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专题06应用文写作第一组：道歉信假如你叫李华，你的一位朋友John刚从国外归来，邀请你参加本周日在他家举办的朋友聚会，但你不能参加。请你根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件：1．表达想参加的意愿；2．忙于准备高考；3．由于感冒，身体不适；4．表示歉意并另约时间。参考词汇：高考theCollegeEntranceExaminationDearJohn，IamextremelysorrytotellyouthatIamunabletogotoyourpartythisSunday.ItisverykindofyoutoinvitemetoyourhouseandI①lookforwardtogoingtoyourpartyandsharingyour②experiencesabroad.③tomyregret，Iwillbeabsentfromyourparty④becausetheCollegeEntranceExaminationisjustaroundthecorner，⑤andIamnowreallybusypreparingforit.⑥，IhavecaughtabadcoldlatelyandIamreallynotmyself.Anyway，wewillhavemanymorechancestogettogether.Shallwemakeitaftertheexam?Iamtrulysorryandhopeyouwillacceptmy⑦apology.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHua在⑥处加入适当过渡词What'sworse把④改为with复合结构：withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationjustaroundthecorner把⑤改为介词＋关系代词引导的定语从句：forwhichIamnowreallybusypreparing第二组：建议信假如你叫李华，你的英国朋友Andrew下个月要来你校学习两个月。他来信请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。现在，请你用英语回一封信，按以下各点答复：1．建议骑自行车上学；2．自行车是学生常用的交通工具；3．骑自行车的一些好处；4．骑自行车需注意的问题。DearAndrew，Asforthequestionaboutthetransportationtoandfromschool，I'dliketorecommendyourridingabicycle.Herearesomereasons.Firstly，①ridingabiketoandfromschoolisverycommonamongthestudents，forbuyingorrepairingabicycledoesn'tcostalot.Next，parkingabicycleiseasyand②(便利的)inourschool.③(事实上)，bicycle­ridingisalsoa④(实用的)waytodoexerciseandprotecttheenvironment.Whatyoushoulddocarefullyisjusttokeepanappropriatespeedwhileridingandlockitafteryou'reoffit.Inthisway，you'llfeelitsimpleandrelaxingtorideabicyclewhileyou'rehere.Hopefully，thesetipscouldbehelpful.Yourssincerely，LiHua②convenient③Actually/Asamatteroffact用itiscommonpracticetodo...改写句①加黑部分：itiscommonpracticeforthestudentstorideabiketoandfromschool第三组：申请信假如你是我市一名高三学生李华，你打算报考一所外语学院。你在网上看到上海外国语学院的招生信息(admissioninformation)，并对此非常感兴趣。根据招生要求，你需要用英语撰写一份个人申请报告，内容应包括：记述自己的个性特长及取得的成果；2．说明进入大学后的努力方向及设想等。DearSirorMadam，Ireadabouttheadmissioninformation①whileIwassurfingthenettheotherday.I'm②interestedinit.Foronething，Icangetonwellwithallmyclassmates.Foranother，Idowellinmostofmysubjects，especiallyinEnglish.IlikereadingEnglishpoemsandenjoyEnglishmovies.Speeches,deliveredbyfamouspeoplearealsomyfavorite.③，IoncewonthefirstprizeinanEnglishspeechcontestheldinourcityandwashonoredtheBestSpeakerformy④performances.EnglishissoimportanttomethatIintendto⑤(主修)EnglishifIamadmittedintoyouruniversity.Iwanttohaveajobrelatedtolanguagesinthefuture.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours，LiHua在③处加过渡词What'smore⑤majorin把①改为省略句：whilesurfingthenettheotherday第四组：邀请信假定你是李华，你所在的学校将在暑假期间举办“澳大利亚文化展览”。请你根据以下要点给澳大利亚朋友Peterson写一封信，请他届时前来给你们做一次讲座。目的：帮助师生了解澳洲历史与文化内容：简要介绍澳大利亚的风土人情日期：8月第一周内任意一天的下午时间：3：00—5：00，约两个小时DearPeterson，Ourschool①isplanningtoholdanAustraliancultureshowthissummervacation.