英语新教材人教版必修第二册课件Unit4HistoryandTraditionsPeriod5

Unit4

HistoryandTraditionsPeriod5

ReadingforWriting(Ⅱ)写作培优课

写作培优课写一篇游记(Writeajournal)【写作指导】游记(journal):是对旅行进行记录的一种文体,现在也多指记录游览经历的文章。游记分很多种类,有带议论色彩的,有带科学色彩的,有带抒情色彩的。框架构建Introduction:makethereadereagertoreadBody:①Transitions

②Detailsandexamples(结尾:总—总结

)Ending:Letthereaderknowthatthepassageends.Helpthereaderrememberyourwriting.

【典题示例】去年暑假,你有机会参加一个去美国旧金山的夏令营,为期三天。请你写一篇游记,介绍一下你在旧金山的所见、所闻和所感。词数100个左右。Step1谋篇立意体裁:游记Tips•DayOneArideonacablecar;Fisherman’sWharf(thedistrictwhereItalianfishermenfirstcametoSanFrancisco)•DayTwoThecityandChinatown•DayThreeAngelIsland时态:一般过去时人称:第一人称Step2语言支架1.坐上缆车到山顶鸟瞰旧金山湾和整座城市。①______________________坐缆车

②getawholeviewofthecity _____________③用不定式作目的状语翻译句子:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________takearideonacablecar鸟瞰整座城市TogetawholeviewofSanFranciscoBayandthewholecity,wetookarideonacablecarandgottothetopofthehill.

2.这是意大利渔民在十九世纪晚期首先到达旧金山并开创渔业的地方。

①_______________ 意大利渔民

②_____________________ 在十九世纪晚期

③_________________ 渔业

④用定语从句翻译句子:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Italianfishermeninthelate19thcentury

thefishingindustryThisisthedistrictwhereItalianfishermenfirstcametoSanFranciscointhelate19thcenturyandbeganthefishingindustry.

3.完成句子:__________,wedidn’tfeellikedoinganythingelse.我们太累了,不想做其他任何事情。4.中国移民在十九世纪五十年代在这里定居。

①__________________中国移民

②___________ 在十九世纪五十年代

③___________________ 在这个城市定居

④翻译句子:__________________________________________________ExhaustedChineseimmigrantsinthe1850ssettledowninthecityChineseimmigrantssettleddowninthecityinthe1850s.

5.我们看到了很多有趣的寺庙,很多市场,很多餐馆还有包含文档、照片的博物馆。①______ 寺庙②anumberof/agreatmany

_____③补全句子:Wesaw_____interestingtemples,___________markets____________________restaurantsandmuseums__________documents_______________.

temple很多manyanumberofaswellasagreatmanycontainingandphotographs6.天使岛是著名的移民站点,早期中国人在那里申请美国居住权。①_________________ 移民站点

②________ 申请

③_________________ 美国居住权

④用定语从句翻译句子:_____________________________________________________________________________________________

immigrationstationapplyforrighttoliveinUSAAngelIslandwasafamousimmigrationstationwhereearlyChinesepeopleappliedforrighttoliveinUSA.7.1940年,民事当局改革了体系,以便更多的中国人能够抓住机会在美国定居。①______________ 民事当局

②________________ 改革体系

③______________________ 抓住机会

④用含有sothat引导的目的状语从句翻译句子:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________civilauthoritiesreformthesystemgrasptheopportunity In1940thecivilauthoritiesreformedthesystemsothatmanymoreChinesepeoplewereabletograsptheopportunityofsettlingintheUSA.

Step3润色组篇

SanFranciscoisalandofdiversityandanamazingcity.Everyonewhohaseverbeentherewillneverforgetit.TogetawholeviewofSanFranciscoBayandthewholecity,wetookarideonacablecarandgottothetopofthehill.It’ssospectacular.Downfromthehill,wewenttoFisherman’sWharf.ThisisthedistrictwhereItalianfishermenfirstcametoSanFranciscointhelate19thcenturyandbeganthefishingindustry.Exhausted,wedidn’tfeellikedoinganythingelse.Onthesecondday,wevisitedthecityandChinatown.Chineseimmigrantssettleddowninthecityinthe1850s.Wesawmanyinterestingtemples,anumberofmarketsaswellasagreatmanyrestaurantsandmuseumscontainingdocumentsandphotographs.AngelIslandwasafamousimmigrationstationwhereearlyChinesepeopleappliedforrighttoliveinUSA.In1940thecivilauthoritiesreformedthesystemsothatmanymoreChinesepeoplewereabletograsptheopportunityofsettlingintheUSA.SanFranciscoissuchanattractiveplacethatIamlongingtovisititagain.【善积累·获新知】◆话题词汇识记常用游记词汇:diversity多元化 amazing令人惊奇的view景观

spectacular壮观的district地区

cablecar缆车exhausted疲劳的

temple寺庙settle定居

attractive吸引人的◆话题金句背诵1.Theworldisabook,butpeoplewhodonottravelreadonlyonepage.世界是一本书,而不旅行的人只读了其中一页。2.Ifyoudon’ttravel,youwillmissmorethanscenery.如果你不去旅行,你错过的不只是风景。3.Lifeislikeajourney.Whatyoushouldcareaboutisnotthedestination,butthesceneryonthewayandyourmoodwhenyouseethescenery.人生就像一场旅行,你应该在乎的不是目的地,而是沿途的风景以及看风景时的心情。4.TheGreatWall,asasymbolofChinesepeople’swisdomandlabor,isatouristdestinationthattravellerscanneveraffordtomiss.长城,是中国人勤劳和智慧的象征,是旅行者不可错过的景点。5.TheGreatWallinBeijingistheplaceIwanttovisitmostnotonlybecauseofitslonghistorybutalsobecauseofitsimportanthistoricalpositioninChineseculture.北京长城是我最想参观的地方,不仅是因为它的悠久历史,而且因为它在中国文化中重要的历史地位。【写作点拨】游记该怎么写?一、按游览的顺序写。我们在参观或游览一个地方时,是随着时间的推移、空间的转移而进行的,因此,我们必须以游览为线索,由先而后依次记述游览过程中所见到的景物,这样,读者才会对你游览的地方有一个清晰的、全面的印象。二、写出景物的特点。大自然的景物各不相同,都有自身的特点,我们要认真回味游览时的所见所感,选取自己印象最深刻的或最有特色的景物,作具体的描写,并对重点部分进行生动细致的刻画。运用联想,采用比喻、拟人等方法,将景物的特点写出来,使景物形象逼真,让读者宛如亲眼所见一般。三、分清主次详略。我们在写游记时,面对繁多而又千姿百态的景点,美丽而又令人回味的山水,

写什么好呢?这都必须根据文章的中心确定主次详略,把最具代表性的、最使自己激动、最令自己难忘的景物,当作主要内容,进行详细描述。如景物怎样美、怎样奇,你和游人怎样感叹,你凝望着什么,展开怎样的想象等;次要景物可略写或不写,这样重点就突出,游记也就生动了。四、融入真情实感。在描写景物的过程中,要把自己的思想感情融进文章的字里行间,做到既有所见所闻,又有所思所感,这样可以丰富文章内涵,深化习作主题,使文章更具感染力。词汇清单重点句式认知词汇：gallery,ensure,landscape,butter,honey;ancestor,position,courtyard,snack,county,feast;dot;cattle,roar,ocean,scent,pub,wine,beer,stew,custom拓展词汇：announce→announcement→announcer；eager→eagerly→eagerness；crowd→crowded；generous→generously→generosity；poet→poem→poetry；greet→greeting；sensory→sense→sensitive→sensible；strik