热点01 书面表达读后续写(新高考)

热点01书面达读续写【题势新高考英语科目考试题型有重大变化，其中英语写作分为两部分：第一节为应用文写作；第二节为读后续写或概要写作。应用文写作与往年的写作变化不是很大，已为广大师生所熟悉，但是第二节的读后续写或概要作是一种新题型题介绍选材特点（1）所需阅读的短文词数在350内；（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接度；（2）内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语覆盖情况；（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和确性；（4）上下文的连贯性。【分巧（1）所续写短文的词数应为150右（词数少于130的从总分中减去（2）应使用5个上文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你使用的关键词语。读后续写以读为辅，以写为主，其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力，主要包含以下四个方：把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力；语言运用的准确性和丰富性；对语篇结构的把握能力；创造性思维能力。【点题假生；活故；理事寓故；生生。【时测建用：分）1

（年浙江省高考真题）话题：假期里发生的故事

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2:wereanditdark._________________________________【考文littlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontmyhorse.toleftavoidIheldtightlyandtriednotfall.Thendadturnedaroundandshouted,on!”Allofasuddenthehorsebeganrun.Mydadtokeepupbehindus.Forafewminutesmydowntoatrotariver.IlookedaroundandrealizedthatwewayoffWehadnoideawherewereitLuckilytheandgavelightwhenwewereforwayfarmhouse.Aftermusthavebeenwesuddenlyheardthesoundofsheepthedistance.MyIhorsestowardssheep.AscloserwesawUnclePaulwithflashlightwavingusover.Whatnight!【析读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。根据第一段所给首句Suddenlyarabbitoutinfronthorse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从出后带来的反应扩展开以写马的反应可写人的反应要意与第二段首句相呼应。第二段首句是hadnoideaanditdark.一句呼应前文UnclePaul的嘱——不误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。续写时注意要使用5个上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。B（东省年普通高等学校招生模拟）3

话题：救治流浪狗的故事

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