初三英语中考复习课-写作指导-话题作文-课件整理+学案-无答案

写作指导—话题作文thecityofBeijingtheTian’anmenSquaretheGreatWallthePalaceMuseum/theForbiddenCitytheTempleofHeaventheSummerPalacetheBeihaiParktheBeijingZootheOlympicParkWritingSteps1.PREWRITE2.OUTLINE3.DRAFT 4.REVISE 5.PROOFREAD6.PUBLISH

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北京是一座美丽的城市，作为一名北京的中学生，你一定对这里的景点非常熟悉。某英语报纸正在向北京的中学生征文，请你通过一次旅行经历，介绍你去过的一个景点，在那儿所做的事情以及你的感受。

提示词语:theBeihaiPark,goboating,takepictures,interesting

提示问题: ●Wheredidyougo？ ●Whatdidyoudothere？ ●Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip？WritingTaskPrewrite---How?What?1.明确文章的用途和功能2.标注出主题和要点中的关键词3.确定好每个要点的时态4.确定好每个要点的人称

北京是一座美丽的城市，作为一名北京的中学生，你一定对这里的景点非常熟悉。某英语报纸正在向北京的中学生征文，请你通过一次旅行经历，介绍你去过的一个景点，在那儿所做的事情以及你的感受。

提示词语：theBeihaiPark,goboating,takepictures,interesting

提示问题:●Wheredidyougo？ ●Whatdidyoudothere？ ●Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip？审题：用途、主题、要点、时态、人称ThreeparagraphsThreeanswers/ThreetopicsentencesOutlinePara1---Answer1(Topicsentence1)_____________________________Para2---Answer2(Topicsentence2)______________________________Para3---Answer3(Topicsentence3)______________________________OutlineIwenttotheBeihaiParklastweekend.Iwentboatingandtookalotofpictures.Thetripwasveryinterestingbecause...ThreeparagraphsUsesentencepatternsUsetransitionalwordsMakesureyouwritecorrectsentencesDraftKeepinmindBasicprinciplesofbeinggoodwriting:honesty,clarity,brevity,andvariety.Beinghonest:Baseyourwritingonthesubject.Beingclear:Don’tpuzzleyourreaders.Beingbrief:Don’twasteyourreaders’time;don’trepeat.Seekingvariety:Varysentencelength/expressions/vocabulary,workonaliveness.第一档：（9~10分）

完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全，句式多样，词汇丰富，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。书写规范，卷面整洁。REVISEComestraighttothepoint:IwenttotheBeihaiParklastweekend.Descriptionoftheplace:TheBeihaiParkliesinthecenterofBeijinganditisfamousfortheWhiteTower.Significancecomesfirst:TheBeihaiParkisoneofthemostpopularplacestovisitinBeijing.Quotesandsayings:Asthesayinggoes,“HewhodoesnotreachtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.”REVISE---丰富内容Wheredidyougo?*visitoldbuildings/palaces*enjoythebeautifulflowersandgreentrees*takephotos(of…)/climbthehill/themountain*learnaboutChineseculture/goboating*takeawalk/haveapicnicREVISE---丰富内容Whatdidyoudothere?Itwasa/anwonderful/terrific/unforgettabletripbecause...Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip?Ienjoyedthetripverymuchbecause...Thetripwasfullofsurprisesbecause…Ithelpedmelearnmoreabouttheculture.Iwasimpressedwiththebeautifulviewsandtheoldbuildings.“AwalkaboutPariswillprovidelessonsinhistory,beauty,andinthepointofLife.”(ThomasJefferson)REVISE（改进）---丰富内容First,…Then,…Afterthat,…Finally,…Inthemorning…Intheafternoon…REVISE---逻辑清晰、衔接自然万能句型：notonly…butalso…Itisnecessary/important…(forsb.)todo…spend…doingsth./onsth.help(sb.)dosth./withsth.makesb./sth.do…/makesb./sth.adj.so…that…REVISE

---句型意识很重要Thetripwasinteresting.wasfulloffun wasmeaningfulwasofgreatvaluemadeadifferencetomylife

REVISE---词汇丰富

PROOFREADPUBLISH

Asamplewriting

TheBeihaiParkisoneofthemostpopularplacestovisitinBeijing.Iwenttherewithmyclassmateslastweekendandwehadagreattime. Wearrivedthereearlyinthemorning.Theairwascoolandfresh.Aswewalkedalongthelake,wesawmanypeopledoingexercisesanddancing.WealsotooklotsofpicturesofthebeautifulflowersintheGarden.Thenwecrossedthebridgeandclimbedupthehill.Itwasgreattoenjoytheviewsfromthetop.Intheafternoonwetookaboattourinthelakeandwesanghappilytogether.

Itwasawonderfultrip.Weallfeltrelaxedandhappy.I'mlookingforwardtovisitingmorebeautifulplacesinBeijing.

TheBeihaiParkisoneofthemostpopularplacestovisitinBeijing.Iwenttherewithmyclassmateslastweekendandwehadagreattime. Wearrivedthereearlyinthemorning.Theairwascoolandfresh.Aswewalkedalongthelake,wesawmanypeopledoingexercisesanddancing.WealsotooklotsofpicturesofthebeautifulflowersintheGarden.Thenwecrossedthebridgeandclimbedupthehill.Itwasgreattoenjoytheviewsfromthetop.Intheafternoonwetookaboattourinthelakeandwesanghappilytogether.

Itwasawonderfultrip.Weallfeltrelaxedandhappy.I'mlookingforwardtovisitingmorebeautifulplacesinBeijing.AsamplewritingHomeworkFinishthedraft.Reviseyourdraft.Publishyourwriting.1.新闻特写则是用形象的事实说话。它常常抓住事物有特征的一面进行描述，比消息更细腻、更生动、更形象。2.由于新闻特写的画面感特别强，因此常给读者以身临其境的感受。3.“花香蝶自来，题好一半文”，一篇文章有一个好的标题，就像一个人有一双明亮有神的眼睛一样，留给别人的是将是十分美好而深刻的印象，同时也是文学修养，语言功底，思想魅力的最直接的流露，从考试的角度来说，更是作文质量高底的一杆标尺。4.对于话题作文的拟题我们一定要多一些有针对性的训练，掌握一定的技巧，达到需要应用时信手拈来，出语不俗的效果，感动自己，征服读者。5.这些根据材料提供的话题，进一步挖深、提炼出来的题目，源源源于材料而高于材料