雅思小作文柱图表图写作

雅思小作文柱图表图写作第一页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。表示向上:increase,rise,grow,improve,goup,climb,takeoff,shootup,rocket,soar,jump,recover,bounceback下降:reduce,decrease,godown,fall,drop,comedown,falloff,collapse,crash,slump,plummet,plunge,slide,shrink,dwindle（逐渐减少到没有或耗尽）稳定或水平:remain,stable,steady,constant,stagnate,flattenout,leveloff,hold,stayatthesamelevel,stabilize,besimilarto,thereislittle／hardlyany／nochange在底部:reachalowpoint,bottomout,recover,reachthebottom,reachtherock,hitatrough在顶部：reachapeak,topout,reachthehighestpoint／thetop／thesummit／themost,peakin／at柱图常用词汇第二页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。名词增加：anincrease,arise,agrowth,animprovement,anupturn,asurge,anupsurge,anupwardtrend下降：afall,adecrease,adecline,adrop,adownturn,adownturntrend形容词和副词abrupt(ly),sudden(ly),considerable(considerably),substantial(ly)(相当),dramatic(ally),drastic(ally)(急剧),sharp(ly),quick(ly),rapid(ly),marked(ly),significant(ly),gradual(ly),moderate(ly)(适当),slight(ly),slow(ly),steady(steadily)柱图常用词汇第三页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Languageforcomparisons第四页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。LanguageforcomparisonsmorethanTherearemoreboysthangirlsinclassA.ClassAhasfewergirlsthanboys.fewerthan第五页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。LanguageforcomparisonsthenumberofThenumberofboysislarger/greater/higherthanthatofgirlsinclassA.第六页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。LanguageforcomparisonsthepercentageofThepercentageofboysislarger/greater/higherthanthatofgirlsinclassA(67%and33%,respectively).第七页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。LanguageforcomparisonsoutnumberBoysoutnumbergirlsinclassA.exceedThenumberofboysexceedsthatofgirlsinclassA.第八页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。ThegraphbelowshowsthedifferentmodesoftransportusedtotraveltoandfromworkinoneEuropeancityin1960,1980and2000.第九页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。P1Thebargraphshowsthechangingpatterns

incommutingbytrain,car,tubeorbusforcommutersinoneEuropeancityintheyears1960,1980and2000.Thenumberofpeopleusingtrainsatfirstrose

fromjustunder20%in1960

toabout26%in1980,butthenfellbacktoabout23%in

2000.Useofthetubewasrelativelystable,

falling

from27%ofcommutersin1960

to22%in1980,butclimbingbackto

reach25%by2000.Ontheotherhand,theuseofcarsincreasedsteadily

fromjustover5%in1960to23%in1980,reachingalmost40%by2000,whereasthepopularityofbuseshasdeclinedsince1960,fallingfromjustunder35%in1960

to27%

in1980andonly15%in2000.Thegraphindicatesthegrowinguseofcarsforcommutingtoworkbetween1960-2000,andthecontinueddeclineinthepopularityofbusesfrombeingthemostpopularmodeoftransportin1960totheleastpopularin2000.第十页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。P2Thenumberofpeopleusingtrainsatfirstrose

fromjustunder20%in1960

toabout26%in1980,butthenfellbacktoabout23%in

2000.Useofthetubewasrelativelystable,

falling

from27%ofcommutersin1960

to22%in1980,butclimbingbackto

reach25%by2000.第十一页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。P3Ontheotherhand,theuseofcarsincreasedsteadily

fromjustover5%in1960to23%in1980,reachingalmost40%by2000,whereasthepopularityofbuseshasdeclinedsince1960,fallingfromjustunder35%in1960

