手机进校园英语高分作文教学

备战2023年中考英语高分作文热点02手机进校园一、材料作文1．现在智能手机运用越来越普遍，上周你们班举行了一次以“初中生使用微信的利与弊”为主题的班会，同学们各抒已见。你针对同学们的不同意见，做了以下记录。请根据表格内容以“TheOpinionsofUsingWeChat”为题写一篇短文。利弊1.提供交流的平台，可以上网课1.过度使用、影响学习2.能认识更多的朋友，方便联系2.交友不慎、容易受骗3.能学习更多的东西，增加兴趣3.长时间看手机对眼睛有害…………注意：1.词数80字以上。2.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。提示：platform平台；rick欺骗；beconvenientfor对……方便；网课onlineclassTheOpinionsofUsingWeChat____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】TheOpinionsofUsingWeChatMoreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsuseWeChat.Differentstudentshavedifferentopinionsaboutusingit.SomestudentsthinkWeChatisaveryusefultool.Itcanprovideaplatformtocommunicatewiththeirfriends.AndtheycanmakemorefriendsandlearnmoreknowledgebyWeChat.TheyalsoattendonlineclassesbyWeChat.WeChatisconvenientforthemtoconnect.However,somestudentsthinkWeChatwillaffecttheirstudyiftheyspendtoomuchtimeusingit.Andtheymaybetrickedbystrangenetfriends.Lastbutnotleast,itwillalsoaffecttheirvisioniftheyuseWeChatforalongtime.Inmyopinion,weshoulduseWeChatproperlybynotusingitmorethantwohoursaday,andmakesurethatwedon’tuseitwhenwearestudying.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：本文的时态是一般现在时；③提示：微信利与弊的大部分要点已给出，适当地补充一些自己的观点。人称以第三人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，总述不同的人对使用微信有着不同的观点；第二步，具体阐述同学们利与弊的观点；第三步，以自己的观点做个总结。[亮点词汇]provideaplatform提供一个平台attendonlineclasses上网课affecttheirstudy影响他们的学习[高分句型]However,somestudentsthinkWeChatwillaffecttheirstudyiftheyspendtoomuchtimeusingit.（if引导的条件状语从句）2．一场波及全球的疫情，让人们深深懂得了生命的价值。作为中学生，我们更应该懂得珍爱我们年轻的生命。请你根据下面的提示，以“TreasureOurLives”为题，用英语写一篇有关如何珍爱生命的短文。要点：1.遵守交通规则，注意食品安全，防止意外溺水。2.交友谨慎，不沉迷于手机及游戏，提高安全意识。3.倡议：拥有快乐、充实、健康的生活方式……要求：1.短文应包括所有要点，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；2.语言表达准确，条理清晰，书写工整，句式规范；3.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；参考词汇：drown溺水V.TreasureOurLivesEachpersononlylivesonce,sowemusttreasureourlives.Whatshouldwedo?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】TreasureOurLivesEachpersononlylivesonce,sowemusttreasureourlives.Whatshouldwedo?Firstofall,weshouldeathealthyandsafefoodinsteadoffastfoodorjunkfoodeveryday.Whenwegoout,wemustobeythetrafficrules.Ifwewanttogoswimming,wearesupposedtogosomewheresafesothatwecanavoiddrowning.Andweshouldfollowtheschoolrules,don’truninthehallwaysandbecarefulwhenwedosports.Besides,wemustbecarefulinchoosingourfriendsandkeepawayfromdangerouspeople.Weshouldn’tplayphonesorcomputergamesforalongtime.What’smore,wecan’tgotoNetBarorchatwithstrangersonlineandweshouldn’tstayouttoolongespeciallyatnight.Lifeisvaluable,weshouldtakeitseriously.We’dbetterliveahappy,colorfulandhealthylife.Thenwewillstudybetterandmakeourdreamscometrue.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，根据下面的提示，以“TreasureOurLives”为题，用英语写一篇有关如何珍爱生命的短文。[写作步骤]第一步，开头已给出，点名我们要珍惜我们的生命；第二步，具体阐述我们应该怎么做；第三步，总结，表明自己对生命的看法。[亮点词汇]①firstofall首先②insteadof而不是③besupposedto应该做某事④keepawayfrom远离⑤cometrue实现[高分句型]①Ifwewanttogoswimming,wearesupposedtogosomewheresafesothatwecanavoiddrowning.（if引导的条件状语从句；sothat引导的目的状语从句）3．英语校刊TEENS正在进行“手机是否可以带入校园”的问卷调查。请根据下列调查表的内容做出自己的选择，并依据你的选择用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。AsurveyonmobilephonesShouldwebringmobilephonestoschool?ChoiceYES

