2024届高三英语复习：读后续写之救人脱困 奇遇历险型“七大绝招”课件(共33张PPT)

第第页2024届高三英语复习：读后续写之救人脱困奇遇历险型“七大绝招”课件(共33张PPT)(共33张PPT)

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HoldingJackienexttome,Iwalkedbackwardslowly.ThenIturned,tryingnottohurryandappearlikeathreattothebear’sbabies.MyeyessweptmysurroundingsasIfoughtthedesiretorun.Imademywaycarefully,movingasfastasIcouldwithoutrunning.Finally,quitenearmycar,IpausedforbreathandpettedJackie.Shejumpedhappily,thenervousnessnowgonefromhereyesandbody.“Howaboutagoodrun,Girl”Iasked.Shenosedmyhand,givingthepermissionIneeded.

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JackieandIstartedrunning,towardsourcarjustaquarter-mileaway.Wesetapersonallandspeedrecord,jumpingoverfallenbranchesandnotcaringaboutthedirtintheroaduntilwearrived,breathingnoisilyinmycar.Safeandsound,Ithrewmyarmsoutandstretcheduntilmybreathingslowed.AfterJackiehadagoodrest,Iputherintothebackseat.WhenIputtheseatbeltaroundherbody,shelookedatme,seemingtosay,“Idareyoutoignoremywarningsnexttime!”

Iedgedtoourcarstepbystep,observingsurroundingsandkeepingmyselfincalm.（骆xx）

Paniccontrolledmywholebody,whichmademetooscaredtomoveandinch.

Everycellinmybodypromptedmetorushtothecar.

Anxietygavewaytorelaxation/relief.（许xx）

Istaredatthetreesandbushesinmotion,worriedaboutwhethertheblackbearwouldsuddenlyrushout.（袁xx）

Whileawaveofwindblewthrough,IwassonervousthatIfeltmythroattightandmymouthdry.（张xx）

Itrembledalloverwithmypalmssweating.

ThenIsawthepuppyleaptohisfeet,wagginghertailandhereyessparklingwithexcitement.（李xx）

Therewasonlyoneresponseinmybrainrunningquickly.（卢梓贤）

Overwhelmedwithterror,Idraggedmyfeetandfeltmykneesasweakasrubber.（叶海琳）

Istartedthecar,sayinggoodbyetothisthreateningbutnotdangerousexperience.(袁洵)

Istrokedherheadgentlyandshenuzzledmyhandsforresponse.（刘乐瑶）

TheurgentsituationaddedaspecialtastetoourordinaryhikewhichIwouldrememberallmylife.（唐臻恬）

WhatacrazytimewehadthatseemedlikeaterriblenightmareIhadeverseen.（李豪杰）

高考英语读后续写

救人脱困+奇遇历险型

（“七大绝招”）

环境描写（恶劣）

情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）

转机描写（描写声音传来或看见了什么）

情绪描写（希望＋努力）

脱险描写（一系列动作）

情绪描写（感恩＋高兴）

主旨描写

第一绝招：

环境描写（风雨雷电）

1.Thewindblows/whistles/howls/picksup/whipsthroughsth/sweepsacrosssth.风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过……/掠过……

2.Theyweregettingdrenchedbyicywater.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。

3.Theheavyrainwasviolentlybeatingagainstthewindow.

大雨疯狂地击打窗户。

4.Theraindrummedontheroofofthebuilding.雨不停地击打着房预。

5.Thefuriousstormisgrumblingoutside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。

6.Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。

7.Aflashoflightninglitupthewholesky.

8.Thesharpclapsofthunderpiercedthequietnight.

声声清脆的雷声划破了宁静的夜晚。

9.Theboltoflightningstabstheearth.一道闪电划过天空。

10.Theskyandtheoceanmeltintoeachother天空和海洋融为一体

第二绝招：

情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）

——疲倦/寒冷

1.Saltstinging(刺痛)myeyes,IcouldhardlytellhowlongIcouldholdon.

2.Timepassingus,tirednesssurroundeduswithmyfeetstiff/numbandshivering.

3.Exhaustedaswewere(尽管很累),wedidn’tstop.Gritting（咬紧牙关）ourteeth,wekeptswimming.

4.Afterwhatseemedacentury,Ifeltextremelyfatigued(非常累)whileswimminghardtokeepmyselfafloat(漂浮着的).

5.Hewashuddled（蜷缩，挤作一团）intohiscoat,hisfacebluewithcold.

6.Fingersnumbedbythechillywater,throatchokedbyicywind,Ifeltonthevergeofcollapsing.

手指被冰冷的海水弄得麻木，喉咙被寒风吹得哽咽，我感到快要崩溃了。

7.Sheclasped（紧抱，紧握）thebabytoherbodyinthebiting/cutting/piercing/sharpwind.

8.Herteethwerechattering（唠叨、喋喋不休/动物吱吱叫）withcold.

