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+ GlobalScoring总体评分 【1】每节评分标准稍有不同【2】总体评分法：定档——>调节（1-【3【52003年——Studythefollowingsetofdrawingscarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould:describethesetofdrawings,interpretitsmeaningpointoutitsimplicationsinourYoushouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET02001年——Amongalloftheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveisprobablythenoblest,buteveryonehashisorherunderstandingofit.Therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyontheissueinanewspaper.Writeanessaytothenewspapertoshowyourunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthepicturebelow.giveaspecificexample,giveyoursuggestionastothebestwaytoshowYoushouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.Itisgenerallybelievedthatloveisahottopicwhichismosttalkedabout.Thisistruenotonlyin butalsoinothercountries.Weliveindifferentcountries,speakdifferentlanguages,butloveissomethingcommontousall.Buthowtoshowlovemaybedifferentwithdifferentpeopleindifferentcountries.Thisissomethingweshouldgivemorethoughtto. Asshowninthepicture,loveislikealampwhichshinesbrightestindark ces.Thislsusasimpletruth:Loveislikealamp.Itismostvaluablewhenitismostneeded.Forexample,onceIsawaforeignladygetlostinthestreet.Shecouldnotspeak nobodyseemedtobeabletohelpher.ThoughmyEnglishisnotverygoodandIama,Ithoughtsheneededhelpverymuch.Iaskedherwhatshewanted.Shetoldmeshelostherway,soIshowedherthewaytoherho.Itwasasmallthingbutshethankedmeverymuchbecausemyhelpwasneededverymuch.MyhelpwaslikealampinadarkIthinkweshouldbelikealampinadarkce,showingourlove,givingourhelptoothers,eventostrangers.Inthisway,wecanmakethisworldaharmoniousandpeaceful2008年——英语一PARTA（道歉信YouhavejustcomebackfromCanadaandfoundamusicCDinyourluggagethatyouforgottoreturntoBob,yourlandlordthere.Writetohimmakeanapology,suggestaYoushouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEETDonotsignyournameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiDonotwritetheDearIamwritingtomakeanapologytoyouforIforgottoreturnamusicCDwhichiborrowedfromyoulastweek.YesterdayIhavecomebackfromCanadaandIfounditinmyluggage.Iamsosorrythatyoucannotlistentoitatpresent.TheCDwhichIborrowedfromyouismadeinCanada,soIbelieveyoucanfindanotheroneinyourlocalstore.HowaboutyourbuyinganotherCDbyyourselfandIwillpayforit?Ifyoucannotfindthesimilarone,Iwouldsenditbacktoyouthroughapostoffice.Anditthereareanyothersolutionsyoulike,pleaseletmeknow.Iamsorryagainformycarelessness.LookingforwardtoyourYoursLi33句子写作6

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