英语 必修一Unit 1 建议信

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必修一Unit1FriendshipWriting如何写建议信howtowritelettersofadvice如何写建议信howtowritelettersofadvice写作三步曲说明写信目的→提出建议以及改进措施，忠告→表达希望采纳建议，或者期盼回复。

注意！语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。在提出缺点之前，最好先肯定其优点。建议信三段式：第一段：点明主题第二段：陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由

（是什么，为什么，怎么样）第三段：总结全文，表明希望适当运用模板DearLiHua,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaid+你碰到的问题.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.

Firstly,____________,because________.Secondly,youshould________________,because_________.Thirdly,you’dbetter___________________.Onlyinthiswaycanyou__________.What’smore,_____.

Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.

Bestwishes.Yours,xxx

建议信重点第二段：⑴说明建议的内容；（是什么）⑵提出具体建议的原因；（为什么）⑶指出采纳建议的益处。（怎么样）注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。Openingsentences开头句Iamverygladtohearfromyou.Thankyouforyourletter.3.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.4.Iamwritinginreplyto…5.Iamsorrytohearthat…表示建议的句子Youshould/must…Don’t…What/Howabouttryinganewmethod?Whynotfindanewway?You’dbetterchangeyourformerplan.I’dliketosuggestyoumakeanewplan.IfIwereyou,Iwould…I’dliketosuggest…Istronglyrecommend…Youmightaswell…学会用notonly…butalso…表示并列含义亲爱的朋友们，去参加课外活动吧，这不但会使你的校园生活变得丰富多彩，还会改善你的学习。Dearfriends,pleasetakepartinafter-classactivities,whichwillnotonlymakeyourschoollikecolorful,butalsoimproveyourlearning.Closingsentences结束语Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestions/advicehelpful/useful.2.Atlast,IhopeIwillbeyourbestfriend’sforever!Goodlucktoyou!3.Let’skeepintouch.Idohopetoheargoodnewsfromyou.ReadXiaoDong’sletteronpage7andanswer:WhatisXiaoDong’sproblem?Readtheinstructionsatthetopofpage7andfindoutwhatyouarerequiredtodo.He’snotgoodatcommunicatingwithpeople.Hefindsithardtomakefriendswithhisclassmates.ILeadinToaskpeopletheirlikesanddislikesTojoinindiscussionsToshowinterestinothers’ideasTosharehisfeelingswithothersIIBrainstormingYouradviceforXiaoDongHowtowritealetterofadviceStepWhatshouldbewrittenPartIPartIIPartIIIPresentingtheproblemProposingthesolutionConclusionDearXiaodong,I’msorryyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou:First,

whynot…?

Ifyoudothis,…Secondly,

youshould/can…Then/Thatway,…Thirdly,

itwouldbeagoodideaif…Bydoingthis,…Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,MissWangOutlining建议信重点第二段：⑴说明建议的内容；（是什么）⑵提出具体建议的原因；（为什么）⑶指出采纳建议的益处。（怎么样）注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。

Firstly,whynotgoandtalktopeoplestandingalone.Iagreethatthisisdifficultbutthatstudentmaybelonelytoo,Ifyoudothis,I’msureyouwillsoonhavenewfriends.Secondly,youshouldbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes,Thatway,youwillsoonfindpeoplewiththesameinterests,becausethatisagoodwaytofindnewfriends.Thirdly,itwouldbeagoosideaifyoutrytojoininadiscussion.Youmayfeelthatisright.Bydoingthis,youarelettingpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.Sothereshouldbenoproblem.Itshouldprovideyouwithsomenewfriends.

即时训练你是我们学校一名很热心的学生，得知我们校要建设娱乐休闲中心，正在征求同学们的意见，请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建议信。

1.娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。

2.最好在学生的课余时间开放。

3.尽量不要收费。

4.……写作分析：第一段：引出话题，得知要建娱乐中心，想提建议。第二段：建议建乒乓球室和羽毛球场。第三段：建议课余时间开放，能使其得到充分利用。第四段：免费开放，有些学生经济困难。第五段：简单总结。DearMr.President,

It’scometomyattentionthatourschoolisgoingtobuildanewleisurecenter.I’mwritingtoaskyoutoconsiderthefollowingsuggestions.

Firstly,I’dliketosuggestthatthereshouldbeatable-tennisroomaswellasabadmintoncourt.Ithinkitwoulddogreatgoodifyoucouldbuildthecenterwithaneyetothosestudentswhoareinterestedinplayingtable-tennisorbadminton.

Secondly,couldthecenteropeninoursparetime?Ifso,wewillhaveenoughtimetomakefulluseofit.

Thirdly,wewillbemorethanhappyifthecenterisfree.Asweallknow,noteverystudentcanaffordtheextraexpense.

Thankyouforreadingmyletter.Ihopeyouwillconsidermysuggestions.Ifthecenterisbuilt,itwillgreatlyenhancestudentlifehereoncampus.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua范文建议信模版Dear___________,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto(关于)_______,andIwilltrytomakesomeconductive(建设性的)suggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_________________(建议的内容).Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouforfurtherdetails.GoodLuckwithyour______________(祝愿)Yourssincerely签名English/exams

假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。建议内容：1.不要灰心，保持良好心态；2.掌握学习方法；3.培养对英语的兴趣爱好。

第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题样题分析第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？(时态)(when)第一人称一封信对英语学习给出建议说理的逻辑性一般现在时

假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己是高一的学生，在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。建议：1.保持良好心态；2.掌握学习方法：如坚持每天记单词，读英语课文；多练、多问等。3.培养对英语学习的兴趣爱好。developaninterestinlearningEnglish坚持每天记单词：insiston/persistindoinginsiston/persistinrememberingwordseveryday

DearLiHua,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaidyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.

Thisisanormalproblemthateverystudentcouldsuffer,soIthinkIcangiveyousomeusefulsuggestions.

Mysuggestions/adviceareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.What’smore,themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：⑴参加中文学习班； ⑵看中文书刊、电视； ⑶学唱中文歌曲； ⑷交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。DearPeter,

I'mgladtohearthatyoucanaskformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHuaHomework:DearPeter, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

Hereareafewsuggestions.

First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese. TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHua第二篇建议信：对于我的朋友花大量时间上网，耽误学习的建议信建议内容：1）和他面对面地交流、沟通；2）给她发邮件或短信；3）告诉他学习的重要性。Homework:

DearLiHua,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaid

yourfriendspendsmostofhistimechattingontheInternetandoftengoestotheInternetcafeinsteadofattendingclasses.Youreallywanttohelphimoutbutyoudon’tknowwhattodowithit/howtohelphim.Well.Iwouldliketogivemyadviceforyou.Myadviceareasfollows.Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldhaveatalkwithhimsincerely.Becauseifyourfriendskipsclasses,heisnotgoingtodowellatschool.