高中英语作文辅导

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^_^ 高一作文专题辅导 ^_^

By

Mr.

Ge

一：连贯与句式的运用

指文章语意的通顺和语言形式的紧密衔接并符合一定的逻辑关系。要使文章前后衔接紧密，可

采用以下方法：提示

1：恰当使用关联词如

when，so，if，because，so

that

等

提示

2：巧妙使用意思有联系的词或短语如

First,

Second,

Third,

Soon,

What’s

more,

As

a

result

等。提示

3：适当使用过渡性语句

The

reasons

are

as

follows.

Every

coin

has

two

sides.

On

the

other

hand,

On

the

contrary（相反）

连接词、句型的选择

1、

递进关系

（肯定）Besides

此外/

What’s

more

更有甚者/

Also

/In

addition

此外

（否定）What’s

worse

更糟的是

/

Even

worse

/

Worse

still

/To

make

matters

worse

2、

时间

一……就

The

moment

/

On

doing

/

as

soon

as

/immediately

/

directly

不久

It was

not

long

before

…

/

After

a

while

/

Soon；然后

After

that

/

Then

/

So

/

Next

同时

At

the

same

time

/

Meanwhile

3、

转折

however

,

/

but

/

on

the

contrary

相反

/

On

the

other

hand

另一方面

/

yet

4、

顺序

First

/

Second

/

Third

/

Last

/

Next

然后/Then

5、

条件

If

/

As

long

as

只要

/

So

long

as

/on

condition

that

假如

6、强调

It

was

…that

/

who

… /

So

she

did

.

/I

do

hope

…

/

She

did

help

me.

/

It

really

worked.

7.

目的：so

that; in

order

that.

8.

举例：For

example;

such

as;

In

my

opinion,

I

think;

for

one

thing…..

for

another

thing

一方面

另一方面.

On

one

hand….;

on

the

other

hand.;

As

we

all

know,

There

is

no

doubt

that…

9.

因果：As

the

result(of).. With

the

help

of….; because

of

10：并列 not

only…but

also….

二：常用作文万能句型

1. There

is

no

doubt

that……

毫无疑问

2. have

no

choice

but

to

do

sth;

have

nothing

to

do

but

do

sth.

除了做某事别无选择

3. There

is

no

need

(for

sb)

to

do

sth;

It

is

necessary

(for

sb)

to

do

sth.

4. We’d

better

do

sth;

It’s

better

(for

sb)to

do

sth.

最好做某事

5. have

(no)

difficulty/trouble

(in)

doing

sth;

6. With

the

help

of/

with

one’s

help.

在….的帮助之下

7. There

are

many

reasons

for

it;

The

reasons

are

as

follows.原因如下

8. It’s

a

waste（浪费）

of

money/time

(for

sb)

to

do

sth.对于某人去做某事是浪费时间金钱

9. It

is

no

use/good/pleasure

doing

sth.

做某事没有用，没有好处

10.

It

is

+adj

for/of

sb

to

do

sth.

对于某人去做某事是怎样的

11.

Only

in

this

way

can

we……….（倒装）；仅仅用这种方式我们才能

12.

I

will/would

appreciate

it

if……..

如果…我将不胜感激

13.

I’m

forward

to

sth/doing

sth. 我期盼着…..

14.

Every

coin（硬币）

has

two

sides

任何事物都有两面性;

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15.

Different

people

have

different

opinions.

不同的人有不同的观点

16.

be

thankful

to

sb./

express

one’s

thanks

to

sb.

/

be

grateful

to

sb.

向某人表达感谢

16.

for

one

thing….

for

another

thing

一方面…另一方.；

On

one

hand….;

on

the

other

hand;

17：not

only…but

also….不但而且 18．As

we

all

know/As

is

known

to

all.

正如我们所知

18：As

a

saying

goes….

; There

is

a

saying

that……. 正如一句谚语所说……..

19：Sending

an

e-mail

is

more

convenient（方便的）than

sending

letters.动名词短语做主语

20：Sb

can

not/never

be

too

+adj

+

to

do

sth.

(去做某事)再怎么样也不为过/

越怎样越好

21.

Do

what

sb

can

to

do

sth; Do

all/everything

(that)

sb

can

to

do

sth.

进某人所能做某事

22.

It’s

time

for

sb

to

do

sth;

It

‘s

(high)

time

that

sb

(should)

do

sth.该某人做某事的时候了

23.

make

it

possible

(for

sb)

to

do

sth

使某人有可能做某事

24.

find/think/feel/

it

+n/adj

(for

sb)

to

do

sth.发现认为感觉去做某事怎么样（it

做形式宾语）

25.

The

reason

why…….is/was

that….. 什么的原因是….. (其中

that

不能用

because)

26.

It

is

obvious/clear

that…… …..是显而易见的。

三：句式的运用：(利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采)。

基本句型：

1、

感叹句 e.g.

1)

How

happy

I

was

when

I

received

your

letter.

2）

What

a

kind

boy

he

is! 3）How

disappointed(失望)

he

was

!

2、

强调句 e.g. It

was

this

young

boy

that

helped

the

old

granny.

3、

倒装句 e.g.

1)

Only

in

this

way

can

you

solve

this

problem.2)

There comes

the

police

car

3)

Hardly

had

they

got

to

the

station

when

they

met

the

young

man.(一…..就….)

4、

省略句 e.g.

They

read

while

walking

or

riding

on

a

bus.

5、

with

复合结构

e.g.

I

saw

a

lady

walking

slowly

in

the

street

with

a

handbag

in

her

hand.

6、

定语从句

e.g.

In

my

opinion,

cyber

cafes

should

be

a

place

where

we

can

find

much

useful

information.

7、

各种名词性从句

e.g.

