专题15 感激、感恩、感谢-备战2023年中考英语热点话题满分作文强化训练

专题15感激、感恩、感谢A（2022·湖北湖北·中考真题）在你的成长历程中，有许多值得感恩的人，如父母，老师，同学……他们或帮助过你，或影响到你，你最想感恩谁？请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。要点提示：1.他/她有什么特点（外貌，性格……）？2.他/她对你影响最深的一件事是什么？3.你想怎样感谢他/她？写作要求：1.词数90左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；2.根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。参考词汇：begratefulto对……心存感激；haveaninfluenceon对……有影响；careabout关心；unforgettable难以忘怀的ThePersonIWanttoExpressMyThanksInmylife,manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.ThepersonIwanttoexpressmythanksmostis..._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ThePersonIWanttoExpressMyThanksInmylife,manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.ThepersonIwanttoexpressmythanksmostismyEnglishteacherMr.Lee.Heistallandthin.Hehasshortblackhairandwearsglasses.Heisalwaysfriendlyandpatientwithus.WhenIwasinGrade8,myEnglishwasverypoor.Oneday,heaskedmetotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontest.Hesaid,“Yourpronunciationisreallygood.Tryyourbest.Ibelieveinyou”.WiththehelpofMr.Lee,Igotthefirstprize.MyEnglishimprovedalot.Mr.Leehasagreatinfluenceonme,Iamgratefultohim.Iwillworkhardtobecomebetter.Ithinkthat’sthebestgiftformydearteacher.【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要以“ThePersonIWanttoExpressMyThanks”为题并结合题干中的问题进行写作，介绍你最想感谢的人，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。第一段介绍自己想感谢的人的特点；第二段讲述他对你影响最深的一件事；第三段讲述你会如何感谢他。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。B（2022·湖南湘潭·中考真题）亲爱的同学，恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中，你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师，表达你对他（她）的感激之情。内容包括：1.你对这位老师的印象；2.你感谢他（她）的原因；3.你对他（她）的祝福。注意：1.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当举例或拓展；3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，师生名字等）。It’stimeformetosaygoodbyetomyjuniorschoollife.I’mheretosaythanksto_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：It’stimeformetosaygoodbyetomyjuniorschoollife.I’mheretosaythankstomyEnglishteacherMr.Zhang.Sheisverykindandpatient.ShehashelpedmealotinmystudiessinceIcametothisschool.WhenIwasintrouble,sheusedtoencouragemeandgivemesomegoodadvice.AtonetimeIfailedtopassanEnglishtestandIwasverysadaboutit.Shecameandcheeredmeup.ShetoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.I’msothankfultoherforherkindhelpthatIwillworkharderandtrytodobetterinthefuture.Ihopeshewillbecomebetterandbetter.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，本文开头已经给出，选择一位你想要感谢的老师，表达感激之情，根据提示要点进行写作，可以适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称和第三人称来描述，时态以一般过去和一般现在时为主。本文可以采用一段式写作，要求描述对老师的印象，感谢的原因以及对老师的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。C（2022·广西贺州·中考真题）假如你是李华，在过去的三年，英语老师教会了你很多英语知识和技能，开拓了你的视野。你感激英语老师的付出，决定将来继续学好并用好英语。请你结合以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。提示：你的英语老师1.外貌

