2023年南京中考英语总复习精美实用教案：书面表达（三）

课程主题：书面表达（三）2023年南京中考英语总复习精美实用教案

1.掌握10个书面表达话题的常用句型；

学习目标

2.能够利用所学句型进行实战演练

教学内容

【进门测试】

翻译下列句子。

1.为了保持健康，我们别无选择，只有加强锻炼。

2.老师对我们的学习要求严格。

3.现在越来越多的人意识到空气污染对人的害处。

4.现在网上购物变得越来越流行。

5.学校为我们提供了一个良好的学习场所。

6.除非你马上起床，否则你要迟到了。

7.对于初三学生来说，熬夜准备考试是否有必要?

【答案】

1.Tokeepfit,wehavenochoicebuttotakeexercise.

2.Ourteachersarestrictwithusinstudy.

3.Nowmoreandmorepeopleareawareoftheharmofairpollutiononpeople.

4.Nowshoppingonlineisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.

5.Theschoolprovidesuswithagoodplacetostudy.

6.Youwillbelateunlessyougetupatonce/rightnow.

7.IsitnecessaryforGrade9studentstostayuplatetopreparefortheexams?

【多元导学】

同学们，你们可以用四句话分别描述一下这四幅图么？

批注：根据对季节的描述，引出本次课的第一个主题季节。

【互动精讲】

书面表达常见话题（11-20）

【知识梳理】

话题十一：季节

IbetyouMllookcoolandfeelcoolwithnotingon.

Itisthebesttimetoplayfootballoutside.

Winterdaysarefullofsnow.

Whataperfecttimetoflyakite!

Beesandbutterfliesplayamongflowers.

Thememoriesof...areabout...

Autumnleavesfallintopilesupontheground.

Asthedaysareshorterandthetemperaturedrops,...

Itwillbeanewyearonceagain.

Thetemperaturewilldropbelowzero.

Thehightemperaturemakespeoplesleepyintheafternoon.

Theyliketohaveashorttriparoundthecityattheweekend.

Everyonehastowearthickwarmclothes.

Everythingiscoveredindeepwhitesnow.

Wethrowsnowballsateachother,screamingandlaughing.

Ilovespring/summer/autumn/winterbecause...

Thetemperatureisusually...

Itisoftensunny/windy/rainy...

Duringthisseason,youcan/cannot...

话题十二：自然灾害

Iwasdoingsomeshoppingwhentheearthquakestarted.

Atfirst,Ifeltaslightshakingthroughmybody.

ThenIheardaloudnoiselikethunder.

Peoplelookedateachotherinfear.

Somepeoplescreamedbecausetheywereveryfrightened.

Peopleraninalldirections.

Itriedmybesttorunouttothestreet.

Peoplewererunningwildlywhilepiecesofglassandbrickswerefallingdown.

Icouldnotbelieveitwasover.

I'mtrapped.

Amomentoffearwentthroughmymind.

ItoldmyselftocalmdownsinceIwasstillalive.

Iwastryingtofindmywayout.

Thetemperatureisgoingtodrop.

Hiscarcrashedintoatreewhilehewasdriving.

Therewasaheavystormwiththunderandlightening

Herschoolcaughtfirebecauselighteninghitit.

WelostourbalanceinthewindandInearlyfellover.

话题十三：变迁

Thetownhaschangedalotovertheyears.

Weonlyhad...yearsago.

Nowthegovernmenthaso...

Therewasonce...near...

Thegovernmentrealizedtheproblemandtookactiontoimprovethesituation.

Theriverismuchcleanernow.

Lifeisbetternow.

It'sreallyniceto...

Ilhasbecomeimpossibleforusto...asoftenasbefore.

Iusedto...

It'sgoodtoseetheamazingchangesinthetown.

话题十四：慈善

I'mtrainingtobeavolunteerfor...

It'smeaningfultodosomethingfor...

Homelesspeopledon'thavetheirownplacestolive.

Theycanprovidespecialplacesforhomelesspeopletostay.

Hethinksitwasthemostamazingexperienceofhislife.

...give...achanceto...

...giveuptheirsparetimefor...

Itwasnecessaryfor...to...

Themostimportantthingisnottowinagoldorasilver,buttotakepart.