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveusalectureaboutthepeopleandcustomsonthecontinentofAustralia.②Wewouldliketogetourteachersandstudentstolearnmoreaboutyourhistoryandculture.YoumaychooseanydayofthefirstweekinAugustandgiveusthetalkthatafternoon，③whichwillstartfrom3：00p．m.andfinishatabout5：00p．m.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreplyandwe'resureyourtalkwillbeasuccess.Yours，LiHua用schedule的相关短语改写①处的黑体部分：isscheduledto用Itisagoodchanceforsb.todosth.改写句②：Itisagoodchanceforourteachersandstudentstolearnmoreaboutyourhistoryandculture.③处改为现在分词短语作后置定语：startingfrom3：00p．m.andendingatabout5：00p．m.第五组：求助信假如你是某中学的高一学生李明，最近与母亲关系紧张，难以相处。请根据下表内容用英语给某英文杂志Helper栏目的编辑Mr.Smith写一封80词左右的求助信，请他帮你解决问题。你的情况你母亲的情况你的问题1.学习成绩好；2.爱母亲；3.有点害怕母亲。1.大学教授，工作勤奋，很少有时间和你说话；2.对你严格要求，易发脾气。1.与母亲很少交流；2.不知如何沟通。DearMr.Smith，Iamwritingtotellyoumyproblem①troublingmeforalongtime.Itistherelationshipbetweenmymotherandme.Mymotherisauniversityprofessor，②andsheworksveryhard.Sheisstrictwithmebut③sheissobusywithherworkthatshefindslittletimetotalktome.IloveherandIdowellinmystudies，butIstillfeelalittleafraidofherbecausesheloseshertempereasily.④Idon'tknowhowtocommunicatewithher.⑤Maybeit'sbecausewehaveseldomsatdownandexchangedourfeelingsandthoughts.I'dappreciateitifyougivemeawayout.Bestwishes.Yourssincerely，LiMing高级句型①处改为定语从句：which/thathastroubledmeforalongtime②处改为现在分词短语：workingveryhard③处改为倒装句：sobusyisshewithherworkthatshefindslittletimetotalktome用thereasonwhy...isthat...连接④、⑤句：ThereasonwhyIdon'tknowhowtocommunicatewithheristhatwehaveseldomsatdownandexchangedourfeelingsandthoughts.第六组：感谢信假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的Mr.Brown的资助，可以重返校园。请你给Mr.Brown写一封信，内容如下：1．收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；2．在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励；3．决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；4．盼望见到Mr.Brown，希望他寄来一张照片。DearMr.Brown，Iamwritingtoexpressmydeepestgratitudeforthemoneyandbooksyousentme.Icouldnothavereturnedtoschool①ifyouhadn'thelpedme.Thankyousomuch.IhavebeenworkinghardsinceIwentbacktoschool.②Myteachersoftenpraisemeandencourageme.③Ihavemadegreatprogressinmystudieswiththehelpofthem.Ihavemadeupmymindtostudyharderandmakegreaterprogress.Howareyougettingonwithyourlifeandwork？Iwouldliketomeetyouinperson，butIhavenoopportunitytodoso.Wouldyoupleasesendmeaphotoofyourself？Thankyouagainforyourgeneroushelpandbestwishes！Yourssincerely，LiHua①处改为“without＋名词”形式：withoutyourhelp用“介词＋关系代词”连接②、③句：Myteachersoftenpraisemeandencourageme，withthehelpofwhomIhavema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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearEditor-in-Chief,Congratulationsonthe10thanniversaryofYouth.IhavebeenadevotedreadersinceIsubscribedtothenewspaper.Obsessedwithit,Ireadeachissuefromcovertocover.Itboastsavarietyofcolumns,ofwhichChinesecultureismyfavorite.Theseriesofcontentsnotonlyintroducesabundantculturalknowledgebutalsovaluestheinheritanceofbrilliantcultureandstrengthensourculturalconfidence.AsafanofYouth,IrecommendthatitwillbebetterifitcarriessomearticlesaboutthelifeofforeignteensandIhopethatitwillbecomeevenmorepopular.Sincerelyyours,LiHua假定你叫李华，是一名高三学生，你发现很多同学晚上学习到很晚，他们边学习边吃零食或喝可乐，早上则由于起床太晚而不吃早餐，你感觉这样会对身体有害。