读后续写：归还雨伞学案-高三英语写作专项

浙江省A9协作体暑假返校联考学生稿第二节:读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段。使之构成一篇完整的短文。StepIReadthefollowingpassageandunderline5to10keywords.1wasasinglemotherinmy30swholiveddownandoutwithmydaughterPeggyinasmallapartmentstrugglinghardtomakeourneedsmeet.Oneday,1headedtothedowntownforaninterview,Isatdowninthestreetcar,andthereagainstthoseatwasabeautifulsilkumbrellawithasilverhandledecoratedwithgoldscrollsamongwhichtherewasanamecarved.OnimpulseIdeterminedtofindtheownermyself.Igotoffthestreetcarintheheavyrainandthankfullyopenedtheumbrellatoprotectmyself.ThenIsearchedatelephonebookforthename.Ifounditimmediatelyandcalledit,waitingpatiently,andthenaladyanswered.“YesJshesaidinsurprise,withextremeexcitement/Itwasmyumbrellawhichhadbeenstolenayearago.”Soappealingwasherpleasurethat1forgotIwaslookingforajobandwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.Shelooktheumbrellawithtearyeyes,explainingwithchokingvoicethattheumbrellawasgivenbyherparents,nowdead.Herhappinessatretrieving（找回）thisspecialpossessionwassuchthattohaveacceptedherrewardwouldhavespoiledsomething.So1refusedherofferandleft.Thefollowingmonthswerehard.Icanonlyobtaintemporaryemployment,forasmallsalary.Whatwasworse,IhadjustloslmyHoldingthenote,Iwasonthevergeoftears,acrossmybody.Apeacefloodedintomelikea,whichmademehopefulagain.B.综合填空1.1satdowninthestreetcar,andtheretheseatwasabeautifulsilkumbrellawithasilverhandle(decorate)withgoldscrolls(卷轴)amongtherewasaname(carve).Soappealingwasherpleasure1forgotIwaslookingforajobandwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.There1stood,(freeze),overwhelmedbymisery.参考答案:1.thankfully2.extreme3.teary,choking4.joyously,desirably5.hearty6.unbelievably7.tightly,withastreamofwarmthspreading8.sweet,blessinglastjobbeforeChristmas,withonlyfifteendollarsleft.Unlessamiraclehappened,IwouldbehomelessinJanuary,foodlessandjobless.1hadprayedsteadilyforweeks,andtherehadbeennoanswerbutthiscoldnessanddarkness.TheairwasfullofChristmasmerriment,withthebellsringingandchildrenshoutinginthebitterduskoftheevening.ButthereshouldbenoChristmasforme,Iknew,nogiftsnoremembrancewhatsoever.Thinkingofthis,Icouldn'tcontrolmytearsonmywayhome,but1managedasmilesoIcouldgreetmylittledaughter.Sheopenedthedoorformeandthrowherselfinmyarms,dreamingjoyouslyanddemandingdesirablyforherChristmasgift.There1stood,frozenoverwhelmedbymisery.注意1.续写词数应为15。左右:2请按如下格式在谷题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyranfleetlytoanswerit,callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.Abruptly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.StepII原文好词好句积累StepIIISummarizethepassagewithin60words.Trytoincludethekeywordsyoulist.StepIVDrawtheoutlineofthetwoparagraphsaccordingtothegivensentences:(WritedownthekeywordseitherinEnglishorChinese.StepVReadthesample,andfillintheblanks.Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyranfleetlytoanswerit,callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.ThenIheardaman's(heart)voicecomingandwenttothedoor.Hewasa(deliver)manwithhisarmsfullparcels,"Thisisamistake"，Isaid,buthereadthenametheparcelsandtheywereme.Whenhehadgone,Ididn'tknowtodo.Subsequently,Peggyand1satonthefloor,(look)ateachother(unbelievable).asurprise!Isearchedforthenameofthe(send).Abruptly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.Ipickedupthenote,read“Thanksforyour(return)theumbrella.MerryChristmas!”Itwastheladysentustheseparcels.(hold)thenotetightly,Iwasthevergeoftears,astreamofwarmthspreadingacrossmybody.thechillyChristmas,IforgotIhadnomoneytherentandonlyfifteendollarsinmypocket.Wejustsatinoursmallapartment(unwrap)thegiftsoneoneinhappiness.Asweetpeacefloodedintomelikea(bless),whichmademe(hope)again.StepVIFinishyourwriting.StepVII检测A.“添枝加叶”(扩写句子)gotoffthestreetcarintheheavyrainandopenedtheumbrellatoprotectmyself."YesJshesaidinsurprise,withexcitement.Shetooktheumbrellawitheyes,explainingwithvoicethattheumbrellawasgivenbyherparents,nowdead.Sheopenedthedoorformeandthrowherselfinmyarms,dreaminganddemandingforherChristmasgift.ThenIheardaman'svoicecomingandwenttothedoor.Subsequently,Peggyand1satonthefloor,lookingateachother.Holdingthenote,Iwasonthevergeoftears,acrossmybody.Apeacefloodedintomelikea,whichmademehopefulagain.