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IwouldliketotalkaboutthetriptoThousandIslandLake.ThelakeliesintheoutskirtsofHangzhoucity.ItwasduringmysummervacationwhenIwastenyearsoldandmyparentshappenedtohavetimeforafamilytrip.Well.IwassoamazedwhenIsawthegorgeousnaturalscenerythere.Thewaterwassocrystal-clearthatIcouldseesomefishyinthedeepwater.Aftersettlingdownintheho,myparentsboughtmeaswimmingringandwehadalotoffuninthewater.Asyouknow,agoodpartofatripinvolveslocalfoods.Intheevening,Igottheopportunitytotaste[teɪst]thefishthere.ItwaslikethetastiestfoodIhadeverenjoyed,soyoucouldunderstandhowexcitedIcouldbe.Sincemyparentshadtowork,weonlyspenttwodaysthere.Thetripwasshortbutmemorable.IthinkThousandIslandLakeisabsoluyamust-seefornaturelovers.IwouldliketotalkaboutNanjingcity.ItisthecapitalofJiangsuprovince,whichislocatedineastern.Iwentthereduringmylastsummervacationtoseemyfriend.Asyouknow,agoodpartofatripinvolveslocalfoods.Afterarrivingthereandsettlingdownintheho,myfriendtookmetoafamoussnackstreettotaste[teɪst]thefishthere.ItwaslikethetastiestfoodIhadeverenjoyed,soyoucouldunderstandhowexcitedIcouldbe.Nanjinghasalonghistory.ItisthecapitalofSixDynasties['dɪnəstɪ]inhistory.Incontemporarysociety,itwasthecapitaloftheRepublicof.TherearemanyfamouseventshappenedinNanjing.Forexample,youmayhaveheardabouttheanti-JapanesewarduringtheSecondWorldWar.ThesurrenderceremonyofJapanesetroopswashostedinNanjing.Besides,Nanjinghasagoodreputationofeducation,asyoucanfindmanyprestigiousuniversitiesthere,suchasNanjingUniversityandSoutheastUniversity.Especially,NanjingUniversityistheToponeuniversityintermsofPhysicsin.Sincemyfriendhadtowork,Ionlyspentfivedaysthere.ThetripwasshortbutIlikeNanjingveryButIreallydon’tlikethecommercializationofthescenicspots.WhenIwenttotheThousandIslandsLakethisyear,Ijustcouldn’tbelievehowthiscehadbeenruined.Youknow,thestic['plæstɪk]bottleswerefloatinginthelakeeverywhereandvarietiesofshopsmakeitbeanoisyce.Ithinksomethingmustbedonetostopthecommercialization.Ilikegoingtotheopenairceinthemorning,becausethatcankeepmefeelrefreshedanddefiniydoworkbetteralltheday.Youknow,therearemanygorgeouscesaroundtheWestlakethataretopublic,andtheoneIlikemostisaformerhomeofafamous.Itisabighousewithaprivategarden.Thehousecontainstwostoreys.Thefirstfloorwasforstorageofartpiecesandthesecondonewasforlivinginthepast.Butnowwholeofthehouseisusedasamuseum.Asyouknow,itisclosetomyUniversity,sousuallywhenIfellundergreatpressure,Iwouldalwayshaveawalkinthegardeninfrontofthehouse.Thecolorfulflowerscanhelpmegetawayfromthebusystudentlife.Withagoodstart,itismorelikelytosucceedintheday.Therearealsosomechairsandtablesforpeopletorestwhentheyfeeltired.IftheweatherwascomfortableIwillsitthereforentiremorning.→Ithinkitisawonderfulcetoenjoylife.Iwouldliketotalkaboutabirthdaypartyofmyclassmate.Sinceitwasthelastbirthdayofhisuniversitylife,Idecidedtoprepareasurprisegiftforhimandmakeittobeareallymemorablebirthdayparty.Thegiftwasaphotoalbum.Therewerenumerousphotosinthisalbum.Eachphotoscontainedaword.Putthesewordstogether,therewasasentence“Happybirthdaymybestfriend”.Thesepictureswereprettyoriginal.Takethepicturewithaword“Happy”forexample.IstoodinfrontofasnackbarnamedHappyHourwherewehadhungontogether.IcoveredthewordHourbyhand,andthenaskedsomeonetotakephotoforme.Therefore,IgotthepicturewiththewordHappy.Bythesameway,Igototherfourwords,birthdaymybestfriendrespectively.Whenhereceivedthisalbum,hewasmovedtotears.Itisreallyapreciousmoments.Hetoldmethatthosephotosbroughtbackloadsofmemoriesofourfriendship.Iwouldliketotalkaboutthe