浙江历英语高考作文试题2004

PAGEPAGE4浙江省高考英语历年作文试题及范文汇总（2004-2015）2004年书面表达假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本学中文的词典，根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信.

英汉/汉英词典新华字典收词(字)18,000(英语)20,000(汉语)10,000价格52元11元特点大量例子、用法说明,适合初学者中国最常用的汉语字典参考词汇:•推荐recommend(V.)•英汉/汉英词典TheEnglish-ChineseChinese-EnglishDictionary(ECCED)•新华字典XinhuaDictionary(XD)注意:词数:100左右DearSteve,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，

LiYue高考范文：DearSteve,I’msopleasedtolearnthatyouandyourclassmatesarelearningChinese.I’dliketorecommendthefollowingtwodictionaries.TheEnglish-ChineseChinese-EnglishDictionaryisreallyagoodoneforbeginners.Ithas18,000Englishwordsand20,000Chinesewords.Besidesplentyofexamples,ithasmanynotestellingyoubowtouseaword.XinhuadictionaryisthemostpopularChinesedictionary,andithasavocabularyof10,000words.ItmayalsobeusefultosomeadvancedlearnersofChinese.Ofthetwo,ECCEDisthemoreexpensive,costing52yuan,andXDcosts11yuan.Pleaseletmeknowifyouwantmetobuythesedictionaries.Yours，LiYue(111words)考场高分作文：DearSteve,ThankyouverymuchforyourlastletterwhichaskedmesomethingabouthowtochooseadictionaryforlearningChinese.HereIstronglyrecommendyouthefollowingtwowhichmaybeusefultoyou.OneofthemistheEnglish-Chinese/Chinese-EnglishDictionary,whichwillcostyou52yuan.Itcontainssome18,000Englishwordsand20,000Chinesewords.Asithaslotsofexamplesshowinghowtousethewords,itwillbemuchvaluableforthebeginnerslikeyou.Theotherone,XinhuaDictionary,whichchargesyouonly11yuanandhasacollectionof10,000Chinesewords.ItisthemostcommonlyusedoneinChina.IfyouneedmyhelpwithyourChinesepleasewritetome.(120words)教师范文：DearSteve,Verygladtohavereceivedyourletter,sayingthatyouandyourclassmatesarelearningEnglish.IwishyougoodluckwithyoureffortsinChineselearning.InyourletteryoualsoaskwhatChinesedictionariestouse.HerearethetwothatIhighlyrecommend.Ofcourse,anEnglishclasstaughtintwolanguageshasitsshortcomings.SuchaclasscannotcreateagoodatmosphereforEnglishlearning.SomestudentswillspeakChineseallthetimeandcannotlearnEnglishwell.

Ifyouwanttolearnalessonwell,youhavetounderstanditfirst.Tohelpstudentsunderstandthelessonbetter,theteachershoulduseChinesefromtimetotime.Therefore,IlikemyteachertousebothEnglishandChineseinteaching.考场满分作文(一)：

IprefermyEnglishclassestobetaughtinbothEnglishandChinese,whoseadvantageisthatitiseasyforustounderstandwhattheteachertalksabout.TheteacherfirstteachestheclassinEnglish,andthensheexplainsthosethatarehardtounderstandtoussothatwegetabetterknowingofthepassage.Thatwillbegoodforus.

However,teachingtheclassintwolanguageswillmaketheEnglishatmospherenotsostrong.SomestudentswhowishtobetaughtinEnglishwillbedisappointed.

Exceptforthedisadvantage,Ithinkitisreallygoodtoheartwolanguagesinclasses.Itcanmakeusmorefamiliarwiththeforeignculture.

名师点评：

审题是作文的第一要素，本文的审题准确无误。无论是要点的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。本文运用多种复杂句式，整体看来是不错的。文中的一个复合句式显示了作者的英语功底。其他出彩短语的使用也很地道，可以参看好句中的分析考场满分作文（二）：

IprefermyEnglishclassestobetaughtonlyinEnglishbecauseitishelpfulforustoimprovetheabilityofspeakingandlisteninginaveryshorttime.IhavestronginterestinEnglishstudyandforeignculture,soI’dliketobetotallyimmersedintheatmosphereofEnglishsothatIcanquicklymakeprogress.ThatswhyIprefertotalEnglish.However,sinceweareallEnglishbeginners,itsreallyhardtounderstandallthattheteachersays.SometimesweneedChineseexplanation.SomyviewpointisthatwearetaughtnotonlyinEnglishbutalsousingChineseasaminorwaytoexplainthingsthatarehardtounderstand.

