2021中考作文公开课

写作过程

审题：体裁，人称，时态，要点

布局谋篇：怎么开头（通常有给，简洁，直入主

题）分几段（3・4段最佳），内容先后排列，如何

结尾（切题）

初步写作：强调：脑海里浮现汉语句子时，考虑用

什么短语，固定搭配，句型表达出这个意思

固定短语，特殊句型，从句，连接词

（段落与段落之间有承上启下）

修改查错：谓语动词，非谓语动词，名词单复数，

冠词等

认真抄写，卷面干净整洁

1.根据邮件内容回复一封信邮件阅读三次，看清

所给邮件里的写作要点，标上序号。根据要点写

作

2.Howto…类有条理，每一条建议从大到小

写。...,likedoingA,doingBanddoingC....such

asA,BandC.

注意：有没有“结合自身经历说明“。。。take

myselfforexample,asforme,

3.要求叙述某一次的活动经历等总分总时态一

过叙述所发生的事情最后一段一定要写体会感

受感悟等，积极向上的内容

Lastmonth,ourschoolheldaneventwith

thethemeof"MotherlandinMyHeart"to

expressourloveforourmotherland.

Duringtheevent,wehadmanyactivities,

includingsingingredsongsandtellingstories

abouttheRedArmy.Itookpartinthesinging

competition.Besides,Iattendedthespeech

contest,inwhichItoldastoryaboutahero.

Manystudentsweremovedbymystory.

Ithinkthiseventisverymeaningful.I'm

proudofmycountry.Ihopeourmotherlandwill

becomemuchgreaterandeverybodycanlivea

betterlife.

Lastmonth,ourclasshadacharitysale.

Twodaysbeforethesale,wehandedoutnotices

tomakeoursaleknownbyothers.Thenwemade

differentthingslikefoodandtoys.Itwassomuch

fun!Wheneverythingwasready,westartedto

sellthethings.Tooursurprise,allthethingswere

soldoutinashorttime!Atlast,wegaveawaythe

moneywemadetoChildren'sHome.

Ithinkitwasameaningfulexperience.

Makingthingshelpsdevelopourlifeskills.

Meanwhile,wecanlearnhowtocommunicate

withotherswell.Lastbutnotleast,helping

peoplemakesushappy.

4.计划，打算，安排等一般将来时或wantto

intendtoplantowillbeableto

DuringtheHealthWeek,wewillhavea

SchoolTripDayonFriday.Hereistheplanfor

theday.Wewillstartourtripbywalkingto

LakesidePark.Inthemorning,thereisgoingto

beakite-flyingcompetition.Atnoon,wewillhave

apicnicnearasmalllakethere.Afterlunch,we

willgoboatingonthelake.Wecanfeelasenseof

peaceinmindwhilewearerowingontheblue

water.

Bybeingpartoftheseactivities,wewillnot

onlydevelopfriendshipwithourclassmates,but

alsorelaxourselvesandbefreefrompressureof

study.

5.发表对某一事物的观点类一定要看清是利弊都

要写还是二选其一方写详写还是略写

Inmyeyes,asIseeititseemstomethatas

forme

而且：moreover,besides,inaddition

因此：asaresult,therefore,thatiswhy...

总之：inaword,inshort,tosumup,in

conclusion

followtrendsblindlymakegooduseofcause

greatharmtodogoodto

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim对短视

频在中国的流行很感兴趣，写信向你询问。请你

回信向他介绍短视频的特点，并谈谈你对短视频

流行的看法。

提示词:shortvideo短视频

提示问题：1.Whatareshortvideoslike?

2.Whataresomepositiveandnegativethings

aboutshortvideos?

3.Whatdoyouthinkaboutthepopularityof

shortvideos?

DearJim,

I'mgladtointroduceshortvideostoyou.As

itsnamesuggests,mostshortvideosarelessthan

5minutes.Someshorteronesonlylastforafew

seconds.Theyareeasyandfuntomake.

Onepositivethingaboutshortvideosisthat

theyhelprecordpeople'slives.Throughshort

videos,peoplecanshareinterestingthings,gain

knowledgeandsupport,orjustrelax.However,

everycoinhastwosides.Peoplemightbecome

addictedtowatchingshortvideosaswell.