phonewithadigitalcamera.MyparentsboughtittomeasagiftbonuswhenIgottheadmissionofZhejiangUniversity.Asyouknow,sendingmessagesbetweenuniversitystudentsisinHangzhou.So phoneisprevalentamongmyfriends,andwecanmessageeachotherconveniently.Whatismore,itoncehelpedmetochasemygirlfriend.Iattached3picturesinamessageandsentittomygirlfriend.Eachphotoscontainedaword.Putthesewordstogether,therewasasentence“Iloveyou”.Thesepictureswereprettyoriginal,takethepicturewithaword“Love”forexample,IstoodinfrontofasnackbarnamedLoveStorywherewehadwentonadate.IcoveredthewordStorybyhand,andthenaskedsomeonetotakephotoforme.Therefore,IgotthepicturewiththewordLove.Bythesameway,Igotothertwowords,Iandyourespectively.Mygirlfriendwasmovedtotearswhenreceivedthismessage.Iliketheprogramintermsofhistoryverymuch,especiallytheperiodoftheRepublicof.Imeantheformerernmentof,notthePeopleRepublicof.LastweekIreadabiographyofoneofthemostseniorgeneralsofRepublican.HisnameisHeYingqin.HewaswellknownastherepresentativeofernmenttohostthesurrenderceremonyofJapanesetroopsinNanjing,.Thishistoricmomentputhimunderthespotlightoftheworld.Apartfromcareersuccess,hewasreferredtoasthebesthusbandinRepublic.Sincemostofmyfriendshavegottenmarriednow,IthinkthestoryofHeyingqinwouldhaveabeneficialimpactonthem.Therewasastory.He’swifewasinfertile.Traditionally,awoman'sdutywastobearsonstocarryonthefamilyline.Sohisfriendadvisedhimtokeepconcubines.Infact,keeconcubineswasprevalentinatthattime.Buthewasveryangry.Hescoldedhisfriendandsaidthathiswifewashisonlylove.Hiswifewasmovedtotearswhenheardthis.IknowshewasveryhappybecauseofthelovefromherIlikehistoryverymuch,especiallytheperiodoftheRepublicof.Imeantheformerernmentof,notthePeopleRepublicof.LastweekIreadabiographyofoneofthemostseniorgeneralsofRepublican.HisnameisHeYingqin.SoIwouldliketotalkabouthimandthesurrenderceremonyofJapanesetroopsduringtheSecondWorldWar.HeyingqinwaswellknownastherepresentativeofernmenttohostthesurrenderofJapanesetroopsinNanjing,.Thishistoricmomentputhimunderthespotlightoftheworld.Buthemadeamistakeduringtheparty.WhentheJapaneseannouncedtheunconditionalsurrender,hebowedtoacceptthestatementbycourtesy.Youknowwhathappen?Thenewspaperattackedhimandrefusedtopublishthepicturetakenfromthesurrenderparty.Becausetheythoughtitwasnotnecessarytobepolitetoenemy.Atlast,theyinvitedsomestodrawanewpicture,inwhichHeyingqinstooduprightly.Iwouldliketotalkaboutthestreetnearmyhome.Ilikethestreetnotonlybecauseitisnearbutalsobecausethereisaswimmingpoolinthisstreet.||Wehavealotofhappymemoriesinthisswimming Myfamilydoesn’ttakephotosveryoften.Butwehadafamilyphototakeninfrontofaswimmingpool.||Mydadsuggestedthatwetakeafamilyphototherebecausewehavealotofhappymemoriesinthisswimming Ilikethesunnysummerday,becauseIlikeswimmingverymuch,anditisverycomfortabletoswimwithmyfamilyinahotday.Infact,wehavealotofhappymemoriesinsummer.→---→Well,whenIwasachild,youknow,entertainmentequipmentsuchastheevisionwasaluxuryforafamilyatthattime.Afterthefirstswimmingpoolopeninginmyhometown,swimminghadbeentheonlyrecreationactiveofmyfamily,especiallyinasummerafternoon.Wewenttoswimalmosteveryafternoonwhenmyparentscamebackformwork.Itwasacozymomentthatallmyfamilyenjoyedthefunofswimmingtogether.Afterswimming,weoftenenjoyourdinnerinthestreetinfrontoftheswimmingpool,becausewewereallhungryatthattime.Therearealsosomeshopsneartheswimmingpool.Ifitwasn’training,wewouldhangoutafterdinner.Theseactivitiesbroughtusmuchjoy.Butthreeyearsago,youknow,IwenttoHangzhouforUniversitystudiesandwehaven’tswumtogethersincethen.Ireallywanttogobackhomethissummer.Iwouldliketotalkaboutmyexperienceofswimming.Mymotherisaswimmingcoachinmyhometown,butherson-I-neverswimuntilaccessedtohertrainingclassinthissummerholiday.IamafraidofswimmingduetoanaccidentinmychildhoodthatIwillneverforget.Oneday,myneighborandIwereyinginthelake.Youknowwhathappened?Asnakeintheweedwasstaringatme.Iwassoafraidandcan’thelpcrying.Youknow,Ididn’tknowhowtocontrolmybreathingatthattime.Cryinghadcausedmetoinhalemuchwater.Ifmyneighborhadnotsavedmeandscaredawaythesnake,Iwouldprobablyhavenochancetosithere.Thisexperienceisreallyanightmareforme.Fromthenon,Ineverswim.Inthetrainingclass,mymotherpatientlyhelpedmeto ethefearandshowedmehowtobreatheinwater.Littlebylittle,Ifeltmuchcomfortablewiththewaterandcanswimlikeafishnow. ingthedifficultiesgavemesomuchconfidenceandachievementinmylife.Iwouldliketobuyamotorhome,because→Iliketravelingverymuchandalwaysdreamtobeatraveler.Travellingisanicethingforme.Itenablesmetoreleasestressfromstudying.EverytimeIfinishedmyjourney,Iwasfullofenergy.Also,travellingisagoodwaytobroadenmyhorizon.Forexample,Icanlearnnewcultures,historyandnewopinionswhenItraveltodifferentcesandmeetdifferentpeoplefromallovertheworld.Thesedays,afterreadingabookaboutthewonderfullifeofatravelerandhismotorhome,Ibegantopayattentiontothemotorhome.Ithinkitismust-haveforaprofessionaltraveler,becauseitisconvenientandeconomicaltotravelbymotorhome.Forexample,whenIvisitacewherehosarefarfromit,motorhomecanoffermealiving modationfor.Also,Icansleep,readandeatinitwhentraveling.But,asyouknow,themotorhomeisverypricey.So,atfirstIhavetofinishmystudiesandfindajobwithadecentsalary.Maybeinthefuture,IwilljustquitthejobandtravelaroundtheIwouldliketotalkaboutmygrandfather.Imeanmymother’sfarther.Hejustlookslikeanyotherelderlyman,withgrayhairandsomewrinkles.Butheisaninteresting withasenseofhumor.Icouldalwaysseehimmakethepeoplearoundhimlaugh.Hereisastory.Myyoungbrotherisverynaughty,andmymotherusuallyscoldedhim.Youknow,anaughtyboymustbeacleverboy,soismyyoungbrother.Heusuallysearchhelpfrommygrandfathertoavoidbeingpunished.Inoneofhisbirthdayparties,mygrandfathergavehimanoldphotoasgift.Itisaphotoofmymotheratheryoungage.Shewasscoldedbymygrandmotherandwascrying.Inthebackofthisphoto,mygrandfatherwrote[rəʊt]”Showittoyourmotherwhenshescoldedyouagain”.Whenwesawthis,allthefamilyincludingmymotherburstintolaughter,eventhough[ðəʊ]shewasembarrassed.Thatisnotthepoint.Severaldayslater,whenmyyoungbrotherwasscolded,hereallytookoutthephotoandshowedittomymotherconfidently['kɔnfədəntli].Youknowwhathappened?Hewasscoldedmorehardly.-IwouldliketotalkaboutmyfavoriteneighborMr.Li.Ihaveknownhimformorethantenyears.Hehasgonethroughlotsofeventsinhislifeandhascomeupwithsomepracticallifeprinciples.EachtimeIwentbackhomefromHangzhou,Iwoulddropinhim.Talkingtohimisalwaysawonderfulwaytoenrichmyself.Forexample,healwayslsmethatwhenIfacedifficulties,Ishouldhanginandthedreamwillcometrueprettysoon.Inface,thatisthereasonwhyIstillpreparetheIELTStestthisyear.Also,fromhim,IamabletogetaccesstosomerealknowledgethatotherwiseIcanneverknow,suchasthestorieshappenedinVietnamduringtheWarbetweenandVietnam,whenhewasasolder.Apartfromthat,healsoactsasamentorinmylife.Heusually lsmehowtobeathatisneededbythissociety.Ireallyappreciatehis海边比赛Well,Iwouldliketotalkaboutthebeachvolleyball.MyhighschoolisbytheseainsoutheastofZhejiangProvince.Sobeachvolleyballisverypopular,especiallyinthesummertime.Tobehonest,Idon’tyitoftenbecauseofthebusystudies.ButeverytimeIyit,Iwouldhavealotoffun.IstillrememberthefirsttimeIyedit.OurschoolorganizedabeachvolleyballmatchwhenIwasasenioronestudent.Iwasselectedasamemberofthefreshstudentteam.Atthattime,IwasgoodatvolleyballbutIonlyyedvolleyballonground,soIperformednotverywellinthismatch.ButIthinkitisgreattoyvolleyballatthebeach.Wecanfeeltheseaandlistentothewaveswhenwey.Moreimportant,wedon’tneedtowearshoesbecausethesandisverysoft.Also,wedon’tneedtoworryabouthurtingourselveswhenwetrytosavetheball.