读后续写练习一

读后续写练习一Therewerebeautifulthingseverywhere—prettychinafiguresanddelicatevases.

Rachel

stoodverystill,afraidofknockingsomethingover.

Mrs.Willow

handedRachelasmallbrownbottle.Rachelcouldn’twaittogetaway,feelinganyminutetherewouldbea

disaster.Shethankedherandturnedtothedoorwhensomethingbrushedagainstherleg.Rachelwassosurprisedthatshe

jumped

backwards.Itwasacat!Butherelbowhitavaseanditfelltothefloor,broken.

Howawkward!

(72words)WithasmileMrs.Willowcomfortedhersayingithadbeenbrokenbefore.

Rachel

sighed

andstaredather.“Idid,whenIwasyoung.Youcouldn’thavebeenas

clumsy

asIwas,”Mrs.Willowsaid,her

sharpblueeyes

shining.“Keeptellingyourselfyouareaswananditwillwork.”Racheldoubtfullysaidthatseveraltimes.Aftertheyclearedupthevase,theydrankteafromchinacupsandatecakesoffdelicateplatesandRacheldidn’tbreakanotherthing.Itwasakindofmagic.

Rachelsmiled.

(78words)PossibleVersionTwo:Therewerebeautifulthingseverywhere—prettychinafiguresanddelicatevases.

Allthetreasuresseemedtoboastalonghistoryandthuspriceless.“Wow,itisreallyalandofwonder.”

Rachel

couldn’thelpadmiringtheeleganceofthechinafiguresandvases.Mom’swordsechoinginhermind,curiositystillgottheupperhand.Shereachedforoneofthem,butunfortunately,thevaseslippedoffherhandandlayinpiecesonthefloor.Herheartmissingabeat,shefeltterribly

worried.

(74words)Withasmile,Mrs.Willowcomfortedher,sayingithadbeenbrokenbefore.

Seeing

Mrs.Willow’s

sharpblueeyes

filledwithwarmthandaffection,Rachelfeltextremelyregretfulforher

clumsy

behavior.“IfIhadbeenmorecareful,thedisaster

wouldn’thavehappened.”RachelknewwhatMrs.Willowsaidmightbeanexcusetorelieveheruneasinessandembarrassment.ShemadearesolutioninherheartthatfromthedayonshewouldneverbesocarelessandsworetobeakindandthoughtfulpersonlikeMrs.Willow.

(76words)读后续写练习二Shethoughtforawhileandthencontinued.

“Wewereverymuchin

love

whenyour

grandfather

hadtogotowar.Afterheleft,Iputallmyenergyinto

dancing.Hewouldwritetomeandalwaysendedhisletterswith‘Iloveyouwithmylife’.Andthenonedayalettercamewithonlythreesentences:‘Ihavelostmyleg.Iamnolongerawholeman.Forgetaboutme.’”BynowIhadforgottenaboutthepieandlistenedtograndma

attentively.

“Whathappenedthen?”“ItoldeveryoneIwascaughtinacar

accident

andmadesurethenewspaperreportedit.Ihadlearnttolimp

convincinglywitha

cane

beforeIfoundyourgrandfatherinthehospital.Itoldhimhewasnottheonlyonewhoselegwouldnever

heal

again.‘SoifyouthinkI’mgoingtoletyoufeelsorry