...feellikepartofonebigfamily

Moremoneyisneededforcharity.

Ithelpsbuildabetterworldfbreveryone,especiallychildrenallovertheworld.

Manypeopledon'thavemoneyfbrmedicaltreatment.

...can'taffordtogotothehospital,sowehavetogotothem.

Bydoing...,wehopetohelpmorepeople.

Duringmylastvisit,150patientswereoperatedon.

I'mproudtohelppeopleseeagainandimprovetheirlives.

Wehopemorepeoplewillsupportus.

Ilearnaboutanorganizationfor...

Itcollectsoldclothesfromalloverthecountry.

Ourgovernmenthasmanylawstoprotecttheenvironment.

Wearenotallowedto...Otherwise,wewillbepunished.

Itwedroplitterinapublicplace,wewillbefinedbythepolice.

Therearealsolawstolimit...

Itisimportantforustoprotectitwisely.

Thesenewtypesofenergycostverylittleandwillneverrunout.

Everyonecandosomethingtomakeadifference!

话题十五：星座

Ayearisdividedinto12differentstarsigns.

Yourdateofbirthdecidesyourstarsign.

Somepeoplebelievethatpeoplebornunderthesamestarsignsharesimilarcharacteristics.

Youareenergeticandactive.

Youarestrongandconfident,

ahard-workingperson

liketobealeader

donotlikechange

donotgiveupeasily

acuriousandcleverperson

changeeasily

worrytoomuchattimes

payattentiontodetails

liketoarguewithothers

powerfulpersonandhavelotsofenergy

Itissillyofyounottoforgiveothersfortheirmistakes.

lovetravellingtodifferentplaces

Youaregenerous,kind,gentleandeasy-going.

Youarealsocreativeandimaginative.

liketodreamabouteverything

话题十六：颜色

rdratherwearbluethanpink.

Bluelooksgoodonyou.

There'snothingwrongwithpink.

Weliveinaworldfullofcolours.

Doyouknowthatcolourscanaffectourmoods?

Colourscanchangeourmoodsandmakeusfeelhappyorsad,energeticorsleepy.

Thewallswerepaintedblue,acalmandpeacefulcolour.

createafeelingofharmony

Wearingblueclothesorsleepinginablueroomisgoodforourmindandbody.

feelblue

thecolourofpurity

feelstressed

Manywomenliketobeinwhiteontheirweddingday.

Giveyouahappyandsatisfiedfeeling.

createawarmandcomfortablefeeling

bringyousuccessandcheeryouup

Itcanremindyouofawarm,sunnyday.

Greencangiveyouenergy,asitisthecolourofnatureandrepresentsnewlifeandgrowth.

Itisalsothecolourofenvy.

Whenwesaysomeoneisgreenwithenvy...

Inneedofphysicalormentalstrength...

havedifficultymakingadecision

话题十七：青少年问题

Whatproblemsdoyouhave?

I'vegotaproblem.

knowhowtodealwith...

handitinontime

Ihardlyhaveanysparetimeformyhobbiessuchas...

Ioftendoubtwhetheritisworthworkingsohard.

offermesomesuggestions

Theywillbeofgreatvaluetome.

hearfromyousoon

mydreamistobe...

havemyparents9support

advisemehowtoachieveabalancebetweenmyhomeworkandmyhobbies

【例题精讲】

例1.

假如你是青少年辅导员LiHua,你的英国笔友Millie来信向你求助。请根据信的内容，用英语给她回复。

DearLiHua,

I'mMilliefromSunnyMiddleschool.

Examtimeisthemoststressfulperiodofthisterm.Iamgoingtotakepartintheentranceexamtosenior

highschool.ButnowIhavesomeproblems.IfeelverystressedovermyexamsandI'mafraidoffailure.Ihave

toomuchhomeworktodoeverydaysothatIhavenotimeformyhobbies.SometimesIarguewithmyparents

andthatmakesthemverysad.

Canyougivemesomesuggestions?I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Writesoon!

Yours,

Millie

注意：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3.词数80左右，开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

DearMillie,

Thanksfbryourtrust.Tveknownyourproblemsfromtheletter.

Ihopeyouthinkmysuggestionsareworthtaking.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

Onepossibleversion：

DearMillie,

Thanksforyourtrust.Tveknownyourproblemsfromtheletter.

