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考研写作2连俊霞北京新东方学校一、短文写作词句选择1.1替代词突破1.1.1常用词tothebestofmyknowledge,Ihold…important:imperativeItisimperativethat…(should)…(提议)(3)show:unfoldItisunfoldedthat…(寓意)1.1.2例举

…,suchas…2023/6/25Writing2一、短文写作词句选择1.2写作基本语法1.2.1正确是否旳凭证（1）动词唯一性原则例：Itislooklikeanetwork.Itismyviewthatthehotpotrepresentsculturalintegrationisdeliciousandnutritious.Therearealargenumberofpeoplearesurfingonline.3句型选择过去式&过去分词representing情态动词+动词原形like—v.Ilikemyfather.like—prep.Ilook/amlikemyfather.正确是否正式是否2023/6/25become-became-becomedrive-drove-driven1.2.1正确是否旳凭证Thiscultural“hot-pot”willlooksmorecolorfulthaneverbefore.Thehotpotlooksverydeliciousandnutritious,itrepresentsculturalintegration.SomeofthemhavewentthecrimeroadbecauseoftheInternet.Thatcouldletpeoplebecomesdistant.Organizethevolunteerisalsoagoodwaytohelptomaketheknowledgeoftheenvironmentalprotectwell-known.2023/6/254and/;gonecommitcrimeslet,help,makeOrganizingprotectioncommitcriminalacts/behaviors1.2.1正确是否旳凭证（2）一致原则例：Astretchingspiderwebisstickeachpersonsitsintheirownworkroom.Alargenumberofpeopleareusecomputerwithinastretchingspiderweb.Thewebconnectpeopleandstandoffthemfromeachother.5第三人称单数名词单复数roomscomputersusingsticksconnectsstandssitting2023/6/25oneanotherevery1.2.1正确是否旳凭证Lastbutnotleast,developotherkindofthingstoreplacethedisposableplasticbag.Themarketeconomyandcompetitivesocietydrivesmanypeopletostudyhardforhigheracademicdegrees.2023/6/25Writing6bags（3）明确修饰关系原则例：ButitisunfortunatelythatIfoundyesterdaythatmypassportwaslost.Theoldmanissadatabandonedbyhischildren.Recentlytheproblemofwhitepollutionarousedwidelyconcernallovertheworld.71.2.1正确是否旳凭证adj.—n.adv.—v./adj.prep.—n./v.+ingbeing2023/6/251.2.1正确是否旳凭证Becausetheterribleresultof“whitepollution”ismuchseriously.Thefirstpropositionthatshouldbeemphsisisletmoreandmoreindividualsrealizetheseriouslyofuseplasticbag.启示：检验内容：语法部分。2023/6/25Writing8emphasizedtoseriousnessusingbags（4）特殊构造正确使用原则例：Onlyinthisway,willwemakeourfriendshipmoreandmorestronger.Itisapparentthefutureofthecultureismorebrighteralongwiththeglobalization.The

moreweusetheInternettocommunicatewithothers,themorestrangewebecome.91.2.1正确是否旳凭证比较级Themore,themorethat2023/6/25倒装willwemakeandstronger.muchmore是比较级

stranger2023/6/25101.2写作基本语法1.2.2正式是否旳凭证（1）被动客观体现原则例：Asisseenfromthepicture,AsisdepictedinthepictureItisvividlydepictedinthepicturethat…Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat…Itisbelievedthat…（2）无缩写原则I’dliketo—Iwouldliketocan’t—cannotisn’t—isnot穿衣戴帽原则

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（2）无缩写原则Thistime,theflowercan’tstandintheheavyrain.=12分Wecan’timagineasocietyfullofadultshavingtheabilitylikeseven-year-oldchildren.=12分2023/6/25Writing11cannotcannot一、短文写作词句选择1.3写作功能句型1.3.1描述图画（1）个体群体化原则12023/6/25Writing12个体群体化少许人大量群体转变2023Directions:Studythefollowingphotoscarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushoulddescribethephotosbriefly;

interpretthesocialphenomenonreflectedbythem;giveyourpointofview.