to27%

in1980andonly15%in2000.第十二页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。P4Thegraphindicatesthegrowinguseofcarsforcommutingtoworkbetween1960-2000,andthecontinueddeclineinthepopularityofbusesfrombeingthemostpopularmodeoftransportin1960totheleastpopularin2000.第十三页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。第十四页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。SynonymsChart=barchartDifferent=variousPost-schoolqualifications=furtherqualificationsProportion=share/percentageMenandwomen=maleandfemale=peopleofdifferentgenderWhoheldthem=holdingthem/reachedthem/withthem第十五页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Opening:ThevariouslevelsoffurtherqualificationsinAustraliaandtheshareofmaleandfemaleholdingthemin1999arerevealedinthebarchart.第十六页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Body1:Itisevidentthatthereweresignificantdifferenceinfurthereducationreceivedintermsofdifferentgender.Thesmallestgenderdifferenceisatthebachelordegree,where55%ofstudentswerefemale,comparedwith45%ofmale.Anothercasethatwomenoutnumberedmenisatundergraduatediploma,with65%and35%respectively。第十七页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Body2:

Bycontrast,thegreatestgapofdifferentgenderisatskilledvocationaldiploma,where90%ofpeoplewhoacquiredthediplomaweremale,whileonly10%ofthemwerefemale.Similarly,men

accountedforclearlymorethantheirfemalecounterpartsinhigherdegrees,likemaster’sdegreeandpostgraduatediploma,wheremaletookup70%and60%

ofallrespectively.第十八页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Ending:Overall,menweremorethanwomeninbothlowerskilledvocationaldiplomaandhighergraduatediplomaandmasterdegrees,whilefemaleprevailedinundergraduatediplomaandbachelor’sdegree.第十九页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Body1:

Wecanseeimmediatelythatthereweresubstantialdifferencesintheproportionofmenandwomenatdifferentlevels.Thebiggestgenderdifferenceisatthelowestpost-schoollevel,where90%ofthosewhoheldaskilledvocationaldiplomaweremen,comparedwithonly10%ofwomen.Bycontrast,morewomenheldundergraduatediplomas(70%)andslightlymorewomenreacheddegreelevel(55%).第二十页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Body2:

Atthehigherlevelsofeducation,menwithpostgraduatediplomasclearlyoutnumberedtheirfemalecounterparts(70%and30%,respectively),andalsoconstituted60%ofMaster’sgraduates.第二十一页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Ending:Thuswecanseethatmoremalethanfemaleholdqualificationsatthelowerandhigherlevelsofeducation,whilemorewomenreachundergraduatediplomalevelthanmen.ThegenderdifferenceissmallestatthelevelofBachelor’sdegree,however.第二十二页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。ThegraphbelowshowsthedifferentmodesoftransportusedtotraveltoandfromworkinoneEuropeancityin1960,1980and2000.第二十三页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。196019802000第二十四页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。In1960,buswasthemostpopulartypeoftransportationmode,having40%commuters，whichwasfollowedbytube,trainandcarat27%,18%and6%respectively.Twentyyearslater,thebiggestpercentagewenttotrainat28%.Interestingly,peopleusecarandtubesharedthesameproportion(about22percent).Attheendof21stcentury,carbecamethemostpopularchoice,whichmeant37%peoplewouldcatchacabwhentheychosetoworkfromwork.第二十五页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Thechartsbelowshowthemainreasonsforstudyamongstudentsofdifferentagegroupsandtheamountofsupporttheyreceivedfromemployers.第二十六页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Thefirstgraphshowsthatthereisagradualdecreaseinstudyforcareerreasonswithage.Nearly80%ofstudentsunder26years,studyfortheircareer.Thispercentagegraduallydeclinesby10-20%everydecade.Only40%of40-49yroldsand18%ofover49yroldsstudyingforcareerreasonsinlateadulthood.

Conversely,thefirstgraphalsoshowsthatstudystemmingfrominterestincreaseswithage.Thereareonly10%ofunder26yroldsstudyingoutofinterest.Thepercentageincreasesslowlytillthebeginningofthefourthdecade,andincreasesdramaticallyinlateadulthood.Nearlysamenumberof40-49yroldsstudyforcareerandinterest.However70%ofover49yroldsstudyforinterestincomparisonto18%studyingforcareerreasonsinthatagegroup.

Thesecondgraphshowsthatemployersupportismaximum(approximately60%)fortheunder26yrstudents.Itdropsrapidlyto32%uptothethirddecadeoflife,andthenincreasesinlateadulthooduptoabout44%.Itisunclearwhetheremployersupportisonlyforcareer-focusedstudy,butthehighestlevelisforthosestudentswhomainlystudyforcareerpurposes.第二十七页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Thechartshowsthenumberofmobilephonesandlandlines（固定电话）per100peopleinselectedcountries.

