丰富句子表达的技巧

丰富句子表达的技巧1、长短结合〖例1〗中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后,我们唱歌的唱歌,跳舞的跳舞,还有讲故事、下棋,大家玩得很开心。【一般句式】Atnoonwehadapicniclunchinthesunshine.Thenwehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.【优秀句式】Atnoonwehadapicniclunchinthesunshine.Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingstoriesandplayingchess.2、避免重复,适当替换Like=love=enjoy=prefer=befondof=becarefor=appreciate等同义词使用。优秀的/好/棒:eXcellent=eminent=top=outstanding;wonderful/amazing/remarkable/fantastic/fabulous/gorgeous〖例2〗我喜欢读书,而我的弟弟喜欢看电视。【一般句式】Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.【优秀句式】Ienjoyreadingwhilemybrotherpreferswatchingtelevision3、短语优先love=fallinlovewith;fill=befilledwith=beawashwith=beinundatewith=besaturatedwithdecide=makeupone'smind【一般句式】Hehasdecidedtobeateacherwhenhegrowsup.【优秀句式】Hehasmadeuphismindtobeateacherwhenhegrowsup【一般句式】Hedoesn'tlikemusic.【优秀句式】Hedoesn'tcaremuchformusic.【一般句式】Hetoldmethatthequestionwasnowbeingdiscussed.【优秀句式】Hetoldmethatthequestionwasnowunderdiscussion.4、恰当使用某些固定表达方式和习惯用法。【一般句式】Thefilmwasveryinteresting.Boththeteachersandthestudentslikedit.【优秀句式】Thefilmwassointerestingthatboththeteachersandthestudentslikedit.【一般句式】Hewasverytired.Hecouldnotwalkanyfarther.【优秀句式】Hewastootiredtowalkanyfarther.【一般句式】Yoursonisold.Hecanlookafterhimselfnow.【优秀句式】YoUrsonisoldenoughtolookafterhimselfnow.5、适当运用非谓语结构。【一般句式】Whenheheardthenews,theyalljumpedforjoy.【优秀句式】Hearingthenews,theyalljumpedforjoy.【一般句式】ASIdidn'tknowheraddress,Iwasn'tabletogetintouchwithher.【优秀句式】Notknowingheraddress,Iwasn'tabletogetintouchwithher.【一般句式】Ashewasbornintoapeasantfamily,hehadonlytwoyearsofschooling.1【优秀句式】Bornintoapeasantfamily,hehadonlytwoyearsofschooling.6、综合运用多种句式或句型表达。(1)强调句【一般句式】No.20Buswouldtakethemtotheirdestinationconveniently.【优秀句式】ItwasNo.20Busthatwouldtakethemtotheirdestinationconveniently.(2)主从复合句【一般句式】Wehadtohaveadiscussiontofigureoutapossiblesolution.【优秀句式】Whatwehadtodowastohaveadiscussion,tryingtofigureoutapossiblesolution.(3)分词短语、由With或WithOUt引导的短语【一般句式】MarywasgoodatitwhileTomalmostcouldn'tstandwithoutmyhelp,whichleftussomefunnymemories.【优秀句式】MarywasgoodatitwhileTomalmostcouldn'tstandwithoutmyhelp,leavingussomefunnymemories.(4)倒装句【一般句式】Iwenttobedat11:30.【优秀句式】Notuntil11:30didIgotobed.(5)省略句【一般句式】Whileyouarecrossingthestreet,youshouldbecareful.【优秀句式】Whilecrossingthestreet,youshouldbecareful.7、改变句子的开头方式。【一般句式】IguidedthemtowalkaroundtheoldareastoletthemexperienceBeijing’straditionalculture.【优秀句式】InordertoletthemexperienceBeijing'straditionalculture,Iguidedthemtowalkaroundtheoldareas.【一般句式】Myfathercouldn'thelppraisingmewhenheheardwhatIhaddone.【优秀句式】HearingwhatIhaddone,myfathercouldn'thelppraisingme.【一般句式】TherestandvariousstoresofChinesefeaturesalongthestreet.【优秀句式】AlongthestreetstandvariousstoresofChinesefeatures.Atthetopofthehilltherestandsanoldtemple.8、通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。【一般句式】Ourheadmasterlistenedtoourproposalattentively.Hepraisedusforourloveforschoolandpromisedtothinkovertheproblem.【优秀句式】Ourheadmasterwholistenedtoourproposalattentively,praisedusforourloveforschoolandpromisedtothinkovertheproblem.Listeningattentively,hepraisedusforourlovefo