读后续写无灵主语课件-2023届高三英语二轮专题

无灵主语

—读后续写Comparison

Duskfoundhercryinginthestreet.Atdusk,shewascryinginthestreet.Helostcourage.Couragedesertedhim.Shechangedgreatlyaftertenyearsofhardwork.Tenyearsofhardworkchangedhergreatly.leftrightSubjects:personSubjects:lifelessnouns用无生命的事物做主语，用人或社会团体的行为或动作做谓语，因此这类句子常常自带拟人化的修辞色彩，把没有生命的东西，赋予生命力，从而增加了主语的多样性，使语言更加生动化。无灵主语inanimatesubject01Concept简言之，主语不是人。AppreciationThesmileonherfacewas

asvibrant(充满生机的)asthesunonasummerday.Anearthquake

camelikeathiefatmidnightwithoutwarning.Thislesson

willtakerootinmymind.01情感状态类名词02带动词意味的名词03时间地点场景类名词Focus0204自然现象类名词05身体部位/音容笑貌类名词Fearruled

thewholevillage.Angerandbitternesshasseized/takenholdof

himcontinuallyforweeks.几个星期以来，他又愤怒又痛苦。Anxiety

toreherintopieces.她万分焦虑，心力交瘁。(焦虑把他撕成碎片。)恐惧笼罩了整个村庄。01情感状态类名词常见的情绪名词：happiness,joy,delight开心快乐；excitement兴奋；surprise,astonishment惊奇惊讶；shame羞耻羞愧；anger愤怒；despair绝望；regret遗憾后悔；sorrow悲伤；horror惊恐；anxiety焦虑；disappointment失望沮丧；satisfaction满意满足；puzzlement困惑不解；eagerness渴望等。常见的谓语动词：seize侵袭；choke噎住堵住；flood充满；creep不知不觉产生；grip紧抓；givewayto；washover洗涤侵袭；deserted丢弃遗弃；wellup涌出等。在续写中写到人物的情绪或心理时，别总用sbfeel/is...,使用相关情绪词和谓语，构成的无灵主语句，句子瞬间得到升华。知识积累Nervousnesswashedoverhim.Practice紧张的情绪涌上他的心头。Excitement

tookholdofher.她兴奋极了。一想到考试的失败，他就万念俱灰。Despair

seizedhimatthethoughtofhisfailureintheexam.我气得说不出话。Anger

choked

my

words.02带动词意味的名词Rewritethefollowingsentenceswithinanimatesubjectstogether.1.Wewalkedfortenminutesandarrivedatthehotel.2.Whenhesawhisfather,hewasafraidthathewasinforanothercursing(咒骂).3.Aftertakingarest,hegainedconfidenceandafeelingofsecurity.Rest

broughthimconfidenceandafeelingofsecurity.

Thesightofhisfathermadehimafraidthathewasinforanothercursing.

Atenminutes'walk

broughtustothehotel.causeresult常见的行为动作类名词：thought想法;glance一瞥;look看到;idea想法;feeling感受;walk走路；sight看到等。常见的谓语动词：overwhelm压倒；strike/occur出现;打击;侵袭；arouse唤起；remind想起；fill...with充满...；change改变；bring带来等。知识积累在续写中描写人物动作或思考行为时，无灵主语句将人的动作和思考行为拟人化，让续写的表达更多样生动。用带动词意味的名词做主语改写下列句子1.Ifyoustartearly,youwillgetthereatnoon.

Anearlystart

willgetyouthereatnoon.

2.

IwasfilledwithsadnesswhenIsawthedesertedvillage.Thesightofthedesertedvillagefilledmewithsadness.3.Whenhethoughtofhismother,hehadthestrengthtoaccomplishthemission.Thethoughtofhismothergavehimthestrengthtoaccomplishthemission.4.Iwalkedanhourandcametoalarge,splendidhotel.Anhour’swalkbroughtmetoalarge,splendidhotel.Tip：此类名词作主语时，谓语动词可用fill/give/make/get/bring等。Thethoughtofseeinghersonverysoonfilledherheartwithgreathappiness.看到这个情景我心中充满了恐惧。我突然想到一个可怕的想法。我们步行十分钟就到了旅馆。想到不久就要见到她的儿子，她心中感到十分快乐。PracticeThesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.Aterriblethoughtsuddenlystruckme.Atenminutes’walkbroughtustothehotel.03时间地点场景类名词Dawn

foundhimalreadyontheroad.Autumn

sees/witnessesmanyyoungpeopleincolorfulsweaters.Thetown

boasts(以拥有......而自豪)abeautifullake.

常见的时间、地点类名词：dusk黄昏；dawn黎明破晓；morning；afternoon；night。常见的谓语动词：see看见；witness见证；find发现；boast以拥有......而自豪等。知识积累1.落日见证了这座城市的美丽。Thesunsetwitnesses/seesthebeautyofthecity.2.漆黑的夜晚，一只小狗在一条林荫大道中间趴着。Thedarknightfoundalittledoglyinginthemiddleofastreet/anavenue.3.北京见证了最近几年的的巨大变化。Beijinghaswitnessedgreatchangesinrecentyears.4.1949年中华人民共和国成立了。Theyear1949witnessedthefoundingofthePeople’sRepublicofChina.Practice04自然现象类名词常见的自然现象类名词：sun；sunshine；moon；moonlight；fog，mist雾；rain；earthquake…常见的谓语动词：blanket覆盖；come；bring；prevent妨碍阻止；strike打击侵袭；threaten威胁/即将来临等。知识积累Therainpreventedmefromcoming.因为下雨，我不能来。Aheavyrainvisitedthecity.

这个城市刚下过一场大雨。常见的部位、外貌类名词：face；laughter；smile；tear等。常见的谓语动词：lightup,

brighten照亮；linger继续存留；wellup涌出；flash闪烁等。知识积累05身体部位/音容笑貌类名词Herfacebrightened

whenIgaveher