高中英语-How to make a good writing教学课件设计

Teachingaims:1.Enablestudentstomasterfivestepsforwrintingacomposition.2.Beabletowritingcompositionsusingtheskillslearnedinthisclass.1.他的梦想是当一名老师。2.他考入北京大学。3.他总是第一个来最后一个走的学生。HewasenrolledintoBeijingUniversity.HewasadmittedintoBeijingUniversity.Hisdreamistobe/becomeateacher.Hedreamsofbecoming/beingateacher.Heisalwaysthefirststudenttocomeandthelastonetoleave.4.杨利伟是第一位登上月球的中国人。5.有志者事竟成。YangLiweiisthefirstChinesetolandonthemoon/wholandedonthemoon.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.1.汉式英语错误：ThatfactorybrokeoutafirelastSunday.正确：AfirebrokeoutinthatfactorylastSunday.英语写作中常见错误：2.句子结构不完整或结构错误错误：ThewomantalkedtoyoujustnowisourEnglishteacher.正确：Thewomanwho/thattalkedtoyoujustnowisourEnglishteacher.3.重复累赘

错误：Wehopetoimproveourworkbetter.

正确：Wehopetoimproveourwork.4.语法、词法错误

错误：Inthebedroomthereareabed,asofa,adeskandachair.

正确：Inthebedroomthereisabed,asofa,adeskandachair.5.拼写错误及标点符号错误

Ifitisconvinenttoyou,pleasecometoseeme.

Ifitisconvenienttoyou,pleasecometoseeme.

Howdoyoudothewriting?1.审题：确定文体，人称和时态；2.整合信息：把所有信息整合成不超过10句话，并考虑可否自由发挥；3.翻译句子：考虑语法结构；4.连句成篇:巧用连词5.检查：pants原则Howtocorrect？pants纠错原则：

1）pattern；

2）agreement；

3）number；

4）tense;

5)spelling.Accordingtothepantsrule，youfindoutsomefaultsfromthefollowingpassage.根据pants原则，请进行短文改错

Itwas7:15inthemorningofFebruary8,2016.IwaswalkingalongParkroadtowardstheeastwhile

anelderlymancomeoutoftheparkacrossthestreet.ThenIsawayellowcardriveupThirdStreetandmakingarightturnintoParkRoad.Thenextmomentthecarhitaoldman.Hefellwithacrybecausehewasseriousinjured.Thecardidn’tstopanddroveoffatagreatspeed.InoticedthedriverwhowasayoungwomanandtheplatenumberwasAC864.AbouttwominuteslaterIstopedacarandtooktheoldmantonearesthospital.Itwas7:15inthemorningofFebruary8,2016.IwaswalkingalongParkroadtowardstheeastwhen

anelderlymancameoutoftheparkacrossthestreet.ThenIsawayellowcardriveupThirdStreetandmakearightturnintoParkRoad.Thenextmomentthecarhittheoldman.Hefellwithacrybecausehewasseriouslyinjured.Thecardidn’tstopanddroveoffatagreatspeed.Inoticedthedriver去掉whowasayoungwomanandtheplatenumberwasAC864.AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedacarandtooktheoldmanto增加thenearesthospital.﹨PantsRule1.was/weredoing......when......(pattern)2.making变成make（agreement）3.去掉a(number)4.come变成came（tense）5.stoped变成stopped（spelling）2.巧用连接词，增加句与句之间、段与段之间的连贯性。Thefilmstarwearssunglasses.Therefore,hecangoshoppingwithoutbeingrecognized.(2014北京)1.巧用非谓语动词，使句子简单明了，严密紧凑。Havingspentnearlyallourmoney,wecouldn’taffordtostayatahotel.（2014江西）高分策略：3.巧用倒装、省略、强调，使句式多样化，重点突出，活泼生动。Whilewaitingfortheopportunitytogetpromoted,Henrydidhisbesttoperformhisduty.(2014安徽)4.巧用主从复合句，使句子复杂多变，避免过多简单句和并列句。Assoonassheopenedthedoor,Rileydashedintotheboys’roomwhereAnnfoundJacksufferingfromaheartattack.（2014山东）HomeworkRearrangeyourcompositionafterclass.Writeapassageusingtheskillslearnedthisclass.你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。请根据以下信息，介绍一位热门人物。姓名：莫言(管谟业)出生日期：1955年2月17日出生地：山东省高密一个穷苦人家兴趣爱好：自幼喜欢阅读、书法(calligraphy)性格特征：开朗、幽默教育经历：1986年毕业于解放军艺术学院(PLAAcademyofArts);

1991年毕