Ithinkshortvideoscandousgood.With

theirpopularity,wecanshareourhappinesswith

thewholeworld.Atthesametime,weshouldalso

developtheabilitytotelltruthfromliesand

neverfollowtrendsblindly.

Yours,

LiHua

6.介绍中国元素，中国事物

7.邀请信邀请外国朋友参加活动等开门见山

直入主题活动安排再次邀请

DearMike,

MyclassmatesandIaregoingtoZhejiang

UniversityforastudytourthisSaturday.Itisone

ofthebestuniversitiesinChinaandit'salsomy

dreamuniversity.We'llgoaroundthecampusto

visitthelabsandlibraries,andlearnaboutits

history.Wewillalsotalkwiththeteachersand

studentsthere.

We*dliketoinviteyoutojoinus,and

remembertotakeyourpassportbecausewell

takethetraintogetthere.Wewillmeetatthe

schoolgateat7:30onSaturdaymorning.

Lookforwardtoseeingyou!

Hi,Andrew,

How'sitgoing?Knowingthatyouarefond

offood,I*mwritingtoinviteyoutoattendour

schoolfoodfestival.

Thefestivalwillbeginat2:00onFriday

afternoon,June25thontheschoolplayground.

Wearegladtohavesomethingdeliciouslike

dumplingsandzongzi.Wecanalsocookfoodand

sellittoourschoolmatestoraisemoneyfor

charity.Thefestivalwillsurelyofferusagood

chancetoshowandexperienceChinese

traditionalfoodculture.Besides,itisagoodtime

forustosharehappiness,loveandteamspirit.

It'sagreatpleasuretohaveyouherewithus.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

8.介绍某个名人最后一段一定要写他的影响向

他学习希望成为他一样的人等

9.自荐信只写自己的优点，不需要真实，优点与

该岗位相关有相关经验等等

10.看图写话

杭州卷

假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件，接受邀请并回

复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连

贯。

HiLiPing,

Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?Nextweek

mycousinMikeisstayingwithme.We'rehavinga

partynextSaturday.Pleasecome!We*llhavelots

ofdrinks.Butifyouremember,canyoubringsome

Chinesefood?Thepartywillbestartingat6

p.m.Whattimedoyouthinkyou'Hbecoming?

141probablyneedoneortwopeopletohelpmetidy

upaftertheparty.Doyouthinkyou41beableto

stayandhelp?

Anyway,hopeyoucanmakeit.Pleasewrite

backtotellmeifyoucancomeornot.

Allthebest,

Matt

DearMatt,

It'sgoodtohearfromyou.Everythingisfine

withmehere.Thanksfortheinvitation!Iwill

definitelycome!ItwillbegoodtomeetMike.1111

arriveataround5:30nextSaturdayandbring

sometraditionalChinesefoods,likedumplingsand

zongziforyou.Ihopeyouwouldlikethem.Don't

worry.Iwillstayafterthepartytohelpyouclean

up.Thanksagainfortheinvitation.Iamreally

lookingforwardtoit!Allthebest,

LiPing

宁波卷

假如你是李华，上个月你校举行了“祖国在我心中”

的主题活动(themeevent),请你根据以下提供

的信息并结合你参加这个主题活动的经历，写一篇

英语短文向你校英语报投稿。

注意：(1)短文必须包括导图的所有要点，并适当

发挥；

(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

(3)词数80—100；标题已给出，不计入

总词数。

MotherlandinMyHeart

Lastmonth,ourschoolheldaneventwiththe

themeof"MotherlandinMyHeart"toexpressour

loveforourmotherland.Duringtheevent,we

hadmanyactivities,includingsingingred

songsandtellingstoriesabouttheRedArmy.I

tookpartinthesingingcompetition.Besides,I

attendedthespeechcontest,inwhichItoldastory

aboutahero.Manystudentsweremovedbymy

story.

Ithinkthiseventisverymeaningful.I'm

proudofmycountry.Ihopeourmotherlandwill

becomemuchgreaterandeverybodycanlivea

betterlife.

温州卷在中国传统文化中，“家”是一个永恒的话

题，家人相聚一堂，才是完整的家，温暖而有力

量。请你结合下图，以Home为题，写一篇约110

词的英语短文，让外国朋友了解中国文化的“家”。

Home

HomemeansalottoeveryChinese.

