读后续写打碎花瓶的小男孩讲义2023届高考英语作文备考

读后续写材料Ittookplaceinateacher'sfamily.Oneday,Banwasplayingbasketballinthelivingroomafterschoolwhenheaccidentallythrewaballatavasesittingontheshelf.Thevasedroppedtothefloorandalargepiecebrokeoff.Whatmadethemmoreupsetwasthatthevastwasnotacommondecoration,butanantique,whichwashandeddownthroughgenerationsfromthe18thcentury.Itwasalsohismother'sfavoritepossession.Tocoverhisterribleaction,theterrifiedboygluedthepieceshastily/hurriedlyandputthevasebacktoitsplace.Asthemotherherselfdustedthevaseeveryday,shenaturallynoticedthecracks（裂纹）thatevening.Tohersurprise5therepairworkwasactuallyverygood.Atthedinnertime,sheaskedherboyifhebrokethevase.Fearingpunishment,thesuddenlyinspiredboysaidthataneighbor'scatjumpedinfromthewindowandhecouldn'tdriveitawaynomatterhowhardhetried.Itracedaroundthelivingroom.Andfinallyknockedthevaseoffitsshelf.Hismotherwasquiteclearthatsonwaslyingforallthewindowswereclosedbeforesheleftforworkeachmorningandopenedaftershereturned.However,inthefaceofherson'snervouseyesandthesuspiciouslooksoftheotherfamilymembers,Ben'smotherremainedcalm.Sherealizedsheshouldn*tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.Beforegoingtobed,theboyfoundanotefromhismotherinhisroom,askinghimtogotoherstudyatonce.Theboythoughthewouldnowbepunished,butashehadalreadylied,hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismombecame.Inthestudy,calmlybathedinthelight,hismother'sfaceshowednosignofanger.Onseeinghersonpushopenthedoorandcautiouslyenter,shetookachocolateboxoutofadrawerandgavehimone.Paral:Themothersaid,uThischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:awindow-openingcat.”Para2:Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy'sbadattitudedisappeared. PreparationWho: Where: What:When: Theme: 写作构思段一主要写什么？段一：妈妈说，“这块巧克力是对你的想象力的奖励：一只会开窗的猫。”（根据段二所给的首句，本段主要写男孩的坏态度和母亲给男孩巧克力的过程。）细节：L男孩尴尬，生气，并否认;.母亲给小孩第二颗巧克力。.男孩的态度；.母亲给小孩第三颗巧克力。段二主要写什么？段二：手上拿着一些巧克力，男孩的坏态度消失了。（坏态度消失了，说明本段要写男孩认错，和感悟（围绕文章的主题“诚实。）细节：.男孩开始后悔并内疚;.认错；.母亲感欣慰；.明白的大道理。SAMPLEParal:Themothersaid,“Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination—awindow-openingcat."However,Benfeltsoashamedthathisfaceturnedred.Buthestilldeniedwhathehaddone,stampinginanger.Hismotherignoredhiswords,andhandedhimanotherchocolatetohim,sayingwithasmile,uThischocolateisforyourgoodrepairwork/5Asenseoffrightanduneasinesswelledupinsidehim.Butheyelled,'Believeme.Itwasthecatthatbrokethevase.Notme!"Mominterruptedhim,deliveredhimthethirdchocolateandsaidpatiently,'Thischocolateisarewardforpersistence.5,Para2:Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy'sbadattitudedisappeared.Overwhelmedbyasenseofembarrassmentandguilt,hedidn*tlookathismotherinhereyesbecausehismomgavehimsomechocolatesinsteadofblaminghim.Afterrealizinghismistake,heloweredhishead,admittedhismistakeforlying,andsincerelyapologizedtohismother,uSorry,Mum.Ifsmyfaulf.Relievedandsatisfied,hismothergavetherestof