第二十八页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Thegraphshowsthenumberofmobilephonesandlandlinesper100users,forselectedcountries.Overall,mostofthecountriesincludedinthegraphhavemoremobilephonessubscribers（用户）thanlandlines.

MostEuropeancountrieshavehighmobilephoneuse.ThebiggestusersofmobilephonesaretheItalians,with88cellphonesper100people.Forexample,Italyhastwiceasmanymobilephonesaslandlines,with88mobilesperhundredpeoplecomparedto45forlandlines.MobilephoneuseislowinCanada,withfewerthan40phonesper100people.Denmarkisalsounusualbecauseithasslightlymorelandlinesthanmobilephones.

However,insomecountries,thenumberoflandlinesishigherthanthenumberofmobilephones.OneexampleistheUSA,wherethenumberofmobiles,at50per100people,ismuchlowerthanthenumberoflandlines,atalmost70perhundred.AsimilarpatterncanbeseeninCanada.ThehighestnumberoflandlinesinthegraphisinDenmark,withabout90per100people.Incontrast,thelowestfiguresforfixedlinesareinItalyandtheUK.

Inconclusion,itseemsthatmobilephoneuseishigherinEuropethaninNorthAmerica.第二十九页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。ThechartbelowshowstheamountspentonsixconsumergoodsinfourEuropeancountries.第三十页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。ThechartshowsthatBritain,amongthefourEuropeancountrieslisted,hasspentmostheavilyontherangeofconsumergoodsincluded.Ineverycase,Britishspendingisconsiderablyhigherthanthatofothercountries;onlyinthecaseoftennisracquetsdoesanothercountry,Italy,comeclose.

Incontrast,Germanyisgenerallythelowestspender.ThisIsmostevidentinphotographicfilm,whereGermanyspendsmuchlessthanBritain.Germanyonlyspendsmorethananothercountry,France,intwocases;tennisracquetsandperfumes.

Meanwhile,FranceandItalygenerallymaintainmiddlepositions,averagingapproximatelysimilarspendingoverall.Specifically,FrancespendsmoreonCDsandphotographicfilmbutlessontennisracquetsthanItalydoes.ItalysspendingonpersonalstereosisonlymarginallygreaterthanthatofFrance,whilespendingontoysisequalbetweenthetwo.

ItisclearfromthedatagiventhattherearesomesignificantdifferencesinspendinghabitswithinEurope.第三十一页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。ThechartbelowshowsinformationaboutHeartAttacksbyAgeandGenderinUSA.

第三十二页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。ThegraphshowshowageandgenderinfluencethefrequencyofheartattacksintheUS.

Lessthan6%ofallheartattacksoccurinthe29-44agegroup.Thenumberofwomenwhosufferheartattacksinthisgroupisnegligible-only3000peryear,comparedto123,000men.

Howevertheproportionofmenandwomenwithheartattacksrisesdramaticallybetween45and64,withoverhalfamillionperyear.Over420,000menayearinthisagegrouphaveheartattacks.Theincidenceamongstwomenincreases-womenhaveoneheartattackforeverythreemeninthisagegroup.

Overtheageof65,thenumberofmensufferingheartattacksonlyincreasesslightly.Howeverthereisahugeincreaseinthenumberofwomenwithheartattacks-theycompriseover40%ofallvictims.

Inconclusion,menaremorelikelytobethevictimsofheartattacksatallages,butwomenareincreasinglylikelyovertheageof65.第三十三页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。ThegraphshowsestimatedoilproductioncapacityforseveralGulfcountriesbetween1990and2010.第三十四页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。ThegraphshowsOilProductionCapacityinmillionsofbarrelsperdayforselectedGulfcountries.Thereareseveralfeaturesinthisgraph.