Ifscommonforstudentstofeelstressedwhenexamsarecoming.Takeiteasyandbelievethatyoucan

achieveyourdreamifyouputyourheartintoit.Don'tbeafraidoffailure,asthesayinggoes,^Failureisthe

motherofsuccess.95

Manystudentshavedifficultyachievingthebalancebebveenhomeworkandhobbies.You'dbetterchoose

hobbiesyoucandoaccordingtothefreetimeyouhave.Don'targuewithyourparentsbecausetheyarethe

personswholoveyoumost.Whynotcommunicatewiththeminaproperway?I'msureyoucangetonwell

withthemifyouarepatientandpolite.

Ihopeyouthinkmysuggestionsareworthtaking.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

话题十八：电视TV

TheTVprogrammescoverdifferentsports,suchas...

Youmightfindthisweek'sprogrammeabitboring.

anumberofinterviewswithsomefamousfootballplayers

becoveredlive

Asyouarewatchingtheshow,writedownyouranswersandsendtextmessagesto...

wintwofreeconcerttickets

Ahorrorfilmdirectedby...

fullofhorrorandmystery

enjoysolvingmysteries

takeacloselookat...

话题十九：电影明星和名人

mournthelossofagreatbeauty

putmostofhereffortintoballettraining

theperfectgirltoplaytheleadroleintheplay

Itwasabigsuccess.

makeherfinalappearance...

Shetookherlastwalk.

passawaypeacefully

话题二十：未来生活

Howdoyoulike...?

ManypeoplebelievethatwewillliveontheplanetMarsbytheyear...

buildabetterworldonMars

tooslowtocarrylargenumbersofpeopletoMars

travelathalfthespeedofthelight

Therewillbevariousdesignsforsettlerstochoosefrom.

comparedwith...

Manypeoplebelievethatrobotswilldomostofourworkandthatwewillhavemoretimeforourhobbies.

TherewillprobablybenoschoolsonMars.

ThejourneytoMarsmaybeveryuncomfortable.

Ineedtocomplaintotherobotshop.

Iamwritingacomplaintletter...

stayinbedforanextrahoureveryday

causealotofproblems

movearoundthehouseandknockthingsover

书面表达答题指导

【知识梳理】

I.普遍扣分情况：

1.审题不清，遗漏信息点。

2.生搬硬套，时态乱用。

3.语法错误较多，使用中文式表达。

4.不做检查和修改润色。

5.忽视书写，卷面不整洁。

II.专家建议解题技巧：

1.看清提示，确定时态。

2.注意谓语动词的确定。

3.开头、结尾句要能紧扣文章中心，注意组织句子结构。

4.在草稿上列出要点及主要句式，连成句子。语句要简短、通顺。

5.修改润色，注意上下衔接。

6.检查字数、要点，修改好后整洁誉写到答卷纸上。

III.中考书面表达评分标准：

评分细则

先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次，然后在该档次内评出分数。

第五档(15—13分)

完全符合题目要求，表达清楚，信息完整，语言通顺，语意连贯，字数达标，基本或完全没有语言错误。

第四档(12—10分)

符合题目要求，表达基本清楚，信息较完整，语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体

理解。

第三档(9—7分)

基本符合题目要求，表达不够清楚，信息不够完整，语言欠通顺，有部分语言错误，影响整体理解。

第二档(6—4分)

部分内容符合题目要求，内容不完整，表达不清楚，信息不完整，有较多语言错误，所写内容难以理解。

第一档(3—0分)

与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示词语。

IV.英语书面表达常用短语、连接词：

I、用于描述过程，让你的文章更富有条理性：

1)First,...Second,...Third,...Finally,...

2)First,...Next,...Then,...Finally,...

3)First,...Then,...Then,...Finally,...

4)First,...Lateron,...Afterthat,...Last,...

2、用以下句型，是你的文章层次分明：

1)First,...Besides,...Inaddition,...Also,...Finally,...

2)Myfirstreasonis,...Mysecondreasonis...Then,...Again,...Finally,...

3)Firstofall,...Also,...Finally,...

4)Onereasonis...Anotherreason...Afinallyreasonis...

5)Oneimportant...Anotherimportant...Themostimportant...