Whenourfamilymemberscomebackhomefor

reunion,wesitaroundthetable,sharingour

achievementsandhappiness.Homebecomesthe

warmestplace.

It*saplacefulloflove.Lovecanbeexpressedby

gift,familydinnerandphonecall.However,noneis

betterthangoingbackhomeandspendingtime

withourfamilies.

Ifsalsoaplacefullofstrength.Wheneverwe

havedifficulties,wecanreturnhome.Thanksto

theencouragementandhelpfromourfamilies,we

canrebuildourbeliefandconfidencetokeep

movingforward.

Sohowlonghaveyoubeenawayfromhome?

Comeback.Homeisalwayswaitingforyou.

金华卷

假如你叫Darning,本周六你们班要去浙江大学开

展研学活动(studytour)o请根据下列表格中的

内容；给外籍教师Mike发一份邮件，告知你们

的计划，并邀请他一同前往。

注意：1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发

挥；参考词汇供选择使用；

2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；

3.词数:80~100；

4.邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计人总词

数。

DearMike,

MyclassmatesandIaregoingtoZhejiang

UniversityforastudytourthisSaturday.Itisone

ofthebestuniversitiesinChinaandit*salsomy

dreamuniversity.We*llgoaroundthecampusto

visitthelabsandlibraries,andlearnaboutits

history.Wewillalsotalkwiththeteachersand

studentsthere.We'dliketoinviteyoutojoinus,

andremembertotakeyourpassportbecausewefll

takethetraintogetthere.Wewillmeetatthe

schoolgateat7:30onSaturdaymorning.Look

forwardtoseeingyou!Yours,Darning

丽水卷

外教Steve爱好艺术，喜欢运动。他想在任教

期满前再体验一次中国文化。假设你是李华，请根

据下面的要点，写一封邮件，邀请他到你家过周

末。

：、\、r-Xi〜11・■w»ncy，一・.---，・・―

内容要点参考词汇

I•一・••1-.''.

weekend[Sports(ormusic/drawing)paint,playbasketbail.-

planactivities------------------------------------------------卜--------;--------；-----二-*:婷标疹一

experienceofChinesecultures\makejiaozi.writewithaChin—'咐两W/口，

注意：(1)文中必须包含工^市的两个要点，可适

当发挥；

(2)文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名

等相关信息；

(3)词数:80~100；开头与结尾已给出，不

计人总词数。

Hi,Steve!

I'mLiHua.Ihearyou'dliketoexperiencesome

moreChineseculturesbeforegoingback.Sowhy

notcometomyhomefortheweekend?Ihavea

goodplan!

Asbothofuslikesports,let*splaybasketballin

thegymaroundmyhomeinthemorning.After

that,wecanpracticewritingwithaChinesebrush

together.It*snoteasybutmakesuspeaceful.You

canalsosensethebeautyoftheChinese

characters.Toexperiencemore,wearegoingto

makejiaozi,oneofthemosttraditionalfoodsin

China.Itmustbemeaningfultohavejiaozimade

byyourself.Iamsureyouwillhavegreatfun.

Waitforyourreply!

Yours,

LiHua

衢州卷

为助力打造“书香校园”，你校英语社团将举办以

“热爱阅读”为主题的征文活动，请以“Enjoy

Reading,EnjoyLife”为标题写一篇短文介绍你自己

的阅读情况并阐述阅读给你带来的好处。要求：

1.短文应包括两个要点（阅读情况和阅读好

处），可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；2.

短文不能出现真实的人名和校名；3.词数：

90~110。参考词汇：experience,habit,knowledge,

pleasure

Readingmakesafullman.

There'snodoubtthatreadingplaysan

importantroleinourlife.Manypeopleenjoy

reading.Asamatteroffact,Ihavereadlotsof

booksandgotintothehabitofreadingevery

day.Goodbooksarelikewisefriends.They

supportmetowalkforwardandhelpme

understandtheworldbetter.Inaddition,reading

alwaysbringsmeacolorfulworld.Icannotonly

gainknowledgebutalsogetgreatpleasure.Allin

all,readingislikeajourney.Justwalkslowlyand

enjoytheflowersalongtheway.