名师点评：

本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中词汇的使用，将作者的意思表达得完整而准确，从而映衬了词汇的重要性；其次，本文的句式以复杂句为主，表语、定语和状语从句的使用都十分到位2008年书面表达人们完成工作的方式通常有两种：独立完成和合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以“WorkingIndividuallyorWorkinginaTeam”为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文：独立完成：自行安排、自己解决问题。合作完成：一起讨论、相互学习我喜欢的方式和理由注意：词数100-120，文章的题目和开头已给出（不计词数）。WorkingIndividuallyorWorkinginaTeamTherearebasicallytwowaystogetworkdone.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________高考范文：WorkingIndividuallyorWorkinginaTeamTherearebasicallytwowaystogetworkdone.Oneistoworkindividually.Inthisway,peoplecandecideforthemselveswhentostartworkandhowtodoit.What’smore,theywillbeabletolearnbowtosolveproblemsontheirown.Peoplemayalsochoosetoworkinateam,wheretheycanlearnfromeachoth-erandhelpeachother.Besides,theymayworkoutbetterwaystogetworkdonebydiscussion.Personally,Iprefertoworkinateam,whichoffersmeachancetolearnhowtogetalongwithothersandtosharemyexperienceswiththem.Astheworkcanbedividedamongseveralpeople,itcanbedoneefficiently.Teamworkisalwaysimportant.2009年书面表达5月1日，高二（3）班的学生志愿者LiYue和ZhangHua去阳光敬老院（SunshineNursingHome）开展志愿者活动（送水果、打扫、聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则110-120个单词的新闻报道。时间、地点、人物、活动；老人们的反应；简短评论。注意：报道的标题和记者的姓名已给出（不记词数）。StudentVolunteersBroughtSunshinetotheElderlyByChenJie,SchoolNewspaper高考范文：StudentVolunteersBroughtSunshinetotheElderlyOnMayDay,LiYueandZhangHua,studentsfromClassThree,GradeTwo,wenttoSunshineNursingHomeanddidsomevoluntarywork.Upontheirarrival,LiYueandZhangHuawerewarmlywelcomed,andrespectfully,theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits.Then,theysaystartedworkingatonce,cleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor.Everythingdone,theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople.Whenitwastimeforthevolunteerstoleave,theelderlypeoplethankedthemfortheirkindness.Theysaiditwassuchabeautifuldaythattheywouldrememberitforever.LiYueandZhangHuawereveryhappy.Whattheydidhasbroughtjoytoothersandenrichedtheirownlives.ByChenJie,SchoolNewspaper2010年书面表达最近，李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹(在上周六下午，不顾天气炎热，为班级选购歌咏比赛服装)，用英语为班级板报写一篇l00一120个词的短文。你的文章应包括下列要点：1．李越的事迹及其对同学的影响；2．你的评论。注意：1．文章的标题和开头已给出(不计词数)。2．参考词汇：singingcontest歌咏比赛Costume服装StarStudentoftheWeekLiYuehasbeenawardedthetitleof"StarStudentoftheWeek"forwhatshedidforourclass.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________高考范文：StarStudentoftheWeekLiYuehasbeenawardedthetitleof"StarStudentoftheWeek"forwhatshedidforourclass.OnthehotafternoonoflastSaturday,LiYuewentdowntownandwalkedfromonestoretoanother,lookingforthecostumeswewouldwearinthesingingcontest.Whiletherestofuswereenjoyingourleisuretimeincoolandcomfortablerooms,shespentthewholeafternoonsearchingandselecting.Finally,shefoundtherightclothes.Deeplymovedbyherefforts,wetriedourbestandwonthefirstprizeinthecontest.LiYueisalwayswarm-heartedandcaresalotabouttheclass.Besides,sheoftendevoteshersparetimetohelpingothers.Shehassetagoodexampleforus.Therefore,shedeservesthehonorandweshouldlearnfromher.2011年书面表达假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（toscribble）和乱丢垃圾（tolitter）的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100-120个词的信。信中应包括以下内容：1.说明写信目的；2.对这些行为进行批评；3.提出建议注意：信的抬头、落款及信的第一句已给出（不计词数）。June8,2011DearMr.Headmaster,I’mLiYue,astudentfromClass1,SeniorⅡ._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourfaithfully,LiYue高考范文（本书信格式为“齐头式”；也可用“缩进式”，如前面2004年的“高考范文”格式）：June8,2011DearMr.Headmaster,IamLiYue,astudentfromClass1,SeniorII.Iamwritingtodrawyourattentiontosomeimproperbehavioramongusstudents:litteringandscribbling.Itmakesourschooldirtyandunpleasant,anddoeshardtotheimageofourschool.IalwaysfeelashamedwheneverIseethis.Itisclearlynotappropriateforastudenttolitterandscribbleabout.Iwonderiftheschoolcouldplacemoredustbinsaroundandsetupspecificrulesagainstsuchbehavior.Atthesametime,studentsshouldbeencouragedtodevelopgoodhabitsandbetterbehavethemselves.Ibelievethat,withthejointeffortsofbothteachersandstudents,ourschoolwillbecomeamoreenjoyableplaceinthenearfuture.