综合填空satdowninthestreetcar,andtheretheseatwasabeautifulsilkumbrellawithasilverhandle(decorate)withgoldscrolls(卷轴)amongtherewasaname(carve).Soappealingwasherpleasure1forgotIwaslookingforajobandwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.There1stood,(freeze),overwhelmedbymisery.教师稿第二节:读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段。使之构成一篇完整的短文。StepIReadthefollowingpassageandunderline5to10keywords.1wasasinglemotherinmy30swholiveddownandoutwithmydaughterPeggyinasmallapartmentstrugglinghardtomakeourneedsmeet.Oneday,1headedtothedowntownforaninterview.Isatdowninthestreetcar,andthereagainsttheseatwasabeautifulsilkumbrellawithasilverhandledecoratedwithgoldscrollsamongwhichtherewasanamecarved.OnimpulseIdeterminedtofindtheownermyself.Igotoffthestreetcarintheheavyrainandthankfullyopenedtheumbrellatoprotectmyself.ThenIsearchedatelephonebookforthename.Ifounditimmediatelyandcalledit,waitingpatiently,andthenaladyanswered.“YesJshesaidinsurprise,withextremeexcitement."Itwasmyumbrellawhichhadbeenstolenayearago.”Soappealingwasherpleasurethat1forgotIwaslookingforajobandwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.Shetooktheumbrellawithtearyeyes,explainingwithchokingvoicethattheumbrellawasgivenbyherparents,nowdead.Herhappinessatretrieving（找回）thisspecialpossessionwassuchthattohaveacceptedherrewardwouldhavespoiledsomething.So1refusedherofferandleft.Thefollowingmonthswerehard.Icouldonlyobtaintemporaryemployment,forasmallsalary.Whatwasworse,IhadjustlostmylastjobbeforeChristmas,withonlyfifteendollarsleft.Unlessamiraclehappened,IwouldbehomelessinJanuary,foodlessandjobless.1hadprayedsteadilyforweeks,andtherehadbeennoanswerbutthiscoldnessanddarkness.TheairwasfullofChristmasmerriment,withthebellsringingandchildrenshoutinginthebitterduskoftheevening.ButthereshouldbenoChristmasforme,Iknew,nogiftsnoremembrancewhatsoever.Thinkingofthis,Icouldn'tcontrolmytearsonmywayhome,but1managedasmilesoIcouldgreetmylittledaughter.Sheopenedthedoorformeandthrowherselfinmyarms,dreamingjoyouslyanddemandingdesirablyforherChristmasgift.There1stood,frozen,overwhelmedbymisery.注意L续写词数应为150左右：2请按如下格式在谷题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyranfleetlytoanswerit,callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.Abruptly^anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.StepII原文好词好句积累inmy30sdownandoutmakeourneedsmeetonimpulseobtaintemporaryemploymentWhatwasworsemanageasmilethrowherselfinmyarms.在我30多岁的时候.穷困潦倒.满足我们的需求.冲动.临时就业.更糟的是.勉强一笑.扑到我怀里1.1satdowninthestreetcar,andthereagainsttheseatwasabeautifulsilkumbrellawithasilverhandledecoratedwithgoldscrolls（卷轴）amongwhichtherewasanamecarved.gotoffthestreetcarintheheavyrainandthankfullyopenedtheumbrellatoprotectmyself..“YesJshesaidinsurprise,withextremeexcitement.Soappealingwasherpleasurethat1forgotIwaslookingforajobandwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.Shetooktheumbrellawithtearyeyes,explainingwithchokingvoicethattheumbrellawasgivenbyherparents,nowdead.Sheopenedthedoorformeandthrowherselfinmyarms,dreamingjoyouslyanddemandingdesirablyforherChristmasgift.There1stood,frozen,overwhelmedbymisery..我坐在有轨电车上，靠着座位有一把漂亮的丝绸伞，银柄上装饰着金色卷轴，其中刻着一个名字。.我在大雨中下车，感激地打开雨伞保护自己。.“是的，”她惊讶地说，极度兴奋。.她的快乐如此吸引人，以至于我忘了我在找工作，直接去了她的小房子。她含泪拿起雨伞，用哽咽的声音解释说，雨伞是她父母给她的，现在已经死了。.她为我打开门，扑到我的怀里，快乐地梦想着，渴望得到她的圣诞礼物。.我站在那里，冻僵了，痛苦不堪。StepIIISummarizethepassagewithin60words.Trytoincludethekeywordsyoulist.OnedayJwasheadingtothedowntownforaninterviewwhenIpickedupabeautifulumbrellaandmanagedtofindtheowner,alady,whohaditstolenayearbeforeandwasmorethangladtorecoverit.ThefollowingmonthssawmestrugglingtosupportmyselfandmydaughterPeggy.BeforeChristmasIwasjoblesswithonly15dollarsleft,whichmadememiserable.StepIVDrawtheoutlineofthetwoparagraphsaccordingtothegivensentences:（WritedownthekeywordseitherinEnglishorChinese.（略）StepVReadthesample,andfillintheblanks.Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyranfleetlytoanswerit,callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.ThenIheardaman'sheartyvoicecomingandwenttothedoor.Hewasadeliverymanwithhisarmsfullofparcels."Thisisamistake”,Isaid,buthereadthenameontheparcelsandtheywereforme.Whenhehadgone,Ididn'tknowwhattodo.Subsequently,Peggyand1satonthefloor,lookingateachotherunbelievably.Whatasurprise!Isearchedforthenameofthe