高考英语复习读后续写练习课件（体育话题：老师鼓励害怕游泳池的学生参加潜水考试）

高考英语读后续写语篇练习体育话题：老师鼓励害怕游泳池的学生参加潜水考试1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Thefrighteningdayofourdivingtestwashere.OurparentsthoughtwewereluckytohaveanOlympic-sizeswimmingpoolattheschool.Mymomstressedthattheswimmingpoolwasoneofthebestinourcity.ButIdidn’tfeelhappyaboutitatall.Instead,Ifeltafraidoftheswimmingpool.ItwasmainlybecauseIwasterriblyshy.IwassoshythatIalwayssatatthebackoftheroominclasssoI’dnotbecalledupontoread.AsforthepresentphysicaleducationclasseachMondaymorning,IwouldworkmywaytothebackofthelineformingatthedivingboardsoIwouldnothavetopracticethedives.Now,itwasanotherMondaymorning-themorningofourdivingtest.MybloodrancoldwhentheteacherMs.Robbinsannouncedthatwewouldbegradedforourfinalonthemostdifficultdive-thejackknife.Andsheadded,“Thisdivingtestisimportant.TheonewhofailshastosparetimeinthefollowingMondaymorningstopracticedivinginthisswimmingpoolandattendthistestagain.”4续写原文Mybodykeptshakingwithfearasthelinetothescarydivingboardshortened.AsIwatched,eachstudentseemedtoperformthechallengingdiveeffortlessly.AndshortlyIwouldhavetoattemptsomethingthatIhadneverevenpracticedbefore.ThenIrememberedsomeonetellingmethatwhenyoupictureyourselfdoingaskilloverandover,it’sjustaseffectiveasphysicallypracticingthatskill.SoIwatchedcarefullyaseachclassmatejumpedattheendoftheboardonce,addedajumpforheight,foldedtheirbodyinhalftoreachfortheirtoes,andfinallystraightenedoutlikeanarrowforgoingintothewater.Aftercarefullywatchingforawhile,Iwasactuallyinastateofsurprise,becauseallofasuddenIrealizedthatitwaspossibleformetoperformthesefourstepsofdiving.Eventuallyallclassmatesexceptmefinishedjumping.Theteacherannouncedthatitwasmyturn.5段首句Para1：Withmyheartknockingwildly,Iwalkeddownthedivingboardtowardsitsend.Para2：KnowingIfailed,Iclimbedoutofthepool,embarrassed.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者害怕游泳池。这主要是因为自己非常害羞。这天老师宣布要进行考试，而且要根据最难的跳水动作进行期末评分，虽然作者最后失败了，但在老师的鼓励下再次参加了潜水考试，并取得了很好的成绩。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Withmyheartknockingwildly,Iwalkeddownthedivingboardtowardsitsend.由第一段首句内容“我的心狂跳着，走下跳板，走向跳板的尽头。”可知，第一段可描写作者参加考试的过程。10续写思路分析Para2：KnowingIfailed,Iclimbedoutofthepool,embarrassed.由第二段首句内容“知道自己失败了，我尴尬地爬出了游泳池。”可知，第二段可描写作者在老师鼓励下再次参加考试。11续写思路分析续写线索跳水——失败——安慰——指导——参赛——自信——感悟12续写素材可用词汇：行为类未能：failto/beunableto导致：cause/leadto参加：attend/takepartin情绪类尴尬：embarrassed/abashed高兴：glad/delighted13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Lookingdown,Ifoundallmyclassmateswerelookingupatme.(运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]Andinsteadofenteringthewaterlikeanarrow,Ifellintothewater,withmybodybeingflat.(运用了动名词作宾语)

14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Withmyheartknockingwildly,Iwalkeddownthedivingboardtowardsitsend.Lookingdown,Ifoundallmyclassmateswerelookingupatme.Myfacesuddenlyfelthot.Finally,Iignoredthem.Picturingthefourstepsofdiving,Ijumped.ThenIfoldedmybodybutfailedtoreachformytoes.Andinsteadofenteringthewaterlikeanarrow,Ifellintothewater,withmybodybeingflat.Asaresult,itcausedahugesound,whichmadealltheclassmatesburstoutlaughing.16范文呈现KnowingIfailed,Iclimbedoutofthepool,embarrassed.Afterclass,Ms.Robbinscomfortedandencouragedme.InthefollowingmanyMondaymornings,Ipracticedagainandagainunderherguidance.Gradually,Ibecamemoreconfidentandlessshy.Finally,Iattendedthedivingtestagainandperformedwell.Thistime,myclassmatescheeredandclapped.Iwassoglad.Iknewmysuccessresultedfrommybeatingmyshynessandmyhardpractice.17范文译文随着我的心跳，我沿着跳水板走向终点。低头一看，我发现所有的同学都在抬头看着我。我的脸突然热了起来。最后，我忽略了他们。想象着跳水的四个步骤，我跳了起来。然后我把身体折叠起来，但没能够到脚趾。我没有像箭一样掉进水里，而是倒在了水里，身体是平的。结果，它发出了巨大的声音，所有的同学都大笑起来。18范文译文知道自己失败了，我尴尬地爬出了水池。课后，罗宾斯女士安慰和