读后续写个人成长类-吃醋的“小王子”讲义- 高考英语二轮作文专项复习

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。人与自我（家庭素材二胎现象与孩子的成长）人与自我（家庭素材二胎现象与孩子的成长）Fortheinitialtenyearsofhislife,Victorwastheprinceofthehousehold.Ashewasanonlychild,hisparentspettedhimandshoweredalltheirloveandattentiononhim.Whatevertoyshisparentsbought,theywerealwaysmeantforhim.Whateverfoodwasintherefrigerator,therewasnoonetocompetewithhimtopolishitofffirst.Victorcouldleavehistoysorbooksaroundthehousewithcompleteeaseofmind,knowingthattherewasnoonewhowouldgettheirhandsonhisbelongingsandcauseanydamage.However,allthatwastochangeovernightwhenVictor'sparentsbroughtbackhisnewbabysister,Lina,fromthehospital.Withherrosycheeks,wideopeneyesandangelicsmile,Linacaughttheheartsofherparents,grandparentsandrelatives.Everyonefocusedtheirattentiononthecutebunchofiov.Whenevershecried,hermotherorfatherwouldrushtoherbed.Shesimplycriedbecauseshewantedtobecarried.TherewaslittletimeleftforVictor.NowthatVictor'smotherhadhisbabysistertotakecareof,sheexpectedVictorhimselftodomostofthechoreshecando.Victorwasaskedtocleanhisownroom,ironhisownschooluniformandcleanhisownshoes.BeforeLina'sarrival,hehadneverliftedafingertohelpoutwiththesetasks.ThewholefamilyalsowentoutlessbecauseitwasunhealthytoexposeLinatothebacteria仁田菌）beingintheoutsideworldtooo代en.Victorfeltneglectedbyhisparents.HefeltthattheylovedLinamorethanhim.Asaresult,hetriedtoattracthisparents1attentionbybecomingresistant.Oneevening,Victor'sparentswerecalledupbyhisteacherbecauseVictorhadgotintoafightatschool.HisteacherhadnoticedVictor'sbehaviourandworkattitudechangingdownwardsinthepasttwomonths.Beforethat,hehadbeenamodelstudent.注意:.续写词数应为150左右;,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1：Onhearingtheteacher'sfeedback,Victor'sparentsgotlostinthought.第一段续写：“听到老师的反馈，Victor的父母陷入了沉思”一一本段续写的关键在于把“沉思”的“静态”层面如何展开为“动态”层面。同时结合提供的语篇材料，我们不难分析出原因，即导致Victor行为变换的原因在于妹妹的出生，同时由于二段的收据提示为“Victor意识到他的父母任然关心他”，可以得知本段续写的结尾一定是父母与儿子已经解开了心结。 可能涉及的词汇有：Victor；parents；newbabysister；Lina；resistant；behaviour；workattitude下水文Paragraph1：Onhearingtheteacher'sfeedback,Victor'sparentsgotlostinthought.TheyimmediatelyrealizedthattherootwhichledVictortotheimproperbehaviourandnegativeworkattitudeatschoolexistedinthefactthatthenewbcbvsister,Linawasbroughtback.Andmostimportantly,withthefamiliarfamily/homeatmospherechangingallofasudden,Victorfelthewasnotlovedbythemanymore,sohetemptedtodrawhisparents'attentionagainbydoingsomethingresistant.Atonce,theyenteredVictor'sroom,tellinghimalthoughtheyspentmuchtimeincaringLina,heaswellashissisterwasofequalweightintheirhearts.Andtheywouldloveandhelphimasusual.（4句）Paragraph2：Victorrealizedthathisparentsstillcaredforhim.第二段续写：“Victor■意识到他的父母任然关心他”一一本段续写的关键在于既然心结已经解开，所以情节的创设便可以围绕Victor如何回归到常态并进一步成长的轨道上来。因此本段续写郭老师创造性的使用了空间逻辑，分别利用“在学校”和“在家庭”的两个逻辑，全面的展现Victor改变和成长的全貌。可能涉及的词汇有：bunchofjoy；toys；modelstudent；choreParagraph2：Victorrealizedthathisparentsstillcaredforhim.Thatnight,hedidn'tfeelanyconfusedandeveninhissleepwasheardabunchofjoy.Duringthefollowingdays,Victoractedasifhehadturnedintosomeoneelse.Atschool,hestudiedhardagain,usingsparetimetotakingpartinallkindsofafter-classactivities.Themodelstudentcameback.Athome,henotonlywashisparents'goodhelpertotakecareofhisbabysister,makingherlauchiegbysharinghistoys,butalsolearnedtodofamilychoresindependently,fromwhichhereceivedmoreloveardunderstoodthejoyofgrowingup.（5句）【答案】"Thatbigreddressisgone/shesaidindisbelief.nIt!sactuallygone."Dadlookedquicklyandsmiled,“Yes,itisnothere!""Butwhowouldliketobuythatsillydress,whichisneitherpracticalnorcheap?”Mommarveled,butmeanwhilebothfatherandIcoulddiscernaninexplicablebutconspicuousdisappointmentcreptoverherface."Someromantic,reservedlovingmanmightbuythatfortheirwife."Fatherwinkedslylyatmomandmefromtherearmirrorasifhewerethesecretivedevotinghusbandhedepicted.FilneverforgetthatChristmasmorningasMomunpackedalargeboxthatread"Eaton'sFinestDishpan"."Tada,themostsillygiftformyprincess!/zfatherexclaimed,eyeingathiswifeinalovingandexpectantway.Mother,toostunnedtospeak,receivedtheboxwithhertremblinghands.Herpalmssweating,throattightening,mother'shandslidedthroughtheredsatinandlingeredatthetwinklingstars.“Oh,Tom,youshouldn'thavebeenthatextravagant/1"No,baby,youdeservethehighesthonorandmypassionateloveonthisSpecialChristmas//本次三模读后续写分析：本份试卷的大作文属于一篇典型的“人与自我”话题，重点突出在当今二胎政策的背景下，老大和老二之间的微妙变化，由于对于老大而言，由于家庭结构的改变或多或少都会对其内心产生一定的影响。因此就会出现文章材料中的一些列“不良的”行动和行为。我们不难看出，本篇读后续写的命题目的还是非常的直接，直