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£Reasons1.contactwithparents2.…1.useinawrongway2....AdviceThoughmobilephonescanbeusedinschool,Ithink…Thoughmobilephonescan’tbeusedinschool,Ihope..注意：1.内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。2.词数80左右（已给出文章开头不计入总词数）。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Shouldwebringmobilephonestoschool?AsurveyonteenagemobilephoneuseatschooliscarriedoutbyTEENS._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Shouldwebringmobilephonestoschool?AsurveyonteenagemobilephoneuseatschooliscarriedoutbyTEENS.Aremiddleschoolstudentsallowedtobringthemtoschool?Somestudentsthinkwecanbringmobilephonestoschoolbecauseit’sconvenientforparentstocontactus.Whenwehavedifficultyinstudy,mobilephonescanbeourteacherandhelpuswithourproblems.Everycoinhastwosides.Somestudentsusemobilephonesinawrongway.Theyspendalotoftimechattingonline,asaresult,theycan’tfocusonstudy.Andtoomuchtimeonscreensdoesharmtooureyes.Moreandmorestudentshavepooreyesight.Inmyopinion,Iagreetobringsmartphonestoschool.Thoughmobilephonescanbeusedinschool,IthinkIwon’tturnitonuntilclassisover.SincetherearelotsofusefulwebsitesforEnglishlearning,IwillgotheretopracticemyEnglish.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇议论文。根据表格介绍支持和反对人的原因和建议。客观介绍人们对学生带手机这一现象的看法，并表达自己的观点。2.写作指导：本文以第三人称和第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时为主。分成四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍支持者的看法；第三段介绍反对者的看法；第四段介绍自己的观点。不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观、注意行文的连贯性。4．某学校英语月刊第4月期刊，将以“禁止中小学生带手机进校园”为主题进行英文征稿，请你就相关话题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：（1）谈谈限制中学生带手机进校园的必要性（至少两点）；（2）对中学生在家里如何合理使用手机提出一些建议（至少两点）；（3）号召同学们合理使用手机。作文要求：1.作文中不得出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Asforlimitingstudents’mobilephoneuseoncampus,Ihavesomethingtoshare.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Asforlimitingstudents’mobilephoneuseoncampus,Ihavesomethingtoshare.It’simportanttostopstudentsfrombringingcellphonesintoschool.Herearethereasons.Westudentswillfocusmoreonthestudywithoutcellphones.Besides,wecanmakemoretruefriendsatschoolbyexercisingorsharinginsteadofplayingcellphonegames.Limitingthecellphonesatschooldoesn’tmeanwecannotusethematallathome,aslongaswemakeproperuseofthem.First,wehadbetterusethecellphoneslessthan1houraday,orwemayharmoureyesandback.Second,wearesupposedtokeepawayfromtheinformationwhichdoesharmtous.Let’smakeproperuseofcellphones.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意围绕主题进行写作。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍限制中学生带手机进校园的必要性，介绍2点；第二步，介绍学生如何在家使用手机，介绍2点；第三步，书写结束语，号召同学们合理使用手机。[亮点词汇]①o...把……带入②besupposedto应该[高分句型]①Second,wearesupposedtokeepawayfromtheinformationwhichdoesharmtous.（which引导的定语从句）②Let’smakeproperuseofcellphones.（祈使句）5．2021年1月15日，教育部印发了《关于加强中小学生手机管理工作的通知》，原则上禁止中小学生带手机进校园，该通知引发了强烈的社会反响。作为一名中学生，请你写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法。要点：1.你对该通知的态度及理由；2.举例说明手机进校园的危害；3.呼吁所有中小学生积极响应。要求：1.思路清晰，语句通顺，根据要点提示可以适当发挥，书写规范；2.文中不得出现与考生本人相关校名和姓名等真实信息；3.词数：80词左右的短文（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。AccordingtoanoticefromtheMinistryofEducation,allprimaryandsecondaryschoolstudentsinChina,inprinciple,willnotbeallowedtobringmobilephonestoschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】AccordingtoanoticefromtheMinistryofEducation,allprimaryandsecondaryschoolstudentsinChina,inprinciple,willnotbeallowedtobringmobilephonestoschool.Ithinkitisnecessarytolimitstudents’mobilephoneuseatschool.Bringingmobilephonestoschoolwillnotonlydistractthestudents’attentionfromtheirstudies,butalsodoharmtotheireyesight.Forthosestudentswhoareaddictedtomobilephones,Isuggestthattheycanspendmoretimedoingsomethingmoreinteresting,suchasdoingsportsorreadinganinterestingbook.Asthesayinggoes,norulesnostandards.Icallonalltheschoolslimitstudents’mobilephoneuseatschool.