Themostsignificantfeatureisthatoilproductionwillincreasesharplyinalmostallthecountriesshown.KuwaitandIraqarebothexpectedtodoubletheiroutputbetween1990and2010,withKuwait'sproductionrisingfrom1.8millionbarrelsperday(bpd)in1990to3.8in2010.Iranwillalsoincreaseitsoutputbyaslightlysmalleramount.Afterremainingsteadyat2.5millionbpdfrom1990to2000,theUAE'soutputisexpectedtoapproach4.0millionbpdin2010.OnlyQatar'sproductionispredictedtofall,backto0.8millionbpdafteraslightrisein2000.

However,thegreatestincreasewillbefromSaudiArabia.In1990,itsoutputcapacityat8.5millionbpdexceededthecombinedproductionofIran,IraqandKuwait.Thisleadisexpectedtocontinuewitha75%increaseinproductionto14.5millionbpd2010.

Insummary,whilemostofthecountriesareexpectedtoshowincreases,SaudiArabiawillmaintainandstrengthenitspositionasthemajorproducer.第三十五页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。第三十六页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。审题

观察横轴与纵轴代表什么及各自的单位或项目。横轴代表职位的高低：从最低的officegradeE到最高的officegradeA，纵轴代表男女员工所占的百分比：0%-100%；观察横轴有几种柱形，每种代表什么。此图里，共两种柱形：浅色柱表示女员工的比例，深色柱代表男员工的比例；观察每种柱形的升降趋势及最高点，最低点和柱形间的高低差异。在这幅图里，浅色柱随职位的升高而呈现下降趋势，；相反，深色柱随职位的升高而呈现上升趋势；在officegradeE里，浅色柱达最高点(约为72%)，而深色柱却为最低点(约为28%)；与此形成对比的是，在officegradeA这里，浅色柱到达最低点(8%左右)，而深色柱却位于最高点(92%左右)，深浅色柱差别最大的地方在officegradeA,为84%；深浅色柱差别最小的地方在officergradeC,为10%。构思有了详细的审题分析，随后的构思阶段就变得轻而易举了。构思意味着对文章结构的妥善安排，由于引言段是必不可少的，并且只有一两句话，因此构思的对象主要就是针对主体段落。以此图为例，主体段落的安排可以有两种方案。按officegrade的高低逐级描述，从officegradeE到officegradeA，共分成5小段；按照规律，如果按男女比例差距的数量大小，可把B和E放一起，C和D放一起，A单独写一段，也就是3小段；按数据差异性质，比如E和D都是男少女多，B和C都是女少男多，A单独一段，也就是3小段了。按浅色柱和深色柱来分别进行描述，共分两大段，每段中officegrade相互比较。但由于女员工比例随级别升高而下降，男员工比例却随级别升高而增加的形式极其明显，因此方案二的写作余地小，应优先选择方案一。引言段必须要写，但结尾段则没有强制要求。若要写结尾段，则应以简单的总体趋势描写为主。◆选词由于是纵向比较，故可选用的方法大致如下：twiceasmuchas(倍数比较)；…thehighest…,followedby…..(排序)；…(figure)…,making….thelowestonein….(数值及排位)；athirdasmuchas(分数比较)。分数和倍数的表达还有很多，考生们可在备考中总结。◆考点除了开头讲过的信息精确度以及趋势和数字相结合的要求外，对于合理的衔接及复杂句的应用也是有要求的。衔接方法的切入点除了有我们熟知的连词外，还有定语从句(包括介词+关系代词)，分词，状语提前以及独立主格等方法。成功的复杂句数量不需多要精，一两句即可。第三十七页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Thechartbelowshowsestimatedworldliteracyratesbyregionandbygenderfortheyear2000.

第三十八页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。InthisreportIwilldescribeabarchartthatshowstheestimatedworldilliteracyratesbygenderandregionfortheyear2000.

FirstIwilllookatmaleilliteracyforthe6areasshown.ThelowestrateswereinDevelopedCountries,LatinAmerica/CaribbeanandEastAsia/Oceaniawithratesof1%(approximately),10%and8%(approximately)respectively.Theratesforthenextthreeareasweremuchhigherandquitesimilartoeachother.Sub-SaharanAfrica,theArabStatesandSouthAsiahadratesofapproximately31%,29%and34%.

