高考英语复习读后续写练习课件（中西方文化的差异：关于饭桌上的谦虚文化）

高考英语读后续写语篇练习中西方文化的差异：关于饭桌上的谦虚文化1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Theydon’tmeanitOurfamilymovedherefromChinatwoyearsago,andwethoughtwewereprettywelladjustedtoAmericanways.ThisyearmyparentsdecidedtogiveapartyonChineseNewYearandinvitesomeofourAmericanfriends.Thepartywentprettywell.Ourguestswereamazedattheflavorofallthespecialfoods.Afterthedinner,theythankedusforshowingthemwhatarealChineseNewYeardinnerwaslike.“Ilovedthedishes.Youandthegirlsmusthavespenthoursdoingallthework!”Mrs.O’Mearasaidtomymother.“ThegirlshelpedwiththecuttingandI’msorrytheydidsuchaterriblejob.”saidMother.Iheardalittlegasp(倒吸气)frommyfriendKimO’Meara,whostaredwide-eyesatMother.WhenIaskedwhatthematterwas,shetoldmeshejustdidn’tunderstandwhymymothersaidso.4续写原文“ThegirlshelpedwiththecuttingandI’msorrytheydidsuchaterriblejob.”saidMother.Iheardalittlegasp(倒吸气)frommyfriendKimO’Meara,whostaredwide-eyesatMother.WhenIaskedwhatthematterwas,shetoldmeshejustdidn’tunderstandwhymymothersaidso.Ihadtolaugh.“Shedoesn’tmeanit!It’sjustthewayshetalks.”Seeingherstillconfusedlook,Iwentonexplaining,“InChina,parentsconsideritgoodmannerstodenypraisesabouttheirchildren.Otherwise,itwouldbethesameasbragging(自夸).”Kimseemedalittlehesitant,butshenoddedanyway.ThatEaster,theO’Mearasinvitedourfamilyfordinner.Mrs.O’Mearacookedahugehamwhichweenjoyedalot.AsMrs.O’Mearastartedcuttingupthecakefordessert,Mothersaid,“I’mnotsureifIcaneatonemorebite.ThatwasthebesthamI’veevertasted!”“Aw,thathamwasterrible,”saidKim.“Ibetyoucoulddoalotbetter,Mrs.Yang.”5段首句Para1：Therewasastunned(震惊的)silencearoundthetable.Para2：IfinallyknewhowKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者妈妈举办中国新年派对，为表谦虚，说自己孩子做得很糟糕。因为文化的差异，Kim误解了作者的话，在Kim妈妈邀请作者一家人参加复活节，Kim当面指责妈妈做得不够好，引起了大家的震惊。在作者的解释下，理解了中西文化的差异，和自己妈妈道歉的事。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Therewasastunned(震惊的)silencearoundthetable.由第一段首句内容“桌子周围一片让人震惊的寂静。”可知，第一段可描写因为对Kim说的话表示震惊以及大家的反应。10续写思路分析Para2：IfinallyknewhowKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.由第二段首句内容“我终于知道Kim是怎么误解我说的话了。”可知，第二段可描写作者对Kim的误解进行解释，指出了中西文化的差异。11续写思路分析续写线索批评妈妈做的火腿——大家震惊——误解作者的话——进行解释中西文化的差异——Kim给妈妈道歉12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①道歉：apologizetosbforsth/makeanapologytosb②冷静：calmdown/staycalm③尊重：berespectfultosb/showrespectforsb情绪类①尴尬：reddenedwithembarrassment/embarrassed②震惊的：stunned/astonished/amazed13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]KimwasonthereceivingendofacoldstarefromMrs.O’Meara,whosefacereddenedwithembarrassment.（whose引导的定语从句）[高分句型2]Butyouweretheonewhotoldmethatsayingnicethingsaboutyourownfamilywasthesameasbragging!”shestuttered.（who引导的定语从句，that引导宾语从句）[高分句型3]Hearingthis,Kimsigheddeeply,hercheeksflushed.（现在分词做伴随状语，运用了独立主格结构）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Therewasastunned(震惊的)silencearoundthetable.KimwasonthereceivingendofacoldstarefromMrs.O’Meara,whosefacereddenedwithembarrassment.Iwasalsoshockedatmyfriend’smeanremark.Clearingmythroat,Ifinallyasked,“Whatmadeyoutalklikethattoyourmother?”Kimwhirledaround,seeminglyfurious“Butyouweretheonewhotoldmethatsayingnicethingsaboutyourownfamilywasthesameasbragging!”shestuttered.“Iwasjusttryingtoactmodest!”16范文呈现IfinallyknewhowKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.“Listen,Kim,”Itookherhandsinminetocalmherdown,“Chineseparentsmightsaycriticalthingsabouttheirchildrentoshowmodestybutyoungpeoplearealwaysexpectedtoberespectfultotheelders.”Hearingthis,Kimsigheddeeply,hercheeksflushed.Theawkwardsilencewassoondispelledasthemisunderstandingwaserased.Droopingherhead,Kimapologizedforherimpolitebehavior.Mrs.O’Mearawinkedather,joking,“That’sallright.Weknowyoudidn’tmeanit!”17范文译文有人目瞪口呆(震惊的)桌子周围鸦雀无声。金受到了奥夫人冷眼旁观的目光，奥夫人的脸因尴尬而涨红了。我也对我朋友的刻薄话感到震惊。清了清嗓子，我终于问道：“你为什么对你妈妈那样说话？”金转过身来，似乎很生气。“但是你告诉我，说你自己家庭的好话和吹牛一样！”她结结巴巴地说。“我只是想表现得谦虚！”18范文译文我终于知道金怎么误解了我的话。“听着，金，”我握着她的手让她平静下来