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三步曲#写作是完全能够短时间提升，主要是办法不对造成6分以内。首先，要纠正20组语法错误；再翻译5篇全文最新考题中文，理清思绪，规范结构，理解英文思维(这一步至关主要）。这一步至关主要！接着背十篇作文素材，80个地道词伙。最后原创5篇，名师修改。第3页第3页

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先总后分先普通后特殊新浪微博：@李威廉IELTS第4页第4页第5页第5页第6页第6页The

table

below

shows

changes

in

Australia’snursingemploymentbetween1987and.thenursingworkforcerepresentedinthistableconsistsofnursesworkingatfourdifferentlevels.Asexpected,thehigherthelevel,thelowertheemploymentnumber.第7页第7页Duringthese14years,Australia’sentirelaborforcegrewfrom2,728thousandto3,738thousand,anincreaseof37%.Despitethisimpressivegrowthinthetotalworkforce,however,therewasa10percentdecreasefrom180thousandto161.2thousandinthenumberofemployeesinthenursingsector.第8页第8页Thevastmajorityofthenurseswereworkingatthelowestlevel,i,e.Assistantnurses,whosenumberremainedlargelyunchangedbetween1987and(117thousandand112thousandrespectively).However,thenumberofseniornursesandthatofjuniornursesdecreaseddramatically,theformerby20percentthelatterby28percent.第9页第9页Thesignificantdropinemploymentnumbersatlowerlevelsweresomewhatcompensatedbya30percentincreaseinthenumberworkingatthehighestlevel(directorofnursing)from4,000thousandto5.200.第10页第10页节尾段Overall,thetablesuggeststhatthedevelopmentofthenursingemploymentinAustraliawasincompatiblewiththegrowthofitstotalworkforce.第11页第11页请用这个句型造句：Thewholeprocessbeginsinthe__,followedby_,nextcomes—,whileitfinallyendupwith___.请各位造句：我昨天早晨先去了西湖逛了一圈，然后中午去了千岛湖吃了大鱼头，晚上去了浙江大学找我们初恋约会，最后夜里去了电影院。请跟贴翻译。

第12页第12页Yesterday,thewholedaybeganwithawalkingaroundtheXi’huinthemorning,followedbyawonderfuldishoffishinQianDaohu.Nextcameasweetandhopefuldatingwithmyfirstloveintheeveningwhileitfinallyendedupwithamovieinthecinema.

第13页第13页中式思维下矫情句型是要减分，而不是加分句型

矫情中式思维句型减掉1分，如想表示“在广场上面，市民们能够跳舞，唱歌，交朋友。”本来这句话很简朴，但是有些故作矫情同窗会写成：thephenomenonthatciztizensgathertogethertodance,singanddatehappenedprevalently.第14页第14页Rich

countries

often

give

financial

aid

to

poor

countries,but

it

does

not

solve

the

poverty,so

rich

countries

should

give

other

types

of

help

tothepoorcountriesratherthanthefinancialaid.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?第15页第15页颠覆性思维开篇---细化思维训练（一）（政府政策类）ItisquitecommonforrichcountriesliketheUnitedKingdomandAustraliatoofferawiderangeofaidtohelppoorcountriesthatarelackinginmoneyorresources.Forexample,theAustraliangovernmentofferedLaosasmanyas10,000boxesofmedicinelastyear.第16页第16页.04.24大作文Therearemanytelevisionadvertisementsaimedatchildren.Whateffectsoftheseonchildren?ShouldTVadvertisementsbecontrolled?第17页第17页今天0424考题不会跑题吧？由于今天考是分析处理report类型题目。除非你非要写“广告长处和缺点”话。这个题目的要点在于“effects”