FemaleilliteracywasmuchhigherrelativelyineachareaexceptLatinAmerica/Caribbeanwhereitwasonlyslightlyhigher.ThelowestratesforfemaleilliteracywereagainDevelopedCountries,LatinAmerica/CaribbeanandEastAsia/Oceaniawithratesofapproximately2%,12%and20%.Againtheratesforthenextthreeareasweremuchhigherandquitesimilartoeachother.Sub-SaharanAfrica,theArabStatesandSouthAsiahadratesofapproximately48%,52%and56%.

(168words)第三十九页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。ThegraphsshowenrolmentindifferentcollegesintheHigherCollegesofTechnologyin1999.第四十页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。ThechartsshowsstudentenrolmentbygenderandlevelindifferentcollegesoftheHigherCollegesofTechnologycollegesintheUAE.

Therearecleardifferencesinmaleandfemaleenrolment.Femalesoutnumbermeninallthecolleges,withalmost25%morestudentsinDubaiWomen'scollegethaninDubaiMen's.RasAl-KhaimahWomen'sCollegehasalmost180students,comparedtoonly100intheMen'scollege.

Femalesalsooutnumbermalesbylevel,withalmostdoublethenumberofmenatHigherDiplomalevel(330comparedto181).OnlyatDiplomaleveldoesthenumberofmenslightlyexceedthatofwomen.

OverhalfthestudentsareinCertificatelevel,withlessthanaquarteratHigherDiplomaorBachelorlevel.

Inconclusion,moststudentsintheHigherCollegesareenrolledatDiplomalevelorbelow,andthemajorityofstudentsarewomen.

(143words)第四十一页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Thetablebelowshowsthefiguresforimprisonmentinfivecountriesbetween1930and1980.第四十二页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Thetableshowsthatthefiguresforimprisonmentinthefivecountriesmentionedindicatenooverallpatternofincreaseordecrease.Infactthereisconsiderablefluctuationfromcountrytocountry.

InGreatBritainthenumbersinprisonhaveincreasedsteadilyfrom30000in1930to80,000in1980.OntheotherhandinAustralia,andparticularlyinNewZealandthenumbersfellmarkedlyfrom1930to1940.Sincethentheyhaveincreasedgradually,apartfromin1980whenthenumbersinprisoninNewZealandfellbyabout30,000fromthe1970total.Canadaistheonlycountryinwhichthenumbersinprisonhavedecreasedovertheperiod1930to1980,althoughtherehavebeenfluctuationsinthistrend.ThefiguresfortheUnitedStatesindicatethegreatestnumberofprisonerscomparedtotheotherfourcountriesbutpopulationsizeneedstobetakenintoaccountinthisanalysis.TheprisonpopulationintheUnitedStatesincreasedrapidlyfrom1970to1980andthismustbeaworryingtrend.第四十三页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Thegraphaboveshowinformationofemploymentratesacross6countriesin1995and2005.第四十四页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Thegraphshowschangesinemploymentratesinsixcountriesbetween1995and2005,formenandwomen.Overallmoreandmorepeopleofworkingageareemployed,andtherehavebeensignificantimprovementsforwomen,althoughtheylegbehindmeninenteringtheworkforce.

Themostobvioustrendinthegraphisthatwomenhaveloweremploymentratesinmostofthecountriesinthegraph.Forexample,inAustraliain1995,57percentofmencouldfindworkorretainajob,butonly27percentofwomen.ThedifferencewasevenbiggerinNewZealand,with60percentofwomen.EveninSwitzerlandandIceland,slightlymorementhanwomenwereinthejobmarket.

Thesecondbiggesttrendinthegraphistheimprovementinemploymentbetween1995and2005.Inallcountriesshown,figuresforbothmenandwomenimproved.ThebiggestchangewasintheUnitedKingdom,from55percentofmenin1995to73percentoverthetenyearsperiod.

Furthermore,theincreasesinemploymentratesforwomenweremuchhigherinNewZealand.Thepercentageofworkingwomenjumpedfrom25percentto42percent,andintheUnitedStatesfrom45percentto61percentoverthedecade.