嘉兴卷

校学生会为即将到来的“健康周”活动策划了两个项

目。假设你是学生会成员，请写一篇英语短文，在

校英语报上介绍其中一个项目的活动内容及其益

处。要点提示如下：

Project%ASchoolTripDiyASportsDay

,flykites•haveballgames

Activities•haveapicnic,playtug-of-wart拔;可）

••••••••

•developfnendship•developfriendship

BcncGl%

,tcclrelaxed,keepfit

（被处）..二挪子英语

■...

—一1

注意:(1)短文必须包含表中你所选项目的所有信

息，并适当发挥。

(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。

(3)词数:80—100。短文开头已给出，不

计入总词数。

DuringtheHealthWeek,wewillhaveaSchool

TripDayonFriday.Hereistheplanforthe

day.WewillstartourtripbywalkingtoLakeside

Park.Inthemorning,thereisgoingtobeakite­

flyingcompetition.Atnoon,wewillhaveapicnic

nearasmalllakethere.Afterlunch,wewillgo

boatingonthelake.Wecanfeelasenseofpeace

inmindwhilewearerowingonthebluewater.

Bybeingpartoftheseactivities,wewillnot

onlydevelopfriendshipwithourclassmates,but

alsorelaxourselvesandbefreefrompressureof

study.

2(100words)

DuringtheHealthWeek,wewillhaveaSports

Daytomakeourschoollifemorecolorful.

Onthatday,therewillbedifferentsports.In

themorning,wewillplayballgames.Everyone

cangoinfortheirfavoriteones.Intheafternoon,

therewillbeagamethatyoucannever

missplayingtug-of-war.Itisreallyagoodchance

tomakeusbetterunderstandthemeaningof

teamwork.Afterthat,therewillbeakungfu

lesson,whichcanhelpuslearntokeepfit.

Allthesesportswilldousgood.Notonlycan

theymakeusfeelrelaxedbutalsodevelop

friendship.

绍兴卷

上个月，你们班为Children'sHome的孩子们组织

了一次爱心义卖活动。请根据下表信息用英语写一

篇短文，向某英语网站投稿，谈谈本次活动和你的

体会。

注意：(1)短文必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增

加细节；(2)你的体会至少两条；

(3)词数:80—100；(4)短文首句仅供

选择使用，不计人总词数。

参考词汇：义卖活动charitysale

短文首句:Lastmonth,ourclasshadacharitysale.

Lastmonth,ourclasshadacharitysale.Two

daysbeforethesale,wehandedoutnoticesto

makeoursaleknownbyothers.Thenwemade

differentthingslikefoodandtoys.Itwassomuch

fun!Wheneverythingwasready,westartedtosell

thethings.Tooursurprise,allthethingsweresold

outinashorttime!Atlast,wegaveawaythe

moneywemadetoChildren'sHome.

Ithinkitwasameaningfulexperience.

Makingthingshelpsdevelopourlifeskills.

Meanwhile,wecanlearnhowtocommunicate

withotherswell.Lastbutnotleast,helpingpeople

makesushappy.

湖州卷

假定你是李雷。某英语杂志正在举办征文活动，请

根据广告中的信息写一篇短文，用于投稿。文中不

得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；词数:80—100。

|ARTICLESWANTED!

BeingHealtlay

"Whichdoyouthinkismoreimportant.

doingexerciseoreatinghealthyfood?

•Whatdoyoudotostayhealthy?

Telluswhatyouthink!

WriteanartteleansweriBKthese

question*andwewillpublish__

thebestone*ouraiagarinc.、

Peoplearepayingmoreandmoreattentionto

stayinghealthy.Wayssuchasdoingexercise,

eatinghealthyfoodetc.helpalot.ButIthink

doingexerciseismoreimportant.

Forme,Iusedtositatthedeskfortoolongand

seldomgooutsidedoingsomesports.Asaresult,

Iputon5kilosjustinayearandIfelttiredeasily.

ButwhenItriedtotakeuprunningafterschool,

Ibegantofeelenergeticandhealthier.

Sincethen,Ihavekeptthehabitoftaking

exercise.AndIfinditdoesgoodtoboththemind

andthebody.

2

Peoplemayhavedifferentwaystokeep

healthy,suchasdoingexercise,eating