“s”,也就是说至少要写2个或者2个以上后果。第18页第18页中文商家以及广告营销专家们更专业于客户心理研究和客户针对性，这一点本无可厚非，但是过多针对小孩广告涉及到了更多道德评判.第19页第19页Thebusinessmanandmarketingexpertscanmakejointeffortstobemoreprofessionalinanalyzingthecustomer’spsychologyandmaketheadvertisementsmorepointed,whichisoriginallybeyondreproach.However,whentheadvertisementsaimedatkids,itsuddenlyinvolvesmuchmoralityconflicts.第20页第20页

商业广告道德感在下降，即使商业广告技术一

直在提升，会对儿童心理甚至儿童与父母之间关系产生影响。首先，儿童判断能力不够理性甚至完全没有形成，当带有诱惑性图片和广告短片出现在孩子视线中时候，孩子们很容易被游说。但是孩子本身并没有收入，没有消费能力，他们必须通过向家长来要钱来满足自己购买欲望。当孩子购买欲望被充足放大之后，孩子不劳而获心理被进一步放大。

第21页第21页Undoubtedly,themoralityofcommercialadvertisementsiserodingsharply,althoughtheartisticdesignandmakingtechniqueofadvertisementsareprogressivelyupdating.

thesechildren-orientatedadvertisementshaveexertedunexpectedeffectsonchildrenandfamilybonds.Ononehand,theevaluationandrationalityofchildrenarenotfullymaturetodealwithalluringadvertisementsfeaturingtheextremelyseductivelinesandgorgeouspictures.第22页第22页Whentheseadvertisementsintheformsofvideoandleafletshowedupinfrontofchildren,theyarelikelytobelobbied.However,inthefact,thekidshavenoincomeatallandnoconsumptionpower,thereforetheyhavetoaskfortheirparentstosatisfytheirdemands.Astheconsumingdesireofkidsisgreatlyswelling,theirpsychologicaldeformsasreapingwithoutsowingareseriouslyexpanding.

第23页第23页而在另一方面，如果家长没有满足甚至是及时满足儿童购买欲望，孩子与家长关系会受到影响，而儿童在成长过程本应当养成勤俭节约态度被毁灭殆尽。这一点也给学校和家庭教育对于孩子教育制造了难题。第24页第24页Ontheotherhand,oncetheirdeformedattitudestowardstheshoppingfailtobemetorevenimmediatelysatisfied,thefamilybondsbetweentheparentsandkidsarenegativelyaffected.Thevaluablemindsofcombatingextravaganceandwastewouldberuinedcompletely.Itevensetobstaclesforschoolingandparentingeducationonkids.

第25页第25页4月12日作文真题以及8范文

大作文：somepeoplesaythepurposeofeducationistoprepareindividualstobeusefuladultsforsociety.Otherssaythepurposeofeducationistoachievepersonalambitions.Doyouagreeordisagree?第26页第26页首段表达批判性思维

高分节奏我观点是教育短期目的是实现学生技能和思维能力提升，从而实现个人梦想；而终极是必定是为了服务于社会，甚至人本身存在意义就是在于服务社会。教育只是一个手段，而人更多是通过实现个人目的而对社会故意。第27页第27页

首段表达细化思维和批判性思维Mypersonalanswertothepurposeofeducationisthatstudentsandteachingstaffshouldholdcriticalattitudes.Itmeansthateducationinvolvesthecontemporaryandultimategoals.Theultimategoalsofeducationistheserviceofsociety.However,whetherornotachievingit

should

take

the

accomplishment

of

personal

goals

as

the

prerequisite.