Inconclusion,allthecountriesinthegraphshowedatleasta12percentincreaseinemploymentratesofbothmenandwomenoverthetenyeares.Whilemenhadrelativelyhigheremploymentratethroughouttheperiod,moreandmorewomenappeartobeenteringthelabourmarket.第四十五页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。ThegraphbelowgivesinformationaboutthepreferredleisureactivitiesofAustralianchildren.第四十六页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。ThegraphshowsthepreferredleisureactivitiesofAustralianchildrenaged5-14.Asmightbeexpected,itisclearfromthedatathatsedentarypursuitsarefarmorepopularnowadaysthanactiveones.

Ofthe10,000childrenthatwereinterviewed,alltheboysandgirlsstatedthattheyenjoyedwatchingTVorvideosintheirsparetime.Inaddition,thesecondmostpopularactivity,attracting80%ofboysand60%ofgirls,wasplayingelectronicorcomputergames.Whilegirlsratedactivitiessuchasartandcrafthighly–justunder60%statedthattheyenjoyedtheseintheirsparetime–only35%ofboysoptedforcreativepastimes.Bikeriding,ontheotherhand,wasalmostaspopularaselectronicgamesamongstboysand,perhapssurprisingly,almost60%ofgirlssaidthattheyenjoyedthistoo.Skateboardingwasrelativelylesspopularamongstbothboysandgirls,althoughitstillattracted35%ofboysand25%ofgirls.(157words)第四十七页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。ThegraphshowsInternetUsageinTaiwanbyAgeGroup,1998-2000.第四十八页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。ThegraphshowschangesintheageproInternetusersinTaiwanbetween1998and2000.

ThemainusersoftheInternetinTaiwanareyoungadultsbetween16and30yearsold.In1998,theyaccountedformorethanhalfofallusers.In1999thenumberdroppedslightlyto45%,butevenin2000theywerethebiggestgroup.

Thesecondbiggestgroupofusersisagedbetween31and50.Theymadeup41%in1998,fallingslightlyto37%in2000.Whencombinedwiththe16-30agegroup,over94%ofusersin1998werebetween16and50.

Howeverthisnumberisdroppingsteadilyasmorechildrenandolderuserslogon.In1999,thenumberofchildrenonlinequadrupledfrom2%to8%,anditcontinuedtoincreasein2000.Thereweresimilarincreasesforolderusers,risingfrom4%in1998to10%in2000.

Insummary,whileadultsbetween16and50stillrepresentthegreatmajorityofInternetusersinTaiwan,theirshareisdecliningasmorechildrenandolderusersjointheweb.第四十九页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Thebarchartbelowshowstheresultsofasurveyconductedbyapersonneldepartmentatamajorcompany.Thesurveywascarriedoutontwogroupsofworkers:thoseagedfrom18-30andthoseaged45-60,andshowsfactorsaffectingtheirworkperformance.第五十页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。Thebarchartindicatesasurveyontwodifferentagegroupsonthefactorscontributingtomaketheirenvironmentpleasantforworking.

Thesefactorsaredividedintoexternalandinternalfactors.Theinternalfactorsareteamspirit,competentboss,respectfromcolleaguesandjobsatisfaction.Theexternalfactorsarechanceforpersonaldevelopment,jobsecurity,promotionalprospectsandmoney.

Ontheinternalfactorsabove50%inbothagegroupsagreedthatteamspirit,competentbossandjobsatisfactionareessentialtomaketheirenvironmentpleasant.Whereasontheexternalfactors,therearecontrastingresults.Onthechanceforpersonaldevelopmentandpromotionalaspects,80%to90%oftheyoungergroupswereinfavorwhileonlylessthan50%oftheoldergroupthoughtso.Asimilarpatternisalsonotedonjobsecurity.Withregardstomoney,69%to70%onbothagegroupsaiditisessential.