——害怕

1.Itookadeepbreathandswallowedhard.(害怕地咽了口吐沫)

2.Achillfeelingcreptupherspine.她顿感毛骨悚然。

3.Astimetickedby,fearcreptuponmyheartandIcouldhardlytellhowlongIcouldploughon.(耕犁，前行)

4.Thethoughtofhopelessnesssentshiversdownmyspine(让我后脊背发凉).

5.Iwasfloodedwithasenseofhorror(被恐惧感淹没).

——描写挣扎努力

1.sparednoeffortto(不遗余力地)swimtowardstheshore.

2.Weexchangedadeterminedlook,thenploughedon(继续前行)atanincrediblespeed(难以置信的速度).

3,Weswamtoothandnail(全力以赴地).

第三绝招：转机描写

描写声音传来或看见了什么

例如，故事中我们迷路了，正在想办法如何脱离困境。

Suddenlyitoccurredtousthatwecouldkeeptothetracktoguideusback.Butitwasgettingdarkeranddarker,thusmakingitincreasinglydifficultforustomakeouttheroad.

（突然我们想到我们可以坚持小路引导我们回去。但天色越来越暗，使我们走道路越来越困难。）

1.Adistantandshrillsoundreachedourears.(传入耳朵)

2.Thesoundoftheboatechoedinourears.(在我们耳内回响)

3.Insheerdesperation(在完全绝望中),Ifinallycaughtsightofsomeboatswithlifeguardsonthemheadingtowardsusinthedistance.

4.过了很长时间，远处出现了一个亮点！我们挥挥手，大声呼救。

Afteralongtime,alightspotappearedinthedistance!Wewavedourhandsandyelledoutforhelp.

第四绝招：

情绪描写（希望+努力）

——描写如释重负

1.就像抓着救命稻草一样，我一遍又一遍地拨号码。

Asifclutchingatstraws,Idialedthenumberagainandagain.

2.听到这个令人欣慰的消息，我忍不住激动起来。

3.他的话重新点燃了我心中的希望之火。

Hearingthecomfortingnews,Icouldn'thelprestraining/containingmyexcitement.

Hiswordslightedtheflameofhopeinmyheart.

4.我感到一阵自豪，欣慰地微笑着。

Smilinginrelief(如释重负地微笑),Ifeltarushofpride(感到一阵自豪).

5.看到有船来救我们，我和汤姆高兴极了，都松了一口气。Overjoyed(狂喜)toseeaboatcomingtoourrescue,TomandIbreathedasighofrelief(如释重负地松了口气)

6.由于在一个姿势上保持了几个小时而僵硬了，他们慢慢地展开了身体。Stifffromkeepinginonepositionforhours,theyslowlyunfoldedtheirbodies.

第五绝招：脱险描写

Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Mac（跳下）hisbikeand（冲向）thebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.He（绕到）tothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,too,sohebeganto（爬进）theopenwindow.Paulquickly（锁上）thedoor,andthefrightenedman（跳进去）,（狠狠关上）thedoorbehindhim.BeckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimal（跑掉）.

Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Mac（下车）thecarand（拥抱）hisfriends.“Awolfchasedme.IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Mactoldthem.“IthoughtIwouldneverseemywifeandmylovelydaughtersagain.”After（告别）toPaulandBecky,Mac（捡起）hisbicycle,andthethreemen（继续）theirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmiles’（踩踏板）downtheroad,Mac（靠边停车）andcried.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtoletthatemotionout.”

根据汉语提示补充范文中的动词或短语动词，使情节连贯，衔接合理。

Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbikeanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Heranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,too,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.Beckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingover

Mac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.

Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“Awolfchasedme.IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Mactoldthem.“IthoughtIwouldneverseemywifeandmylovelydaughtersagain.”AftersayinggoodbyetoPaulandBecky,Macretrievedhisbicycle,andthethreemenresumedtheirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmiles’pedalingdowntheroad,Macpulledoverandcried.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtoletthatemotionout.”

找出回答“首句精研”中问题的句子，注意题目中画线单词出现的语境。

第六绝招：

情绪描写（感恩+高兴）

1.当我们想象欢乐的场景是什么时，我心中有解脱，幸福写在我的脸上。

Whenwepicturedwhatthemerryscenewouldbe,relieflayinmyheartandhappinesswaswrittenonmyface.

2.我如释重负，不停地想整个事件。我知道如果他们再在海里，就会死了。

Sighinginrelief,Icouldn’tstopthinkingaboutthewholeevent.Iknewtheywouldhavediediftheyhadbeenintheseaforanylonger.

第七绝招：主旨描写

万能升华要牢记

万能句1：

Thatdaywassounforgettablethatitwouldstayinmymemoryforever.

万能句2：

OnlythendidIrealizethatitwasbraverythatcanconquerwhateverdifficultycameintheway.

万能句3：

Itwasthisuniqueex