读后续写：诚信类-一张星空地图讲义 高考英语作文专项复习

高三下学期模拟考试英语读后续写题目：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasalateSaturdayafternooninearlyMarch,andIwassweatinggracelessly,insearchoftheonlygiftmysonsaidhewantedfromLosAngeles:amaptothehomesofthestars.IwashereformeetingsinWestwoodneartheUCLAMedicalCentre.ShouldIwanderalittle?Trytofindoneofthetreasuredmaps?Fromthefrontofthehoteltaxiline,acheerfuldriversaid,“Noproblem.Mapvendors(小贩)areeverywhere!”Beforelong,wesawahand-paintedsandwichboardsaying:StarMaps.Thetaxistopped.Afellowapproachedwithathinfoldedsheetandsaid:“Tendollars.”Tendollars.American!Withrighteousassurance,Iinformedhim,“That’stoomuch.”The

mapmanshrugged.Wecontinued,whizzingpasttheBeverlyHillsHotelintoWestHollywood.ThedriverdroppedmeattheHouseofBlues,encouragingmetostroll.Ibeganwalking,certainIwouldfindalow-coststarmapsoon.Iwaswrong.Therewashardlyanybodyonthestreet.Theredidn’tseemtobemanyrealstores,justcarsandbars.Nomaps.Nostars.Blockspassed.Thesunbegantosink.AttheedgeofWestHollywood,anotherfellowappearedahead,sellingstarmapstoacarfullofteenagegirls.Tendollarsstill.Stilltoomuch.Forgotit.Mysonwouldunderstand.TimetogobacktoWestwood.Thatnight,Icalledmywife.“Didyougetoneofthosemapstothestars?He’sbeentalkingaboutnothingelse.”ThisnewswashardtoignoreButitwaslate.Morningwascoming.Therewouldbelasttry.AfterIcheckedout,thefirsttaxiinthehotellinewasanoldChevydrivenbyaskinnyguyfromNorthCarolina.Atnineinthemorning,mapvendorswerenowheretobefound.“Youknow,”saidthedriver,“Theguyswiththemapsjustain’tupyet!”Hewasright.“Forgetit.Let'sgototheairport.”“Well.”saidthedriver“Icouldmailyouoneifyoulike.”Sure.Trustthisguy?Imightaswelltosscashontothefreeway.Butexitingthetaxi,Irecognizedmylastchance.Ihandedthedriver$13andmybusinesscard.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Threeweekspassed,noreplyfromLA.Iheldthepackageandthenoteinmyhandspeechless.试题分析:文本是-一篇记叙文。讲述了作者在美国洛杉矶出差期间留下13美元托付-一位出租车司机帮助购买星空地图，经过一周后因仍未收到地图，在几乎失去信心的时候，最终收到对方寄来的地图的故事。故事体现了出租车司机助人为乐的精神及对他人的诚信，符合新时代社会主义价值观，适合离中生写作。五要素Who--主要人物:I:次要人物:ataxidriverinLA;myson,mywifeWhen--alateSaturdayafternooninearlyMarch;threeweekslater.Where--inLosAngelesHow--tokeephiswordWhy--tokeephiswordWhat-Ataxidriverhelpedtobuyastarmapandmailedittome挖掘文章人物的情感I.主次人物分析根据文本和续写两段首句可知是续写第是第--段续写的次要人段的主要人物;物是第二段续写的主要人物是这两段中的次要人物。主要人物要在每-一段中体现次要人物可能出现在续写中，考生可以根据自己的故事情节进行合理安排。II。人物情感和性格分析根据Iwassweatinggracelessly，ShouldIwanderalittle?Blockspassed.Thesunbegantosink河看出“我给myson买星空地图，又为避免付出了相当大的根据Tendollarsstill.Stilltoomuch,Forgotit可看6我”始终和而--度但是据theonlygiftmysonsaidhewantedfromLosAngeles及后来给mywife打电话时听到He'sbeentalkingaboutnothingelse等描述，可以发现myson非常所以“我”只能买星空地图不可。所以根据Icouldmailyouoneifyoulike及Irecognizedmylastchance.Ihandedthedriver$13andmybusinesscard可以看出出租车司机觉得可疑的，但是的性格，虽然不情愿但只能接受。III.场景分析根据Threeweekspassed,noreplyfromLA和Iheldthepackageandthenoteinmyhand,speechless可得知，第-一段段末以情况应该重点描写结束，实现与第二段首句的街接第二段可以通过合理描写不文的合理街接，同时通过描写实现上以及对故事进行和升华。IV。动作分析文本中Iwassweatinggracelessly动作描写出“我”找星;从文本Wecontinued,whizzingpastthe。。beganwalking，certainlyIwouldfindalow-coststarmap等司“我”为了得到以看出，这也为续写时解释为什么taxidriver会过了三周才给他发来的星空地图。根据文尾handedthedriver$13andmybusinesscard这个动作细节司知，续写第描写段应该通过设计由失望到惊喜的过程。V心理活动分析文本关于心理活动的描写主要集中在ShouldIwanderalittle?Trytofindoneofthetreasuredmaps?可看出作者为了不惜走多几条街想法。根据Forgotit.Mysonwouldunderstand河看Thisnewswashardtoignore,Sure.Trustthisguy?Imightaswelltosscashonto“我”是-一个的人thefreeway可看出这也为续写第-一段经过三周后还没收到星空地图描写作者和如何埋下伏笔。VI。对话分析根据文本Didyougetoneofthosemapstothestars?He'sbeentalkingaboutnothingelse及mywife在电话中的所说的话可知，myson是另根据“YouknowsaidtheTaxidriver,“Theguyswiththemapsjustain'tupyet!“我”应该是把自己的寻找地图的跟可以推测taxidriver说了。所以才会有Icouldmailyouoneifyoulike这样的:也为续写第二段就为什么会过了三个星期还没收到对方答应寄来星空地图作出解释。范文：Threeweekspassed,noreplyfromLA.Mysonsighedwithdisappointmentwhencarefullycheckingthemailbox.Seeinghisdroopingheadandgloomyeyes,Icouldn’thelpblamingmyselfforputtingmyeasytrustonatotalstrangerandexpectinghimtorealizemyson’swish.Afterallinrecentdaysnoonewouldliketotakethetroubletodothisforanencounterwithnothinginreturn.Wehadgivenuponthestarmapwhenabigwhiteenvelopemarked“U.S.”unexpectedlyreachedusoneafternoon.Insidetheenvelopewasasmallgreenpackageandasmallnotesaying“Forgivedelay.Here’samapforyoursonKindregards,LA!”Iheldthepackageandthenoteinmyhand,speechless.Thewholethingwastotallytomysurprise.Ihadpreviouslythoughtthatanactofkindnessfromastrangerwouldnotreallyexisted.However,whatIwasexperiencingrightnowprovedthatIwaswrong.Iwasdeeplyashamedofmyself,becauseIshouldn’thaveassumedthedriver’sintentiontohelpsomeoneinneed.Whenmysonsawthestar