6)Somethinkthat...Ontheotherhand,(另一方面来说)…Butothersthink...

7)It'struethat....,However,...

8)Itisimportant(necessary)todo(or:That)

9)Weshouldpayspecialattentionto.,(or:Specialattentionshouldbepaidto)

10)Wehavemademucheffort,thereisstillmoreweneedtomake(eg.Wehavelearntalot,thereismuchmorewe

needtolearn...)

3、结尾常用词：

Asaresult/Inmyopinion...Ithink....Inaword(总之；简而言之)…Fromtheabove(mentioned)综上所述

Ihope....If...

4、表示上下关系的常用短语与连词：

1)Asaresult

2)becauseof(this)

3)therefore因此，所以

4)asIhavesaid如我所说

5)sothat

6)However然而，可是，不过

7)inorderthat;inorderto(do......)

8)ontheotherhand另一方面来说

9)aboveall最总要的是;尤其是

10)anyway/anyhow无论如何，总之

11)inotherwords换句话说

12)luckily

13)indeed真正地

14)moreover止匕夕卜，而且

15)generally通常，普遍地

16)infact事实上

17)inshort简言之；总之

18)what'smore另夕卜;再说

范文归类：

1.关于环境保护问题(热点)环境保护问题是中考热门话题，出现频率高，必须掌握。

典型句子

I.Ifsourdutytosavewater./It*sourdutytoloveandprotectourenvironment«

2.Asweknow,waterisveryimportanttoman./wecan'tlivewithoutwater.

3.Theamountofwaterwhichissuitabletodrinkislessandless.

4.Itisveryimportanttotakecareofourenvironment./

5.Butsomepeopledon'tcareaboutit./Theywastealotofwaterintheirdailylife.

6.Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted./Somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.

7.Weshouldplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandmorehealthilyinthefuture.

8.Treesareveryhelpfulandimportantforus./Weshouldplantmoreflowersandtreeso

9.Weshouldnotthrowlitterontotheground./

10.Weshouldnotspitinapublicplace/cutdownthetrees.

11.Wemustpickupsomerubbishandthrowitintoadustbin

12.Ifeveryonemakescontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.

13.Onlyinthiswaycanwelivehappily.

14.Evenworse,theypourdirtywaterintorivers.

15.Ifwedon'tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeatear-dropofus.(如果我们不节约用水，那么最后一滴水

也许会是我们人类的眼泪。)

2.新生事物评价(热点)

这类文章的特点是写作难度大，因此需要学生掌握方法，和基本句式，以做到考试时心中不乱。

典型例句：

1.Computerisbecomingmoreandmoreimportant.

2.Weshouldmakegooduseofit.

3.Ofcourse,studentsshouldstudy,butweshouldkeepaproperbalancebetweenworkandrest.

4.Wecandolotsofthingswithit.

5.Itmakesourlifeeasier.

6.Nowmobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularamongthemiddleschoolstudents.

3.健康问题（热点）健康问题是中考常考的话题，出题形式多样，有必要下苦功掌握。

典型例句：

1.Itisveryimportanttokeephealthy./Howcanwekeephealthy?

2.Weshouldeatthefoodhealthily./Weshoulddomoreexercise.

3.1believethatkeepinghealthyisthemostimportantthingintheworld.

4.Thereisanoldsaying:"Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.”

5.Eitherstudyorworkisbasedonstrongbody.身体是革命的本钱

6.Weshouldachieveabalancebetweenstudyandexercisestokeepushealthy.

7.Exerciseonehouraday,keepillnessaway.

8.Doingsportseverydayhelpsushealthyandenergetic.

9.Healthisveryimportanttousteenagers.

10.Ofcourse,studentshavetostudy,butweshouldkeepaproperbalancebetweenworkandrest.

11.Healthisfarmoreimportantthanmoney.

12.Goodhealthcanhelpusenjoyourlifewhilepoorhealthleadstonothing.

13.Stayinguplateatnightisbadforourhealth.

4.语言学习（热点）这是中考中的老话题，近几年常考，形式多样。

典型例句

1.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglish.

2.MorethanthreequartersoftheinformationontheInternetisinEnglish.

3.Itisusedbytravelersandbusinesspeopleallovertheworld.