That’s

what

I

should

do.

8、

各种状语从句 e.g.

Time

passed

quickly

before

we

knew

it.

EX:

Task

1

按要求改写下列句子,使其更具文采。

1.

Tom

saved

the

drowning

girl.(强调)_____________________________________________.

2.

I

hope

I

can

pay

a

visit

to

you

next

year.（强调）__________________________________

3.

Tom

was

puzzled（困惑），（感叹）________________________________________________

4.

It

is

great

fun

to

climb

the

hill.（感叹）__________________________________________

5.

Tom

and

Mary

like

singing

songs.（肯定倒装）___________________________________

6.

John

likes

to

study

and

play.（否定倒装）_______________________________________

7.

Soon

the

firefighters

（消防员）came.（表时间句型）________________________________

四：常用谚语（写作中可以适当使用）

1.

Practice

makes

perfect.

熟能生巧

。

2.

God

helps

those

who

help

themselves.

天助自助者。

3.

Easier

said

than

done.

说起来容易做起来难。

4.

Where

there

is

a

will,

there

is

a

way.

有志者事竟成。

6.

Once

bitten,

twice

shy.

吃一堑，长一智。

7.

Experience

is

the

mother

of

wisdom.

实践出真知。

8.

All

work

and

no

play

makes

jack

a

dull

boy.

只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。

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10.

More

hasty,

less

speed.

欲速则不达。

11.

Its

never

too

old

to

learn.

活到老，学到老。

12.

All

that

glitters

is

not

gold.

闪光的未必都是金子。

13.A

journey

of

a

thousand

miles

begins

with

a

single

step.千里之行始于足下。

14.

Look

before

you

leap.

三思而后行。

15.

Ill

news

travels

fast.

坏事传千里。

16.

A

friend

in

need

is

a

friend

indeed.

患难见真情。

18.

Action

speaks

louder

than

words.

行动胜过语言。

19.

A

good

beginning

is

half

done

良好的开端是成功的一半。

20:

All

roads

lead

to

Rome.

条条大路通罗马。

21:

Birds

of

a

feather

flock

together.

物以类聚，人以群分。

22:

Do

as

the

Romans

do. 入乡随俗。

23:

Many

heads

are

better

than

one. 三个臭皮匠，赛过诸葛亮。

24:

One

apple

a

day

keeps

the

doctor

away.

每天吃一个苹果可以保持健康

五：常用句型

（一）段首句

1.

关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……然而另一些人认为…..

There

are

different

opinions

among

people

as

to……Some

people

think

that

……;

hower,

the

others

think……..

2.

俗话说（常言道）……，There

is

an

old

saying……

3.

现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。

Nowadays，it

is

common

to

…….

Many

people

like

……

because

……

Besides，……

4.

任何事物都是有两面性，…也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything

has

two

sides

and

……

is

not

an

exception，it

has

both

advantages

and

disadvantages.

6.

关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……

People’s

opinions

about

……

vary

from

person

to

person.

Some

people

say

that

……To

them,……

7.

人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man

is

now

facing

a

big

problem

……

which

is

becoming

more

and

more

serious.

8.……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。

……has

become

a

hot

topic(话题)

among

people，especially

among

the

young

and

heated

debates

are

right

on

their

way.

9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一

些严重的问题。

……has

been

playing

an

increasingly

important

role

in

our

day-to-day

life.

it

has

brought

us

a

lot

of

benefits

but

has

created

some

serious

problems

as

well.

10.

根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，

但是为什么呢？

According

to

the

figure/number/statistics/percentages

in

the

/chart/bar

graph/line/graph

，it

can

be

seen

that……while.

Obviously，……but

why?

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11：最近我班有一个激烈的讨论关于是否……

Recently,

our

class

has

heated

debate/discussion

about

whether………..

（二）中间段落句

1.

相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。

On

the

contrary，there

are

some

people

in

favor

of……at

the

same

time，they

say……

2.

但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。

But

I

don't

think

it

is

a

very

good

way

to

solve

…….For

example，……Worst

of

all，…….

3.

……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，

最重要的是

……

。 ……is

necessary

and

important

to

our

country's

development

and

construction.

First，……What's

more,

……

Most

important

of

all,……

4.

有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。

There

are

several

measures

for

us

to

adopt.

First,

we

can……

5.

为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因是……。总的来说，……

的主要原因是由于……

Why……

The

first

reason

is

that

……The

second

reason

is

……The

third

is…….For

all

this,

the

main

cause

of

……use

to

…….

6.

然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。

However,

just

like

everything

has

both

its

good

and

bad

sides,

……also

has

its

own

disadvantages,

such

as

……

7.

尽管如此，我相信……更有利。

Nonetheless,

I

believe

that

……is

more

advantageous.

10.

完全同意……这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：

I

fully

agree

with

the

statement

that

……because…….

（三）结尾句

1.

至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……

As

far

as

I

am

concerned,

I

agree

with

the

latter

opinion

to

some

extent.

I

think

tha

……

2.

总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。

In

a

word,

the

whole

society

should

pay

close

attention

to

the

problem

of

……Only

in

this

way

can

we

……in

the

future.

3.

但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比

较，我更倾向于（喜欢）……

。

But

……and……have

heir

own

advantages.

For

example,

……

while……

Comparing

this

with

that,

however,

I

prefer

to……

4.

就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……

Personally,

I

believe

that……

Consequently,

I’m

confident

that

a

bright

future

is

awaiting

us

because……

5.

随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量，

这个社会将要变得越来越好。

With

the

development

of

society,

……So

it's

urgent

and

necessary

to

……If

every

member

is

willing

to

contribute

himself

to

the

society,

it

will

be

better

and

better.

6.

至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……

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