请你根据这种现象，给报社写一封信反映上述情况，并谈谈自己的看法。注意：1.词数80词左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearEditor，IamahighschoolstudentwhohasjustenteredGradeThree.Ihavefoundthatsomestudentsinmyclassworkharderthanbefore.Theyoftenstayuplateintothenight,eatingsnacksordrinkingCocaColatokeepawake,which,ofcourse,isbadfortheirhealth.Andsomestudentsfinditdifficulttogetupearlythenextmorning,sotheyhavetogotoclasswithoutbreakfast.Thisisalsoabadhabitthatdoesharmtotheirhealth.Inmypointofview,importantasstudiesare,healthshouldalsobetakenseriously.Notonlyshouldwekeepahealthydiet,butweshouldalsobalanceourstudiesandrelaxation.Onlyinthiswaycanwekeepfitandmakeprogressinourstudiesaswell.Yoursfaithfully，LiHua假定你是李华,你的好友印度留学生Ajay来信.邀请你在本周末与他一起去本地的博物馆看印度文化展。请用英语回信,内容包括:1.感谢邀请;2.表示对展览的兴趣;3.确定会面时间和地点。注意:1.总词数80词左右;2.开头已给出,不计入总词数;DearAjay,Thankyousomuchforyourkindinvitationtotheexhibition,“AncientIndia"_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,.LiHua.【答案】DearAjay,Thankyousomuchforyourkindinvitationtotheexhibition,"AncientIndia"，whichisnowonatthelocalmuseum.I'dlovetojoinyou.[高分句型一](感谢邀请)L'dbeparticularlyhappytowatchthisexhibitionbecausethebrilliantIndianculturehasalwaysbeenmysteriousandattractivetome.IndiaisanoldcivilizationjustlikeChina.(表示对展览的兴趣)ItwouldbeexcitingtoseealltheexhibitsthathavetraveledsuchalongwaytoChina!Withyouasacompanion.It'sagoodchancetohaveabetterunderstandingofIndianpeople'slife.Let'smeetattheentrancetothemuseumat9:30amonThursday.July23.(确定会面时间和地点)Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tony因考试发挥失常，成绩不理想而情绪低落。请给他写封信表示安慰，要点如下：1)表示难过和理解；2)找出错误原因并及时改正；3)鼓励他重拾自信，实现梦想。注意：1)词数80左右；2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3)开头和结尾已为你写好。DearTony,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】DearTony,I’msorrytohearthatyoudidn’tdowellinyourexamandthatyouareveryworriedaboutyourstudy.Iquite

understandhowyoufeelnow.Thereisnodoubtthatweshouldkeepagoodstateofmind.Asweknow,failureisthemotherofsuccess.Weshouldsparenoeffortstoanalyzethecauseoffailure,whichcouldhelpusfindoutthemistakeswemadeandtrytomakeupforthelackofknowledgeandskillsinthoseareas.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakegreatprogressinourstudy.Ihopethatbythetimethisletterreachesyou,you’llbefeelingmuchbetter.Let’sworkhardtogetherandturnourdreamintoreality.Yours,LiHua上周五，你校举办了一次“英语节”活动。请你为校报英文版写一篇报道，介绍这次活动。内容包括：1.活动时间及地点；2.活动情况；3.活动收获。注意：1.词数80左右；2,题目已为你写好，不计入词数。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________