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点中已给出的关键信息，写短文谈谈你对禁止中小学生带手机进校园这一通知的看法。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍这则通知；第二步，介绍手机的危害，表明自己的态度及理由；第三步，呼吁大家积极相应则一通知。[亮点词汇]①notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……②doharmto对……有害③beaddictedtosth.对某事上瘾④asthesayinggoes俗话说[高分句型]Forthosestudentswhoareaddictedtomobilephones,Isuggestthattheycanspendmoretimedoingsomethingmoreinteresting,suchasdoingsportsorreadinganinterestingbook.（who引导定语从句；that引导宾语从句）6．随着手机使用的日益广泛，“作业帮”等手机运用软件的出现，现在手机又有了新的用途——随时查找作业参考范文。部分学生认为：有时作业太多、太难，不得不向手机求助。观点：1.抄写参考范文不能提高学生的学习能力，只能阻止学生思考；2.恰当运用网络，不依赖网络。注意：1.文中应包括提示观点，可以适当发挥，增加自己的看法，使内容更连贯，更合理；

2.词数约80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。(参考词汇：thestudents’abilities,makeproperuseof)SomestudentsnowhaveanewusefortheInternet—___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：SomestudentsnowhaveanewusefortheInternet—usemobilephonestofindouttheanswerstotheirhomework.Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentideasaboutit.Somestudentssay(think)thattheyhavesomuchhomeworkeverydaythattheydon’thaveenoughtime.Andsomeoftheproblemsaretoohardforthemtoworkout.Sotheyhavetousemobilephonestofindouttheanswers.However,Ithinkcopyingtheanswerscan’timprovethestudents’abilities,andmaymakethemstopthinking.Inmyopinion,wecanmakeproperuseoftheInternetandcan’tdependonit.Studyingonlinecanbeawaytohelpstudy,butthebestwayisstudying(tostudy)byourselves.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，要求针对学生使用手机软件抄参考范文一事提出自己的观点和看法；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：题目中的要点已经给出，写作时注意围绕所给要点进行写作，并可以适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步：承接文章开头，指出学生利用手机抄参考范文这一现象；第二步：按照题目提示，指出一部分学生的观点；第三步：按照题目提示提出自己的观点。[亮点词汇]①improve提高改善②workout解决出③inmyopinion以我看④dependon取决于[高分句型]①Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentideasaboutit.（用来提出不同的观点）②However,Ithinkcopyingtheanswerscan’timprovethestudents’abilities,andmaymakethemstopthinking.（think后使用宾语从句，并且从句用动名词作主语）7．随着手机在日常生活中的广泛使用，中学生也越来越多的接触到了手机。但由于自控力较差，用手机打游戏、上网聊天的情况时有发生，严重影响了他们学习的积极性；有的学生熬夜看手机，导致视力下降，影响身体健康。因此，教育部办公厅印发《关于加强中小学生手机管理工作的通知》，规定中小学生原则上不得将个人手机带入校园。请根据要求写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对学生使用手机的看法。要求：1.80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考提示：1.中学生在校滥用手机的危害(妨碍学业、影响课堂、有害健康……)2.在家适度使用手机的建议(控制使用时间，避免使用手机搜索作业……)Mobilephoneswereinventedtomakeourlifeconvenient,butnowadaystheymaydotheopposite.Forthemiddleschoolstudents,mobilephonesarethelastthingstheyshouldputintheirschoolbags.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：Mobilephoneswereinventedtomakeourlifeconvenient,butnowadaystheymaydotheopposite.Forthemiddleschoolstudents,mobilephonesarethelastthingstheyshouldputintheirschoolbags.Today,