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Yoursfaithfully,LiYue2012年书面表达你校正在进行”英语读书周”活动，该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：”Yourfuturedependsonmanythingsbutmostlyonyou”：请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文：1.针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；2.举例说明理由注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）IntheEnglishReadingWeek,oneofmyclassmatesrecommendedaquotetous,whichgoeslikethis:“Yourfuturedependsonmanythings,butmostlyonyou.”_______________________高考范文：IntheEnglishReadingWeek,oneofmclassmatesrecommendedaquotetouswhichgoeslikethis:“Yourfuturedependsonmanythingsbutmostlyonyou.“Ican’tagreemorewiththisview.It’struethatourfutureisdeterminedbymanythings,suchasopportunitiesandhelpfromothers,butourownattitude,determination,andhardworkplayamoreimportantrole.Inotherwords,wearethemasterofourownfuture.TakeAbrahamLincoln,forexample.Hewasborninapoorfamily,andonlyreceivedalimitededucationinhischildhood.Yetthroughhispainstakingefforts,hechangednotonlyhisownfatebutalsothehistoryofAmerica.Eventothisday,Lincolnisregardedasoneofthemostinspiringfiguresintheworld.Therefore,Ifirmlybelievethatourfutureisinourownhands.2013年书面表达请以“OneThingI’mProudof”为题，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1．记述事情经过；2．简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。注意：文章的标题已给出（不计词数）OneThingI’mProudof______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OneThingI’mProudof IstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer. ThefirstdayIwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmatesplayingtabletennis.Amazedathowskilfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateron,Ioftenwatchedthemcarefullytolearntheirtechniques.ThenIkeptpracticinguntilIbecameconfidentenoughtochallengethegoodplayers.AttheendofthetermIbecameoneofthebestplayersinmyclass. Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethatweallcanfulfillourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork.Italsohelpsmebetterunderstandtheproverb“Practicemakesperfect.”2014年书面表达学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书（popularsciencebooks）和文学类图书（literarybooks）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。注意：信的抬头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。DearMr.Wang,_______________________________________________________________________________YourssincerelyLiYueDearMr.Wang,Knowingthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.Whatweneedmostarepopularsciencebooks.Usuallypopularsciencebooksexplainbasicprinciplesofnatureinasimpleandinterestingway.Theyhelpusunderstandsciencesubjectsbetterandarouseourcuriosityaboutscientificdiscoveries.Inadditiontoreadingforknowledge,wereadforfunandinspiration.ThatiswhyIrecommendanothercategoryofbooks：literarybooks.Classicworks,writtenbymasters,presentgreatthoughtsthroughfascinatingstoriesandlanguage.Theynotonlyofferusjoyandexcitement,butalsoencourageustothinkcritically.I’llbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.Yourssincerely,LiYue2015年书面表达在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinion”为题，用英文写一篇100～120个词的短文。要求如下：1.从以上两种做法中选择一种；2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinionWhenIHaveaDifferentOpiniomWemayhavedifferentopiniomsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavevariouswaystodealwithsuchasituation.WhenIhaveabetteridea,Iwouldchoosetosticktoit.Bydoingso,Icannotonlysharegoodideaswithothersbutalsolearntoexpressmyselfflearly.Oncewewerediscussingwheretogoforanouting.MostofmyclassmateswantedtogotoaparkwhileIhadanideaofgoingtoanicerpiace.Imanagedtopersuademyclassmatesintoacceptingmyidea.Wedidhaveagoodtimethatday.Goodopinionsareworthstickingtobecausetheycanbenefitusall.Analternativestudentversion: