高中英语《读后续写》课件

ContinuationwritingTipsforyourwriting1.注意卷面整洁、书写清晰2.不是双横线、波浪线,或方框3.关键词要下划线

MyheartsankasIbadlyneededajob.ButIstillmissedthischance,andnoweverythinghasfailed.AnxietyreturnedtomyfaceandIcouldhardlycontrolmytears.SuddenlyCarrieburstintolaughterinreliefandsaid,“surprise!”ThenIsawhertakingoutaletterfromherback.Itwasmyhiringdocument.Everyonecheeredforme,andIrealizeditwasjustajoke.SoIwasoverexcitedrightnow.Wehaveworkedtogethersincegraduationandmonthlylunchwiththetaxgirlswasborn.NowIreallyenjoyedmyjob,mydiligentworkmatesandevenmydemandingboss,becausetheymademylifefullandmeaningful.Ilovetoworkhardandrelaxwithmyfriendsafterwork.WhatIneedtothankmostismyfriends’helpandencouragement.Ourlifegetsbetterandbetter.Thenew“town”getsmoreandmorecharming.4.段落只能分成两段

MyheartsankasIbadlyneededajob.Ifeltverystuffy,likestoneonthechestandmymindwenttotallyblank.“Linda,don'tbeanxious.Maybetheyhaven'thadtimetosendmessageyet.Carriesaid.

“Idohopethat”Isaid.Aswearesilent,suddenlythephonewasrung.

Wehaveworkedtogethersincegraduationandamonthlylunchwithtaxgirlswasborn.Ican'timaginethatallofusreceivedthehiringdocuments.Iwouldneverhimforgetthetimewhenwewereinataxschool.Thismemorywaslikethestarshininginmylifeforever.5.两段词数共为150词左右！MyheartsankasIbadlyneededajob.IwasextremelyexcitedbecauseIalsoreceivedthehiringdocument.FinallyIhadareliablejob.IhopeIcankeepthejobbecauseIloveit.IwasnotanxiousanymoreandonethingletmehappywasthatCarriebecamemybestfriends.Weareworktogethersincegraduationandmonthlylunchwiththetextgirlswasbornandwehaveapartyforit.Wewenttotherestaurantwhereweorderedalotofdeliciousfood.Weallhadagoodtime.Wetalkedtoeachotheraboutourownlife.6.两段词数要差不多MyheartsankasIbadlyneededajob.

Idraggedmyselfbacktomyseat.Ididn'thearthevoiceofcomfortaroundme.IwasthinkingaboutwhatIwasdoingbadlywhensuddenlyCarriecameandpattedmeontheshoulder,Iwasshocked,lookingatherwithweteyes.Carriessaid,“whatareyouanxiousabout?Youremploymentnoticeswasintheclassroom.”Irantothatclassroomrightaway.Iwantedtoseeitbymyself.”ohmygod.I'vegotit.”

Wehaveworkedtogethersincegraduationandmonthlylunchwithtaxgirlswasborn.Eventhoughouragesandbackgroundsseemedverydifferent,itisimpossibletostopourfriendship,itwillalsobecomemuchbetter.7.对话不要过多Myheartsank,asIbadlyneededajob.“MaybeIcanneverfindagoodjob.”Susanrealizeditandhuggedme,“Don’tthinkmore.Webelieveyouwillbebetter.”“Thanks.”Itookadeepbreath,“Excuseme,AreyouLinda?Hereisyourdocument,butIdon’tknowyouraddress!”“That’sright!Ican’tbelievemyeyes!”“That’sright!”8.要符合主流价值观，不要负能量Wehaveworkedtogethersincegraduationandmonthlylunchwiththetextgirlswasborn.Wealwayssharedtheexperienceinthejobandalsoplayedjokesoneachother,buteverythingchangedagain.Oneday,mybosstooksomethingandrushedangrilyintomyoffice,“Linda，lookatwhatyouhavedone!”Iwasscaredbecauseofhisbehavior.“it'sthethirdtimeyouhavemadesuchamistake!”NextdayIwasfired.Secretsofagoodwriting1.getthemainideaofthepassage2.makeanoutlineofthewriting3.usesentencepatternsforwriting4.

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1.mainideaofthepassageLindastudiedinthetaxschoolforajobwithagroupoftaxgirlstillthedistrictmanagercametointerviewthem,whofinallyreceivedthehiringdocumentsexceptLinda.Paragraph1

MyheartsankasIbadlyneededajob.Myfriendscomfortedme.Isoughtwaysforthenewsaboutmydocument.ShereceivedthehiringdocumentHowwouldLindafeelinthisparagraph?sad,disappointed

relieved,excitedanxious2.outlineofthewritingParagraph2Wehaveworkedtogethersincegraduationandamonthlylunchwithtaxgirlswasborn.Theychatatlunch.Myfriendsinfluencemealot.Iwillcontinuetoworkhardatmywork.

HowwouldLindafeelinthisparagraph?thankful,satisfied,relaxedhopeful2.outlineofthewriting3.Grammarusedforwriting定语从句Theworkingexperienceswererootedinourbrain,which

helpedtocreateagreatachievement.Iwanttokeepthejobandbeapersonwhoisveryhard-workinginhiscareer.Finally,Igothired,forwhichtheyhuggedmewithsmile,butIcriedlikeachild.Astimegoesby,thenightwhenwecelebratedtogetheralwaysremindsmeofstoriesaboutthetaxgirlswhoarefullofhopeforthefuture.名词性从句“…Whateverhappensormayhavehappened,youmusthaveatrustinwhatyoudo.Sunshinealwayscomesafterrain.”

2.What

surprisedmemostwasthatIhadalreadybeenadmitted.3.What

hesaidinspiredmeallthetime.同位语从句。。。With结构With

anxiety,Iopenedmymailbox.Therewasahiringdocumentinit,andinaninstantmytearssliddownmycheeks.2.Carriesaidexcitedlywithherfacereddeningover.3.WhenIwasstillinsadnessandanxiety,suddenlythelightwentoutandLarrycameinwithacakelightedwithcandles.4.Iquietlyopenedthedoorandstoppedsilentlywithmyheaddown分词结构Atthelunchtime,wealwaystalkaboutourwork,pointingoutmistakesandchattingcasually.2.Finding

noneoftheemailswithregardtomyhiringdocument,Ifeltmyheartwasbrokeninhalf.3.Seeing

theirbrightsmiles,Iseemedtobestandingatthefootofthemountain,lookingupthesun.4.Sincethen,becomingCEOhasbeenherlifegoal.强调句

Itwasfatethatmadeusknoweachotherandbecomefriends.被动句Wehadalongtalking.ThenextdayIwastoldthatIwasemployed.2.Finally,thehiringdocumentweresenttome.形容词副词的使用Carrieputherhandonmyshoulderandsaidsoftly.2.Atthismoment,IrevealedmydisappointmentandIextremelywantedtoknowwhy.3.Thankstotheirhelp,Isuccessfullyreceivedthehiringdocuments.4.IsatonmyseatanxiouslywaitingforthedistrictmanagertotellmethatIwashired.5.Thrilledatthenews,Icouldn’tsayawordandwaseveryhappytoworkwiththem.(Class5)高级词汇1.MyfriendsandIjumpedupinexcitement.Anxietyquicklymeltaway.2.GraduallyIintegratedintothisgroupandoftenwentshoppingandhadmealswiththemduringmysparetime.3.Myanxietyvanishedinamoment,andwiththeirlovelylaughterIsawthefirstfulldayofmylife.4.Despiteourdifferentbackgroundsandpersonalities,ourmutualsupportmademefeelathome.5.Thoughourbackgroundsandagearedifferent,wehaveonethingincommon,thatistheloveoflifeandconstantpursuitofabetterlife.高级句型1.ThereisnothinghappierthanthedayswhenIwaswithmyfriends.2.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadfelttimewentsoslowly.3.There’snodoubtthatyouarethefirstonethemanagertohire!4.Althoughthejobistiring,itisworthwhiletomakesuchgreatefforts.5.Becauseofthisexperience,Irealizethat

whileyoumaybeunfortunate,aslongasyoutakethingsseriously,youcanmakeitoneday.修辞---比喻，夸张，排比Ihaddreamedaboutiteverysecond,everyminute,everyhourandeveneveryday.2.God!Allofthesethingslikeahugemonsterhitmedown.3.NowIreallyenjoyedmyjob,mydiligentworkmatesandevenmydemandingboss,becausetheymademylifefullandmeaningful.3.Grammarusedforwriting定语从句名词性从句With结构分词结构强调句被动句形容词副词高级句型，高级词汇，修辞Aboutthecontinuationwriting,Whatelseisimportant?Readtwoparagraphsandanswerthequestion.第一段IjustthoughtaboutthereasonwhyIwasn’tadmittedandkeptsilent.Carrieimmediatelycameupandtookmyhandtocomfortme,“Maybetheymissedyournamebyaccident.Don’tworry.”Kay’swordsgavemeabitofhope.IsatonthedeskanxiouslywaitingforthedistrictmanagertotellmethatIwashired.Ilookedatmywatchoverandover,anditwasthefirsttimethatIhadfelttimewentsoslowly.Finally,thehiringdocumentweresenttome.Ijumpeduphappilyandhuggedmyfriends.(ZhongYiwen)人物描写Whatimpressesyoumostinthisparagragh?第二段We’veworkedtogethersincegraduationandamonthlylunchwithtaxgirlswasborn.Wewouldsharethelifearoundus.“Recently,Ihearthatagroupofnewstudentshavecometothetaxschool!”Carriesaidexcitedlywithherfacereddeningover.MymemoryallcamecrowdinginandIwasverygratefultotheschoolforgivingmeanopportunitytowork.Lifewasfullofsurprises,givingyoumotivationtomoveforward!(XiaMengyao)参考范文MyheartsankasIbadlyneededajob.Kayputherarmaroundme.Carrie

searchedthroughhercellphoneforthemanager'snumber.Susan,SusanandDebbieturnedtoLarryforhelp.Carriehandedmeapieceofpaperwithaphonenumberonit.Iwentoutsidetomakethecallbutnooneanswered.Myfriendsgavemetheirgoodthoughtsthateverythingwouldbefinebytomorrow.WhenIgothome,themanagercalledandexplainedtheyforgottosendmyhiringdocuments.

Wehaveworkedtogethersincegraduationandamonthlylunchwiththetaxgirlswasborn.Inevermissit.Wetellstoriesofchildren,grandchildrenandhusbands.Theplateshavelongbeenclearedbeforeanyoneeventhinkstogetuptoleave.Iwasveryluckytomeetmytax

girlsfromdifferentbackgroundswithdifferentpointsofview.TheywillforeverholdaspecialplaceinmyheartasfriendsIhavefoundwhenIneededthemmost.优秀作文一

MyheartsankasIbadlyneededajob.WhenIwasstillinsadnessandanxiety,suddenlythelightwentoutandLarrycameinwithacakelightedwithcandles.ThentheysangbirthdaysongsaroundmeandCarrietoldmetheyplayedajokeonme.Indeed,thedistrictmanagerwascontentwithourinterviewsandallofusgotthehiringdocuments.Iwassurprisedandshockedbywhattheyhaddonetome.Atlastwehadagoodtimethatnight.Wehaveworkedtogethersincegraduationandamonthlylunchwithtaxgirlswasborn.Ican'timaginethatweallgotjobsandwe'reinthesamecompany.Iwouldneverforgetthetimeinataxschoolwhenwestudiedtogether,worriedtogetherandlaughedtogether.Weallcamefromdifferentagesandbackgrounds,butwehadthesimilarstories.Itwasfatethatmadeusknoweachotherandbecomefriends.Youknowhowdifficultitwasforsomanypeopleonearthtomeetlike-mindedpeople,evenagroupofpeople.Iwasprettyluckytomeetthem.LuoQingyuLuoQingyu优秀作文二

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