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homework.Whenstudentsbringmobilephonestoschool,mobilephoneswillhindertheirstudies.Whenstudentsarehavingclasses,theirmobilephonesring,whichwillaffecttheclass.Longtimeuseofmobilephonesisharmfultotheirhealth.Idon’tthinkweshouldtakemobilephonestoschool.Weshouldusemobilephonesathome.Whenweusemobilephones,weshouldcontrolthetime.Weshouldavoidusingmobilephonestosearchforhomework,andweshouldthinkindependentlytocompletehomework.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是一篇议论文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括现在使用手机的现状与自己的建议等。[写作步骤]第一步，总体指出中学生不应该把手机带进学校；第二步，具体阐述学生使用手机的一些弊端；第三步，最后阐述自己的观点和看法。[亮点词汇]①helpwith帮忙②beharmfulto对……有害③avoiddoingsth避免做某事[高分句型]①Whenweusemobilephones,weshouldcontrolthetime.（when引导的时间状语从句）②Idon’tthinkweshouldtakemobilephonestoschool.（宾语从句的否定转移）二、看图作文8．学校禁止中小学生将个人手机带入校园，你班学生就“学生是否应该将个人手机带入校园”展开激烈的讨论。请你根据提示写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈你的观点。要求：（1）语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；（2）补充至少一条你自己的观点；（3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；（4）100词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。Nowadaysmobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularamongthemiddleschoolstudents.AndtheMinistryofEducationrequiresprimaryandsecondaryschoolstudentsnottobringpersonalmobilephonesintotheschool.Studentsinourclasshavedifferentideasaboutthis.Somestudentsagreetotherequest.Theythink_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：Nowadaysmobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularamongthemiddleschoolstudents.AndtheMinistryofEducationrequiresprimaryandsecondaryschoolstudentsnottobringpersonalmobilephonesintotheschool.Studentsinourclasshavedifferentideasaboutthis.Somestudentsagreetotherequest.Theythinkit’sbadfortheireyesandtheywon’tstudycarefullyinclassifstudentsspendmuchtimeplayinggamesonthemobilephone.Sometimessomegarbagewebsitesappear,andtheyareharmfultothestudents.What’sworse,itiscommonforstudentstogetaddictedtomobilephonegames.Butothersdon’tagreetothisrequest.Theythinkit’snotsobadtotakethemobilephonestoschoolbecausetheycankeepintouchwiththeirparentsorclassmates,searchforsomeusefulinformation.Whentheyarefree,theycanalsolistentomusictorelaxthemselves.Inmyopinion,it’sveryimportantforustousethemobilephonesinarightway.Weshouldusethemobilephonetohelpandimproveourstudy.Andatschool,wehaveteachersandotherstudentstohelpuswithourstudy,soweneedn’ttakethemobilesphonetoschool.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇看图作文，为议论文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要求已给出，考生应注意根据图片的提示，表明赞同方和反对方的观点，此时应采用第三人称。并根据要求补充一点自己的观点，此时注意采用第一人称。[写作步骤]第一步，表明话题的背景信息，引出“学生是否应该将个人手机带入校园”的话题；第二步，阐述针对该话题产生的两种不同的意见，根据图片的提示有理有据地说明赞同以及反对的理由；第三步，表明自己的态度以及原因。[亮点词汇]①moreandmorepopular越来越受欢迎②o把……带进……③keepintouchwith与……保持联系[高分句型]①Nowadaysmobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularamongthemiddleschoolstudents.(moreandmorepopular形容词比较级的用法）②Theythinkit’sbadfortheireyesandtheywon’tstudycarefullyinclassifstudentsspendmuchtimeplayinggamesonthemobilephone.（if引导的条件状语从句）③Theythinkit’snotsobadtotakethemobilephonestoschoolbecausetheycankeepintouchwiththeirparentsorclassmates,searchforsomeusefulinformation.（宾语从句；itis+形容词+(forsb)todosth句型；because引导的原因状语从句）三、书信作文9．为了促进中小学生健康成长，近日教育部印发了《中小学生减负措施》（减负三十条）。假如你是李华，请你从以下几个方面向你的笔友Bob简单介绍减负的相关情况，并谈谈你自己的看法。要点：1.作业方面：过去每天都有很多家庭作业，每个学科都有不同的作业，需要几个小时才能完成。现在每天的家庭作业不超过90分钟；有更多时间参加课外活动（跳舞、画画、下棋等）和锻炼身体；有更充足的睡眠……2.电子产品方面：养成良好的用眼卫生习惯；严禁学生将手机带入课堂（过去花大量时间玩电脑游戏和看电视，对眼睛有害；现在不得不控制玩电脑、看电视的时间，花更多时间读书）。3.习惯方面：上课专心听讲，课后主动复习；鼓励同学间互帮互助、共同成长。4.你的看法……要求：1.包含以上要点；2.词数：80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥；3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。DearBob,Inordertoimprovestudents’health,ourcountrycarriedout30rulestoreduce（减少）students’pressure（压力）.Letmetellyousomethingaboutthem.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________