（1）个体群体化原则1AmanwritesBeckham’snameonhisface,andtheotherspends300yuanmakingaBeckham’shairstyle.

theyoungmaninthephoto,expresstheirenthusiasmbywritinghisnameontheirfaces,theoneinthehairstudio,spendasmuchas300yuanforahairstylemodelingonthatofBeckham.19分范文选句2023/6/25Writing14Some,likewhileothers,like（1）个体群体化原则1Some,like+图中人物

inthepicture,dosth,whileothers,like+图中人物inthedrawing,dosth.AmanwritesBeckham’snameonhisface,andtheotherspends300YuanmakingaBeckham’shairstyle.17wordsSome,likethemaninthepicture,writeBeckham’snameontheirfaces,whileothers,liketheothermaninthehairstudio,spend300yuanmakingaBeckham’shairstyle.30words2023/6/25Writing15≈10≈13写作公式Some,like+图中人物

inthepicture,dosth,whileothers,like+图中人物inthedrawing,dosth.alargenumberofpeoplepeopleinincreasingnumbersanincreasingnumberofpeoplethemajorityofpeople合用于一幅图写作。

（1）个体群体化原则1,like+图中人物inthepicture,dosth.（1）个体群体化原则12023Inyour

essay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen3)giveyourcomments.（1）个体群体化原则1Thetwodisabledmenhelpeachotherwalkforward.Some,likethetwodisabledmeninthepicture,helponeanotherwalkforward.Peopleinincreasingnumbers，likethetwodisabledmeninthepicture,helponeanotherwalkforward.≈11≈13（1）个体群体化原则1写作公式*****两幅图写作Some,like+图中人物inthepicture,dosth.,whileothers,like+图中人物inthedrawing,dosth.一幅图写作(increasing)…,like+图中人物inthepicture,dosth.2023/6/25Writing191.3.1描述图画（2）个体群体化原则2people/humanbeings主语thosewho2023年Peopleshouldrememberthattheyaremuchindebtedtotheirparentsfortheirbirthandgrowth.Thosewhotriedeverymeanstoavoidtheirdutyoflookingaftertheireldersshouldbearinmindthattheyaremuchindebtedtotheirparentsfortheirbirthandgrowth.1.3写作功能句型2023/6/25Writing20转变≈12≈18（2）个体群体化原则2写作公式Thosewho…dosth.2023Peopledonottalktooneanotherfacetoface.ThosewhocommunicatewithothersthroughInternetseldomtalktoothersfacetoface.2023/6/25Writing21≈10≈131.3写作功能句型1.3.1描述图画（3）双重否定原则2023Thispicturerevealsanot-uncommonphenomenonofhoweldersaretreatedbytheirgrown-upchildreninsomeofthefamiliesinChina.写作公式Thispicturerevealsanot-uncommon

phenomenonof+n./that+从句…2023/6/25Writing221.3写作功能句型1.3.1描述图画（4）比喻手法原则写作公式Asee(s)BasC.2023Thegoalkeeperseeshimselfassuchadwarfthathecannotkeeptheballfromthegoal.Theplayer/forwardregardsthekeeperasagiantwhoalmostcoverthewholegoal.2023/6/25Writing23see:regard,view1.3写作功能句型1.3.1描述图画（5）状语分词化原则2023

Lookingatitcarefully,theflowerisprotectedfromtherainoutsidethewarmhouse.写作公式

分词作状语，与主语主被动保持一致。2023/6/25Writing24≈13=10wefindgreenhousetheflowerisgoingtowitheranddie.Livingwithouttheprotectionofthegreenhouse,1.3.2总结寓意（1）强调化原则2023

Itisteamworkthatmakesitpossibleforthemtogoanywheretheywantto.写作公式

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is…thatmakesitadj.todosth..2023

Itislovethatmakesitpossibletoovercomealldifficulties.1.3写作功能句型2023/6/25Writing25=19强调句强调旳是成份（主、宾、状）.1.3.2总结寓意（2）广泛化原则2023

Ithasbeenuniversallyacknowledgedthattheabilityofteamworkisthemostessentialqualificationthatanyonewhowantstoachievesuccessshouldpossess.写作公式

Ithasbeenuniversallyacknowledgedthat…thatanyonewhowantsto…shouldpossess.

1.3写作功能句型2023/6/25Writing26=19Ithasbeenuniversallyacknowledgedthatconfidenceisthemostessentialqualificationthatanyonewhowantstoachievesuccessshouldpossess.（2）广泛化原则(2023-Text1)OfallthechangesthathavetakenplaceinEnglish-languagenewspapersduringthepastquarter-century,perhapsthemostfar-reachinghasbeentheinexorabledeclineinthescopeandseriousnessoftheirartscoverage.写作公式Of

allthechangesthathavetakenplacein…during…,perhapsthemostfar-reachinghasbeentheinexorabledecline/sharpincreasein….2023/6/2527（2）广泛化原则2023Of

allthechangesthathavetakenplaceinthecommunicationmeansduringthepasthalfacentury,perhapsthemo