错误的决Iwouldliketotalkaboutanunhappyshopexperience.Youknow,IamnningtostudyintheUKnextyear.SoIneededtobuyabigsuitcasetoprepareforthat.MyfriendtoldmeagoodbrandcalledDiplomat.Ifoundthesuitcasewasmuchcheaperonlinethaninrealshops,soIdecidedtobuyitonline.ButIhavemadeawrongdecision.Iorderedthesizeof28inches,butwhenthesuitcasesarrived,Ifounditwasonly26.Iwassurprisedandbegantocontactthestoreowner.Iwasalittleangrybecausethestorekeepergavemealotofexcuses.Finally,afterthreedaysnegotiation,heagreedtoreturnthesuitcase.Thisissomethingthatshouldnothavehappenedbecausetheshopownershouldhavecheckedtheirproductscarefullybeforesendingthem.Whentheyfoundthattheysentthewrongthings,theyshouldhavedealtwithitfaster.IthinkIhavelearntalessonfromthisshopexperience,thatwecannotbuythewithspecialrequirementslikethesuitcaseandclothesIlikePandaverymuch.Theyhaveblackpatchesaroundtheeyesandacrossthebody.Ialwaysdreamtopetthem,becausetheylooksocute.Butmydreamwillnevercometrue,youknow,itisthenationaltreasurein.Well,IstillremembermyfirsttimeseeingPandainHangzhouAnimalPark.Iwenttherewithmyfriendlastyear.Thepandaswereveryfriendly.Theyseemedtoenjoythepeacefullifeinthezooverymuch.Ieventookphotowiththem.Ofcourse,therewasafencebetweenus.Butyouknow,thePandaisanendangeredspecies,threatenedbythelossoftheirnaturalhomeandaverylowbirthrate.Ithinkpeopleshouldhelpthemtosurviveinbecauseanimalsandhumansaregoodfriends.ItisreallyimportantthatwecanliveinpeaceandIhopethenumberofpandaswillincreasesoon.Iwouldliketotalkaboutmybestfriend,Liyang.Actuallywewereneighboursandwenttothesameelementaryschool.Wehavealwaysbeenfriendsevenwhenweallmavedtoanothercityafterhighschool.Becausemostofourrelativesarestillinourhometown,wewouldcomebacktovisitveryoften.Buttwoyearsago,hisfamilyimmigratedtoUKandwehaven’tseeneachothersincethen.Ireallymisshimandwanttoseehimagain.IfIseehim,IwouldliketolhimmylifeincollegeandIwanttohearherexperienceintheUK.Heisaveryoptimistic andhehasgivenmealotofencouragementsinceourchildhood,andIhavelearnedalotfromhim.Whenwewerekids,wewouldalwaysytogetherandwecouldthinkofallkindsoffunwaystoy.WheneverIhavesomethingdifficulttofaceinlife,shewouldalwaysbetheretosupportme.Ireallythankherforwhatshehasdoneforme.Now,bothofusarebusywithourstudy,sowehaven’tcontacteachotherforaboutonIhopedistancewon’tchangeourfriendshipbecauseIcherishitvery IwouldliketotalkaboutEasonChanandhissongcalledTenYears.EasonhasbeenpraisedbyTimemagazineasafrontrunnerofHongkong’spopsongsinger.Ithinkhissongswillneverbeoutofdatebecausetheyarefulloffeelingsandcanreallyrouchpeople’sheart.Infact,peoplewhohavebeenfellinlovewouldlikehissongs.IstillrememberthefirsttimeIlistenedtohissong.Iwastravelinginmydad’scarandthebeautifulmusiccameoutfromtheradio.LaterIlearneditwasEason’snewsongcalledTenYears.Iwasdeeplymoved,becauseatthattimemygirlfriendhadbeenbrokenupwithmeandthemelodybroughtmeloadsofmemories.Fromthenon,Istartedtolikehimandmostofhissongs.IhavecollectedallofhisCDsathome,andsometimes,IwillythemwhileIstudyorrelax.Itisagoodwaytorelaxmyself.ThereisatraditionalcustominmyhometownthatpeoplemustpaytheirrelativesavisitintheseconddayofSpringFestival.Peoplewillcarefulaboutth