读后续写构思及情节辅导 学案-高三英语二轮复习写作专项

高三英语二轮复习专题读后续写构思及情节辅导OneweekendinJuly,Maryandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,MarywassoangrythatshesaidtoTom.“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Maryjustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace.sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!"shecried."Help!"Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Marykeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Marywassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,MarywantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Maryroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Marybegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Maryheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Marytookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.Paragraph1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakwhenMarywokeup.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________读后续写构思方法汉堡包法构思大框架：Step1：确定第二段的结局，即全文大结局情节Step2：根据第二段首句，确定第一段结尾情节Step3:根据第一段首句及确定好的第一段结尾情节，构思第一段中间部分情节Step4：根据第二段首句及确定好的大结局情节，构思第二段的中间部分构思具体情节的3大方法：思维导图法 2.表格法 3.提问法思维导图法Possibleendings①ThehelicoptercameandMarywassaved.()②Marywalkedalongthestreamandfoundthewayout.()③Marydidn’tmanagetosurvive.()MaryActions:___________________________________________Thoughts:__________________________________________Words:___________________________________________Looks:___________________________________________接下来只需要把刚刚构思的单词全部穿插在一起，组词成句即可，请看范文：第一段范文Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Immediatelyanabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Mary,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn'thelpcrying,“Hadn'tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn'tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithanxietyandtiredness,andthenbecameasleepwiththeshiningtearsinhereyes.表格法WhatdidMarydo?HowdidMaryfeel?3.提问法第一段Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Q1：HowdidMaryfeelatthebeginning?A1：_______________________________________________________Q2：WhatdidMarydointheforest?A2：_______________________________________________________Q3：HowdidMarythinkofherownbehavior?A3：_______________________________________________________两段过渡Q4：WhatwouldhappenbeforeMarywokeup?A4：_______________________________________________________第二段ItwasdaybreakwhenMarywokeup.Q5：Afterwakingup,whatdidMarydo?A5：_______________________________________________________Q6：HowcouldMarybesaved?A6：_______________________________________________________Q7：HowdidMaryfeelintheend?A7：_______________________________________________________范文展示参考答案1Butnomorehelicoptercameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Thetemperaturegotloweratnightthaninthedaytime.Janeputonheryellowblouse.Atthatmoment,tirednesssurroundedher.Shefeltexhaustedbothphysicallyandemotionally.ButshecontinuedwalkingforwardbecauseshereallywantedtomeetTomassoonaspossible.Shewalkedslowlyandcarefullyindarkness.Followingthestreamforabouttwohours,Janecouldn’tsupportherphysicalstrength,soshefoundaflatgroundtospendthelongandhardnight.(78words)ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

Shefelthungryandtired.Afterashortadjustment,shebeganthehardtrip.Afewhourslater,shecaughtsightofanoldmancuttingwoods.Tohergreatjoy,theoldman,whowasveryfamiliarwiththegeographicalcharacteristics,informedherofthewaytothelake.Seeingthelakemeantseeinghopeintheair.Fortunately,ahelicopterflewoverheadjustatthatmoment.Janeflaggedheryellowblousewildly.Thistime,thehelicopterfoundherandtookhertoherhusband.Theygaveeachotherthewarmesthugtheyhadeverreceived.(97words)参考答案2Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Jane

hadtostayaloneintheforestforanothercoldnight.Althoughshefeltalittlesad,shedidn’tgetfearful.Shethoughtabout

Tom.“Hemusthavecalledforthose

helicopters.Maybehewasinoneofthemandwillcomebackagain!Ihavetoguidehimtomorrow.”ShefellasleepanddreamedofseeingTom.(59words)ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Sheatesomeberriesandthenwalkedalongthe

stream,hopingtofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.Fortunately,shesawahugeflatrockinanopenarea

atadistance.Sherushedtotherock,climbedontoitandwaited.

Tohergreatjoy,thehelicopterappearedagain.Theneareritgot,themoresheflaggedthe

yellowblouse.Luckily,thehelicopterdidn’tmissJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly.TomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrantowardsJane.Shebrokedownandburstintotears.(95words)参考答案3Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Immediately,anabsoluteAllthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn’thelpcrying,“Hadn’tIbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Weakasshewas,shestruggledtoherfeet,continuingandexcited,sheflaggedher’attention.Fortunately,shewaseventuallynoticedandbroughtintothehelicopter.There,shesawherhusband,amanstaringather,wearinganexpressionofrelief.Astightlyaspossible,shehuggedhimandwastoothrilledtosayanything.Besides,theyagreednevertoquarrelagain,determiningtolivethelifetothefullest.参考答案4Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Clustersofstarsdecoratedthevastsky,weaklyshininginthemoon-eclipseddarkness.Ragesandapprehensioncalmeddownandexhaustioncamedominatingasshehopelesslyfelldownintothesoftgrass.Thehoursago.ShethoughtaboutTom,memoriesfloodingoutassheclosedhereyesandrecalledthekindnessofhim.Regretfully,shefellasleep,flowers’singingadheringtoherears.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Sunshineembracedtheforestplain,reflectingto“flower”thesky.Wildwithjoy,shejumpedup,grabbingtheblouseandflourishingitwhilecrying.Thehelicopterspottedherandbegantolandonthegrass.“It’”