4.ChinahasjoinedtheWTOandtheWorldExpowillbeheldinChina.Englishbecomesmoreandmoreuseful.

5.SoEnglishisveryimportantandIlikeEnglishverymuch.

6.WehavealotoffunintheEnglishclass.

7.OurEnglishteacheroftenmakesushappyintheEnglishclass.

8.IhopeIcangoabroadoneday,andthenIcanspeaktoforeignersinEnglish.

9.IlikeEnglishandtrymybesttolearnit.

VIIK书面表达可用的重点句型：

1.It,sadjforsbtodo做…对某人来说…

2.so...that...such...that...如此…以至于...too...todo太...而不能…

3.not...until...直至U…才...例：Ididn'tgotobeduntilmymothercameback.

4.Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子...的原因是…

Thereasonwhyhegotangrywasthatshetoldhimalie.（他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。）

5.Thatiswhy+句子那是…的原因

6.Thatisbecause+句子那是因为…

7.Itissaidthat+句子据说…Itisreportedthat+句子据报道…

8.Thereisnodoubtthat+句子毫无疑问…

9.Itgoeswithoutsayingthat+句子不言而喻，毫无疑问

10.Thereisnoneedtodo没必要做...

11.Thereisnopointindoing做某事毫无意义

12.asisknowntoall,+句子众所周知asweallknow,+句子据我们所知

itisgenerally/publiclyknown/consideredthat...,众所周知

【课堂检测】

“自我保护”是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。请根据以下要求，以“HowtoKeepMyselfSafe”为题，写一篇

短文。

YOUROPINIONSAREWANTED!

Hi!I'mLisaSmith,theeditor（编辑）ofTeensmagazine.

Ourmagazinehassetupacolumn（专栏）aboutteenagers'self-protection.Weknowyouhavesomethingto

say.

注意：L对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥；

2.询80左右，文章的开头己经给出，不计入总词数；

3.短文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。

HowtoKeepMyselfSafe

Asateenager,Ithinkitisimportantformetokeepmyselfsafefromdanger.

【答案】

Onepossibleversion:

HowtoKeepMyselfSafe

Asateenager,Ithinkitisimportantformetokeepmyselfsafefromdanger.

Inmydailylife,Ialwayskeepinmindthatsafetycomesfirst.Forexample,whenIcrosstheroad,Iwill

becarefulenough.Ifthetrafficlightisred,Iwillstopandwaituntilitturnsgreen.Inmysparetime,Ilearn

aboutsomesafetytipstoguardagainstanypossibledanger.

IfIamindanger,suchasafire,firstofall,Iwillcalmdownassoonaspossible.Then,Iwillaskforhelp.I

thinkcalling119atonceisoneofthemosthelpfulwaystosavemyself.

Inaword,withpositiveattitudesandsufficientpreparations,Iwillbeabletoprotectmyself.

假如你是LiHua,上周接受了一次问卷调查。请根据问卷内容，用英文写一份题为Good

RidingE-bikes的倡议书，向你校英语报刊投稿。

ASurvey

1.WhatareagainstthetrafficruleswhileridingA....runtheredlights...

e-bikes?B....rideonthedriveway（快车道）…

A....

2.Whatactionshasthegovernmenttaken?

B....

3.Asastudent,whatshouldyoudo?

要求：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3.词数80左右，开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：非机动车道non-motorwayn.

GoodMannersWhileRidingE-bikes

Dearclassmates,

Inordertokeepourselvessafe,wearesupposedtofollowtrafficruleswhileridinge-bikes.

Inaword,itishightimethatweshouldstartfromourselvesandreducetheriskoftrafficaccidents.

Yours

LiHua

【答案】

GoodMannersWhileRidingE-bikes

Dearclassmates,

Inordertokeepourselvessafe,wearesurposedtofollowtrafficruleswhileridinre-bikes・

Inourtown,therearemanye-bikes.Sometimes,peoplewhoridethemrunredlights.What'smore,they

oftenrideonthedriveway.It'sdangerous.

Nowthegovernmenthasmadelawstopreventthesebehaviors.Ifpeopledon'tfollowtrafficrules,theywill

bepunished,suchasbeingfined.Moreover;thegovernmenthasorganizedmanyactivitiestohelppeoplelearn

moreaboutroadsafety.

Asastudent,It