Inconclusion,theinternalfactorshavesimilarresponsesfromthetwoagegroupswhiletheyhaddissimilarresponsesontheexternalfactors.(170words)第五十一页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。图表题综合练习第五十二页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。图表题综合练习SynonymsChart=barchartDifferent=variousPost-schoolqualifications=furtherqualificationsProportion=share/percentageMenandwomen=maleandfemale=peopleofdifferentgenderWhoheldthem=holdingthem/reachedthem/withthem第五十三页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。图表题综合练习Opening:

ThevariouslevelsoffurtherqualificationsinAustralia

and

theshareofmaleandfemaleholdingthemin1999

arerevealedinthebarchart.第五十四页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。图表题综合练习Body1:Itisevidentthatthereweresignificantdifferenceinfurthereducationreceivedintermsofdifferentgender.Thesmallestgenderdifferenceisatthebachelordegree,where55%ofstudentswerefemale,comparedwith

45%ofmale.Anothercasethatwomenoutnumberedmenisatundergraduatediploma,with65%and35%respectively。第五十五页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。图表题综合练习Body2:

Bycontrast,thegreatestgapofdifferentgenderisatskilledvocationaldiploma,where90%ofpeoplewhoacquiredthediplomaweremale,whileonly10%ofthemwerefemale.Similarly,men

accountedforclearlymorethantheirfemalecounterpartsinhigherdegrees,likemaster’sdegreeandpostgraduatediploma,wheremaletookup70%and60%

ofallrespectively.第五十六页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。图表题综合练习Ending:Overall,menweremorethanwomeninbothlowerskilledvocationaldiplomaandhighergraduatediplomaandmasterdegrees,whilefemaleprevailedinundergraduatediplomaandbachelor’sdegree.第五十七页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。图表题综合练习Opening:

Thechartgivesinformationabout

post-schoolqualificationsintermsofthedifferentlevelsof

furthereducation

reachedbymenandwomeninAustraliain1999.第五十八页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。图表题综合练习Body1:

Wecanseeimmediatelythatthereweresubstantialdifferencesintheproportionofmenandwomenatdifferentlevels.Thebiggestgenderdifferenceisatthelowestpost-schoollevel,where90%ofthosewhoheldaskilledvocationaldiplomaweremen,comparedwithonly10%ofwomen.

Bycontrast,morewomenheldundergraduatediplomas(70%)andslightlymorewomenreacheddegreelevel(55%).第五十九页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。图表题综合练习Body2:

Atthehigherlevelsofeducation,men

with

postgraduatediplomasclearlyoutnumberedtheirfemalecounterparts(70%and30%,

respectively),andalsoconstituted60%ofMaster’sgraduates.第六十页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。图表题综合练习Ending:Thuswecanseethatmoremale

thanfemaleholdqualificationsatthelowerandhigherlevelsofeducation,whilemorewomen

reach

undergraduatediplomalevelthanmen.ThegenderdifferenceissmallestatthelevelofBachelor’sdegree,however.第六十一页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。剑4P78Thechartbelowshowsthedifferentlevelsofpost-schoolqualificationinAustraliaandtheproportionofmenandwomenwhoheldthemin1999.第六十二页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。第六十三页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。第六十四页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。分组法低学历（skilledvocationaldiploma）女低于男中学历（undergraduatediploma,Bachelor’sdegree）女高于男，而且Bachelor’sdegree的两者数值基本相等。高学历（postgraduatediploma,master’sdegree）女低于男第六十五页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。P1Thechartbelowshowsthedifferentlevelsofpost-schoolqualificationinAustraliaandtheproportionofmenandwomenwhoheldthemin1999.题目Thechartgivesinformationaboutpost-schoolqualificationsintermsofthedifferentlevelsoffurthereducationreachedbymenandwomeninAustraliain1999.第六十六页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。P2Wecanseeimmediatelythatthereweresubstantialdifferencesintheproportionofmenandwomenatdifferentlevels.不同点

Thebiggestgenderdifferenceisatthelowestpost-schoollevel,where90%ofthosewhoheldaskilledvocationaldiplomaweremen,comparedwithonly10%ofwomen.Bycontrast,morewomenheldundergraduatediplomas(70%)andlesswomenreacheddegreelevel(55%).第六十七页，编辑于星期日：四点五十八分。P3Atthehigherlevelsofeducation,menwithpostgraduatediplomasclearlyoutnumberedtheirfemalecounterparts(70%and30%,respectively),andalsoconsti