环雅3月高分写作第四讲

Loveall,trustafew,dowrongtonone.---WilliamShakespeare虚拟语气SUBJUNCTIVEMOOD倒装INVERSITON雅思写作GA高分之

高分语法串讲Vindicating/fendingforthecitizens’right-to-know.InthefieldoffilmsandTVprogramsIdeas/understandingimitateCharacters’FilmsortelevisionsHis/her乐吟老师点评如果目标是6-6.5，字数和论证程度可以。如果目标是7，你需要多一个分论点moreconvincing。Mistake:名词单复数Mistake:单词imitate写法循规蹈矩，逻辑比较清晰语法功底不错，但不是很出彩环球雅思乐吟老师4月写作高分班真题精讲辅导Thegovernmentshouldcontroltheamountofviolenceinfilmsandontelevisioninordertodecreasetheviolentcrimesinsociety.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisissue?Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.Writeatleast250words.

Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.乐吟老师点评Mistake：注意冠词和名词单复数Mistake:人称要保持一致结尾段的书写一定要加强锻炼。政府不仅确实要？乐吟老师评语注意强调语气的使用时机注意细节的mistake整体不错雅思两个加分语气

注意：量的控制

虚拟语气SubjunctiveMood是什么：谓语动词的一种形式，表假设有几种真实条件句（状况外青年）非真实条件句（普通青年）省略if的条件句（文艺青年）错综条件句（铅笔青年）含蓄条件句（装bility青年）

真实条件句---陈述语气例句：ifhedoesn’tcomeat8:00,wewon’twaitforhim.如果政府过多干预，群众的知情权就会被侵犯Ifthegovernmentintervenestoomuch,thecitizens’right-to-knowwillbeviolated.非真实条件句—普通青年If条件句的谓语主句的谓语与现在事实相反wereWould(could/should/might)+dodid与过去事实相反haddoneWould(could/should/might)+havedone与将来事实相反Did/wereWould(could/should/might)+doShoulddoweretodo雅思写作怎么用对现在事实的虚拟：例句：Ifthegovernmentignoredthisphenomenontotally,themediawoulddominatethewholecommunitybydisseminatingnegativeinformation.练习：如果媒体不计后果的传播信息，大众将遭受信息大爆炸的冲击.对将来事实的虚拟：例句：IfTVprogramsshouldbegraded/weregraded/tobegraded,itwouldbeveryhelpfulintermsofpreventingtheteenagersfrombeingmisledbythemedia.练习：如果大学只教理论知识的话，那么学生将缺乏在工作岗位中的实际工作技能。对过去事实的虚拟：ifwehadnotover-consumedoureco-system,thehealthconditionofuswould/might/couldhavebeenbetter.想表达的意思：如果我们当时对环境不是过分消费的话，我们的健康状况那时候会好些。练习：如果政府当时对媒体严加整顿，那时候的反社会行为和青年犯罪率就会低多了。文艺青年之省略if的虚拟语气在书面语中，虚拟语气条件句中省略if，把谓语提前构成倒装。例子：wereitnecessary(ifitwerenecessary),Imightgowithoutdelay.例句：weresmartphonessmartenoughtodistinguishtruefriendsfromthedailyacquaintances,itmightbereasonableforustomakefriendsbythem.(ifsmartphonesweresmartenough)练习：如果我们当时对环境不是过分消费的话，我们的健康状况那时候会好些。铅笔青年之错综条件句是什么：主句从句动作发生时间不一样。例子：ifyouhesitated

now,youmight/wouldsuffer

infuture.练习：如果文化现在不被重视，将来这个国家就会失去自己的特性。如果媒体以前被分级了，那现在的年轻人就不会被误导了。装bility青年不用学含蓄条件句Butforyou,Icouldnotberecoveredsosoon.=Ifitwerenotforyou…倒桩InversionALLYOUNEEDTOKNOWIS:否定词（not,seldom,little,hardly,never,rarelyetc.)Neverbeforehaveweseensuchadevelopmentoftechnology.Seldomdothechildrenknowabouthowtodistinguishtherightfromthewrongwithoutproperguidanceandeducation.Onlyinthiswaycanwe…Sowastheairpollutedthatevenbybreathingcanonebeastepclosertodeath.乐吟老师例句参考Ifthemediadiffusedanyinformationwithouttakingtheconsequencesintoconsideration,themasswouldsufferfrominformationexplosion.iftheuniversitiesweretoteachtheoreticalknowledgeonly,thegraduateswouldlack/beshortofsubstantialskillsinworkplace.Ifthegovernmenthadcontrolledthemediastrictly,theanti-socialbehaviorandteenscrimeratewould/could/mighthavebeenlower.Iftheculturewerenotemphasized,thecountrywould/mightlooseitsidentityinthefuture.Ifthemediahavebeengradedearlier,theteenagerswouldnotbeeasilymisled.一条福利如果你在同一次考试中拿到听力8阅读8，写作和口语任意一个是7：请在微博上@你的任课老师及环球雅思在线你将得到环雅的1700全额考试退费。一张广告4月乐吟老师将继续与杨涛，Vicky合作，为大家带来：口语预测班高分班辅课写作预测班高分班辅课乐吟老师4月