读后续写中的细节描写

读后续写中的细节描写DetailedDescriptioninContinuationWriting要求说明字数续写内容为150词左右材料350词以内要求1.原文提供10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语，所续写内容应使用5处以上这些词语。2.两段，每段的开头语已经给出体裁记叙文故事类逻辑性较强写作要求融洽度高衔接合理5个以上关键词语法&词汇丰富&准确结构紧凑150字左右情节与语言plotlanguage情节决定语言的选择语言实现情节的目的细节描写的分类环境描写DescriptionofNaturalEnvironment动作描写DescriptionofAction心理描写DescriptionofPsychology

vocabularyverbsAdjectivesAdverbsThecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Hethenranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,aswell,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Whenspottingthis,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.PaullookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.DescriptionofActionWedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Thebrightbluesky,thelimitlessgreengrass,thegroupofsheep,thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsinthecurtainofnightskeptmespellbound.Notonlydidweseethepicturesquescenery,wealsomanagedtoconsidermom’sscandalsasakindoffun.IreallylovemyMum.Toourrelief,wearrivedatgrandparents’placeandwentbacktoourhomewithalloffourpeople.Itwassofortunatetoseemyfriendsagain.DescriptionofNaturalEnvironmentWehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Wehadtogetoffthehorsesandtriedtofigureoutthewayback,butaftermanyattempts,westillfailed---wegotlost.Igrewabitanxious,butwithdadaround,Ifeltallright.Asdarknessthickened,dadbelieveditwassafertostayonthespotandwaitedforhelp.Itwasthenthatweenjoyedasymphonyofnature---thewarmbreezerufflingthroughthetrees,theinsectsbuzzingandotheranimalscontributingtheiruniquesounds…Thisserenityendedasweheardshoutsandtorchescameintooursight.Atthistime,Ifeltextremelygrateful,toPaulandTina,tothisvacationwithmydad,andtonature.DescriptionofActionItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Sheatesomeberriesandthenwalkedalongthestream,hopingtofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.Shewalkedandwalked,exhaustedbutfullofhope.Suddenly,shespottedahugeflatrock.Shemanaged(动作)toclimbontoitandwaitedwithpatience.Themomentthehelicopterappearedagain.Theneareritgot,themoreshewavedtheyellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy,thehelicopterdidn’tmissJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly.TomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrushedtowardsJane.Theyhuggedeachothertightlyandburstintotears.DetailedDescriptionButnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn'thelpcrying,"Hadn'tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn'tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenfellasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.DetailedDescriptionTip1.AddingmoredetailsShefeltexhausted.Shefeltexhausted,soshesatdownbythestream,restingherachingfeet.Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifeltveryscared.Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.TipsforDetailedDescriptionTip2.Changingtheverbs"That'shilarious,"Henrysaid."That'shilarious,"Henrysaid,chuckling."That'shilarious!"Henrychuckled.“Itoldyoualready,”Isaid.“Itoldyoualready,”Isaid,glaring.Iglaredathim.“Itoldyoualready.”TipsforDetailedDescriptionTip3.Personification(拟人)Theflowersnodded.Snowflakesdanced.Thundergrumbled.Fogcreptin.Thewindhowled.Thehauntedhouseseemedtostareatme,beckoningmetowardsthedoor.TipsforDetailedDescriptionTip4.UsingSimile&metaphor(明喻和暗喻)Thenightskywasasdarkasthedeepestocean.Thestarssparkledlikediamonds.Thesnakemovedlikearippleonapond.Awaveofterrorwashedoverhim.TipsforDetailedDescriptionTip5.UsingSenses（感官）Waftsofsalt-ladenairwereinhernostrilsastheskitterysandonherfeetledhertotheedgeofthewaves.Thisisacruelandbitterdefeat,andonethatIprobablywon'tforget.Thehousesmelledmustyanddamp,andalittlesweet,asifitwerehauntedbytheghostsoflong-deadcookies.TipsforDetailedDescriptionTip6.Camera-panandzoom(摄影-全景+放大)Fromthewitheringtreeshelookedpastthelitteredfarmyard,acrosstothedecrepithovel.Itsdoorshungsadlyawry,thehandlebroken.TipsforDetailedDescriptionTip7.UsingVividAdjectives&Adverbs

Gleaming,glistening,whisperyflakesofsnow.Lookingaroundhimcautiously,heslippedintotheroomandsoftlyclosedthedoor.Carefully,hesteppedoverallthebrokenglass.Joyfullyheskippedupthestreet.Curioustoknowwhatwasinside,hetiptoedintothedarkcave.Unabletosayaword,hewasrootedtothespot.TipsforDetailedDescription1、多读、多写2、建立语料库Howtodescribehappiness（如何表达喜悦）1.Heisveryhappyandsweet.他又高兴又甜蜜。2.They