第28页第28页

第一段主题段

充足展开个人目的学生在接受教育时候，首先想是要通过学校技能训练，能取得谋生手段，包括生存必须物质条件。当然，个人目的还包括对于个人在一些专业领域提升，从而有机会从事这个行业。最后，在通过教育手段所取得社会地位，从而取得社会尊重和认可。第29页第29页先充足展开首先Ononehand,studentsareexpectingtoacquirethesurvivalskillswiththeaidofschoolingtrainingintheprofessionalskillsandthinkingabilities.Personalambitionsalsoconsistoftheaccesstotheirpreferredworkingfieldsandtheprogressionintheprofessional

fields.Besides,theyfinallywinthesocialrespectandacknowledgement.第30页第30页另一方面，通过批判性思维体现逻辑至于教育是否应当为社会提供服务为原则，答案是多样。而我坚定认为，个人目的实现和对社会有好处总体上并不矛盾。毕业生也只有通过找到好工作，取得体面工作，才干发挥才干，比如成为一个杰出建筑师同时，个人取得了较好薪水，对于社会做出了一定奉献，设计更多建筑物，满足居住和审美需求。第31页第31页Whenitcomestowhetherornottakingthesocialservicetothesocietyastheeducationgoal,viewsdifferedgreatly.However,

I

firmly

believe

that

the

accomplishment

of

personalwishesdoesnotcontradicttothewillingnesstotheserviceof

society.

Graduateshavetoacquirethedecentjob,reasonablesalaryandsocialrespectfirst

andsimultaneouslycontributetothesociety.Taketheexcellentarchitectsasanexample,theydesignthefashionablestructuresforpeople’slivingandaestheticdemandwhiletheycanacquireadecentincomeaswell.第32页第32页结尾段，仍然能够表达强悍逻辑当然，也存在一些个人利益与社会利益发生冲突时候，有效教育应当培养他们优先考虑社会利益思维。比如官员贪污行为，商人不择手段。假如教育能够在这个点上做较好，便是成功教育。第33页第33页下面我们来详细看几种排序在真

题中使用办法：

I.

College

C

has

the

greatest

proportion

of

lectures

with

PHD

qualification

among

all

the

colleges,

at

60%.

Next

comes

college

A,

at

50%,

followed

by

college

B,

at

30%.（按照数据大小关系）

II.

London

has

the

oldest

underground

railway

system

among

the

six

cities

and

it

was

opened

in

the

year

1863.

Paris

comes

next,

with

the

second

oldest

underground

system

being

opened

in

1900.（按照时间先后）第34页第34页

III.

Flying

by

air

produces

by

far

the

greatest

CO2

emissions.

This

is

followed

by

passenger

cars

which

are

the

next

largest

producers.（按照数据大小关系）

IV.

The

underground

train

driver

saw

a

much

quicker

growth

rate

in

their

annual

salary

than

other

professions.

Police

officer

comes

next,

followed

by

the

fire

fighter

and

nurse.（按照数据幅度大小关系）第35页第35页insomecountries,thegovernmentencouragesindustriesandbusinessestomovefromlargecitiestoruralareas.doyouthinktheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?第36页第36页Thelooksofcitieshaveshapedpeople’sbehaviorsonalargescaleduetoitsrippleeffect.Factoriescanberarelyseenininnercityblocks,andsomecitydwellershavesaidfarewelltobusinessofficiesindowntownareas.Idefinitelybelieveitwillbeapopularworldwidetrendwithsomeovertbenefits,despitesomeminorproblems.第37页第37页However,moreemployeeshavebecomethebeneficiariesofthistrend.Manyemployeesusedtocomplainaboutcrowedofficespace,acuteshortageofparkinglots,expensiveluncheonandtediousciviclandscapefilledupwithcementblocks.now,theycanmovetoalargerspaces,likeindustrialparksequippedwithmorepersonalizedfacilities,includingregularshuttlebusservice,areasforrelaxationandcomfortableandlargemeetingroomswithnicerviews.alltheseseemstobea"utopia"tothosewhoarestillworkingincongestedblocks.第38页第38页4分和5分作文是如何实现？

十组语法错误第一组：1，Althoughthecrimerateisfallinginmanypartsoftheworld,butviolentcrimesareconstantlyrampant.2，Manhasbecomemasternotonlyoftheearth,butalsothespace.3,Torearachildalonearechallengingtoa