2.性格……你学会了1.唱英文歌，欣赏英文电影

2.用英语讲小故事

3.用英语进行简单交流……感恩和决心1.感恩老师的教导

2.继续努力学习英语

3.用英语向世界讲述中国故事……要求：1.文章必须包括所给提示内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。I’mLiHua.MyEnglishteacheris__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I’mLiHua.MyEnglishteacherisMs.Zhang.Sheisatallandoutgoingladywhoisverypatientwithallofus.Ms.ZhanghastaughtmeEnglishfor3years.Ilikeherinterestingclasses.LearningEnglishhelpsmebecomemoreopen-minded.NowIcantalkwithothersinEnglishfluentlyandreadsomeEnglishbooks.IcanalsotellsomestoriesinEnglish.Besides,enjoyingEnglishsongsandmovieshasbecomeoneofmyhobbies.Ms.Zhangisanexcellentteacher,towhomIwanttosaythanks.IdecidetolearnmoreEnglishinthefuture,andtrymybesttotellthestoryofChinainEnglishtotheworld.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据要点提示，介绍下你的英语老师，描述你所学会的东西，以及感激英语老师的付出，决定将来继续学好并用好英语。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。叙述时可适当运用短语句型或从句，使文章出彩有亮点。写作时确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。D（2022·江苏无锡·中考真题）生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“ThePersonIWanttoThank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、朋友……)，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。注意事项：1.演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2.流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；3.词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；4.演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；5.演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ThePersonIWanttoThankInmyjuniorschoollife,manypeoplehavehelpedme.Ithankthemverymuch.ButthepersonIwanttothankmostismyEnglishteacherMissLee.MissLeeisbeautifulwithlonghair.Andsheiskind.Shehelpsmealot.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.WhenIamintrouble,shealwaysencouragesmetofacemydifficultiesandgivesmegoodadvice.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.ShecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglishandbecameinterestedinit.I’mverythankfulforallthatshehasdoneforme.Shehasagreatinfluenceonme,andherhelpisveryusefulformyfuturedevelopment.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，写出最想感谢的人是谁；他/她的外表、性格；举例说明为何感谢他/她；以及对你的影响。2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容；叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时，叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。同时写作时注意语句的连贯性，保证词汇和语法的正确使用。E（2022·云南普洱·模拟预测）IThankMy________提示：转眼三年已过，我们又来到人生的分岔路口，我们即将挥别日夜相处的老师、同学和朋友，他们在你茫然的时候指引着你前进，因此我们应心怀感激，请以“IThankMy________”为题写一篇英语短文，表达你对他们的感谢。要求：1.将题目补充完整；2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：IThankMyTeacherIhavebeenstudiedinmiddleschoolforthreeyears.Inafewdays,Iwillgraduate.MyfavoriteteacherismyEnglishteacher.Ithankherverymuch.MyEnglishteacherisabeautifulwoman.Sheiskindbutstrict.Sheisalsohumorous.Sheispopularwithus.Herclassisveryinterestingandactive.MyspokenEnglishwaspoor,andIfailedanexam.Shedidnotblameme.ShehelpedmewithmyEnglishafterclass.Ithelpedalot.MyEnglishbecamebetterandbetter.She’salwayspatientwhenIaskedhersomequestions.IfeltsomovedandbecamemoreinterestedinEnglish.Iwouldliketothankherforallthehelpshegaveme.Ihopethatshewillbebetterandbetter.Iwanttosay“Thankyou,mydearteacher,andIwillneverforgetyou.”【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“IThankMy...”为题写一篇短文，叙述你想感谢的人，表达对他/她的感谢。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主；文章可分为三段式：第一段指出你想表达感谢的人；第二段说明感激的原因；最后一段抒发你的感激之情。在叙述内容时，保证提示内容叙述完整，条理清晰，无语法和拼写错误。F（2022·山东淄博·二模）假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容写一篇100词左右的英语短文，用于投稿。你的感谢父母养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你父母信任你、关心你的个人感受、遇到困难时鼓励你你的决心努力学习你的祝愿祝愿父母健康快乐注意：1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名；3.短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ALettertoMyParentsDearMumandDad,I’mwritingtoexpressmythanksforallyourcareandlove.Firstofall,Iwanttothankyouforraisingme.IthankyouforcookingformeeverydayandtakingcareofmewhenI’msick.Iwouldalsoliketothankyouforyourtrustandcareaboutmypersonalfeelings.YouencouragedmewhenIwasintrouble.SoIhavetostudyhardtorepayyou.Atthesametime,Iwishyoukeephealthyandhappy.Thanksagainforeverythingyouhavedoneforme.Love,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点及参考词汇写短文表达自己的父母的感激之情，可以按照信件格式写作，题目表格中的内容需要全部包括在内，字数要在100词左右，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、二人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。可分为四段式写作：第一段点题：第二段讲父母做了什么：第三段讲父母对自己的帮助和鼓励；最后一段收尾，与开头呼应。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。G（2022·江苏·景山中学三模）初中三年我们在老师的辛勤教诲、家长的悉心照料、同学朋友的关心下收获很多，如今即将毕业，你很想感谢他们。你校英语报正在征集感恩为主题的文章，请以“ThePersonI’dLiketothankmost”为题，结合具体事例写一篇英语作文。Whodoyouwanttothank?Whydoyouwanttothankhim/her?Whatcanyoulearnfromhim/her?注意事项：1.词数：100词左右；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息；3.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ThePersonI’dLiketothankmostThepersonIwanttothankmostismymother.Mymotherplaysanimportantroleinmylife.Shenotonlybroughtmeup,butalsotaughtmemanyskills.Myfamilybackgroundisaverage,butmymotherdoesnothesitatetoinvestmoneyinmylifeandstudy,andsheisnotwillingtobuyclothesanddeliciousfoodforherself.Iwanttodosomethingforherathomeandhelphercleanup.Iwanttocookheramealpersonallyonherbirthday.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“ThePersonI’dLiketothankmost”为题，结合具体事例进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要分别介绍想感谢谁，为什么想要感谢他/她以及你能从他/她身上学到什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。H（2022·广东·广州大学附属中学二模）假如你是李明，初中三年你与同学们在一起学习，参加各种活动，互相帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊。你们即将毕业，校园网英语论坛开辟了Thank-youletter专题。请你按照要求给你的同学王星写一封感谢信，内容包括：1.王星给你的印象（外貌、性格特征等）。2.简述感谢的原因，包括王星对你的帮助和影响，适当举例。3.你对未来的期待和对王星的祝福。词数80左右（信的开头已给出，不计入总词数），不能透露任何个人信息（如具体学校和姓名等等），否则不予评分。DearWangXing,Thehighschoolentranceexaminationiscoming,andour3-yearjuniorschoollifeisgoingtobeover.Iwouldliketo_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMing【答案】范文：DearWangXing,Thehighschoolentranceexaminationiscoming,andour3-yearjuniorschoollifeisgoingtobeover.Iwouldliketothankyou.You’vebeenkindandhelpfulsincewekneweachother.I’llneverforgetallthehelpyou’vegivenme.Lastterm,Icaughtabadcoldandhadtostayathomeforaweek.WhenIwasworryingaboutmylessons,youcametomyhomeafterschoolandhelpedmewitheverysubject.Withyourhelp,Ididn’tfallbehindothers.Youalsoencouragemetobeconfident.Sincethen,we’vebeenveryclosefriends.Thankyouagain.Eventhoughwemaygotodifferentschools,I’llalwaysstayintouchwithyou.Iwishyousuccessinthefuture.Yours,LiMing【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求写一封感谢信；要求包含所有提示内容。2.写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；采用第二人称和第一人称口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：表达写信目的；第二段：阐述对好朋友的印象、感谢的原因、他是如何帮助你的以及你对未来的期待；第三段：表达祝福。I（2022·广东深圳·模拟预测）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，2022年3月23日你和同学一起观看了神舟十三号航天员天宫授课，请你发送一封电子邮件