Maybehecouldearnmoremoneythere.InKraków,Leibpouredallofhisenergyintohiswork.Aftertwelvemonths,heearnedsixhundredzlotys.Buthemissedhisfamilysomuchthathedecidedtogohome.Onhiswayhome,LeibstoppedinthetownofRozka.Fearingrobbers,hedecidedtoburyhismoneybeforegoingtothehoteltorest.Nearaseeminglydesertedhouse,hedugaholeandburiedhismoney.Butthehousewasnotdeserted.Theoldmanowningitwaswatchingthroughhiswindow.WhenLeibleft,hedugupthemoney.4续写原文Nextmorning,whenLeibfoundhismoneygone,hecriedbitterly.Lookingaround,henoticedthenearbyhouse.“Whoeverlivesinthathousemusthaveseenmeburythemoney,”Leibthought.“ButifIaccusehimofstealingit,hewillcallmealiar.”Thinkingforawhile,Leibknockedonthedoor.Hesaidtotheoldman,“I’mastrangerhereandneedadvice.Iheardyou’rethewisestmanhere.Willyouhelpme?”Theoldmanwasoverjoyed,saying“TellmewhatIcandoforyou”.“Fearingrobbers,Iburiedmymoney—sixhundredzlotys—inasecretplacelastnight,”Leibsaid.“NowIhavereceivedonethousandzlotys.ShouldIburyitinthesameplaceorinanotherforthegreatestsafety?”Theoldmansmiled,“Sinceyouareastrangerhere,Iadviseyouhaveallyourmoneyinthesameplace.”“Thankyouforyouradvice,”saidLeib.“Iwilldoasyousuggest.”5段首句Para1：AssoonasLeibwasoutofsight,theoldmantookoutthemoneyhehadstolen.Para2：Whendarknessfell,Leibwenttothehidingplaceandfoundallhisstolenmoney.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个叫Leib的商人赚了一笔钱，由于害怕强盗，他决定先把钱埋起来，然后再去旅馆休息，结果被一个老人挖走了。于是Leib想了一个聪明的办法，最终找回了自己所有的钱。9续写思路分析Para1:AssoonasLeibwasoutofsight,theoldmantookoutthemoneyhehadstolen.由第一段首句内容“Leib一离开视线，老人就拿出偷来的钱。”可知，第一段可描写老人内心的想法以及老人埋钱。10续写思路分析Para2：Whendarknessfell,Leibwenttothehidingplaceandfoundallhisstolenmoney.由第二段首句内容“天黑的时候，Leib来到藏钱的地方，找到了他所有被偷的钱。”可知，第二段可描写Leib拿到钱后回家的事情。11续写思路分析续写线索老人拿出偷来的钱——老人把钱埋起来——Leib找到了他所有被偷的钱——Leib回家——Leib满足12续写素材可用词汇：行为类看不见：beoutofsight/disappear赶往：hurryto/rushto购买：buy/purchase情绪类愚蠢：foolish/stupid积极：positiveattitude/actpositively13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Ifthefoolishmandoesn'tfindhismoneywherehehidit,he'llnotburyhisonethousandzlotysthere(运用了if引导条件状语从句)[高分句型2]Thatisexactlywhathedeservednomore,noless.(运用了what引导表语从句)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现AssoonasLeibwasoutofsight,theoldmantookoutthemoneyhehadstolen.“Ifthefoolishmandoesn'tfindhismoneywherehehidit,he'llnotburyhisonethousandzlotysthere,”thegreedymanthought.However,ifhefindshismoneywhereheleftit,hewillthinkitsafetoburythemoneyinthesameplace,andIwillgetallhismoney.Extremelysatisfiedwithhistrick,hehurriedtowherehe'ddugupthemoney,putthemoneyawayandcoveredtheholejustasitwas,dreamingtoreapwithoutsowing.16范文呈现Whendarknessfell,Leibwenttothehidingplaceandfoundallhisstolenmoney.“Theoldmanthoughthewouldgetmore,andnowhehasnothing,”Leibflashedabigsmileandthencontinuedhisjourneyhome.Onhisway,heboughtpresentsforhisfamily.Inafewhours'time,hewassittingcozilyathome.Hischildrenplayedwithnewtoyshappilyandhiswifelookedlovelierinhernewdress.Leibleanedbackinhischairandclosedhiseyes,withacontentedsmile.Thatisexactlywhathedeservednomore,noless.17范文译文莱布一离开视线，老人就把偷来的钱拿了出来。贪婪的人想：“如果这个愚蠢的人没有在他藏钱的地方找到他的钱，他就不会把他的一千兹罗提埋在那里。”。然而，如果他把钱放在原处，他会认为把钱埋在同一个地方是安全的，我会得到他所有的钱。他对自己的把戏非常满意，赶紧去挖钱的地方，把钱收起来，把洞盖好，梦想着不劳而获。18范文译文夜幕降临时，莱布来到藏匿处，找到了他所有的赃款。“老人以为他会得到更多，但现在他一无所